Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95Q7N31Y7S4H5SZC226H4Y

Run Details

Duration:
27.6s
Cost:
$0.011721
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest flickered, casting a rhythmic, sickly pulse against the condensation on the window. Inside, the air tasted of stale hops and the sharp, medicinal tang of gin. Silas moved behind the mahogany bar with a hitch in his rhythm, his left leg dragging just enough to announce his presence over the low hum of the refrigerator. He buffed a heavy tumbler with a linen cloth, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the amber glow of the overhead lamps. Aurora sat on the end stool, her shoulder-length black hair shielding her face as she traced the rim of her glass. The smell of ginger and soy from the Golden Empress still clung to her sweater, a stubborn reminder of the twelve-mile delivery loop she’d finished an hour ago. She ran a thumb over the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a small, white ridge of history. The heavy oak door groaned. A man stepped in, shaking a black umbrella and bringing the scent of the Soho rain and expensive wool with him. He paused, his eyes adjusting to the dim cavern of maps and monochrome photographs. Silas stopped polishing. He didn't recognize the face, but he recognized the way the man searched the room—deliberate, out of place, like a collector in a junkyard. Rory looked up as the man approached the bar. Her heart did a slow, heavy roll in her chest. "I thought it was you through the window." Niall looked exactly like the life she’d burned behind her. He wore a charcoal overcoat that cost more than Rory earned in three months of navigating London traffic. His hair was shorter than it had been in Cardiff, groomed with a precision that hinted at courtrooms and high-stakes lunches. "Niall." The name felt like a piece of gravel in her mouth. Silas slid a coaster toward the newcomer, his hazel eyes Narrowing. "Bourbon. Neat." Niall didn't look at the bar owner. He pulled out the stool next to Rory, the wood scraping against the floorboards like a sharp intake of breath. He looked at her jacket, the utilitarian fabric, and then at the way she held herself—shoulders squared, eyes alert, the cool-headed pragmatism of a woman who had learned to live in the shadows of a city that didn't know her name. "You look different, Laila. Or do they call you that here?" "Nobody calls me that anymore." She reached for her drink, her hand steady despite the sudden heat behind her ribs. "I saw your mother last month at the market. She looks older. She thinks you’re working for a firm in Bristol. She tells the neighbors you’re on the partner track." Niall took the bourbon Silas offered. He rotated the glass, the liquid swirling in a tight, controlled vortex. "It’s better if she thinks that." "Is it? Your father still keeps the law books in your old room. He hasn't moved a single volume of your Pre-Law texts." Rory’s gaze drifted to a map of the Prague underground pinned to the far wall. The geography of her current life was simpler—street names, delivery times, the quiet safety of the flat above this very floor. The weight of the barrister’s daughter she was supposed to be felt like a ghost sitting on her chest. "Cardiff is a long way from Soho, Niall. Why are you here?" "A deposition. Some commercial dispute in the City. I saw the green light and thought of that old lamp you had in your dorm. Then I saw the black hair. I almost didn't believe it." He leaned in, the scent of his cologne—something woody and sharp—cutting through the grease of the Golden Empress. He looked at her wrist, his eyes lingering on the crescent scar. "Evan asks about you. Occasionally. When he’s had enough to drink to forget he’s supposed to be ashamed." The mention of the name caused the air to chill. Silas, who had been rearranging bottles on the back shelf, paused. He didn't turn around, but the set of his auburn-grey shoulders tightened. "I don't care about Evan's shame." Rory stood, her stool clicking against the footrail. "You’re hiding, Rory. You went from being the smartest girl in the room to... what is this? A basement in London?" Niall gestured to the room, his hand sweeping past the photographs of faces long forgotten by everyone but Silas. "It’s not a basement. It’s a bar. And I’m not hiding. I’m living." "You’re delivering food. I saw the bike outside. One of the guys at the office mentioned a girl who looked like you near the Strand. I laughed. I told them Aurora Carter was destined for better things than a thermal bag and a moped." Niall took a long swallow of the bourbon, his throat moving as he gripped the glass. "Destiny is a word people use when they want to justify their own entrapment. You took the path they carved for you. You stayed in the lines." Rory leaned against the bar, her bright blue eyes locking onto his. There was no warmth in the look, only the hard-won clarity of someone who had survived a collapse. "I’m an Associate, Rory. I have a house in Penarth. I’m marrying Sarah Jenkins in June. I didn't stay in the lines. I built the damn lines." "And yet you’re sitting in a dive in Soho on a Tuesday night looking at me like I’m a ghost you’re afraid to touch." Niall flinched. He set the glass down with enough force to make the ice rattle. "I thought you’d be dead. Or worse, back with him. When you vanished, the rumors were... people said you’d finally snapped." "I did snap. That was the point. The person I was supposed to be broke. I like the pieces I have now better." Silas moved closer, picking up the bottle of bourbon and holding it near Niall’s glass. The silver signet ring caught the green light from the sign outside. "Another, or are we settling up?" Silas’s voice was like grinding stones, quiet but heavy with the weight of authority. Niall looked at Silas, finally registering the man's presence—the neat beard, the stillness of a predator at rest. He looked back at Rory, noticing for the first time how she didn't look like a victim. She looked like a regular. She looked like she belonged to the maps and the secrets of the room. "She was meant to be a Queen’s Counsel." Niall spoke to Silas, as if Rory had already left the room. "She looks like someone who knows exactly where she is to me." Silas didn't pour the drink. He waited. "Is this what you wanted? This life?" Niall’s voice dropped, the arrogance bleeding out into something that sounded dangerously like envy. "I wanted to wake up without a hand on my throat, Niall. I wanted to walk down a street where nobody knew who my father was. I wanted to be quiet." Rory reached into her pocket and pulled out a crumpled ten-pound note, laying it on the bar for her ginger ale. "You look miserable in that coat. It’s too heavy for you." "It’s a bespoke fit." "It wears you. You’re still trying to fill the space they left for you." Niall reached out, his hand hovering near her sleeve, but he didn't make contact. The distance between them wasn't just the three years since she’d fled; it was the entire geography of intent. "Your mother thinks you’re happy. That’s the lie I’ll tell her when I go back. That you looked happy." "Tell her the truth. Tell her I’m still black-haired and stubborn and that I’m not coming home." Rory turned away from him, nodding to Silas. "See you tomorrow, Si." "Tomorrow, Rory." Silas watched her walk toward the back, his hazel eyes tracking her until she disappeared through the door that led to the flat above. The limp in his leg was more pronounced as he moved to reclaim the empty glass from the bar. Niall sat alone, the neon green light washing over his charcoal coat. He looked at the maps on the wall, the old photographs of people in places he’d never go. The silence of the bar stretched out, filled only by the hum of the fridge and the rain tapping against the glass like a thousand small, insistent fingers. He reached for his glass, but it was empty. He looked at his hands, clean and manicured, and then at the door through which Rory had vanished. "She always was the fastest of us." Niall’s voice was a whisper, lost in the shadows of the maps. Silas wiped the spot where Rory’s glass had been. "Fast enough to stop running." The rain intensified, a sudden deluge that blurred the Soho streets into a smear of grey and neon. Niall stood, buttoning his coat, pulling the collar tight against his neck. He looked around the room one last time, searching for a trace of the girl he’d known, but the room only gave back the cold, steady gaze of Silas Blackwood and the maps of a world Niall didn't understand. He pushed the door open, the bell chiming a lonely, sharp note. The Soho wind rushed in, smelling of damp earth and exhaust, before the door swung shut, leaving Silas alone in the amber glow of the Nest. Silas picked up the ten-pound note and tucked it into the register. He looked at the silver signet ring on his hand, then at the staircase. He knew the weight of a past that wouldn't stay buried, and he knew the cost of the silence Rory had bought for herself. The green light outside continued to pulse. Rory sat in the dark of her flat upstairs, listening to the rain on the roof, her thumb resting on the crescent scar on her wrist, her breathing slow and measured in the quiet of the London night. She didn't look out the window to see if he was gone. She didn't need to. The world of Cardiff and law books and Evan was a ghost, and she had long since learned how to live with the haunting. Below her, the floorboards creaked as Silas moved about the bar, closing up, his rhythmic hitch a steady heartbeat in the belly of the building. The maps on the walls held their secrets, and for now, so did she.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:13:23.881Z" 2/25/2026, 1:13:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1748
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1748
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"navigating"
count1
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"predator"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"rhythmic"
2"pulse"
3"traced"
4"reminder"
5"navigating"
6"weight"
7"chill"
8"warmth"
9"predator"
10"silence"
11"whisper"
12"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1742
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1238
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Golden2
Empress2
Soho3
Rory14
London2
Cardiff2
Narrowing1
Silas18
Prague1
Niall15
Blackwood1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Niall"
6"Blackwood"
7"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"Soho"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"Prague"
globalScore0.773
windowScore0.5
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a piece of gravel in her mout"
1"felt like a ghost sitting on her chest"
2"looked like she belonged to the maps and"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1742
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean24.54
std20.4
cv0.831
sampleLengths
087
167
267
319
48
549
61
711
811
92
1068
1111
125
1315
1430
1518
166
1723
1855
1912
2035
2130
2218
2333
246
258
2621
2719
2813
2944
3016
3127
3230
3327
3424
3515
3621
3723
3827
396
4014
4154
428
4312
4412
457
467
4714
4831
4921
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was like grinding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences113
ratio0.053
matches
0"He didn't recognize the face, but he recognized the way the man searched the room—deliberate, out of place, like a collector in a junkyard."
1"He looked at her jacket, the utilitarian fabric, and then at the way she held herself—shoulders squared, eyes alert, the cool-headed pragmatism of a woman who had learned to live in the shadows of a city that didn't know her name."
2"The geography of her current life was simpler—street names, delivery times, the quiet safety of the flat above this very floor."
3"He leaned in, the scent of his cologne—something woody and sharp—cutting through the grease of the Golden Empress."
4"Niall looked at Silas, finally registering the man's presence—the neat beard, the stillness of a predator at rest."
5"The distance between them wasn't just the three years since she’d fled; it was the entire geography of intent."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1253
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02314445331205108
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007182761372705506
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean15.42
std8.77
cv0.569
sampleLengths
019
114
229
325
421
528
618
75
821
914
103
1124
129
1310
148
1510
1618
1721
181
1911
2011
212
227
2320
2441
2511
265
2715
2830
296
3012
316
3223
3315
3421
3519
3612
3735
3818
3912
4018
4110
4211
4312
446
458
4621
4719
4813
4944
40.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.25663716814159293
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences77
matches
0"He buffed a heavy tumbler"
1"She ran a thumb over"
2"He paused, his eyes adjusting"
3"He didn't recognize the face,"
4"Her heart did a slow,"
5"He wore a charcoal overcoat"
6"His hair was shorter than"
7"He pulled out the stool"
8"He looked at her jacket,"
9"She reached for her drink,"
10"He rotated the glass, the"
11"He leaned in, the scent"
12"He looked at her wrist,"
13"He didn't turn around, but"
14"He set the glass down"
15"He looked back at Rory,"
16"She looked like a regular."
17"She looked like she belonged"
18"He looked at the maps"
19"He reached for his glass,"
ratio0.351
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences77
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Silas moved behind the mahogany"
2"He buffed a heavy tumbler"
3"Aurora sat on the end"
4"The smell of ginger and"
5"She ran a thumb over"
6"The heavy oak door groaned."
7"A man stepped in, shaking"
8"He paused, his eyes adjusting"
9"Silas stopped polishing."
10"He didn't recognize the face,"
11"Rory looked up as the"
12"Her heart did a slow,"
13"Niall looked exactly like the"
14"He wore a charcoal overcoat"
15"His hair was shorter than"
16"The name felt like a"
17"Silas slid a coaster toward"
18"Niall didn't look at the"
19"He pulled out the stool"
ratio0.961
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He wore a charcoal overcoat that cost more than Rory earned in three months of navigating London traffic."
1"His hair was shorter than it had been in Cardiff, groomed with a precision that hinted at courtrooms and high-stakes lunches."
2"He looked at her jacket, the utilitarian fabric, and then at the way she held herself—shoulders squared, eyes alert, the cool-headed pragmatism of a woman who h…"
3"There was no warmth in the look, only the hard-won clarity of someone who had survived a collapse."
4"Niall’s voice dropped, the arrogance bleeding out into something that sounded dangerously like envy."
5"Niall stood, buttoning his coat, pulling the collar tight against his neck."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.1255%