Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95QSTF0J4GCNKAZ64RWX9K

Run Details

Duration:
19.9s
Cost:
$0.001901
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the slick, metal steps, the air growing colder with each downward step. The scent of damp earth and stale ozone pricked her nostrils, a strange perfume overlaying the usual urban decay. Floodlights, harsh and alien, carved tunnels of stark white through the Stygian gloom of the abandoned Tube station. Yellow tape, a garish ribbon, cordoned off a section deeper in, near where the old ticket booths sagged like weary teeth. Uniformed officers patrolled the periphery, their movements precise but tense, accustomed to the mundane grit of London streets, but not this subterranean labyrinth. This was the Veil Market, a place whispered about in hushed tones in certain circles, a criminal bazaar for things that didn't belong in the daylight. Now, it was a crime scene. Officer Davies, a fresh-faced constable whose uniform looked too new, met her at the tape. His usual easy confidence had frayed at the edges. He gestured with a gloved hand, his eyes flicking around the cavernous space. "Detective Quinn. Glad you're here." Davies kept his voice low, the respect laced with relief. "It’s… odd." Quinn offered a curt nod, her gaze sweeping over the scene unfolding within the taped-off area. Her salt-and-pepper hair was closely cropped, framing a face where eighteen years on the force had etched lines of sharp intelligence around her brown eyes. Her movements held a military precision, economical and purposeful. She ducked under the tape, her worn leather watch glinting under the lights, and walked towards the centre of the disturbance. A man lay slumped against a decaying brick wall, his skinny frame draped over a disused luggage cart piled with refuse from past, illicit transactions. His pockets gaped open, turned out with the careless violence of a mugger. His eyes, wide and glassy, stared up at the vaulted shadows of the station ceiling, fixed on something no living person could see. Davies had called it a robbery gone wrong. "Victim's Silas Blackwood," Davies informed her, his voice tight. "Works as a runner, information broker. Low-level stuff, mostly. Forensics are bagging him now. They found him about an hour ago when they were sweeping the area – response team got a tip from one of the market regulars who wanted to stay anonymous." Quinn circled the body slowly, deliberately. Silas looked like a scarecrow stuffed with ill-fitting clothes. His skin had taken on a greyish hue, taut over his bones. Davies pointed to his neck. "Strangled," Davies stated, his tone matter-of-fact. "Ligature mark, straight across. We found bits of frayed rope not far off, looks like. Nasty business." Quinn crouched, her eyes narrowing. She didn't touch Silas, just hovered inches above him, her gaze dissecting the detail on his throat. It wasn't a bruise. It wasn't abrasion. It looked, she thought, more like a raw impression, a mark where something hot and impossibly precise had pressed. There was no skin broken, no charring, just an unnerving, smooth indentation running from ear to ear. Odd. A profession runner, a man who dealt in whispered secrets and hidden goods, wouldn’t likely sport a simple rope for his final negotiations. Her gaze shifted, scanning the immediate vicinity. Silas's jacket was unbuttoned. A small, tarnished silver amulet, shaped like a coiled serpent, lay tangled in the lapel. Beside it, clutched loosely in his stiffening fingers, was a small, dark velvet pouch. Davies had mentioned the rifled pockets. Quinn’s eyes caught sight of the amulet, the pouch. They looked undisturbed. "Rifled pockets," Quinn echoed Davies’ earlier assessment, her voice flat, cutting through the hum of the police equipment. "But he’s still wearing his amulet. And this pouch…" She gestured subtly with her chin. "What’s in it?" Davies shrugged, a gesture that didn’t quite reach his eyes. "We haven't opened it yet. Forensics wants to handle it. Might be the take. Or maybe the perp was in a hurry." "In a hurry?" Quinn straightened, taking a step back, the cavernous space of the station amplifying her words. The air seemed to vibrate with the question. She surveyed the tunnel beyond Silas. Deeper in, the abandoned market pulsed with a low thrum of residual energy, a faint shiver that spoke of its true nature. It was a place where power traded hands, not mere currency. "Pockets emptied, but the lucky charms left behind? A runner doesn't walk into the Veil Market without his luck. Or his tools." "Could be they didn't know what they were," Davies offered, his brow furrowed, trying to make the facts align with his training. "Just random debris." Quinn’s gaze swept towards the far end of the tunnel, where the shadows gathered thickest, swallowing the faint glow of the distant police lights. She thought of Eva, her friend, the one who catalogued the esoteric, who knew the language of such places. Eva had described whisperdust – a rare substance used for scrying, potent and extremely valuable. It was often carried in dark velvet pouches. "Random debris like that pouch of whisperdust?" Quinn’s voice was quiet, but laced with an edge that silenced Davies. "Or Silas's serpent charm? A mugger rips a man's pockets open, he's looking for quick cash, maybe small, easily fenced items. He’s not leaving behind valuables that fetch as much as a decent week’s wages from other runners. He's not leaving behind something that lets a person *see* the market's other secrets." She walked a slow circle around the body again, her gaze sharp, missing nothing. The floor around Silas was just damp concrete and discarded wrappers. No signs of a struggle, no overturned furniture, no scuffle marks that would indicate a desperate fight. Just Silas, slumped and dead, his pockets inside out. "And this mark," Quinn murmured, returning her attention to Silas's neck. She extended a gloved finger, not to touch, but to sweep through the air just above the unnatural line. A faint prickling sensation danced on her fingertip. It felt… wrong. Not the residual heat of a burn, but something colder, more abstract. "A ligature mark. But clean. Too clean. A fibre here, perhaps, but no tearing, no bruising. No arteries severed in the way a struggle would cause. No struggle." Davies shifted his weight. "But his pockets, Detective. They were inside out." "Someone wanted it to *look* like his pockets were emptied," Quinn stated, her voice gaining conviction. She stopped and bent down, her eyes tracing the faint scattering of greyish powder on Silas’s jacket, near where the pouch lay. "They wanted us to see a robbery. But the real intent wasn't the cash. It was either the mark he bears, or the contents of that pouch that they left deliberately. They staged the motive. They left Silas behind because Silas himself was merely the stage for the performance." She stood, facing Davies, her sharp jaw set. The distant hum of the Veil Market seemed to deepen, a low thrum that resonated in the ancient stone. "This wasn't a mugging, Davies. Not even close. This was a message. And the sender wasn't interested in what Silas carried, but in what he *was*."
created_at"2026-02-25T01:13:42.486Z" 2/25/2026, 1:13:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured subtly [subtly]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.091
83.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count2
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
2"loosely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"charm"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"gloom"
2"etched"
3"glinting"
4"scanning"
5"velvet"
6"echoed"
7"pulsed"
8"furrowed"
9"charm"
10"weight"
11"tracing"
12"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences69
matches
0"d with relief"
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1179
ratio0.003
matches
0"see"
1"look"
2"was"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount838
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Davies"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn11
Stygian1
Tube1
London1
Veil2
Market2
Davies12
Silas8
Eva2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Davies"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places
0"Stygian"
1"London"
globalScore0.784
windowScore0.833
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a scarecrow stuffed with ill-"
1"quite reach his eyes"
30.36% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.696
wordCount1179
matches
0"not to touch, but to sweep through the air just above the unnatural line"
1"Not the residual heat of a burn, but something colder, more abstract"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean56.14
std28.58
cv0.509
sampleLengths
0129
137
217
371
469
553
632
723
889
958
1036
1132
1287
1325
1466
1571
1651
1781
1812
1987
2053
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was unbuttoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences81
ratio0.012
matches
0"Eva had described whisperdust – a rare substance used for scrying, potent and extremely valuable."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount738
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, tarnished silver amulet,"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.032520325203252036
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012195121951219513
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean14.56
std9.71
cv0.667
sampleLengths
016
119
218
321
423
526
66
715
89
913
1015
112
1216
1325
149
1521
1625
1713
1823
198
209
2144
226
239
2412
255
266
2717
285
2917
304
313
3219
3317
341
3523
367
374
3815
3914
406
419
423
4318
4415
453
4610
4722
4818
498
81.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5185185185185185
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners42
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Just Silas, slumped and dead,"
ratio0.015
78.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences65
matches
0"His usual easy confidence had"
1"He gestured with a gloved"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair was closely"
3"Her movements held a military"
4"She ducked under the tape,"
5"His pockets gaped open, turned"
6"His eyes, wide and glassy,"
7"His skin had taken on"
8"She didn't touch Silas, just"
9"It wasn't a bruise."
10"It wasn't abrasion."
11"It looked, she thought, more"
12"Her gaze shifted, scanning the"
13"They looked undisturbed."
14"She gestured subtly with her"
15"She surveyed the tunnel beyond"
16"It was a place where"
17"She thought of Eva, her"
18"It was often carried in"
19"She walked a slow circle"
ratio0.354
29.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences65
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"The scent of damp earth"
2"Floodlights, harsh and alien, carved"
3"This was the Veil Market,"
4"Officer Davies, a fresh-faced constable"
5"His usual easy confidence had"
6"He gestured with a gloved"
7"Davies kept his voice low,"
8"Quinn offered a curt nod,"
9"Her salt-and-pepper hair was closely"
10"Her movements held a military"
11"She ducked under the tape,"
12"A man lay slumped against"
13"His pockets gaped open, turned"
14"His eyes, wide and glassy,"
15"Davies had called it a"
16"Davies informed her, his voice"
17"Quinn circled the body slowly,"
18"Silas looked like a scarecrow"
19"His skin had taken on"
ratio0.862
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Now, it was a crime"
ratio0.015
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A profession runner, a man who dealt in whispered secrets and hidden goods, wouldn’t likely sport a simple rope for his final negotiations."
1"Deeper in, the abandoned market pulsed with a low thrum of residual energy, a faint shiver that spoke of its true nature."
2"The distant hum of the Veil Market seemed to deepen, a low thrum that resonated in the ancient stone."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Davies kept, the respect laced with relief"
1"Davies informed, his voice tight"
2"Quinn stated, her voice gaining conviction"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Davies informed (inform)"
1"Davies stated (state)"
2"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
3"Quinn stated (state)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.364
78.2779%