Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95QTMBSC90BSAKV89ZBT8W

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.033181
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park usually smelled of damp earth and aging bracken, but as Aurora stepped through the invisible ripple between the two ancient oaks, the atmosphere curdled. The scent of crushed lavender and ozone vanished, replaced by a thick, suffocating aroma of overripe peaches and roasting meat. Aurora gripped the hilt of her Fae-forged blade. The moonsilver metal hummed against her palm, a cold vibration that countered the sudden, oppressive heat. Behind her, Nyx drifted through the shimmering Veil, their shadow-form wavering like smoke caught in a crosswind. "Stay close, Rory," Isolde said. The Seer glided ahead, her silver hair trailing like a comet's tail. She left no footprints in the soil, her boots hovering a fraction of an inch above a carpet of translucent, ivory-colored spheres that resembled spilled pearls. Aurora looked up and nearly lost her footing. The sky wasn't the grey-blue of a London evening; it was a solid, bruised amber, thick as honey. No stars pierced the haze. Instead, massive, slow-moving silhouettes drifted through the upper atmosphere—leviathans of the air, casting long, sweeping shadows over a landscape that defied every law of nature Rory knew. They stood on the edge of a forest, but the trees were pillars of amber glass. Their branches dripped with a viscous, golden sap that hissed when it hit the ground. Beyond the glass woods, a mountain rose that wasn't made of rock. It appeared to be a catastrophic pile of discarded treasures, bones, and half-eaten feasts the size of cathedrals. Rivers of dark wine cascaded down its slopes, pooling into fermented lakes that steamed in the amber light. "Dymas," Nyx whispered, their voice a dry rustle. "The realm of Gluttony. Prince Belphegor’s larder." Aurora pulled the Heartstone Pendant from beneath her shirt. The crimson gemstone pulsed with a rhythmic, frantic light, matching the speed of her heart. It grew warm against her skin, a localized fever. "It’s reacting to the portal," Aurora noted. "It is reacting to the hunger," Isolde corrected. She pointed to a gargantuan flower nearby, its petals made of sheets of cured meat, glistening with a salt-crusted sheen. "The earth here has teeth, Aurora Carter. Do not touch the flora. To taste is to be tethered. One bite, and you shall never leave the Prince’s table." They began to move deeper into the glass forest. The ivory spheres underfoot crunched with an unsettling, wet sound. Rory knelt, narrowing her eyes. They weren't pebbles. They were tiny, calcified fruits, smelling of old wine and desperation. She reached out, but a sharp look from Isolde stayed her hand. A low growl vibrated through the marrow of Rory's bones. The crystalline reeds to their left shattered as something lunged. It was a creature of pale, translucent flesh, far too many limbs, and a vertical slit for a mouth lined with needle-teeth. Aurora pivoted. She didn't think, she simply acted, her Cardiff-born instincts honed by years of dodging more mundane predators. She swung the moonsilver dagger in a cold arc. The blade sliced through the beast’s shoulder with no resistance. Instead of blood, a spray of grey ash erupted from the wound. The creature shrieked—a sound like glass grinding on glass—and retreated into the amber shadows. "The blade remembers its purpose," Nyx said, hovering over the spot where the creature had stood. They reached out a shadowy hand, touching the dissipating ash. "It was a soul once. A chef, perhaps, who forgot the difference between the ingredient and the eater." The heat climbed. Every breath felt like swallowing warm honey. They reached an obsidian plaza where a table stretched into the golden gloom, piled high with fruit that glowed with internal fire. Plums the color of bruises, grapes like giant rubies, and oranges that bled steam. "The Crossroads of the Banquet," Isolde said, halting at the edge of the obsidian tiles. "To go forward, we must pass the table. To pass the table, we must not look. To look is to desire. To desire is to stay." Aurora stared at the fruit. Her mouth watered. A hollow, desperate ache opened in her stomach, a hunger that had nothing to do with her last meal and everything to do with the psychic weight of the realm. She could almost taste the explosion of juice against her tongue. "Rory, look at me." Nyx stepped in front of her, their shadow-form expanding to blot out the sight of the feast. The darkness was a relief—a cold, void-like balm against the searing amber glare. "Close your eyes. Give me your hand. My form is nothingness; it holds no flavor." Aurora reached out. Her fingers sank into the freezing, smoke-like substance of Nyx’s arm. She shut her eyes tight. The world became a cacophony of smells. Roasted meats, honeyed pastries, and wines older than empires. The sounds of chewing, the wet slap of meat on stone, and the rhythmic clink of silver against porcelain echoed around her. "Walk," Isolde commanded. Each step felt heavy, as if the obsidian floor were made of magnets pulling at the iron in Rory's blood. A voice whispered from the table—a soft, familiar melody that made her lungs hitch. "Rory? Is that you? I made your favorite, cariad." Aurora’s heart plummeted. The scent of her mother’s shepherd's pie, rich with rosemary and browning potatoes, wafted past her nose. It was so vivid she could see the steam rising from the kitchen table in Cardiff. Her stomach cramped with a phantom longing. "It’s the air, Aurora," Nyx’s voice whispered directly into her ear, though they remained several paces away. "A vibration designed to break the will. Do not listen." The Heartstone Pendant flared, a sudden, searing heat that felt like a hot coal pressed against her sternum. The sharp pain broke the spell. The scent of the pie turned instantly back into the cloying stink of fermented rot. "I'm fine," Aurora gasped, her grip on Nyx’s shadow-arm tightening until she felt the solid, spectral bone beneath the smoke. "Keep going." They moved past the table, the sounds of the banquet fading into the low, constant hum of the amber sky. When Nyx finally pulled away, Aurora opened her eyes. They stood at the base of the bone-mountain. The scale was dizzying. Skulls of creatures she didn't recognize formed the foundation—massive, tusked things stacked alongside delicate, bird-like remains. Higher up, the "rocks" were solidified mounds of spice, glittering like jewels in the haze. A winding path of ground-up shells led upward. "We are within the sights of the Prince now," Isolde said, looking up the slope. Her lavender eyes reflected the golden glow, making her look more alien than ever. "Belphegor does not like uninvited guests who refuse his hospitality." Aurora adjusted her grip on the Fae blade. The cold metal was the only thing that felt real. "Then he’s going to be very disappointed." They began the climb. The shells crunched underfoot, a sharp, rhythmic sound in the heavy silence. As they ascended, the air grew thinner, the amber clouds swirling around them like golden silk. Halfway up, Aurora paused. She looked back toward the Veil. It was a tiny, shimmering sliver of grey in the distance, a reminder of a world that felt increasingly like a half-forgotten dream. A gust of wind caught her, carrying a fleeting scent of fresh London rain. Then the wind died, and the smell of cinnamon returned, thicker than before. "Rory." Nyx pointed further up the path. A doorway stood at the peak of the bone-mountain. It wasn't made of stone or wood. It was framed by two massive, curving ribs that met at the top, covered in gold leaf and dripping with liquid silver. Inside the doorway, there was only darkness—not the shifting, living darkness of Nyx, but a flat, ravenous void. "The Larder," Isolde whispered. Aurora stepped forward, the Heartstone Pendant now glowing with a light so bright it shone through her denim jacket. It pointed toward the dark threshold like a compass. "That's where we'll find it." She reached the threshold. The transition was immediate. One step, she was in the amber heat of the mountain; the next, she stood in a cavern of ice-blue stone. The silence here pressed against her eardrums like water. The Larder was a forest of hanging crystals. Inside each one, a different object was suspended. A rusted crown. A tattered banner. A single, perfect rose that never wilted. Aurora walked past a crystal containing a sword that seemed to be made of frozen lightning. In another, a book with pages that flipped on their own despite the lack of a breeze. In the center of the cavern, a single pedestal of obsidian held a cage of silver wire. Inside the cage sat a bowl of grey, shriveled, ancient fruit. Beside the bowl lay a key carved from a single piece of starlight, pulsing with the same rhythm as Aurora’s Heartstone. Aurora reached out, her fingers hovering inches from the silver wire. The air in the cavern suddenly rippled. The ice-blue stone shifted, turning the color of a bruised plum. A voice boomed, not from a throat, but from the very walls. It was deep, wet, and heavy with the sound of someone speaking with a full mouth. "You have a very strange definition of a guest, little bird." Aurora's fingers brushed the silver wire. It was freezing, a cold that bit deep into her marrow. "I'm not here for the food." The floor trembled. The crystals overhead rattled, their internal lights flickering in alarm. "Everything here is food, eventually." A shadow longer and denser than Nyx’s began to stretch across the floor from the far end of the cavern. It didn't crawl; it flowed like spilled oil, consuming the blue light as it moved. Aurora grabbed the starlight key. The moment her skin touched the cold material, a jolt of energy shot up her arm, making her hair stand on end. The Heartstone Pendant let out a final, blinding flare of crimson. "Rory, move!" Nyx lunged, their shadow-form colliding with the advancing oil-slick of darkness. A sound like a thunderclap echoed through the Larder. Aurora bolted toward the exit, the key clutched against her chest. Isolde stood by the ribbed doorway, her silver hair whipping around her face in a wind that shouldn't have existed. "The price must be paid! The gate demands a toll!" Aurora skidded to a halt at the edge of the Larder's threshold. The amber world of Dymas roared outside, the leviathans in the sky circling low over the mountain. The dark oil-slick surged around Nyx, who struggled to maintain their solid form. The Shade’s violet eyes were wide, their silhouette fraying at the edges. "Go!" Nyx’s voice was a ragged whisper. Aurora looked at the key, then at the shadow-being. She looked at the banquet below and the hungry mountain beneath her feet. The Prince’s presence filled the cavern, a weight of pure, unadulterated greed that threatened to drop her to her knees. She gripped the Fae-forged blade in her other hand. The moonsilver glowed fiercely, a pinprick of sanity in the golden madness. "Not today." She turned back toward the darkness.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:13:43.314Z" 2/25/2026, 1:13:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx’s voice whispered directly [directly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.063
89.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1869
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1869
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"oppressive"
count1
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count3
4
word"glistening"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"crystalline"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"desire"
count2
10
word"stomach"
count2
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"searing"
count2
13
word"cacophony"
count1
14
word"porcelain"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count2
16
word"familiar"
count1
17
word"spectral"
count1
18
word"silence"
count2
19
word"silk"
count1
20
word"reminder"
count1
21
word"fleeting"
count1
22
word"perfect"
count1
23
word"crystal"
count1
24
word"trembled"
count1
25
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"oppressive"
1"wavering"
2"pulsed"
3"rhythmic"
4"glistening"
5"vibrated"
6"crystalline"
7"shattered"
8"gloom"
9"desire"
10"stomach"
11"weight"
12"searing"
13"cacophony"
14"porcelain"
15"echoed"
16"familiar"
17"spectral"
18"silence"
19"silk"
20"reminder"
21"fleeting"
22"perfect"
23"crystal"
24"trembled"
25"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1862
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.89% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions78
wordCount1639
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora22
Fae-forged2
Nyx14
Veil2
Seer1
London2
Rory4
Heartstone5
Pendant4
Isolde8
Cardiff-born1
Cardiff2
Fae3
Larder3
Dymas1
Shade1
Prince1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Seer"
3"Rory"
4"Pendant"
5"Isolde"
6"Dymas"
7"Shade"
8"Prince"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Veil"
3"London"
4"Cardiff-born"
5"Cardiff"
6"Larder"
globalScore0.829
windowScore0.833
85.34% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences116
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like swallowing warm honey"
1"felt like a hot coal pressed against he"
2"sword that seemed to be made of frozen lightning"
92.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.074
wordCount1862
matches
0"not the shifting, living darkness of Nyx, but a flat, ravenous void"
1"not from a throat, but from the very walls"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean27.79
std18.06
cv0.65
sampleLengths
049
141
25
338
458
579
615
733
87
956
1050
1142
1264
1344
1446
1541
1649
174
1830
1915
2019
2138
223
2334
249
2543
2627
2739
2822
2929
3051
3139
3218
337
3432
3547
3613
371
386
3956
404
4128
425
4338
4429
4533
4649
4729
4828
4911
97.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences140
matches
0"were made"
1"were solidified"
2"was framed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs266
matches
0"was freezing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences159
ratio0.063
matches
0"The sky wasn't the grey-blue of a London evening; it was a solid, bruised amber, thick as honey."
1"Instead, massive, slow-moving silhouettes drifted through the upper atmosphere—leviathans of the air, casting long, sweeping shadows over a landscape that defied every law of nature Rory knew."
2"The creature shrieked—a sound like glass grinding on glass—and retreated into the amber shadows."
3"The darkness was a relief—a cold, void-like balm against the searing amber glare."
4"\"Close your eyes. Give me your hand. My form is nothingness; it holds no flavor.\""
5"A voice whispered from the table—a soft, familiar melody that made her lungs hitch."
6"Skulls of creatures she didn't recognize formed the foundation—massive, tusked things stacked alongside delicate, bird-like remains."
7"Inside the doorway, there was only darkness—not the shifting, living darkness of Nyx, but a flat, ravenous void."
8"One step, she was in the amber heat of the mountain; the next, she stood in a cavern of ice-blue stone."
9"It didn't crawl; it flowed like spilled oil, consuming the blue light as it moved."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1668
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"translucent, ivory-colored spheres"
1"massive, slow-moving silhouettes"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.024580335731414868
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.006594724220623501
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean11.71
std6.31
cv0.539
sampleLengths
029
120
28
316
417
55
612
726
88
918
105
1127
1216
1315
1412
1518
1618
178
187
199
2015
219
227
238
2420
2528
269
2710
285
293
3011
3112
3210
3310
3422
352
3617
379
3810
3912
4014
4116
4210
4318
443
457
4622
4714
4815
4926
38.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.27672955974842767
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners44
74.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences134
matches
0"Instead, massive, slow-moving silhouettes drifted"
1"Instead of blood, a spray"
2"Then the wind died, and"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences134
matches
0"She left no footprints in"
1"They stood on the edge"
2"Their branches dripped with a"
3"It appeared to be a"
4"It grew warm against her"
5"She pointed to a gargantuan"
6"They began to move deeper"
7"They weren't pebbles."
8"They were tiny, calcified fruits,"
9"She reached out, but a"
10"It was a creature of"
11"She didn't think, she simply"
12"She swung the moonsilver dagger"
13"They reached out a shadowy"
14"They reached an obsidian plaza"
15"Her mouth watered."
16"She could almost taste the"
17"Her fingers sank into the"
18"She shut her eyes tight."
19"It was so vivid she"
ratio0.276
23.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences134
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"The scent of crushed lavender"
2"Aurora gripped the hilt of"
3"The moonsilver metal hummed against"
4"The Seer glided ahead, her"
5"She left no footprints in"
6"Aurora looked up and nearly"
7"The sky wasn't the grey-blue"
8"They stood on the edge"
9"Their branches dripped with a"
10"It appeared to be a"
11"Rivers of dark wine cascaded"
12"Nyx whispered, their voice a"
13"Aurora pulled the Heartstone Pendant"
14"The crimson gemstone pulsed with"
15"It grew warm against her"
16"She pointed to a gargantuan"
17"They began to move deeper"
18"The ivory spheres underfoot crunched"
19"Rory knelt, narrowing her eyes."
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences81
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The moonsilver metal hummed against her palm, a cold vibration that countered the sudden, oppressive heat."
1"She left no footprints in the soil, her boots hovering a fraction of an inch above a carpet of translucent, ivory-colored spheres that resembled spilled pearls."
2"Instead, massive, slow-moving silhouettes drifted through the upper atmosphere—leviathans of the air, casting long, sweeping shadows over a landscape that defie…"
3"They reached an obsidian plaza where a table stretched into the golden gloom, piled high with fruit that glowed with internal fire."
4"Plums the color of bruises, grapes like giant rubies, and oranges that bled steam."
5"A hollow, desperate ache opened in her stomach, a hunger that had nothing to do with her last meal and everything to do with the psychic weight of the realm."
6"The Heartstone Pendant flared, a sudden, searing heat that felt like a hot coal pressed against her sternum."
7"It was a tiny, shimmering sliver of grey in the distance, a reminder of a world that felt increasingly like a half-forgotten dream."
8"It was framed by two massive, curving ribs that met at the top, covered in gold leaf and dripping with liquid silver."
9"Aurora walked past a crystal containing a sword that seemed to be made of frozen lightning."
10"The dark oil-slick surged around Nyx, who struggled to maintain their solid form."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice a dry rustle"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora noted (note)"
2"Isolde corrected (correct)"
3"Nyx’s voice whispered directly (whisper)"
4"Aurora gasped (gasp)"
5"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.375
76.6294%