"The familiar, sharp scent of his expensive cologne – sandalwood, ozone, and something else entirely alien – cut through the ubiquitous kitchen spices."
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"He looked precisely as he always did – thirty-two years old, yet carrying the weight of centuries in his disconcerting gaze."
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"The surfaces everywhere, from the small kitchen counter to the overflowed bookshelf, were covered with books, scrolls, and research notes – evidence of a life lived in perpetual pursuit of knowledge, or perhaps escape."
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"The amber held a flicker of something almost – amusement?"
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"– but the black was deep, fathomless, hinting at the demon born from Avaros."
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"It wasn't just wood splintering; it sounded like something heavy, something impossibly strong, was being hurled or *driven* from the outside, forcing its way in."
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"His heterochromatic eyes were no longer merely unsettling; they blazed with a primordial fury."
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"He gave a slight, almost imperceptible nod, his eyes sweeping over her, taking in the faded band t-shirt and paint-splattered leggings she wore for her delivery…"
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"It wasn’t judgement, not exactly, but an observation that felt like it catalogued everything she wasn't when she was with him."
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"The air between them thrummed with unspoken histories, with the sharp tang of regret and something far more dangerous, a coiled attraction that had always been …"
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"He moved with a predator’s grace, unhurried, his ivory-handled cane tapping a soft, deliberate rhythm against the floorboards that did little to mask the underl…"
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"Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs, a drumbeat of alarm and a traitorous, undeniable pull that had always been her undoing."
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"He smiled, a slow, predatory unfolding of lips that did nothing to soften the hard edges of his eyes."
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"The air felt thick, charged, as if the very molecules in the room were vibrating with unspoken history, with the ghosts of their shared nights and shouted argum…"
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"His hard-won composure fractured, his eyes narrowing, the amber flaring like a banked fire."
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"He stepped closer still, his hand reaching out, not quite touching her but hovering near her own left wrist, where the faint scar lay."
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"She flinched back, a primal fear seizing her, the hairs on the back of her neck rising."
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"Lucien’s head snapped towards the door, his practiced calm shattering, replaced by a sharp, predatory alertness that radiated raw power."