Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95S6HQQ8YPKJPBRQ40VP31

Run Details

Duration:
26.3s
Cost:
$0.014630
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door, heavy with three deadbolts, groaned open. Rory stood framed in the narrow space, the scent of stale curry from the flat below clinging to her clothes. Her bright blue eyes, usually calm, widened a fraction, a spark of something unreadable flickering within them. Lucien leaned against the doorframe, a picture of effortless elegance even in the cramped hallway. His tailored charcoal suit, sharper than a freshly honed blade, seemed out of place against the worn floral wallpaper faded at the edges. Platinum blond hair caught the dim light, slicked back from his face. One eye, amber, held hers; the other, a startling black, remained shadowed. The ivory handle of his cane rested against his wrist, an idle weight. "You're not Eva," he offered, his voice a low thrum that always seemed to find a resonance deep within her ribs. A faint smile touched his lips, a slow curve that never quite reached his eyes. Rory braced a hand on the doorframe, a familiar prickle of annoyance mixing with something else she relentlessly ignored. "No kidding. What do you want, Moreau?" He pushed off the frame, stepping into the small entryway without an invitation, the air suddenly thick with his presence. His scent, a mix of old leather and something subtly exotic, enveloped her. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, a ginger blur, darted from behind Rory’s legs, rubbing against Lucien’s immaculately polished Oxfords. Lucien bent, a hand moving with surprising gentleness to scratch behind the cat's ears. "Ptolemy remembers me," he murmured, his eyes, now both visible and piercing, flicking up to meet hers. The amber eye held a glint of amusement, the black one, a quiet intensity. "Unlike some others." Rory’s jaw tightened. She moved past him, navigating the precarious stacks of books and scrolls that lined Eva's hall. The single-bedroom flat felt even smaller with him in it, every surface a testament to Eva’s chaotic research. "What's your business, Lucien? You always have business." "And you always assume the worst." He followed her into the living room, his tailored suit jacket rustling softly. He surveyed the disarray, a wry expression playing on his features. "Eva. Still chasing ghosts." "Literally, yes," Rory replied, her voice clipped. She picked up a stray scroll filled with runic script from the armrest of an overstuffed armchair. She rolled it neatly, depositing it on a precariously balanced stack. Her crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a pale line, caught the light as she moved. "Where is she?" Lucien asked, his gaze momentarily fixed on her wrist, then lifting to her face. "Her phone goes straight to voicemail. I need some information." "She’s at the British Library," Rory told him, her voice clipped. "Been there since dawn. She won't be back until late." She knew he didn't truly believe that was the *only* reason she was there. They both always felt more. Lucien's gaze swept over her, a slow, evaluating sweep that made her skin hum. He paused at the small delivery logo on her t-shirt, then moved to the faint smudges of grease on her jeans. "Working hard, I see. Or is this a new fashion statement?" "Just surviving," Rory retorted, a shard of bitterness entering her tone. She walked towards the window, pulling aside the heavy velvet curtain just enough to glimpse the bustling street below. The familiar rhythm of Brick Lane, the shouts of vendors and the distant rumble of the tube, felt like a world away from the silent tension inside the flat. "Surviving. A familiar tune for us both, no?" His voice held a deceptive softness, a silk-wrapped knife. "I heard you'd settled in well. Eva speaks highly of you." "Eva's a good friend," Rory said, turning from the window. Her shoulders squared. "Which is why I'm here, making sure her cat doesn't starve and her plants don't die. You can leave a message with me. I'll pass it on." She crossed her arms, a clear barrier. Lucien took a step closer, then another, until the small space between the worn sofa and the overflowing bookshelf felt impossibly narrow. His black eye seemed to swallow the light, his amber one glinted. "I prefer to deliver my messages myself." He paused, a beat hanging heavy in the air. "Especially when the message involves something… sensitive." Rory met his gaze, refusing to flinch. The heat radiating from him was a physical presence, a memory she had meticulously tried to erase. "Sensitive, or merely an excuse?" He smiled then, a genuine flash of teeth that softened the angles of his face, making him look less the formidable broker and more the charming rogue. "Always so quick to dissect, Rory. Always cutting to the chase." His hand reached out, not quite touching her, but hovering near her arm for a breath, before dropping to stroke Ptolemy, who had reappeared and now twined between his legs. "It *is* sensitive. Something Eva would want to know. Something that might involve… your recent past." The mention of her past, especially *her recent past*, shot a cold tremor through Rory. It was a card he played carefully, knowing its weight. Her past was a messy knot of fear and escape, tied up with a name she refused to speak. That he would even hint at it, here, in Eva's sanctuary, felt like a transgression. "What are you talking about?" she demanded, her voice lower now, edged with suspicion. "Information," Lucien said, straightening up, his charm receding, replaced by a calculating gleam. "About a certain individual. Let's just say a ghost from your previous life seems to be making a nuisance of himself." Rory’s breath hitched. Her muscles tensed. She knew instantly who he meant. *Evan.* "How do you know that?" she asked, the words thin, barely a whisper. "I keep my ears open," he replied, his gaze unwavering. "And I have a comprehensive network. Especially for those I… care about." The last phrase, spoken with a quiet intensity, managed to make her ears burn, despite her resolve. A cold fear, overlaid with indignation, pushed through her. "You've been digging into my past? Into my life?" "Eva mentioned you were having... difficulties. I merely followed a thread." He walked to the overflowing coffee table, moving a pile of leather-bound grimoires with a single, precise movement to clear a small space. He set his cane down, the ivory handle gleaming. "Curiosity. Concern. Perhaps a touch of professional interest in who might be disturbing my London." "Your London?" Rory scoffed, regaining some of her footing. "And your concern rings a bit hollow, considering how we last parted." That was it, the opening. The hurt. The unspoken accusations. He turned slowly, his eyes locking onto hers. The easy smile vanished. "Our parting was… complicated." "Complicated?" Rory laughed, a short, sharp sound devoid of humor. "You vanished. Like smoke. After everything." She gestured vaguely between them, indicating a shared history that felt both distant and brutally present. "I had my reasons," Lucien stated, his voice losing its usual smooth cadence, roughening slightly. "Reasons I didn't want to burden you with." "Burden? You thought it was better to just disappear? No explanation? No goodbye? Just gone?" Her voice rose, unable to contain the frustration that had festered for months. Her hands clenched at her sides. He took a step towards her, then stopped, a visible struggle playing across his features. His slicked-back platinum hair seemed almost too perfect, a facade. "I made a choice, Rory. A difficult one. Protecting you, in my own clumsy way." "Protecting me?" She shook her head, a bitter taste in her mouth. "You left me to pick up the pieces, Lucien. You left me when I needed you." "And you found Eva, and you rebuilt yourself with admirable tenacity." His gaze fell to a smudge of flour on her sleeve, then back to her eyes. "That scar you carry. It’s a testament to your resilience, a mark of your battles." He meant the one on her wrist, but she felt his meaning encompassed more than just that physical mark. The reference to her scar, that small, almost forgotten childhood injury that sometimes throbbed with unspent emotion, felt too intimate, too close. She pulled her gaze away, staring at the spine of a massive tome on demonology. "Don't pretend you know my battles, Moreau. You were never around for them." "Perhaps not all of them." He moved around the coffee table, slowly, deliberately. The air crackled around him. He paused, close enough now that she could feel the faint warmth of his body. "But I know enough to have concerns when I hear whispers of trouble. Especially when those whispers involve an old flame who refuses to stay burnt out." The words "old flame" brought a flush to her cheeks, a mix of embarrassment and a strange, unwelcome warmth. It wasn't just Evan he meant. It was *them*. "So, what is it?" she asked, forcing her voice to remain steady, despite the tremor in her hands. "What exactly have you 'heard'?" Lucien's eyes, the amber and the black, held hers. He reached out, his fingers brushing against a loose strand of her black hair, tucking it behind her ear. The contact was brief, feather-light, but it sent a jolt down her spine. "He's back in London, Rory. Asking questions. Searching." His voice dropped, a dangerous rumble. "For you." The quiet menace in his tone was unmistakable. It wasn’t a warning; it was a promise of protection, wrapped in layers of past hurt and unaddressed desire. The reality of Evan's proximity hit with a fresh wave of nausea, but beneath it, the unexpected rush of Lucien's proximity, his hand still lingering near her ear, created a confusing, visceral dissonance. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She wanted to pull away, to push him back, to scream at him for appearing now, for bringing *this* and *them* back into her life. But her feet remained rooted, her eyes locked with his. The weight of his presence, the unresolved history, the sudden, unwanted flicker of hope that he *cared*, all collided in the cramped, book-filled flat. He lowered his hand, though his gaze did not waver. "Are you going to let me in, Rory? Truly in?" His eyes searched hers, a silent, desperate plea hidden beneath the casual words. "Or will you keep me at the door?" The scent of old leather and exotic spices filled her lungs. She looked up at him, her bright blue eyes, now clouded with a storm of emotions, searching his. The flicker of hurt battled the undeniable spark of attraction, the fear of her past warring with the unexpected comfort of his presence. The cat, Ptolemy, wound between their legs again, oblivious to the high-stakes dance. Rory swallowed, her throat suddenly dry. The silence stretched, thick and pregnant with their unsaid history.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:14:28.284Z" 2/25/2026, 1:14:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He moved around [around]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
72.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1806
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
6
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
2"truly"
3"carefully"
4"slowly"
5"slightly"
6"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1806
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"effortless"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"resonance"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count3
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count2
7
word"navigating"
count1
8
word"testament"
count2
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"sanctuary"
count1
14
word"charm"
count1
15
word"calculating"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"unwavering"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
19
word"gleaming"
count1
20
word"unspoken"
count1
21
word"perfect"
count1
22
word"facade"
count1
23
word"throbbed"
count1
24
word"could feel"
count1
25
word"warmth"
count2
26
word"down her spine"
count1
27
word"desire"
count1
28
word"flicker"
count2
29
word"dance"
count1
30
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"effortless"
2"weight"
3"resonance"
4"familiar"
5"glint"
6"intensity"
7"navigating"
8"testament"
9"chaotic"
10"velvet"
11"tension"
12"silk"
13"sanctuary"
14"charm"
15"calculating"
16"whisper"
17"unwavering"
18"resolve"
19"gleaming"
20"unspoken"
21"perfect"
22"facade"
23"throbbed"
24"could feel"
25"warmth"
26"down her spine"
27"desire"
28"flicker"
29"dance"
30"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords10
totalWords1806
ratio0.006
matches
0"only"
1"is"
2"her recent past"
3"Evan."
4"them"
5"this"
6"them"
7"cared"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.30% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1354
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Rory14
Lucien10
Oxfords1
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy3
Evan3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.983
windowScore1
68.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a world away from the silent"
1"not quite touching her, but hovering near her arm for a breath, before dropping to stroke Ptolemy, who had reappeared and now twined between his legs"
2"felt like a transgression"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.554
wordCount1806
matches
0"not quite touching her, but hovering near her arm for a breath, before dropping to strok"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
90.83% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean44.05
std20.61
cv0.468
sampleLengths
045
175
236
326
465
534
645
734
851
927
1040
1146
1259
1328
1447
1557
1629
1784
1859
1914
2034
2126
2239
2318
2458
2531
2616
2732
2823
2934
3040
3128
3261
3350
3460
3528
3623
3757
3860
3965
40122
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs221
matches(empty)
97.86% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences127
ratio0.016
matches
0"One eye, amber, held hers; the other, a startling black, remained shadowed."
1"It wasn’t a warning; it was a promise of protection, wrapped in layers of past hurt and unaddressed desire."
90.67% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1362
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount69
adverbRatio0.05066079295154185
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.018355359765051395
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean14.22
std7.73
cv0.544
sampleLengths
08
120
217
315
423
512
612
713
821
915
1019
117
1220
1313
1418
1514
1617
1714
183
193
2016
2118
228
2319
2411
254
267
2717
2811
2916
3017
3110
3211
3324
345
3514
3621
3711
3811
3919
4029
4117
4211
4310
443
4534
4622
4712
4816
497
59.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3779527559055118
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences104
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes, usually"
1"His tailored charcoal suit, sharper"
2"he offered, his voice a"
3"He pushed off the frame,"
4"His scent, a mix of"
5"he murmured, his eyes, now"
6"She moved past him, navigating"
7"He followed her into the"
8"He surveyed the disarray, a"
9"She picked up a stray"
10"She rolled it neatly, depositing"
11"Her crescent-shaped scar on her"
12"She knew he didn't truly"
13"They both always felt more."
14"He paused at the small"
15"She walked towards the window,"
16"His voice held a deceptive"
17"Her shoulders squared."
18"She crossed her arms, a"
19"His black eye seemed to"
ratio0.519
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences104
matches
0"The door, heavy with three"
1"Rory stood framed in the"
2"Her bright blue eyes, usually"
3"Lucien leaned against the doorframe,"
4"His tailored charcoal suit, sharper"
5"Platinum blond hair caught the"
6"The ivory handle of his"
7"he offered, his voice a"
8"A faint smile touched his"
9"Rory braced a hand on"
10"He pushed off the frame,"
11"His scent, a mix of"
12"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, a"
13"Lucien bent, a hand moving"
14"he murmured, his eyes, now"
15"The amber eye held a"
16"Rory’s jaw tightened."
17"She moved past him, navigating"
18"The single-bedroom flat felt even"
19"He followed her into the"
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He smiled then, a genuine flash of teeth that softened the angles of his face, making him look less the formidable broker and more the charming rogue."
1"He reached out, his fingers brushing against a loose strand of her black hair, tucking it behind her ear."
8.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory replied, her voice clipped"
1"Rory told, her voice clipped"
2"Rory retorted, a shard of bitterness entering her tone"
3"He paused, a beat hanging heavy in the air"
4"she demanded, her voice lower now, edged with suspicion"
5"he replied, his gaze unwavering"
6"Lucien stated, his voice losing its usual smooth cadence, roughening slightly"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory retorted (retort)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"Rory laughed (laugh)"
4"Lucien stated (state)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.236
leniency0.473
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.182
74.4289%