Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95TSRRNFJSETCETMB19263

Run Details

Duration:
11.7s
Cost:
$0.001193
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the London cobblestones into slick mirrors reflecting the neon bleed of distant signs. Detective Harlow Quinn shoved her collar tighter against the deluge, her breath pluming in ragged bursts. Her worn leather watch was already soaked, but she ignored it. All that mattered was the figure darting ahead, a shadow swallowed by the night's watery wrath. Eighteen years on the force, and this was how it went, chasing a phantom through the city’s underbelly. The suspect, a wiry man with shoulders hunched against the downpour, vaulted a low garden wall, disappearing into a maw of an alleyway. Quinn didn't hesitate. She took the wall in a single, powerful stride, landing with a splash that sent dark water arcing. Grime dripped from overflowing bins lining the narrow passage. The air grew heavy, thick with the scent of damp refuse and something else, something metallic and strange. Up ahead, a clang echoed, the sound of metal on metal. He was forcing something open. She rounded a corner, the alley opening onto a wider, deserted street. No sign of the suspect. Her eyes scanned the grimy brickwork, the darkened shopfronts. Then she saw it: a gap. Between a derelict bookshop and a boarded-up pub, a set of wrought-iron gates, partially ajar, led down a steep flight of stairs into absolute darkness. The suspect was gone. He’d chosen this. She cursed under her breath, the sound lost in the drumming rain. Her partner, Morris, would have had a wry comment, a half-smile playing on his lips as he surveyed the muck. Three years. Still felt like yesterday. He’d gone into a place like this, chasing shadows that weren't supposed to exist. Harlow approached the descent, the air chilling even through her soaked coat. The rain seemed to fall harder here, but it didn't reach this deep. The metallic tang was stronger, cut with a faint, sickly-sweet odour. She gripped the cold, wet iron of the railing. Her training screamed caution. This wasn’t just a disused service tunnel or a forgotten storage cellar. This felt different. Like stepping off the edge of a map. The kind of place where things went missing, people sometimes, and never came back. She pulled a small, hefty beam from her hip, its light cutting a narrow swathe through the oppressive black. The stairs were worn smooth, slick with generations of damp and unseen transit. Far below, a faint, diffused light pulsed, an unnatural luminescence that hinted at more than just bare bulbs. There was a murmur too, a low thrumming that vibrated up through the soles of her boots, a sound not of the city above, but of something subterranean, something breathing. Her hand instinctively went to her sidearm, the cool, familiar weight a small comfort. The suspect had vanished without a trace. Not a footprint on the wet street, no tell-tale signs of hurried escape except for the forced entry into this forgotten stairwell. This was a deliberate disappearing act. He knew these paths. He belonged to the darkness. Her mind flashed back to the hushed briefs, the whispers about hidden circles, about people who dealt in more than just contraband. The clique. They were always in the periphery, a knot she couldn't untangle. This felt like the centre of their web. She took another step down, the beam of her torch catching a detail on the wall – a smear of something dark, viscous, and undoubtedly ancient. It wasn't simple dirt or rust. A shiver traced a path up her spine, unrelated to the cold. The air pressure changed, pressing in on her eardrums. The murmur grew louder, coalescing into a low din of distant voices, foreign tongues, and the clinking of countless objects. It sounded like a market. An illegal one. But the scent, the light, the very feel of the place… this was no ordinary black market. Her hand tightened on the flashlight. Logic warred with instinct. Her duty was clear: apprehend the suspect. But this wasn't a standard pursuit anymore. This was stepping into the unknown, a territory mapped by rumour and superstition, not by police procedure. The stories of DS Morris’s final case, the unexplained residue, the fractured accounts – they all resurfaced, a chilling echo in the echoing descent. He’d been a good cop. Too good, maybe. He’d seen things. The light below intensified, revealing the wide expanse of an old, disused Tube station. Arches receded into the gloom, and the thrumming resolved into a multitude of whispers, hawkers’ calls in unknown dialects, the rhythmic clang of metal on stone, and the hiss of something being brewed. Stalls, crudely erected from draped cloth and scavenged materials, lined the platforms, their wares spilling out into the oppressive air. Vials shimmered with colourful, unstable liquids. Odd carvings pulsed with faint internal light. The air was thick with incense smoke, strange spices, and the unmistakable odour of something primal. This was the Veil Market. She'd heard the street talk, dismissed it as myth. But the bone token entry, the shifting locations… it was all suddenly, terrifyingly real. The suspect was lost to her in this labyrinth. To follow meant venturing into a place where the rules of her world ceased to apply, a place likely as dangerous to her as she was to its inhabitants. She was a cop, a hunter. But she was also a woman standing on the precipice of a reality she only understood through fragmented reports and her own gnawing grief. The darkness below beckoned, a siren song of illicit commerce and unknown peril. Her training urged her forward, her curiosity gnawed, but the ghost of her partner whispered caution from the damp shadows of her memory. The weight of her service pistol felt impossibly heavy. She squinted into the swirling mist of light and shadow, her decision hanging in the thick, unbreathable air.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount978
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount978
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"maw"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"chilling"
count2
4
word"oppressive"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"standard"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"resolved"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"fragmented"
count1
19
word"peril"
count1
highlights
0"maw"
1"echoed"
2"scanned"
3"chilling"
4"oppressive"
5"pulsed"
6"vibrated"
7"familiar"
8"weight"
9"traced"
10"standard"
11"fractured"
12"echo"
13"echoing"
14"gloom"
15"resolved"
16"rhythmic"
17"shimmered"
18"fragmented"
19"peril"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords980
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount961
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.21
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow2
Quinn2
Morris2
Tube1
Stalls1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Stalls"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like the centre of their web"
97.96% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.02
wordCount980
matches
0"not of the city above, but of something subterranean, something breathing"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
9.81% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean98
std18.07
cv0.184
sampleLengths
081
187
2116
386
494
587
698
776
8124
9131
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"was gone"
1"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was forcing"
1"was stepping"
74.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences83
ratio0.024
matches
0"She took another step down, the beam of her torch catching a detail on the wall – a smear of something dark, viscous, and undoubtedly ancient."
1"The stories of DS Morris’s final case, the unexplained residue, the fractured accounts – they all resurfaced, a chilling echo in the echoing descent."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount756
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly-sweet odour."
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03439153439153439
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006613756613756613
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean11.81
std7.39
cv0.625
sampleLengths
020
116
211
316
418
523
63
718
89
918
1011
115
1212
135
149
156
1625
174
183
1912
2020
212
224
2314
2412
2513
2611
279
284
2912
303
318
3214
3319
3413
3518
3630
3714
387
3922
406
414
425
4322
442
4511
468
4726
486
4912
61.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.39759036144578314
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences81
matches
0"All that mattered was the"
1"Then she saw it: a"
2"Still felt like yesterday."
3"Too good, maybe."
ratio0.049
76.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences81
matches
0"Her worn leather watch was"
1"She took the wall in"
2"He was forcing something open."
3"She rounded a corner, the"
4"Her eyes scanned the grimy"
5"He’d chosen this."
6"She cursed under her breath,"
7"Her partner, Morris, would have"
8"He’d gone into a place"
9"She gripped the cold, wet"
10"Her training screamed caution."
11"She pulled a small, hefty"
12"Her hand instinctively went to"
13"He knew these paths."
14"He belonged to the darkness."
15"Her mind flashed back to"
16"They were always in the"
17"She took another step down,"
18"It wasn't simple dirt or"
19"It sounded like a market."
ratio0.358
77.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences81
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn shoved her"
2"Her worn leather watch was"
3"The suspect, a wiry man"
4"Quinn didn't hesitate."
5"She took the wall in"
6"Grime dripped from overflowing bins"
7"The air grew heavy, thick"
8"He was forcing something open."
9"She rounded a corner, the"
10"Her eyes scanned the grimy"
11"The suspect was gone."
12"He’d chosen this."
13"She cursed under her breath,"
14"Her partner, Morris, would have"
15"He’d gone into a place"
16"Harlow approached the descent, the"
17"The rain seemed to fall"
18"The metallic tang was stronger,"
19"She gripped the cold, wet"
ratio0.765
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"To follow meant venturing into"
ratio0.012
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She took the wall in a single, powerful stride, landing with a splash that sent dark water arcing."
1"Far below, a faint, diffused light pulsed, an unnatural luminescence that hinted at more than just bare bulbs."
2"There was a murmur too, a low thrumming that vibrated up through the soles of her boots, a sound not of the city above, but of something subterranean, something…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.6736%