Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95V0WTRP8Q551NF60JA0HR

Run Details

Duration:
14.1s
Cost:
$0.006996
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed, clawing at the moonless sky. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter, the fabric scraping against the faint crescent scar on her left wrist. A cold seeped into her bones, not just from the night air, but from the stillness that clung to the Fae Grove’s entrance. She stepped through the unseen threshold, the world behind her seeming to vanish, swallowed by the sudden, heavy dark. The air inside tasted different, thick with the scent of damp earth and an unnerving sweetness she couldn’t place. A vibrant tapestry of wildflowers, defying the late hours and chill, unrolled before her, their petals glowing with an internal luminescence. Too bright. They pulsed with an unnatural life, almost breathing. Every instinct screamed at her to turn back, but the memory of the cryptic note, folded twice into her palm, held her footing. It spoke of a path, a secret, found only when the world slept. Her leather boots crunched on dry leaves, the sound amplified in the absolute quiet. No crickets chirped, no distant traffic hummed. Only the muted rush of her own blood in her ears. She moved deeper, following a barely-there trail, the towering oaks swallowing the meagre light the distant city offered. Their branches intertwined, forming a skeletal canopy that blocked out the stars, deepening the gloom to an oppressive weight. Aurora reached for the silver chain around her neck, her fingers finding the Heartstone Pendant. It felt warm, a reassuring thrum against her sternum. Not quite pulsating, but certainly alive. A sound, soft and quick, ghosted past her ear. A rustle of leaves, too precise for the wind. She spun, bright blue eyes sweeping the impenetrable darkness. Nothing. Only the unmoving shadows, mimicking gnarled hands and twisted faces among the tree trunks. She pushed a stray strand of black hair from her face, her gaze lingering on a cluster of impossibly blue bellflowers that vibrated with faint light. She walked on, measuring each step, the silence pressing in, a physical force against her eardrums. The ground grew softer, springier underfoot, as if the very earth here held its breath. The scent of the wildflowers intensified, cloying now, and subtly wrong. A hint of decay mingled with the sweetness, like candied death. Another sound, closer this time. A low, guttural sigh. It came from the dense thicket off to her right, a place where the wildflowers grew taller, their luminous glow forming an almost solid wall. She froze, every muscle tensing. Her breath hitched. The pendant against her skin grew warmer, a distinct pulse now, a steady throb. It seemed to beat in rhythm with something else, unseen, unheard, but undeniably present. A branch snapped behind her. A sharp, loud crack that shattered the silence. Aurora pivoted, her heart hammering against her ribs. The trees were still, stark silhouettes against the gloom. No movement. No rustle. Yet the sound had been distinct, undeniable. She took a step back, then another, her eyes darting between the empty spaces, the dense undergrowth, the looming trunks. A chill snaked up her spine. Not the cold of the night, but an invasive feeling, as if something invisible brushed against her back. She clenched her jaw. Her quick mind catalogued details: the unusual lack of animal sounds, the hyper-real quality of the plants, the intensifying warmth of the pendant. All of it screamed 'wrong.' This wasn’t just a park at night. This felt like a place holding its breath. She forced herself to move, pushing deeper into the grove, her original purpose now tangled with a growing, cold unease. Her fingers tightened around the smooth, crimson stone of the pendant. It pulsed steadily, a tiny heartbeat in her palm, guiding her, or pulling her. A flicker of movement at the edge of her vision, a long, slender shadow detaching itself from a tree trunk, propelled her forward. She whipped her head around, but the shadow was gone, reabsorbed by the static darkness. Delusion, she told herself, a trick of the eye. But the certainty that she was not alone, that *something* moved just beyond the reach of her sight, tightened its grip. A low whisper drifted on the stagnant air. It wasn't a word, just a sibilant hiss, barely audible, like dry leaves scuttling across stone. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, a disembodied breath against her ear. She stopped dead, standing in a small clearing where the brightest, largest wildflowers grew, their petals almost blinding in their unnatural glow. The air here was even heavier, thicker, pressing down on her. The sweetness of the flowers was overwhelming now, sickly. The pendant in her hand burned with a steady heat, a faint inner glow from within the crimson gemstone, momentarily illuminating the small crescent scar on her wrist. The whisper came again, closer this time, distinct. It sounded like her name. *“Rory.”* Soft, drawn out, mournful. But no one knew her here. No one should. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. She had told no one where she was going. The note… had it been a trap? Her gaze swept the trees, now seeming to lean in, their ancient forms morphing into watching figures. Their shadows danced at the periphery, taking on brief, monstrous shapes. A faint scuttling sound came from among the brightly glowing flowers at her feet. Something small, fast, unseen. She stomped her foot. The sound reverberated, too loud, too hollow. The whispering grew, intertwining, forming a chaotic chorus of faint, wordless sounds. They pressed from all sides, a tidal wave of formless noise that threatened to drown her. Her temples throbbed. The trees themselves seemed to creak and groan, sounds indistinguishable from the whispers, blurring the line between nature and something else entirely. She took a quick, shallow breath. Her chest felt tight, her throat raw. The pendant radiated intense heat, almost scorching her skin. Then, a ripple. The still air before her twisted, a momentary distortion she could feel more than see, like heat haze, but dark. A shape, vague as smoke, hung there for a fraction of a second, just beyond her direct sight, before dissolving back into the gloom. Just a trick of light, she tried to reason, but her hands were clammy, a cold sweat pricking her skin. Her legs felt weak. The certainty solidified: she was not merely alone in a strange place. She was alone *with* something. And it was listening. It was watching. It was waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1078
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1078
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"tapestry"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"gloom"
count3
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"throb"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"looming"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count2
17
word"reverberated"
count1
18
word"chaotic"
count1
19
word"throbbed"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"tapestry"
2"chill"
3"pulsed"
4"gloom"
5"oppressive"
6"weight"
7"vibrated"
8"silence"
9"pulse"
10"throb"
11"shattered"
12"stark"
13"looming"
14"warmth"
15"flicker"
16"whisper"
17"reverberated"
18"chaotic"
19"throbbed"
20"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
82.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1078
ratio0.003
matches
0"something"
1"“Rory.”"
2"with"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Delusion, she told herself, a trick of the eye."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount1069
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.37
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Aurora4
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"Not quite pulsating, but certainly alive"
1"felt like a place holding its breath"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.783
wordCount1078
matches
0"not just from the night air, but from the stillness"
1"Not quite pulsating, but certainly alive"
2"Not the cold of the night, but an invasive feeling, as if something invisible brushed again"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
18.68% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean77
std16.58
cv0.215
sampleLengths
070
186
299
368
453
570
661
771
8113
980
1055
1179
1275
1398
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"was gone"
36.40% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was going"
1"was listening"
2"was watching"
3"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences95
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount564
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03546099290780142
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.014184397163120567
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean11.35
std6.8
cv0.6
sampleLengths
011
117
223
319
419
521
62
78
823
913
1014
117
1211
1318
1419
1515
169
176
189
199
209
211
2214
2326
2416
2515
2611
2711
285
294
3025
315
323
3314
3414
355
368
378
389
392
402
417
4220
436
4418
454
4623
4712
488
4920
38.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2736842105263158
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"Only the muted rush of"
1"Only the unmoving shadows, mimicking"
2"Then, a ripple."
3"Just a trick of light,"
ratio0.044
55.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences90
matches
0"She stepped through the unseen"
1"They pulsed with an unnatural"
2"It spoke of a path,"
3"Her leather boots crunched on"
4"She moved deeper, following a"
5"Their branches intertwined, forming a"
6"It felt warm, a reassuring"
7"She spun, bright blue eyes"
8"She pushed a stray strand"
9"She walked on, measuring each"
10"It came from the dense"
11"She froze, every muscle tensing."
12"Her breath hitched."
13"It seemed to beat in"
14"She took a step back,"
15"She clenched her jaw."
16"Her quick mind catalogued details:"
17"She forced herself to move,"
18"Her fingers tightened around the"
19"It pulsed steadily, a tiny"
ratio0.411
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences90
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"A cold seeped into her"
3"She stepped through the unseen"
4"The air inside tasted different,"
5"A vibrant tapestry of wildflowers,"
6"They pulsed with an unnatural"
7"Every instinct screamed at her"
8"It spoke of a path,"
9"Her leather boots crunched on"
10"She moved deeper, following a"
11"Their branches intertwined, forming a"
12"Aurora reached for the silver"
13"It felt warm, a reassuring"
14"A sound, soft and quick,"
15"A rustle of leaves, too"
16"She spun, bright blue eyes"
17"She pushed a stray strand"
18"She walked on, measuring each"
19"The ground grew softer, springier"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"A vibrant tapestry of wildflowers, defying the late hours and chill, unrolled before her, their petals glowing with an internal luminescence."
1"She pushed a stray strand of black hair from her face, her gaze lingering on a cluster of impossibly blue bellflowers that vibrated with faint light."
2"The ground grew softer, springier underfoot, as if the very earth here held its breath."
3"Not the cold of the night, but an invasive feeling, as if something invisible brushed against her back."
4"It pulsed steadily, a tiny heartbeat in her palm, guiding her, or pulling her."
5"They pressed from all sides, a tidal wave of formless noise that threatened to drown her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"it screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
73.2905%