Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95VRSG0VRQ1J9RWDZ0GVRA

Run Details

Duration:
31.9s
Cost:
$0.013343
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The floorboards beneath Rory’s feet hummed with the bass from Silas' bar downstairs. It was a rhythmic, dull throb that vibrated through the soles of her socks, a constant reminder of the life churning beneath her small sanctuary. She reached for the kettle, the whistle starting to build a shrill counterpoint to the music, when the knock came. Three precise, heavy raps. They didn't belong to Silas or any of the regulars who occasionally mistook her door for the broom cupboard. These had a weight to them, a deliberate authority that made the hair on her arms prickle. She set the kettle aside and tightened the sash of her cardigan. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist flared white against her skin as she gripped the handle. She didn't check the peephole. In this neighborhood, curiosity killed more than just cats, but her gut already knew the rhythm of that knock. It was etched into her memory, right alongside the scent of expensive tobacco and rain-slicked asphalt. The door groaned as she pulled it open. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, a ghost of the life she’d tried to bury. The yellowed light of the landing caught the platinum sheen of his slicked-back hair and the sharp, tailored lines of his charcoal suit. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one stygian black, the other a searing, predatory amber—scanning the threshold before settling on her face. “You look well, Aurora.” The sound of his voice, a low vibration that carried the ghost of a French accent, sent a jolt of heat through her chest that she immediately tried to smother with irritation. “You have five seconds before I call Silas. He still keeps the baseball bat behind the bar.” Lucien didn’t flinch. He didn’t move at all, save for the slight tilt of his head. He looked like an oil painting brought to life, too still and too perfect for a cramped flat above a dive bar in London. “Silas and I have already exchanged pleasantries. He’s the one who let me up.” “Traitor.” Rory stepped back, intending to slam the door, but the tip of the ivory cane slid into the gap. The wood met the cane with a dull thud. Lucien didn't push, didn't use force. He simply waited, the pressure of the cane a silent request. “It’s raining, Aurora. And my business isn’t the sort for a public hallway.” “Since when do you care about public displays? You usually prefer an audience for your theatrics.” She let go of the door and walked back into the kitchen, a surrender that felt more like a retreat. Behind her, the click of the latch and the slide of the bolt echoed in the small space. Lucien’s footsteps followed—muted, elegant, and entirely too close. The flat felt smaller with him in it. The ceiling seemed to drop, the walls closing in as his presence filled the corners. He didn't belong here, amidst the mismatched furniture and the lingering smell of Golden Empress take-away. He was a creature of marble floors and velvet shadows. Rory turned on the tap, letting the water run cold over her hands to steady them. “Why are you here, Lucien? Last I checked, you were quite clear about our partnership ending. Something about me being an 'uncontrollable liability'?” Lucien leaned his cane against the edge of her small dining table. He moved through her space with a terrifying familiarity, his black eye tracking the movement of her shoulders while the amber one seemed to glow in the low light. “I was angry. You were reckless. The docks in Marseille were a bloodbath because you decided to play hero for that girl.” “She was twelve. I wasn't going to let those things tear her apart.” “And instead, you nearly let them tear you apart.” He moved toward her then, the air between them thickening with the sudden proximity. He stopped just outside her personal space, the scent of him—cedarwood and something metallic, something demon—invading her lungs. He reached out, his gloved hand hovering near her arm before he pulled it back, a rare moment of hesitation from a man who brokered the secrets of the underworld. “I heard about the move. Brick Lane is a far cry from the flat in Kensington.” “Kensington was your place, Lucien. This is mine. I like the noise. It drowns out the voices of people I’d rather forget.” She turned to face him, leaning back against the sink. The blue of her eyes met the chaos of his, and for a second, the anger flickered, replaced by the sharp, jagged memory of their last night together. The taste of whiskey on his breath, the heat of his skin against hers before the argument turned into a fracture that neither had known how to mend. “You haven’t forgotten.” He didn't make it a question. He took another step, closing the distance until the toes of his polished oxfords touched her socks. The height difference forced her to tilt her head back, exposing the vulnerability of her throat. “I’ve been busy. Delivering noodles and keeping my head down. It’s a quiet life. You should try it.” Lucien’s hand finally moved, his fingers brushing the hair away from her face. His touch was cool, but it left a trail of fire in its wake. “You were never meant for quiet, Aurora. You’re a storm caught in a human skin. Even now, your pulse is trying to break through your skin.” She swatted his hand away, her heart hammering against her ribs just as he’d described. “Don't come into my home and tell me what I am. You lost that right months ago. You left me in that hospital in Marseille with nothing but a bill and a generic 'get well' card.” “I paid the bill. And I stayed until you were out of surgery.” “And then you disappeared. Like you always do when things get messy.” The amber eye flared, a sign of the demon blood simmering beneath his skin. Lucien’s jaw tightened, the muscles of his face sharp and angular. “I disappeared because the men who were hunting us don't stop. If I had stayed, they would have found you before you could even walk. I drew them away.” Rory felt the sting of tears and blinked them back, her jaw setting in a stubborn line. “You could have told me. We were supposed to be a team.” “We were never just a team, and you know it.” He grabbed her waist then, his fingers digging into the soft fabric of her cardigan. The movement was sudden, purely instinctual, drawing her flush against the cold wool of his suit. The ivory handle of the cane rattled against the table as he crowded her against the counter. “I spent six months convincing myself I didn’t need the headache you cause. I took jobs in Berlin, in Tokyo, in Cairo. I surrounding myself with people who listen, people who don't question, and yet, every time I closed my eyes, I saw you bleeding out on that concrete floor.” Rory’s breath hitched. She could feel the vibration of his chest against hers, the raw power of him. She reached up, her fingers tangling in the platinum hair at the nape of his neck, not to push him away, but to hold him there. “You’re a liar, Lucien Moreau. You came here because you’re bored.” “I came here because I’m starving.” His head dipped, his nose brushing against hers. The heterochromatic eyes were blown wide, the pupils swallowing the color. “There’s a contract. A big one. Something involving the Avaros lineage.” Rory gave a sharp, dry laugh, her forehead resting against his. “Of course. It’s always a job. You didn't come for me. You came for the delivery girl.” “I came for the only person in this city who isn't afraid to look at me and see something other than a monster. And because I missed the way you taste when you’re angry.” He didn't wait for her to retort. He pressed his mouth to hers, a bruising, desperate kiss that tasted of long-held resentment and a hunger that had only grown in the silence between them. Rory groaned into the kiss, her hands shifting from his hair to his shoulders, pulling him closer until the edge of the counter dug into her hips. The music from the bar downstairs seemed to swell, a frantic drumbeat that matched the frantic pace of her heart. Lucien’s kiss was demanding, a reclaim of territory he’d never truly abandoned. His tongue swept against hers, and for a moment, the world of deliveries and law degrees and hiding vanished. There was only the weight of him, the scent of the underworld, and the terrifying realization that she was going to let him stay. He pulled back just an inch, his lips wet and his breathing ragged. “Tell me to leave, Aurora. Say it now, and I’ll walk out that door. I’ll leave the contract, I’ll leave the city, and I won't come back.” Rory looked at the man who had broken her heart and saved her life in the same breath. She looked at the crescent scar on her wrist and then back at his dual-colored eyes. “The kettle’s boiled,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “And you’re going to tell me every single detail about this contract.” Lucien’s grip on her waist didn't loosen. A slow, dangerous smirk tugged at the corners of his mouth. “The tea can wait.”
created_at"2026-02-25T01:15:52.502Z" 2/25/2026, 1:15:52 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.129
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1596
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1596
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"churning"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"amidst"
count1
14
word"marble"
count1
15
word"velvet"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"pulse"
count1
18
word"simmering"
count1
19
word"could feel"
count1
20
word"blown wide"
count1
21
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"throb"
2"vibrated"
3"reminder"
4"churning"
5"sanctuary"
6"weight"
7"etched"
8"searing"
9"scanning"
10"perfect"
11"echoed"
12"footsteps"
13"amidst"
14"marble"
15"velvet"
16"flickered"
17"pulse"
18"simmering"
19"could feel"
20"blown wide"
21"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences70
matches
0"felt the sting"
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1591
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1084
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Silas1
Moreau1
French1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien9
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Moreau"
3"Empress"
4"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like an oil painting brought to li"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.629
wordCount1591
matches
0"not to push him away, but to hold him there"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean27.43
std18.87
cv0.688
sampleLengths
058
140
269
38
464
54
632
717
840
914
101
1145
1213
1316
1446
1549
1616
1723
1841
1922
2013
219
2262
2316
2422
2566
263
2739
2818
2927
3026
3115
3236
3313
3412
3525
3629
3717
3812
3910
4048
4150
4244
4311
446
4519
4611
4711
4817
4934
95.24% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"was etched"
1"were blown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was demanding"
57.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences100
ratio0.03
matches
0"He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one stygian black, the other a searing, predatory amber—scanning the threshold before settling on her face."
1"Lucien’s footsteps followed—muted, elegant, and entirely too close."
2"He stopped just outside her personal space, the scent of him—cedarwood and something metallic, something demon—invading her lungs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount708
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.026836158192090395
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00847457627118644
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean15.91
std8.19
cv0.515
sampleLengths
013
125
220
34
419
517
612
717
85
919
1016
118
1216
1323
1425
154
1632
1717
183
1913
2024
2114
221
2319
249
256
2611
2713
2816
2920
3018
318
328
3315
3416
3510
3616
3723
3812
3929
4022
4113
429
4314
4418
4530
4616
4722
4810
4928
40.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.26
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences70
matches
0"It was a rhythmic, dull"
1"She reached for the kettle,"
2"They didn't belong to Silas"
3"She set the kettle aside"
4"She didn't check the peephole."
5"It was etched into her"
6"He leaned slightly on his"
7"He didn’t move at all,"
8"He looked like an oil"
9"He simply waited, the pressure"
10"She let go of the"
11"He didn't belong here, amidst"
12"He was a creature of"
13"He moved through her space"
14"He moved toward her then,"
15"He stopped just outside her"
16"He reached out, his gloved"
17"She turned to face him,"
18"He didn't make it a"
19"He took another step, closing"
ratio0.457
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences70
matches
0"The floorboards beneath Rory’s feet"
1"It was a rhythmic, dull"
2"She reached for the kettle,"
3"They didn't belong to Silas"
4"These had a weight to"
5"She set the kettle aside"
6"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
7"She didn't check the peephole."
8"It was etched into her"
9"The door groaned as she"
10"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
11"The yellowed light of the"
12"He leaned slightly on his"
13"The sound of his voice,"
14"Lucien didn’t flinch."
15"He didn’t move at all,"
16"He looked like an oil"
17"Rory stepped back, intending to"
18"The wood met the cane"
19"Lucien didn't push, didn't use"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It was a rhythmic, dull throb that vibrated through the soles of her socks, a constant reminder of the life churning beneath her small sanctuary."
1"The sound of his voice, a low vibration that carried the ghost of a French accent, sent a jolt of heat through her chest that she immediately tried to smother w…"
2"He reached out, his gloved hand hovering near her arm before he pulled it back, a rare moment of hesitation from a man who brokered the secrets of the underworl…"
3"He pressed his mouth to hers, a bruising, desperate kiss that tasted of long-held resentment and a hunger that had only grown in the silence between them."
4"Rory groaned into the kiss, her hands shifting from his hair to his shoulders, pulling him closer until the edge of the counter dug into her hips."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, her voice trembling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.065
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.065
75.6647%