Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95WYAP0CDTB5K26PDZKXXK

Run Details

Duration:
19.1s
Cost:
$0.008615
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy bolt scraped. Aurora eased the door open a crack, a sliver of cautious anticipation on her face. Her hand froze on the knob. Lucien Moreau stood framed in the dim light of Brick Lane’s perpetually grey afternoon, a stark contrast to the grimy street. His tailored charcoal suit hung without a single wrinkle, the fabric a dark matte against the pale bricks of the curry house opposite. He leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, a silver lion’s head gleaming at the top. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place. One eye, amber, held hers; the other, a fathomless black, seemed to examine the very air between them. She pulled the door wider, a silent invitation, or perhaps just resignation. "Lucien," the name left her lips, a breath of surprise. A smile, barely there, touched the corner of his mouth. He straightened, pushing off the cane, its tip tapping softly on the worn threshold. "Aurora," he countered, his voice a low, smooth cadence she remembered all too well. "Not expecting visitors?" "Yours, specifically? Never." She stepped back, making room, though not out of welcome. His presence filled the narrow hallway, scenting the air with something expensive and faintly reminiscent of jasmine. He crossed the threshold, his gaze sweeping over the stacks of books and scrolls that already threatened to engulf Eva’s small flat. A faint, almost imperceptible tremor ran through her, a phantom echo of something past. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound through Lucien’s ankles, a purr rumbling from his throat. The cat, usually wary of strangers, rubbed affectionately against the foreign fabric of Lucien’s trousers. Lucien glanced down, a flash of genuine amusement in his heterochromatic eyes, before he nudged Ptolemy gently with the tip of his cane. "You’ve been busy," he remarked, the observation landing flat, offering no explanation for his abrupt appearance. His eyes found hers again, a spark in their depths. "Eva’s busy," Rory corrected, her voice tight, a defensive edge she hadn’t intended. She gripped her left wrist, thumb tracing the crescent-shaped scar, a habit she thought she had broken years ago. "I’m just… here." "So I see." He moved further into the living area, his movements fluid, unhurried, as if he owned the space. He stopped before a precarious tower of arcane texts. Dust motes danced in the lone shaft of light slicing through the grimy window. "A considerable change from the flat above Silas’s." "It’s temporary. You know how Eva gets with her research." Rory’s bright blue eyes narrowed. "What do you want, Lucien? You don’t just show up to admire Eva’s interior decorating." He turned, the faint smile returning. "A simple concern for a friend. Is that so hard to believe?" "A simple concern involves a phone call. Or a text. Not showing up unannounced like some phantom." Her arms crossed, a shield against his easy charm. The intimacy between them, the shared moments and unspoken understandings, felt distant, yet intensely present in the cramped space. "Sometimes, the personal touch is required." His voice lowered, the change subtle but potent. "Especially when channels of communication have… dried up." He gestured vaguely between them with a hand that seemed to remember the curve of her jaw. Her jaw clenched instead. "Things ended, Lucien. They weren’t meant to be picked back up again at your convenience." "Did they end, Aurora? Or did you simply… disappear?" He moved closer, a deliberate three-step approach that left barely a foot between them. His head tilted slightly, inviting her to meet his gaze, to look past the confident facade. "A note on the kitchen table. A changed number. Evasion, not resolution." "After everything," she began, then stopped, a rush of old hurts threatening to surface. "What else was there to do? We saw each other clearly that night." "I thought we saw each other, yes. But perhaps not the same thing." He reached out, his hand hovering, for a bare instant, just above her arm before he let it drop, the restrained gesture almost more impactful than a touch. "London is a large city. Yet you were not hard to find." Her heart hammered, a frantic drum against her ribs. She remembered how his touch felt, how his eyes held hers, how easily he could charm and disarm. And she remembered the sting of his words, the cold distance that had eventually settled between them like a shroud. "I wasn't hiding. I just… moved on." "Did you?" His voice was a soft challenge, barely a whisper now. "You look thinner. Darker circles under your eyes. The delivery work is keeping you busy, then." He looked her over, his gaze lingering on her straight shoulder-length black hair, the slight tremor in her hands. "You've been watching me." It wasn't a question. A chill snaked down her spine, fear mixing with a strange thrill. "Observing. There’s a difference." He shrugged, a slight, elegant movement that didn't diminish his intensity. "I heard things. Rumours. That you were struggling. That you needed assistance. My assistance." "I don’t need your assistance," Rory scoffed, pulling herself up, trying to inject more defiance into her tone than she felt. "I’m perfectly capable of handling my own life." "Are you?" He let the question hang in the air, weighted with implication. "Considering the company you keep now, I am less certain. A half-starved demon hunter and a reclusive witch who deals in whispers and old blood." Rory took a step forward, closing the remaining distance, invading his personal space with a rush of indignation. "They’re my friends, Lucien. They offered support when you were… otherwise occupied." "Occupied?" His amber eye flashed. "Or simply giving you space. As you seemed so desperately to want." He leaned in, his voice dropping to a seductive murmur that raised the tiny hairs on her arms. "I didn't think you wanted to hear from me after the way you ran." "I didn't run," she practically clipped the words, her voice low and furious. "I removed myself from a situation that was clearly going nowhere. And hurting us both." His gaze softened, the fierce intensity replaced by something akin to regret. "Hurting *me* as well, Aurora. Never doubt that." He reached out again, this time his cool fingers brushing her cheek, a fleeting, almost imperceptible touch that ignited a fire beneath her skin. "There were things left unsaid between us. Important things." "Too late for them now," she breathed, her voice catching. Her blue eyes fixed on his, searching for an answer she wasn't sure she wanted. "Perhaps not," Lucien murmured, his thumb brushing over her skin, lingering, the warmth of his touch a stark contrast to the coldness of their parting. His gaze dropped to her lips, making the air crackle between them. "I believe in second chances. Especially when the first was cut so tragically short."
created_at"2026-02-25T01:16:30.942Z" 2/25/2026, 1:16:30 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"He moved further [further]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3"she began then [then]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.512
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
69.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"intensely"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
6
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"gently"
4"intensely"
5"slightly"
6"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"anticipation"
count1
1
word"stark"
count2
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"depths"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"charm"
count2
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"jaw clenched"
count1
9
word"facade"
count1
10
word"restrained"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"intensity"
count2
15
word"implication"
count1
16
word"fleeting"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"anticipation"
1"stark"
2"gleaming"
3"echo"
4"depths"
5"tracing"
6"charm"
7"unspoken"
8"jaw clenched"
9"facade"
10"restrained"
11"whisper"
12"chill"
13"down her spine"
14"intensity"
15"implication"
16"fleeting"
17"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1142
ratio0.001
matches
0"me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount789
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Eva2
Lucien5
Ptolemy2
Rory4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"hand that seemed to remember the curve of her jaw"
1"something akin to regret"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1142
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
91.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean40.79
std19.19
cv0.471
sampleLengths
0115
122
241
366
451
526
635
751
830
918
1045
1139
1219
1351
1427
1553
1654
1747
1820
1929
2029
2138
2230
2349
2428
2553
2625
2751
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs131
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences76
ratio0.013
matches
0"One eye, amber, held hers; the other, a fathomless black, seemed to examine the very air between them."
94.03% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount793
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04665825977301387
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.0201765447667087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean15.03
std7.04
cv0.469
sampleLengths
04
115
26
321
423
515
613
718
812
910
1010
1114
1214
133
1413
1517
1622
1714
1813
1915
2023
2116
2210
2313
2419
253
2620
279
2814
298
3015
3115
326
3312
3426
3519
3614
3725
384
3915
4023
4116
4212
4314
4413
4541
4612
479
4818
4920
73.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4868421052631579
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences58
matches
0"Her hand froze on the"
1"His tailored charcoal suit hung"
2"He leaned lightly on his"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"She pulled the door wider,"
5"He straightened, pushing off the"
6"he countered, his voice a"
7"She stepped back, making room,"
8"His presence filled the narrow"
9"He crossed the threshold, his"
10"he remarked, the observation landing"
11"His eyes found hers again,"
12"She gripped her left wrist,"
13"He moved further into the"
14"He stopped before a precarious"
15"He turned, the faint smile"
16"Her arms crossed, a shield"
17"His voice lowered, the change"
18"He gestured vaguely between them"
19"Her jaw clenched instead."
ratio0.672
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences58
matches
0"The heavy bolt scraped."
1"Aurora eased the door open"
2"Her hand froze on the"
3"Lucien Moreau stood framed in"
4"His tailored charcoal suit hung"
5"He leaned lightly on his"
6"His platinum blond hair was"
7"She pulled the door wider,"
8"the name left her lips,"
9"A smile, barely there, touched"
10"He straightened, pushing off the"
11"he countered, his voice a"
12"She stepped back, making room,"
13"His presence filled the narrow"
14"He crossed the threshold, his"
15"A faint, almost imperceptible tremor"
16"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound through"
17"The cat, usually wary of"
18"Lucien glanced down, a flash"
19"he remarked, the observation landing"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He straightened, pushing off the cane, its tip tapping softly on the worn threshold."
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"the name left, a breath of surprise"
1"Rory corrected, her voice tight, a defensive edge she hadn’t intended"
2"she breathed, her voice catching"
80.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory corrected (correct)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.07
leniency0.14
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.14
73.4940%