| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.031 | | leniency | 0.063 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1519 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1519 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "chaotic" | | 4 | "potential" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "desire" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "beacon" | | 10 | "unreadable" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "charged" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "lurched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1518 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "He's already in the building." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 1048 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a fallen angel trapped in a b" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.659 | | wordCount | 1518 | | matches | | 0 | "Not from the outside with a key, but from the inside, the metal screeching as it was forced by a" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 25.73 | | std | 18.87 | | cv | 0.734 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 78 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 42 | | 45 | 54 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 49 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't heading" | | 1 | "were moving" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "For a moment, the mask slipped, and I saw something flick in his blackened eye—a flash of genuine, jagged frustration." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1057 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.02270577105014191 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00946073793755913 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 14.06 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 31.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.26851851851851855 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "I didn't reach for the" | | 1 | "I yanked the door open." | | 2 | "His tailored charcoal wool suit" | | 3 | "He didn't offer a greeting." | | 4 | "He simply leaned on that" | | 5 | "He stepped forward, not waiting" | | 6 | "I retreated into the cramped" | | 7 | "He didn't let go immediately." | | 8 | "He waited until I found" | | 9 | "He surveyed the room with" | | 10 | "He moved toward the window," | | 11 | "He looked like a fallen" | | 12 | "He crossed the small gap" | | 13 | "I backed into the wall," | | 14 | "He didn't touch me, but" | | 15 | "It was a scent that" | | 16 | "His voice dropped to a" | | 17 | "I hated how easily he" | | 18 | "I reached up, intending to" | | 19 | "I didn't push." |
| | ratio | 0.649 | |
| 5.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt resisted, catching" | | 1 | "I didn't reach for the" | | 2 | "Brick Lane was loud enough" | | 3 | "I yanked the door open." | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 5 | "His tailored charcoal wool suit" | | 6 | "He didn't offer a greeting." | | 7 | "He simply leaned on that" | | 8 | "He stepped forward, not waiting" | | 9 | "I retreated into the cramped" | | 10 | "Lucien caught my elbow, his" | | 11 | "He didn't let go immediately." | | 12 | "He waited until I found" | | 13 | "He surveyed the room with" | | 14 | "Eva's flat was a chaotic" | | 15 | "Ptolemy, the raggedy orange tabby" | | 16 | "The cat hissed, a low," | | 17 | "He moved toward the window," | | 18 | "The flickering neon sign of" | | 19 | "He looked like a fallen" |
| | ratio | 0.909 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a scent that belonged in a high-rise penthouse, not this cramped, dusty box." | | 1 | "They were moving toward the air vent that connected my flat to the one above." | | 2 | "The metal felt ice-cold, the sigil stinging my palm as if the serpent were alive." | | 3 | "Not from the outside with a key, but from the inside, the metal screeching as it was forced by a strength that shouldn't exist." | | 4 | "Above the creature's head, the ceiling began to bleed a dark, viscous liquid that smelled of old copper and stagnant water." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.031 | | leniency | 0.063 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |