Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDD2TRV6XHFPSV762CJKBM

Run Details

Duration:
40.1s
Cost:
$0.001834
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Camden High Street. The water slicked the cobblestones, reflecting the neon glow of closed shop signs. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through the downpour, her boots slapping hard against the wet concrete. She kept her gaze fixed on the shadow ahead, a man fading into the gloom of the side alley. Her radio crackled. Static hissed between the words. Quinn tapped the mic on her lapel. Maintain the perimeter is the order. Dispatch didn't answer immediately. The signal died in the wet atmosphere. She ignored the silence and kept her eyes on the fleeing figure. Her breath rasped in her throat, sharp and cold. The suspect broke into a jog, ducking down a narrow cut. Quinn followed, her shoulders squared. Her jaw tightened. The salt-and-pepper hair glued to her temple, heavy with the deluge. She didn't stop. She checked her watch on the left wrist, leather worn and cracked, ignoring the time in favor of the rhythm of the chase. He stopped at the mouth of an old Tube station. The glass doors stood shattered, frames rusted out. "Stop!" Quinn shouted. Her voice cut through the drumming rain. The man turned. He smirked, holding his hands up. "You're not welcome here, Detective. Turn around." Quinn took another step. The air inside the station tasted of stagnant water and ozone. "It's already open to me." She shifted her weight. Her leather jacket gripped her neck. "I'm closing it." The man laughed. No sound came out of the dark maw behind him, only the hum of electricity. "Check the gate. Bone token required." He gestured to the turnstiles. They looked like they hadn't seen a coin in years. "Some things don't like your badge." Quinn holstered her weapon. She scanned the perimeter. A single green light buzzed above the entrance, flickering in the dark. Tomás, come in. Quinn keyed the radio again, pressing the mic between her lips. Tomás answered. His voice was staticky, barely audible over the rain. You found it. This isn't a normal job. The suspect stepped back, pressing his heel against the edge of the station platform. "Tell me why I shouldn't vanish now." Quinn stepped closer to the turnstiles. "Because I need answers." "About everything?" Tomás asked over the line. "About Morris," Quinn replied. Her voice dropped an octave. The name hung in the air like a heavy weight. The man stepped forward. He raised his hand, palm open. The light from the street spilled onto his skin, revealing pale skin and dark veins. "He's dead, isn't he!" Quinn shouted. "Don't get me wrong," Tomás warned. His voice trembled slightly. "The market moves every full moon. It shifts location. You're right beneath Camden, but the coordinates... they're wrong." Quinn looked at the turnstiles. The bone token requirement hung on the desk, a single white femur bone resting atop the mechanism. She didn't have a token. "If you enter without the bone," Tomás said, "do you really think you'll get out?" Quinn ignored the warning. She looked at the man in front of her. "Who sent you?" Quinn demanded. "Me." The man twitched. His pupils dilated, black swallowing the iris. Quinn drew her sidearm. The metal click echoed louder than the rain. "Put it away, Quinn." The man's voice wasn't his own. It distorted, deepening into a rumble. "I'm doing this for the precinct." "For the dead." The man pointed past her, into the tunnel darkness. "He's down there. Waiting." Quinn shifted her grip on the gun. The rain dripped from her nose, stinging her lower lip. She wiped it away with a gloved hand. "I know," she said. "You don't know anything. You're walking into a kill zone." Quinn stared down the tunnel. The darkness seemed to breathe. Shadows shifted independently of the wind. "You're lying." "Am I?" The man laughed. The sound vibrated in the damp concrete. Quinn tapped her radio again. Tomás, scan the readings. Is the supernatural signature active? Tomás hesitated. The line went silent for a beat. Too much static. She pulled her head forward, scanning the area. "Tomás," she pressed. "Ambient energy is spiking," he answered finally. "Quinn, listen to me. The Veil Market isn't a shop. It's a trap. If you step past that threshold..." "I have to." "What's the plan?" "End this." The man took a step toward her. "You can't stop what's inside. You can't fix the broken parts." Quinn raised the gun, aiming at his chest. "That's not for you to decide." "I can stop it," the man said. "Trade it for one name." "Names don't save people." "Names do," he countered. "Give me Morris's partner, I give you the location." Quinn didn't lower the gun. Her knuckles turned white against the holster. "You're a monster." "Monsters live where humans are afraid to walk." Quinn looked at the bone token. It rested on the desk, untouched. She moved her foot, stepping over the threshold line. "Tomás, I'm taking the step." The radio crackled violently. "You're crazy, Quinn!" Tomás yelled. "Don't go in there!" Quinn ignored him. She stepped onto the first platform. The ground hummed beneath the soles of her boots. Static electricity made the hair on her arms stand up. The man backed away, watching her feet cross the line. "You're committing suicide." "No, I'm working." The lights inside flickered. The neon green sign above the entrance buzzed. It felt heavier now, pulling on her clothes. "Show me the way," Quinn said. The man shrugged. "You see it now, you see it. You won't remember." Quinn gripped the radio one last time. "Stay on channel," Quinn ordered. "I'm going dark." She didn't wait for a response. She stepped off the platform and into the tunnel. The darkness swallowed her instantly. The hum grew louder, a vibration that rattled her teeth. The rain stopped outside, but she still felt the cold water seeping through her coat. The man's voice followed her, fading as she moved deeper. "You're mine now." Quinn pulled her flashlight from her belt. The beam cut through the gloom, revealing tiled walls stained with something dark. She looked down at her boots. They hadn't gotten wet, despite the rain outside. The man waited for her deeper down. "Come on," he whispered. Quinn walked forward. Her breathing was steady, though her heart hammered against her ribs. She checked the magazine of her gun. Full. The corridor opened up. She saw the first shop. It was filled with bottles glowing in blue and purple. People without faces walked the aisles. She kept moving. "Tomás, are you tracking me?" she asked the radio. "No," the static voice replied. "I can't hear you. You're too deep." Quinn turned a corner. The lights of the market shimmered in the distance, hundreds of stalls and booths hidden in the shadows of the tube tracks. The man stood in the center of the square, waiting. "You made the choice," he said. Quinn holstered her weapon but didn't relax. She scanned the crowd. The silence of the market pressed against her eardrums. "I made the entry," she said. "I haven't made the deal." "No," he agreed. "You haven't." She stepped closer. The smell of sulfur and old blood hit her nose. "Where is he?" "He's coming." Quinn looked down the track. A train was approaching. The sound of wheels screeching on metal grew louder. The tracks beneath her feet vibrated. She raised her flashlight. The beam hit the face of a woman standing near a stall selling maps. The woman's skin was grey and cold. She held a book. Quinn stared at the woman. "Look at them," the man said. Quinn turned her head back to the man. Her eyes narrowed. "Show me." The man gestured with a hand, pointing at the approaching train. It didn't look like a tube train. It looked like a carriage from another century. Quinn walked toward the edge of the platform. The air grew thin. "I'm ready." "Are you?" Quinn checked her watch. The second hand ticked forward. She stepped off the edge of the platform and onto the tracks. The rain returned, but inside the air, not on her face. The man smiled. "Good."
created_at"2026-02-25T22:06:09.026Z" 2/25/2026, 10:06:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he answered finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.031
92.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"gloom"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"maw"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count2
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count2
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"silence"
2"shattered"
3"weight"
4"maw"
5"scanned"
6"trembled"
7"echoed"
8"vibrated"
9"scanning"
10"flickered"
11"shimmered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"knuckles turned white"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences164
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences202
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1362
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1072
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.08
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn33
Tube1
Tomás8
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
91.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like they hadn't seen a coin in ye"
1"looked like a carriage from another centu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1362
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean13.35
std10.7
cv0.801
sampleLengths
055
18
213
332
456
518
610
79
87
915
105
1113
1218
1327
1420
153
1611
1719
1821
1910
207
2119
2225
236
2428
2527
2615
2713
285
2911
3012
3116
326
3316
3425
354
3610
3716
382
3912
4014
4112
428
433
4426
453
463
472
4818
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs207
matches
0"was approaching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences202
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1074
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.01675977653631285
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0074487895716946
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences202
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences202
mean6.74
std3.86
cv0.572
sampleLengths
08
113
215
319
43
55
67
76
84
97
1012
119
1211
135
143
1511
163
1723
1810
198
203
217
223
236
247
254
2611
275
284
296
303
313
3215
3311
3410
356
364
374
3812
393
4011
412
429
433
445
4514
467
476
484
497
42.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.25742574257425743
totalSentences202
uniqueOpeners52
22.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"Too much static."
ratio0.007
82.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences145
matches
0"She kept her gaze fixed"
1"Her radio crackled."
2"She ignored the silence and"
3"Her breath rasped in her"
4"Her jaw tightened."
5"She didn't stop."
6"She checked her watch on"
7"He stopped at the mouth"
8"Her voice cut through the"
9"He smirked, holding his hands"
10"She shifted her weight."
11"Her leather jacket gripped her"
12"He gestured to the turnstiles"
13"They looked like they hadn't"
14"She scanned the perimeter."
15"His voice was staticky, barely"
16"You found it."
17"Her voice dropped an octave."
18"He raised his hand, palm"
19"His voice trembled slightly."
ratio0.345
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount140
totalSentences145
matches
0"The water slicked the cobblestones,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through"
2"She kept her gaze fixed"
3"Her radio crackled."
4"Static hissed between the words."
5"Quinn tapped the mic on"
6"Dispatch didn't answer immediately."
7"The signal died in the"
8"She ignored the silence and"
9"Her breath rasped in her"
10"The suspect broke into a"
11"Quinn followed, her shoulders squared."
12"Her jaw tightened."
13"The salt-and-pepper hair glued to"
14"She didn't stop."
15"She checked her watch on"
16"He stopped at the mouth"
17"The glass doors stood shattered,"
18"Her voice cut through the"
19"The man turned."
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Quinn shouted (shout)"
1"Quinn shouted (shout)"
2"Tomás warned (warn)"
3"Quinn demanded (demand)"
4"The man laughed (laugh)"
5"she pressed (press)"
6"Tomás yelled (yell)"
7"Quinn ordered (order)"
8"he whispered (whisper)"
9"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.338
leniency0.677
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.308
77.8575%