Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDD2V090YPGKR1KQCRB0WT

Run Details

Duration:
50.9s
Cost:
$0.011003
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory crossed the threshold marked by the ancient oak standing stones. The bark felt cold against her fingertips, slick with a moisture that defied the dry air of Richmond Park. She stepped into the clearing and the temperature dropped ten degrees in a heartbeat. The silence here possessed weight, pressing against her eardrums until she could hear the blood rushing through her temples. Wildflowers bloomed in the mud, vibrant purple and white heads nodding in a wind she could not feel. She checked her watch. The second hand ticked backward. Rory tapped the face of the glass. The digits remained frozen on a time that did not exist. She ignored the anomaly and focused on the silver chain digging into the hollow of her throat. The Heartstone pendant hung against her sternum, heavy and warm. The deep crimson gem pulsed with a faint inner glow, matching the rhythm of a slow heartbeat. It grew hotter with every step she took toward the center of the grove. She needed to find the source of the signal. The pendant had led her here three nights in a row. "Show yourself," she said. Her voice sounded flat, absorbed instantly by the dense foliage. No answer came. The trees surrounding the clearing stood in a perfect circle, their branches knotted together like arthritic fingers. Shadows stretched long and thin across the ground, pointing away from the light of the moon. The moon hung high and still, a pale eye watching her every move. Rory moved forward. Her boots crunched on the gravel path, but the sound died before it reached the trees. She stopped and waited for the echo. Nothing. The sound vanished into the soil. She touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The skin there prickled with a sharp heat. She turned in a slow circle. The wildflowers did not sway. The air did not move. Yet the scent of rotting lilies drifted from the north, a smell that did not belong to the living blooms. "Who is there?" she asked. A branch snapped behind her. Rory spun around. Her hand went to the pocket of her jacket where she kept her knife. The darkness beyond the stones remained solid. No shape moved within the tree line. The snapping sound had come from the ground, not the branches. She stepped back toward the center of the clearing. The pendant burned against her skin now, a steady warmth that seeped through her shirt. The glow intensified, casting a red light on her boots. The shadows lengthened, stretching toward her feet. She walked until the glow illuminated the grass. The wildflowers here were different. Their petals were black. Their stems were gray. They looked like dried bones. "Stop," she whispered. The pendant pulsed harder. A vibration traveled up her neck and into her jaw. She clamped her hand over the gem to stifle the light. Her fingers closed around the silver chain. The metal felt like ice. She pulled her hand away. The glow remained. Rory scanned the perimeter. The oak stones stood silent. The wind did not touch the leaves. She heard a sound then, a wet dragging noise. It came from the edge of the black flowers. She stepped toward the noise. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She forced her breath to slow. She needed clarity. Panic would not solve this. The dragging sound stopped. Rory stood still. She held her breath. The silence returned, thick and suffocating. She counted to ten. A twig snapped. She turned her head. A shadow detached itself from the trunk of an oak tree. It did not walk. It flowed across the ground like spilled ink. It stopped three meters away. "Come out," she said. Her voice remained steady. The shadow pooled on the grass. It rose, taking the shape of a human figure. It had no face. The space where a head should be was empty, filled only with the dark space of the grove. Rory tightened her grip on the pendant. The heat spiked, burning her skin. She did not flinch. She stared at the empty face. "You are not welcome here," she said. The figure tilted its head. The sound of bones grinding filled the air. The figure raised a hand. The fingers were too long, ending in points that scraped the ground. Rory took a step back. The black flowers rustled. They turned their heads toward her. She reached for her knife. The figure lunged. Rory sidestepped. The air where she had stood rippled like water. The figure passed through the space, cold as a grave. She swung her knife at the empty air. The blade met nothing. The figure stopped and turned. The grinding sound grew louder. Rory backed up until her heel hit the edge of the black flowers. The petals brushed against her boot. They felt dry, brittle. "I am leaving," she said. The figure stepped forward. The ground beneath it turned to mud. The mud swallowed its feet. It did not sink. It walked on the surface. Rory turned to run. The oak stones had moved. They formed a wall behind her. The path was gone. She faced the figure again. The pendant burned hot enough to blister. She looked down at the crimson gem. It pulsed in time with the figure's movement. "You want the stone," she said. The figure raised its hand again. The points of its fingers lengthened. Rory gripped the chain. She pulled the pendant away from her chest. The cold air hit her skin. The figure paused. "Take it," she said. She held the pendant out. The glow illuminated the empty face. The shadow seemed to lean in. The cold radiating from it froze the moisture in the air. Frost formed on her breath. The figure reached for the stone. Rory pulled her hand back. The figure froze. The grinding sound stopped. Rory dropped the pendant. It landed in the black flowers. The gem cracked. A thin line of light leaked from the fracture. The figure shrieked. The sound tore through the silence, a high-pitched wail that shattered the stillness. The wildflowers wilted instantly, turning to dust. Rory ran. She scrambled over the stones. The wall of oak trees shifted. A gap opened in the trunk of the largest tree. She dove through the gap. The bark scraped her shoulder. She tumbled onto the grass outside the grove. She rolled to her feet. The air smelled of rain and exhaust fumes. The moon looked normal. She looked back at the stones. The gap was gone. The trees stood silent. Rory touched her shoulder. The skin was raw. She looked down at her hand. The silver chain hung loose. The Heartstone was gone. She stood still. The silence of the park pressed against her. A sound came from the trees. A wet dragging noise. Rory turned. The shadows of the trees stretched toward her. She began to walk.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"silence"
count4
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"grave"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"perfect"
4"echo"
5"warmth"
6"scanned"
7"grave"
8"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences170
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences170
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1157
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1135
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Rory17
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.751
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1157
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean20.66
std16.7
cv0.808
sampleLengths
081
19
276
320
414
549
651
736
85
95
1042
1141
1226
133
1437
158
1634
1725
184
1917
203
2132
228
2337
2423
257
2630
2715
288
2933
3010
3123
325
3325
3419
3527
366
3712
3821
394
4033
416
425
437
4422
4523
4623
4718
4817
4914
99.07% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences170
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences170
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1137
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.01759014951627089
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003518029903254178
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean6.81
std3.84
cv0.564
sampleLengths
011
119
214
319
418
54
65
77
811
917
1010
1117
1214
139
1411
154
1610
173
1817
1916
2013
213
2216
237
241
256
2610
278
286
295
305
3120
325
335
343
3514
367
377
3811
399
4015
4110
427
438
445
454
464
475
483
494
31.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.12941176470588237
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences158
matches
0"She stepped into the clearing"
1"She checked her watch."
2"She ignored the anomaly and"
3"It grew hotter with every"
4"She needed to find the"
5"Her voice sounded flat, absorbed"
6"Her boots crunched on the"
7"She stopped and waited for"
8"She touched the small crescent-shaped"
9"She turned in a slow"
10"Her hand went to the"
11"She stepped back toward the"
12"She walked until the glow"
13"Their petals were black."
14"Their stems were gray."
15"They looked like dried bones."
16"She clamped her hand over"
17"Her fingers closed around the"
18"She pulled her hand away."
19"She heard a sound then,"
ratio0.361
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount155
totalSentences158
matches
0"Rory crossed the threshold marked"
1"The bark felt cold against"
2"She stepped into the clearing"
3"The silence here possessed weight,"
4"Wildflowers bloomed in the mud,"
5"She checked her watch."
6"The second hand ticked backward."
7"Rory tapped the face of"
8"The digits remained frozen on"
9"She ignored the anomaly and"
10"The Heartstone pendant hung against"
11"The deep crimson gem pulsed"
12"It grew hotter with every"
13"She needed to find the"
14"The pendant had led her"
15"Her voice sounded flat, absorbed"
16"The trees surrounding the clearing"
17"Shadows stretched long and thin"
18"The moon hung high and"
19"Rory moved forward."
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The bark felt cold against her fingertips, slick with a moisture that defied the dry air of Richmond Park."
1"The sound tore through the silence, a high-pitched wail that shattered the stillness."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
83.3422%