Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDD2V6YH3VR63EZXAJAWAV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.015347
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the Soho cobblestones outside the green neon sign. The Raven’s Nest swallowed the street noise inside its velvet walls. Silas wiped a glass with a white cloth, his hazel eyes watching the crowd. He leaned against the mahogany bar, the slight limp in his left leg barely noticeable as he shifted his weight. A bell chimed on the door. Rory stepped in, water dripping from her coat onto the worn floorboards. She shook her umbrella and glanced toward the bar. Her eyes caught the figure standing near the corner booth. Eva turned slowly. Time had carved lines into her face that hadn’t been there five years ago. She wore a coat of charcoal wool that cost more than Rory’s rent. Her hair had turned a lighter shade, bleached by too many suns she hadn’t wanted to admit. You look older, Eva said. I look tired. Rory walked to the bar. Silas slid a towel toward her. Whiskey. Neat. Silas poured the amber liquid without a word. Rory took the glass, the warmth seeping into her palms. She stared at the ice melting. Five years, Eva said from the booth. I thought you were dead. People disappear all the time. You just stop looking for them. Silas placed a coaster under Rory’s glass. He didn’t look up. I didn’t stop looking, Eva said. I just couldn’t find you. My father said you ran away with some guy from the university. The guy I dated tried to kill me. I know. Silas said it. The barman finally looked at Eva. He nodded once. You still live here? Eva asked. Rory nodded. She ran a thumb over the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The bone felt tender. Above him. I work for Yu-Fei too. Delivery runs. Eva laughed. A dry, sharp sound. Delivery. I’m with a firm in Canary Wharf. We handle M&A. That’s good. Is it? I haven’t seen anyone I know in six months. Silas set a glass in front of Eva. He pushed it across the wood. Water? I’ll have the same. She looked at the water. You never changed, Silas. Still running a front. I run a bar. It feeds people. It feeds information, Eva said. She touched her ring finger. The metal glinted under the low light. My father knows you still operate here. Rory felt the air thin. She set the whiskey glass down. The ice clinked against the glass. He didn’t tell me. Eva leaned forward. Her elbows on the table. Her fingers were manicured, no scars. Clean hands. You left Cardiff because of him. You ran to London. I thought you were done. I wasn’t done. I survived. Survival isn’t enough. I needed something more. Rory looked at the maps on the wall behind Silas. Old territories. Black and white photos of faces she didn’t recognize. The silence stretched. What do you need? Security. Stability. I thought if I found you, I could borrow some of your luck. You don’t get luck, Eva. You get what you build. I built nothing. I just moved boxes. Silas wiped the bar. The cloth moved in a rhythm. He stepped back into the shadows. You think I have something to give you? You have the network. Rory felt her stomach tighten. She reached for the glass again. Her hand shook. She set it down before she took a sip. That’s Silas’ business. His business is mine now. He told me he owes my father a favor. Silas didn’t move. He kept polishing the tap handle. The metal squeaked. He told you? He told me a lot of things. That you were here. That you were safe. I’m not safe. Rory said. We all carry scars, Rory. Some of us just hide them better. I see the ones you wear. Eva smiled. It didn’t reach her eyes. The corner of her mouth twitched. You used to hate the rain. I liked it. It washed things off. You washed yourself. You ran from Evan, you ran from your parents. You ran to me. Now you run to him. I didn’t run to him. Eva stood up. She towered over the table. She looked down at Rory. The coat collar turned up against the draft. You’re twenty-five, Rory. You think you’re the first person who ever made that choice. I made it. I chose the money. I chose the power. You chose the survival. I chose the night. The night belongs to us now. Silas set a napkin on the table. He stepped between them. His knee gave a slight pop. He leaned on the bar. The door is locked. I don’t deal with business after hours. Eva turned. She looked at Silas. You’re the Spymaster, Silas. You can deal with business whenever you want. I can deal with your father. Not you. Why? Because I look rich? Because you look hollow. The air in the room dropped ten degrees. Rory watched the steam rise from Silas’s tea cup. She hadn’t seen him drink tea in years. He preferred it black. I’m not hollow, Eva said. You’re afraid. I’m focused. Focus doesn’t keep you warm. Eva sat back down. The leather creaked. She put her head in her hands. Her elbows pressed into the wood. I don’t want your pity, Silas. I don’t give it. I give you the bill. Rory looked at her hands. The knuckles were raw. She hadn’t noticed the cuts until now. I need to leave. Rory said. Go. Silas said. I’ll walk you out. No. Eva looked up. Her eyes were dry. You’re still the same. You always were. The same as who? The one who stayed behind. The one who stayed in the flat. The one who kept the secrets. I keep nothing. You keep the bar. Silas walked around the counter. He held a small silver signet ring on his right hand. It glinted as he touched the edge of the bar. Close the bar. Silas said. What? Now. I have to pour the water. Close the bar, Silas repeated. Eva stood up. She pushed the water away. It sloshed onto the table. She reached into her coat. Don’t. Silas said. Rory stood. Her chair scraped against the floor. Eva, leave it. I need a drink. You’ve had enough. Rory gripped the edge of the table. Her fingers curled around the wood. The scar on her wrist pulled tight. She looked at Eva. The change wasn’t in the clothes or the hair. It was in the stillness. You’re not the same person either, Rory said. Eva looked at the door. The rain tapped against the glass. The neon sign buzzed outside. I’m exactly the same. I just stopped waiting for you to show up. I showed up. You showed up too late. Silas reached for the door latch. He turned the lock with a heavy click. Eva paused. She looked at the lock. I’m not going anywhere. You are. Silas said. Why? Because the door is open. Eva stepped back. She looked at Rory. You’re not going to help me. Rory looked at her shoes. They were scuffed. I’m not helping anyone. I’m your friend. I was. Silas unlocked the door again. He opened it wide. The wind rushed in, carrying the smell of wet asphalt and diesel. Go. Eva hesitated. She adjusted her coat. She walked past Rory. The scent of perfume filled the small space. You’re going to regret this. Rory didn’t answer. She watched the door swing shut. The neon sign flickered outside. Silas locked the handle again. He didn’t look at Rory. He picked up the cloth and went back to the tap. Rory stayed standing. She watched the water in the glass on the table ripple. Her phone vibrated in her pocket. A text from Yu-Fei. She took it out. The screen lit up her face. Silas didn’t stop cleaning. Rory put the phone back in her pocket. She looked at the maps on the wall. The ink was still wet. Did you know she was here? I knew she was coming. For how long? Since before you entered the room. Rory looked at the whiskey. The ice had melted. What did she want? Security. She has money. She has leverage. Leverage is dangerous. Silas wiped the glass. He held it up to the light. I have leverage too. Eva doesn’t know that. She does. That’s why she came. Rory turned away from the bar. She walked toward the back room. The bookshelf stood in the corner. The floorboard creaked under her foot. I’m leaving. Wait. Rory stopped. Why? Because you left before. I didn’t leave. You did. You left Cardiff. You left my father. I left him. Silas put the cloth on the counter. He leaned forward. You can’t leave here. Not forever. Rory looked at him. Why? Because the door is always open. And the rain never stops. He turned back to the bar. He began to scrub a stain that wasn’t there. Rory watched the stain appear. She reached into her pocket and pulled out the keys to her flat. She dropped them on the counter. They clattered against the wood. Eva’s coat was still there. Rory reached for the door. She grabbed the handle. She turned back. Where are you going? Outside. The rain is bad. I know. Rory opened the door. The sound of the city rushed in. She stepped out into the wet pavement. She didn’t look back.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:06:09.136Z" 2/25/2026, 10:06:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1578
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1578
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"weight"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"stomach"
5"flickered"
6"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences320
matches(empty)
84.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount11
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences320
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
3"see"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences320
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1578
ratio0
matches(empty)
41.67% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"You look older, Eva said."
1"Five years, Eva said from the booth."
2"It feeds information, Eva said."
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions131
wordCount1576
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Rory33
Eva26
Yu-Fei2
Canary1
Wharf1
Silas27
Cardiff2
London1
Evan1
Spymaster1
You33
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Canary"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
globalScore0.453
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1578
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences320
matches
0"made that choice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs159
mean9.92
std9.12
cv0.919
sampleLengths
061
131
247
35
414
52
624
712
811
911
1023
118
1214
136
1427
1517
162
1711
1814
191
2017
217
2224
2317
244
2531
265
277
2824
294
3015
3110
327
3316
348
354
3623
373
3814
3912
403
4115
425
4312
446
4513
466
477
4821
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences320
matches
0"were manicured"
1"were scuffed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs352
matches
0"was coming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences320
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount567
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02821869488536155
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005291005291005291
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences320
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences320
mean4.93
std2.77
cv0.562
sampleLengths
010
111
214
320
46
512
69
710
83
914
1013
1117
125
133
145
156
161
171
188
1910
206
217
225
235
246
257
264
276
285
2912
308
312
323
336
343
354
362
372
3812
394
402
415
422
432
444
451
467
473
482
492
37.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats40
diversityRatio0.1625
totalSentences320
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences267
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount156
totalSentences267
matches
0"He leaned against the mahogany"
1"She shook her umbrella and"
2"Her eyes caught the figure"
3"She wore a coat of"
4"Her hair had turned a"
5"You look older, Eva said."
6"I look tired."
7"She stared at the ice"
8"I thought you were dead."
9"You just stop looking for"
10"He didn’t look up."
11"I didn’t stop looking, Eva"
12"I just couldn’t find you."
13"My father said you ran"
14"He nodded once."
15"You still live here?"
16"She ran a thumb over"
17"I work for Yu-Fei too."
18"I’m with a firm in"
19"We handle M&A."
ratio0.584
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount249
totalSentences267
matches
0"Rain slicked the Soho cobblestones"
1"The Raven’s Nest swallowed the"
2"Silas wiped a glass with"
3"He leaned against the mahogany"
4"A bell chimed on the"
5"Rory stepped in, water dripping"
6"She shook her umbrella and"
7"Her eyes caught the figure"
8"Eva turned slowly."
9"Time had carved lines into"
10"She wore a coat of"
11"Her hair had turned a"
12"You look older, Eva said."
13"I look tired."
14"Rory walked to the bar."
15"Silas slid a towel toward"
16"Silas poured the amber liquid"
17"Rory took the glass, the"
18"She stared at the ice"
19"I thought you were dead."
ratio0.933
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences267
matches
0"Now you run to him."
1"Because I look rich?"
2"Because you look hollow."
3"Because the door is open."
4"Because you left before."
5"Because the door is always"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She wore a coat of charcoal wool that cost more than Rory’s rent."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.8435%