Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDEGC65WK742YBQ02GXY67

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.013223
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside The Raven’s Nest hummed against the Soho pavement, casting a sickly light through the condensation on the windowpane. Inside, the air tasted of stale ale, polish, and old paper. Maps of London covered the dark wood walls, pinned up by silver tacks that had rusted over decades of damp. Rory wiped the counter with a rag that barely dampened the sticky surface. Her black hair fell straight over her eyes, obscuring the bright blue irises she usually kept guarded. She tucked a stray lock behind her ear and glanced toward the booth in the corner. Silas sat alone, a tumbler of amber liquid resting on a coaster. His grey-streaked auburn beard caught the low light, the silver signet ring on his right hand tapping a slow rhythm against the glass. The bar owner didn’t look up when the bell above the door jingled. He knew who came in and who didn’t. A man stepped through the entrance. Rainwater dripped from the collar of a charcoal trench coat onto the floorboards. He shook his head, water flying like beads off glass. He scanned the room, eyes narrowing as they swept over the dim booths and the shadowed silhouettes. He spotted Rory and the movement stopped in his chest. He walked over, his boots heavy on the floor. The man wore a watch on his left wrist. Gold. Expensive. It didn’t match his face, which looked tired. Lines creased the skin around his eyes that hadn’t been there three years ago. “Rory.” She stopped wiping the counter. Her left wrist twitched, the small crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve shifting. She didn’t smile. “Gareth.” He reached the bar. He didn’t put his hands on the surface. He kept them in his pockets. “Didn’t think you’d be here.” Rory picked up the rag and folded it. She placed it on the bar top, neat and square. “Work,” she said. “Same place. Same life.” Gareth moved closer. He smelled of damp wool and a cologne that cost more than her rent. He looked at the bar behind her, the shelves stocked with bottles of amber and green glass. “I heard you moved up. That you were doing deliveries for Yu-Fei’s place.” “Part-time.” Rory leaned back against the edge of the bar, arms crossed. The movement pressed the fabric tight against her shoulders. “Supplements the rent.” “Rent above the bar?” Rory nodded. Silas looked up from his drink. Hazel eyes met Gareth’s over the rim of the glass. The bar owner’s leg gave a slight shift, the old knee injury protesting. Silas didn’t lower the glass. He just waited. Gareth saw the look. He shifted his weight to his right foot. “Just catching up.” “With who?” “With Rory.” Rory took a breath. She could feel the silence stretching, thin and brittle. The neon sign buzzed louder outside, a rhythmic insect sound. “You look different,” Gareth said. His voice dropped an octave. “You don’t know what I look like,” Rory replied. She turned away to grab a clean glass. The ice clinked against the side. “Three years. You weren’t in Cardiff. You weren’t on the phone.” “I got busy.” “Everyone gets busy.” Rory set the glass down. She slid a bottle of gin across the wood, corked. The glass stayed on the edge. “I thought you went back to school.” Gareth looked at the bottle. He didn’t touch it. “Thought about it.” “Thought about it.” Rory leaned forward, her blue eyes sharp. “What happened to the scholarship?” Gareth looked away. He picked at a loose thread on his coat. “Life changed. Money changed hands. Things didn’t work out.” Rory watched his hands. They were steady. No tremor. Just wealth and stability. She thought of her own hands, steady only because she had to be. She kept the scar on her wrist hidden. He kept his regrets in his pockets. “Silas,” Rory called out without turning. The bar owner set his glass down. The liquid sloshed. “Rory.” Gareth looked at the older man. The authority in the room shifted instantly. Silas knew things. He knew the weight of a room. He knew when people were lying. “Does Gareth know we closed early?” Rory asked. Silas didn’t move. He just looked at the empty glass in his hand. “Depends on if he’s buying.” Gareth didn’t answer immediately. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a leather wallet. Thick. Heavy. He placed two hundred-pound notes on the counter. They lay flat, edges sharp against the wood. “Keep the change,” Gareth said. “Don’t tip the bar,” Silas said. His voice was gravel. Gareth laughed. It was a dry sound. “I don’t drink with the staff. I’m just talking to an old friend.” Rory picked up the money. She didn’t look at him. She counted it into her pocket. “Old friend,” Rory repeated. “Cardiff. Before the mess.” Rory stopped counting. She dropped the remaining notes into the till. The metal clack echoed. “The mess,” she said. Gareth leaned his elbows on the bar. He looked at her wrists. He knew about the accident. He knew about the scars before they became a secret. “Did you tell anyone about you going back to London? Before you left?” “Eva brought me.” “Eva’s gone.” Rory paused. She hadn’t told him that. “How do you know?” “Word gets around.” Silas pushed off the wall. His limp was slight, but it made him move with a deliberate cadence. He walked behind the bar. He picked up a cloth and began wiping the same spot Rory had just cleaned. “Gareth,” Silas said. “You live in Wales now?” “Living here. For the job.” “Soho isn’t good for your lungs.” Gareth looked at Silas. He straightened his tie. “It’s fine.” Rory watched the exchange. She knew the look in Gareth’s eyes. It was the look of someone who had something to prove and nothing to lose. She had spent three years learning how to make sure she had both. “I left Cardiff, Gareth. You didn’t come.” “I had a life.” “You had a choice.” Rory crossed her arms. The movement pulled the sleeve of her jumper down. Her bare skin flashed for a second. “You chose to stay in the past.” Gareth looked at her bare wrist. The scar was visible now, a pale crescent. He reached out. His fingers hovered over it. “You still have it.” Rory pulled her arm back. The motion was sharp, the fabric of the sleeve catching. “It’s mine.” “Rory,” Gareth said. “We can’t just sit here. Not like this. You need something. You can call on me. That’s what friends do.” Rory stepped out from behind the bar. She walked around to his side. She stood close enough to smell the cologne again. She didn’t look at his eyes. She looked at the gold watch. “Friends don’t wait three years to ask why a person left.” Gareth’s hand moved from his pocket. He tried to rest it on the table. He stopped halfway. “I didn’t think you wanted to hear.” “Didn’t think I wanted to hear,” Rory said. She picked up the glass of gin he hadn’t touched. She didn’t drink. She set it back down. The liquid sloshed against the ice. “You came here for dinner.” “No. Just to see you.” “See me.” Rory turned toward the mirror behind the bar. She caught her reflection. Her hair was messy. Her eyes were bright. She looked tired. She looked alive. Gareth watched her in the mirror. He saw her back. He saw the straight line of her spine. “I know things,” Gareth said. “About the job you do. The people who come in. The deliveries.” Rory turned slowly. Her face was a mask. “Silas doesn’t pay for gossip.” Silas kept wiping the bar. He didn’t stop. He didn’t look at Gareth. Gareth ignored Silas. He looked back at Rory. “Eva was in trouble,” he said. “Before she moved. She was in trouble.” Rory gripped the edge of the bar. Her knuckles turned white. “Eva’s dead.” Gareth flinched. He took a half-step back. “No,” he said. “She was in trouble. That’s all.” Rory pulled her hand away from the wood. She didn’t blink. “Why are you here?” Gareth looked at the exit. The neon sign buzzed again. The sound was louder in the silence. “I’m not here to save you.” “Good.” Rory pushed off the bar. She walked toward the stairs that led to the flat above. Her steps were firm. She didn’t look back. She reached the top step and stopped. Silas looked up from the counter. He put the cloth down. He didn’t look at Gareth. He looked at the door. Gareth didn’t follow. He stayed standing. He watched Rory disappear into the shadows of the stairwell. He looked at the empty glass. He picked it up. He drank the dregs in one go. He set the glass down. The ice clinked. Rory stood at the top of the stairs. She looked down at the bar. She looked at the gold watch. She looked at the maps on the wall. She took one step forward. Then she stopped. She listened to the hum of the neon. She listened to the bar settle around her. She didn’t go back down. She didn’t call out. Silas wiped the counter again. He looked at the glass Gareth had drunk from. He looked at the door. He didn’t move. Gareth stood there. He didn’t move. He watched the reflection of the bar. He saw his own face in the dark wood. He saw the lines around his eyes. He saw the silence. Rory closed her eyes. She breathed in. She breathed out. She listened to the rain. She listened to the silence. She didn’t open her eyes.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.269
leniency0.537
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.03
96.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1627
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1627
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"weight"
2"could feel"
3"silence"
4"rhythmic"
5"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences207
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences207
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences256
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1627
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1312
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
London1
Rory31
Gareth26
Silas13
persons
0"Nest"
1"Rory"
2"Gareth"
3"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"London"
globalScore0.319
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1627
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences256
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs101
mean16.11
std15.24
cv0.946
sampleLengths
0100
156
265
333
41
521
61
718
85
918
107
1134
1213
1324
144
152
1637
1715
182
192
2023
2110
2234
233
243
2521
267
279
283
2915
3012
319
3241
336
3411
3529
368
3718
3833
395
4010
4120
4216
434
444
4515
464
4727
4813
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences207
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs259
matches
0"were lying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences256
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1316
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.020516717325227963
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005319148936170213
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences256
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences256
mean6.36
std3.84
cv0.604
sampleLengths
023
111
220
313
417
516
612
723
813
98
106
1113
1210
1317
1410
159
169
171
181
198
2014
211
225
2313
243
251
264
278
286
295
308
3110
323
334
343
3514
3617
3713
3812
399
403
414
422
436
4410
4513
465
473
484
498
28.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats54
diversityRatio0.21875
totalSentences256
uniqueOpeners56
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences184
matches
0"Just wealth and stability."
1"Then she stopped."
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount112
totalSentences184
matches
0"Her black hair fell straight"
1"She tucked a stray lock"
2"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
3"He knew who came in"
4"He shook his head, water"
5"He scanned the room, eyes"
6"He spotted Rory and the"
7"He walked over, his boots"
8"It didn’t match his face,"
9"She stopped wiping the counter."
10"Her left wrist twitched, the"
11"She didn’t smile."
12"He reached the bar."
13"He didn’t put his hands"
14"He kept them in his"
15"She placed it on the"
16"He smelled of damp wool"
17"He looked at the bar"
18"He just waited."
19"He shifted his weight to"
ratio0.609
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount181
totalSentences184
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"Maps of London covered the"
2"Rory wiped the counter with"
3"Her black hair fell straight"
4"She tucked a stray lock"
5"Silas sat alone, a tumbler"
6"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
7"The bar owner didn’t look"
8"He knew who came in"
9"A man stepped through the"
10"Rainwater dripped from the collar"
11"He shook his head, water"
12"He scanned the room, eyes"
13"He spotted Rory and the"
14"He walked over, his boots"
15"The man wore a watch"
16"It didn’t match his face,"
17"Lines creased the skin around"
18"She stopped wiping the counter."
19"Her left wrist twitched, the"
ratio0.984
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences184
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lines creased the skin around his eyes that hadn’t been there three years ago."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory leaned, her blue eyes sharp"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.209
leniency0.418
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.03
81.8139%