Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDF59BHY53PNS3PET0NGD6

Run Details

Duration:
57.5s
Cost:
$0.012450
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the asphalt. Harlow Quinn surged through the downpour. Water streamed down her coat, heavy with the weight of the night. She tracked the suspect. He moved fast. She kept pace. Streetlights blurred into yellow streaks. Soho streets twisted into a maze of brick and shadow. She followed the scent of his fear mixed with cigarette smoke. He cut a corner. She skidded. Mud splashed her boots. Her leather watch creaked as she checked the time. Stop. He glanced back. Dark eyes in the shadow. You can't catch me, Detective. I don't need to catch you. I need to arrest you. He laughed. A short, sharp sound that drowned under the thunder. He dove into the subway entrance. The gate was up. Harlow sprinted. She reached the stairs. The metal handrail felt slick. She climbed. The air changed. The smell of rain vanished. The smell of ozone remained. A low vibration hummed in her teeth. She hit the bottom. The station was empty. Except for one figure. Tomás Herrera stood by the ticket barrier. He held a leather bag. He looked tired. Olive skin gleamed under the flickering emergency lights. Herrera. Detective. He came this way. He passed. You let him pass? He paid. With what? With a memory. Tomás shook his head. It isn't your jurisdiction. Nothing is off limits when I'm on duty. This isn't a duty. It is to me. Tomás stepped to the side. He held out a bone token. It looked like a finger. White. Bone polished smooth. Give it to me. Take it. What is this? Entry fee. I'm not buying. Not buying. He smiled. It was a tired expression. You're stealing. You're selling passage to a suspect. I'm not selling. I'm facilitating. Where is he? Gone. Harlow looked down the platform. The tracks disappeared into a wall of darkness. You knew he was coming. I knew he was running. From who? From me. From you. From everything. Tomás stepped closer. The rain on his jacket dried instantly near the barrier. Turn back. No. You don't know what's down there. I know you do. I know the cost. I have the badge. I have the bone. Tomás held it out. It was warm. Take it. Why? Because I know you. You're not a thief. You're a hunter. Hunters get eaten. I'm a cop. You're a ghost. Harlow stared at the bone. The Market hides things. So does Soho. Not like this. Tomás dropped the token into her hand. It pulsed. The air grew heavy. The rain seemed to stop falling around her. If I go down. You die. If I don't. He lives. He dies. Maybe. Harlow stood. She looked at the tunnel. Who owns this place? Silas. The bar. The Raven's Nest. That's a lead. It's a warning. Tomás stepped forward. He touched her arm. His hand was warm. Don't forget. Forget what? Who you are. I'm a detective. You're a woman. You have a name. Harlow tightened her grip on the bone. I'm Quinn. Harlow. I don't have time for this. You have a lifetime. She looked at him. Get me out. I can't. Then stay behind me. I'll be at the Nest. The bar? I'll be waiting. Harlow turned. She walked to the edge of the platform. The tracks were gone. Just a hole in the ground. She held the bone up. Open. The stone shifted. A gate materialized. The lights inside were green. Harlow. She paused. Don't be too loud. I'm not a ghost. You should be. She stepped onto the platform. The air pressure dropped. Her ears popped. Tomás stayed at the barrier. He watched her. Harlow. What? Morris. He's alive. Prove it. Come down. She looked at him. Wait here. She walked into the darkness. The gate closed behind her. She was in the market. The crowd surged. Faces in shadows. Goods on display. Alchemical vials glowing in jars. She moved through the bodies. No one stopped her. They looked right through her. She spotted the suspect. He stood by a stall selling masks. He turned. You came. I have a warrant. For the whole building. He held up a hand. A knife. I know who you are. I know who you work for. He laughed. He dropped the knife. It vanished into a shadow. You need a ticket. I have this. She held up the bone. He shook his head. That's for the dead. She stepped forward. The crowd parted. Tomás warned me. You didn't listen. I don't listen to warnings. He stepped into the light. His face changed. It wasn't the man she chased. It was something older. You brought a weapon. I brought justice. It doesn't work here. It works where I am. She held the bone. She felt the hum. Go back. I'm not going back. You won't survive the night. I know. She moved closer. The smell of rot and perfume choked the air. Morris is down here. Where is he? Ask Silas. He's at the bar. The Raven's Nest. He owns the market. She looked at the crowd. They were watching. Waiting. Tomás told me you're hiding him. I told you he's safe. Safe from me. Safe from them. She gripped the bone. It burned cold. I have a choice. Yes. Which one is it? Stay or go. Stay and live. Go and die. She looked at the path ahead. It led deeper into the underground. Tomás will be waiting. At the Nest. The bar. It closes at midnight. It's already closed. She looked at the time. The leather watch ticked. She stepped forward. The crowd pushed back. I'm not turning back. Then leave. I need the truth. Truth is a luxury. She raised her voice. I'm the police. You're dead weight. She took a step. The air shifted. Pressure built in her ears. The lights flickered. Tomás. She looked at the entrance. It was gone. Only a wall of stone remained. She stood alone. She looked at the suspect. He smiled. You're too late. I'm just getting started. She checked her pockets. Her badge was there. Her gun was there. The bone was there. The crowd closed in. She drew the gun. It didn't fire. She looked at the barrel. It was filled with sand. She looked at the suspect. He picked up a bone. He held it out. Trade it. I need that. It's for the dead. She looked at the street. She looked at the bone. She made her decision.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:07:16.786Z" 2/25/2026, 10:07:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulsed"
2"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences286
matches(empty)
97.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount8
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences286
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences286
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen12
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1082
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1082
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Quinn2
Detective2
Herrera2
Market1
Soho2
Raven2
Nest4
Silas2
Harlow10
You21
Tomás12
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Raven"
3"Silas"
4"Harlow"
5"You"
6"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Nest"
globalScore0.53
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1082
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences286
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs186
mean5.82
std6.22
cv1.07
sampleLengths
058
119
21
38
45
511
621
733
84
98
1023
111
121
134
142
154
162
172
183
198
208
214
224
2320
244
252
263
272
283
2911
306
315
323
331
3413
355
365
372
386
3913
402
411
426
434
444
454
464
477
482
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences286
matches
0"get eaten"
1"were gone"
2"was gone"
3"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs268
matches
0"was coming"
1"was running"
2"were watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences286
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1082
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.015711645101663587
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018484288354898336
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences286
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences286
mean3.78
std1.76
cv0.466
sampleLengths
04
16
212
34
43
53
65
710
811
94
102
114
129
131
143
155
165
176
185
192
209
216
224
232
244
255
262
273
285
295
307
314
324
334
347
355
363
378
381
391
404
412
424
432
442
453
464
474
488
494
38.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.25524475524475526
totalSentences286
uniqueOpeners73
45.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences221
matches
0"Then stay behind me."
1"Just a hole in the"
2"Only a wall of stone"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount130
totalSentences221
matches
0"She tracked the suspect."
1"He moved fast."
2"She kept pace."
3"She followed the scent of"
4"He cut a corner."
5"Her leather watch creaked as"
6"He glanced back."
7"You can't catch me, Detective."
8"I don't need to catch"
9"I need to arrest you."
10"He dove into the subway"
11"She reached the stairs."
12"She hit the bottom."
13"He held a leather bag."
14"He looked tired."
15"He came this way."
16"You let him pass?"
17"It isn't your jurisdiction."
18"It is to me."
19"He held out a bone"
ratio0.588
30.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount190
totalSentences221
matches
0"Harlow Quinn surged through the"
1"Water streamed down her coat,"
2"She tracked the suspect."
3"He moved fast."
4"She kept pace."
5"Streetlights blurred into yellow streaks."
6"Soho streets twisted into a"
7"She followed the scent of"
8"He cut a corner."
9"Mud splashed her boots."
10"Her leather watch creaked as"
11"He glanced back."
12"You can't catch me, Detective."
13"I don't need to catch"
14"I need to arrest you."
15"A short, sharp sound that"
16"He dove into the subway"
17"The gate was up."
18"She reached the stairs."
19"The metal handrail felt slick."
ratio0.86
67.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences221
matches
0"Because I know you."
1"If I go down."
2"If I don't."
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences4
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.4707%