Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDGTFJ4NABXMA8HZBSDCYD

Run Details

Duration:
28.4s
Cost:
$0.009404
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came three sharp raps against the heavy oak. Rory paused with a stack of takeout menus in her hand, Ptolemy the tabby weaving through her ankles. She knew the rhythm of the building. The curry house below sent up the scent of cumin and turmeric every hour. Neighbors on her floor didn’t knock like that. The delivery people tapped. The landlord rattled the handle. This was deliberate. She set the menus on the counter and walked to the door. Three deadbolts clicked into place before she turned the main lock. The chain remained off, but the security hardware felt like armor against the hallway. She didn’t look through the peephole. She recognized the silhouette pressing against the wood. The chain came off. She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood there. The hall light caught the platinum hair slicked back, sharp and precise. He wore a charcoal suit that cost more than her rent for the year. His cane tapped against the floorboards, the ivory handle gleaming. One amber eye, one black, fixed on her face. No smile. No nod. Just the weight of a gaze that had spent the last month dissecting her life. He stepped inside before she could speak. The door swung shut behind him, the click of the latch loud in the cramped space. Ptolemy hissed and bolted for the bedroom. Rory closed her hand into a fist at her side. The scar on her left wrist itched. You have a key,” she said. Lucien didn’t move from the entryway. He kept his cane planted firmly, one hand in his pocket. The air smelled of rain and expensive cologne, cutting through the spices of the curry house. The flat was filled with books. Every surface groaned under the weight of research notes. Scattered papers covered the kitchen table like snow. Lucien stepped over a stack of papers near the sofa, careful not to scuff his shoes. I don’t,” Lucien said. He reached for the doorframe, his fingers brushing the wood. The leather of his gloves was pristine. “That’s why I knocked.” Rory crossed her arms. Her blue eyes narrowed. The flat was supposed to be her safe haven, Eva’s place while she sorted out the fallout with her ex. Now it felt like a prison cell with the walls closing in. How did you find me?” She didn’t want to know how. She wanted him to leave. A network of informants in Soho knows I’m looking for you. You work at the restaurant. You go home to Brick Lane. It wasn’t hard.” Lucien glanced at the papers on the floor. “You’re busy.” I’m busy with my life,” Rory said. You left without a word.” He pushed off the frame. The movement was fluid, predatory in the way a cat moves, silent until it strikes. He stopped a few feet from her. Close enough that she could see the veins in his neck. Close enough to feel the heat radiating from him. I left because you asked me to disappear.” Rory’s voice stayed level, but her pulse hammered against her ribs. “You said if I stayed, you’d be forced to burn the bridge. That you were too deep in it.” I said we were compromised,” Lucien corrected. He stepped closer. He didn’t stop until he loomed over her, the scent of ozone and danger clinging to him. His heterochromatic eyes narrowed. “I didn’t ask you to leave, Rory. I asked you to protect yourself.” Then you didn’t trust me.” Trust is a variable in this game. And you were the risk.” Lucien tilted his head. The movement was too familiar. He used to do it when they argued in back alleys of Marseille. Before the silence took over London. Rory took a breath. The air in the flat felt thin. She didn’t back away. She didn’t give him the satisfaction. You show up three months later,” she said. “After I almost died at the docks. After Evan got away because you were busy with your little deal.” Lucien flinched. The reaction was microscopic, a flicker in the black eye. He reached into his jacket pocket. He withdrew a silver lighter, clicked it open. The flame caught the blue light in his left eye. I didn’t have a choice,” he said. Neither did I. Lucien closed the lighter. He tossed it onto the table. It spun and stopped on its side. “I came back to fix the mistake.” You didn’t make a mistake,” Rory said. She walked past him, forcing him to make room. She headed for the kitchen. The counter was cold under her fingertips. She needed an anchor. “You made a calculation.” She poured water from the kettle, though her hands shook just enough to slosh it. Lucien stood in the doorway of the kitchen. He watched her pour. “You hate it here. The curry smell. The books. The noise.” It keeps me grounded,” she said. She turned around, leaning against the counter. “Unlike you. You float.” I float until I fall,” Lucien said. “And I am tired of floating.” Rory gripped the edge of the counter. The wood groaned under her pressure. The flat was quiet except for the hum of the fridge and the distant traffic. Ptolemy wasn’t making a sound. The tension in the room coiled tight, a spring pulled to its breaking point. Why are you really here?” she asked. Lucien pushed off the doorframe. He walked to the table and ran a gloved finger along the stack of papers. He picked one up, read a line, then dropped it. Because the demons in Avaros don’t care about your history. They don’t care about your scars.” Lucien looked at her wrist. His eyes flicked to the crescent mark. “They care about leverage. I’m here to cut off their supply.” And I’m just leverage to you?” A flash of anger crossed Lucien’s face, raw and unfiltered. He set his cane down against the table, the ivory handle tapping a sharp note. He reached out and grabbed her arm. His grip was firm, warm. His thumb brushed over the pulse point on her wrist. He didn’t squeeze hard, just enough to hold her still. You are not leverage,” he said. His voice dropped an octave, the French accent thickening. “You are the reason I am still breathing. If you aren’t safe, then I am failing.” Rory pulled her arm back. He let her go, but he didn’t step back. The space between them crackled. I don’t need saving,” she said. I know.” Lucien’s gaze dropped to her mouth. The movement was slow, deliberate. “But you are dangerous to me.” Dangerous how?” The way you make me forget the rules. The way I forget the cost.” Lucien ran a hand through his hair, messing up the slicked-back style. “I came back to take you somewhere safe. Somewhere they won’t find you. You have to leave with me. Now.” Rory’s mind raced. She thought of the flat above Silas’ bar. She thought of the deadbolts. She thought of the life she had built. She looked at Lucien. The exhaustion in his posture was more visible than the scars he hid under his suit. I’m not going anywhere,” she said. Lucien stepped into her space. He raised his hand, palm open, then let it fall to his side. “You don’t have a choice. I have eyes everywhere.” Not anymore.” Rory pushed off the counter. She moved toward him. The air shifted, charged with the memory of what they hadn’t said in the last ninety days. “I have eyes too.” Lucien stopped breathing. He looked at her eyes, searching for the lie. Rory stood firm. The heat between them was a physical weight. She could feel his breath against her face. He smelled like smoke and old rain. Then show me,” Lucien whispered. Rory reached out. Her fingers brushed the lapel of his suit. She smoothed the fabric, a gesture that belonged in another life, before the world went dark. I’m here,” she said. Lucien closed his eyes. He leaned in, his forehead resting against hers. The cane lay abandoned on the table. The flat smelled of curry and tension. Don’t leave,” he said. The word broke. Rory didn’t answer. She kept her hand on his chest, feeling the steady beat of his heart. The cat moved in the bedroom, footsteps soft on the floor. I’m not going anywhere,” she said again. Lucien pulled back, looking at her. The amber eye caught the light. The black eye swallowed it. Then you will regret it,” Lucien said. Rory watched him. The silence stretched, taut as a wire. She didn’t answer. She just watched him, waiting for him to move first.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.465
leniency0.93
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"firmly"
count1
3
word"pristine"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"variable"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"tension"
count2
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"charged"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"weight"
2"firmly"
3"pristine"
4"pulse"
5"loomed"
6"variable"
7"familiar"
8"silence"
9"flicker"
10"tension"
11"flicked"
12"raced"
13"charged"
14"could feel"
15"footsteps"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"A flash of anger"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1452
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1155
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Moreau1
Lucien12
Eva1
Soho1
Brick1
Lane1
You8
Trust1
Marseille1
London1
Evan1
Rory11
Avaros1
Dangerous1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"You"
4"Evan"
5"Rory"
places
0"Eva"
1"Soho"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Marseille"
5"London"
6"Dangerous"
globalScore0.981
windowScore0.833
52.60% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like armor against the hallway"
1"felt like a prison cell with the walls"
2"smelled like smoke and old rain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1452
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean24.2
std16.89
cv0.698
sampleLengths
066
13
251
38
468
530
617
76
833
939
1025
1140
1216
1335
147
1552
1638
1744
185
1940
2021
2127
2236
237
243
2524
2636
2715
2823
2917
3013
3147
327
3330
3439
356
3657
3731
3819
396
4019
412
4246
4344
446
4527
4632
473
4835
495
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences128
matches
0"was filled"
1"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs219
matches
0"wasn’t making"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences135
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount829
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.024125452352231604
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean10.76
std9.03
cv0.839
sampleLengths
010
118
27
314
48
54
65
73
812
911
1014
116
128
134
144
154
1612
1714
1810
199
202
212
2215
237
2416
257
2610
277
286
2933
3039
314
3210
337
344
354
364
3720
3812
3916
4033
412
427
4310
4415
457
4611
479
4831
497
39.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2740740740740741
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences119
matches
0"Just the weight of a"
1"Then you didn’t trust"
2"Somewhere they won’t find you."
3"Then you will regret"
ratio0.034
41.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences119
matches
0"She knew the rhythm of"
1"She set the menus on"
2"She didn’t look through the"
3"She recognized the silhouette pressing"
4"She opened the door."
5"He wore a charcoal suit"
6"His cane tapped against the"
7"He stepped inside before she"
8"You have a"
9"He reached for the doorframe,"
10"Her blue eyes narrowed."
11"I’m busy with my"
12"You left without a"
13"He stopped a few feet"
14"I left because you asked"
15"I said we were"
16"He stepped closer."
17"He didn’t stop until he"
18"His heterochromatic eyes narrowed."
19"He used to do it"
ratio0.445
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences119
matches
0"The knock came three sharp"
1"Rory paused with a stack"
2"She knew the rhythm of"
3"The curry house below sent"
4"Neighbors on her floor didn’t"
5"The delivery people tapped."
6"The landlord rattled the handle."
7"This was deliberate."
8"She set the menus on"
9"The chain remained off, but"
10"She didn’t look through the"
11"She recognized the silhouette pressing"
12"The chain came off."
13"She opened the door."
14"Lucien Moreau stood there."
15"The hall light caught the"
16"He wore a charcoal suit"
17"His cane tapped against the"
18"He stepped inside before she"
19"The door swung shut behind"
ratio0.857
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences119
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
1"Before the silence took over"
2"Because the demons in Avaros"
3"If you aren’t safe, then"
ratio0.034
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He wore a charcoal suit that cost more than her rent for the year."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I left (leave)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.047
leniency0.093
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.047
86.8731%