Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDHKTQKEYYM1V98R2WAT1A

Run Details

Duration:
37.8s
Cost:
$0.017359
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed overhead, casting a sickly emerald glow across the wet pavement of Soho. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven’s Nest, the smell of stale tobacco and lemon polish hitting her like a physical wall. She kept her head down, black hair falling forward to hide her face from the few patrons scattered at the tables. She needed a quiet corner to make a call, somewhere the Golden Empress kitchen wouldn’t find her. The bar was usually empty this late, a sanctuary for the owner’s private thoughts. Silas stood behind the polished mahogany counter. Aurora froze, her hand tightening around the strap of her delivery bag. The man behind the bar wasn’t the sharp, suit-wearing figure she remembered from the few times her father brought her to London years ago. His grey-streaked auburn hair hung longer, framing a beard that had lost its trim edges. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he wiped a glass with a rag that had seen better days. He leaned heavily on his left leg, the limp from an old knee injury more pronounced than she recalled. He looked up. Hazel eyes locked onto hers. The rag stopped moving. Aurora didn’t move. The silence stretched, thick and heavy with the dust of old memories. She had avoided this place since moving into the flat above. She had told herself it was just business, but the truth sat in her chest like a stone. She hadn’t wanted to face him. Silas set the glass down. It clinked against the wood. I didn’t expect to see you in here. Aurora shifted her weight. Her left wrist throbbed, the small crescent scar from a childhood accident itching beneath the fabric of her sleeve. She pulled the bag tighter against her hip. I needed somewhere quiet. The bar remained dimly lit, shadows pooling in the corners where old maps of Europe hung on the walls. Black-and-white photographs of men in suits and women in coats stared down from the frames, silent witnesses to a history she hadn’t shared. You know this place is open to the public, not just a delivery drop-off point. I know. Silas moved around the counter. His boots made a dull thud on the floorboards. He stopped a few feet away, hands resting on the edge of the table. He didn’t smile. The lines around his eyes deepened, carving a map of fatigue into his face. You’ve been upstairs for three months. Aurora looked at the floor. The wood grain swirled under her boots. I didn’t want to disturb you. You lived above me and you didn’t disturb me. She met his gaze. Her bright blue eyes narrowed slightly. There was a lot going on. The ex. Evan. Aurora flinched. She had told no one about him. Not her mother in Cardiff, not her father. She had run to London to escape the noise, the shouting, the bruises she hid under long sleeves. You knew. I heard things. Silas turned back to the bar. He poured two fingers of amber liquid into a tumbler. He didn’t offer it to her. He held it, watching the liquid swirl. You look tired, Rory. Don’t call me that. Aurora. Then. She took a breath. The air smelled of old paper and whiskey. She wanted to turn around, walk out the door, and go back to the flat. She needed to make the call. She needed to know if the job was still on. I’m working. I know. Yu-Fei pays well. He turned back to her. His expression remained unreadable, a mask of quiet authority that hadn’t faded with age. Why are you really here? Aurora stepped forward. She placed her hand on the table. Her fingers brushed the wood, feeling the cool grain. I need a favor. Silas took a sip of the drink. He set the glass down with a deliberate click. I retired. I don’t do favors anymore. You were the Spymaster. That was a lifetime ago. I pour drinks now. I watch the door. I make sure the maps don’t fall off the wall. The silence returned, heavier this time. Aurora felt the weight of his gaze. It wasn’t judgment. It was an assessment. He was looking at the girl she used to be, the one who studied Pre-Law in Cardiff, the one who laughed at bad jokes and trusted too easily. He saw the delivery worker standing in front of him, the one who flinched at loud noises and kept her head down. I can’t go back to Cardiff. Silas leaned back against the bar. His shoulder hit the wood, and he winced slightly, a crack in the armor. Prague didn’t go well for me. I lost my leg. I lost my partner. I lost the suit. You kept the ring. He looked at the silver band on his right hand. He rubbed his thumb over the crest. Some things stick. Aurora looked at the photographs on the wall. One of them showed a younger Silas standing next to a woman she didn’t recognize. The woman was smiling. Silas looked the same, but the eyes were different. They held a light that was gone now. I need a place to stay for a week. Just a week. Silas pushed off the bar. He walked around the counter again. He stopped in front of her. He was tall, looming over her five-foot-six frame. He smelled of tobacco and old books. You live above me. I can’t stay there. Why? He didn’t wait for an answer. He knew. Because he might find you. Aurora didn’t speak. She looked at the scar on her wrist. The skin was pale against her darker complexion. If he finds you here, he finds me. Aurora looked up. Her voice stayed low. I don’t have anywhere else. Silas stared at her. The neon light outside flickered, casting a brief shadow across his face. He looked at the door, then back at her. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a key. It was heavy, brass, and cold. Room four. In the back. Aurora took the key. Her fingers brushed his. His skin was rough, calloused from years of work. It’s not the flat. It’s safer. She clutched the key. The metal dug into her palm. Thank you. Don’t thank me. Silas turned back to the bar. He picked up the rag and started wiping the glass again. He didn’t look at her. You stay in the shadows. You don’t come out. You don’t speak to anyone. I understand. Aurora turned toward the hallway that led to the back rooms. The floorboards creaked under her weight. She paused at the threshold. Silas. He didn’t turn. Yeah? I’m sorry. Silas stopped wiping. He held the glass in the air, suspended in the dim light. So am I. Aurora walked into the hallway. The door clicked shut behind her. Silas stood alone at the bar. He set the glass down. He looked at the empty space where she had stood. He picked up the phone behind the counter. He dialed a number. He listened to the ring. He didn’t hang up. He waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"looming"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"throbbed"
4"unreadable"
5"looming"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences168
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
2"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1201
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1201
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
London2
Europe1
Cardiff3
Rory1
Spymaster1
Pre-Law1
Silas14
Aurora15
You11
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Europe"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.876
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1201
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean15.6
std19.12
cv1.226
sampleLengths
094
17
292
312
450
510
68
731
84
942
1015
112
1245
136
1412
156
169
1710
186
193
2035
212
223
2329
244
254
262
2743
282
295
3019
315
3219
334
3416
357
364
3723
3870
396
4020
4118
424
4317
443
4544
4612
4732
484
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences168
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences168
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1210
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.030578512396694214
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006611570247933884
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean7.15
std5.31
cv0.743
sampleLengths
017
125
221
317
414
57
612
724
815
922
1019
113
125
134
143
1512
1611
1718
186
195
205
218
224
2319
248
254
2619
2723
2815
292
305
319
3214
333
3414
356
365
377
386
399
404
416
426
432
441
452
467
478
4818
492
30.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats33
diversityRatio0.19642857142857142
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners33
22.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"Just a week."
ratio0.007
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount89
totalSentences148
matches
0"She kept her head down,"
1"She needed a quiet corner"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair hung"
3"He leaned heavily on his"
4"He looked up."
5"She had avoided this place"
6"She had told herself it"
7"She hadn’t wanted to face"
8"It clinked against the wood."
9"I didn’t expect to see"
10"Her left wrist throbbed, the"
11"She pulled the bag tighter"
12"I needed somewhere quiet."
13"You know this place is"
14"His boots made a dull"
15"He stopped a few feet"
16"He didn’t smile."
17"You’ve been upstairs for three"
18"I didn’t want to disturb"
19"You lived above me and"
ratio0.601
0.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount136
totalSentences148
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
2"She kept her head down,"
3"She needed a quiet corner"
4"The bar was usually empty"
5"Silas stood behind the polished"
6"Aurora froze, her hand tightening"
7"The man behind the bar"
8"His grey-streaked auburn hair hung"
9"A silver signet ring glinted"
10"He leaned heavily on his"
11"He looked up."
12"Hazel eyes locked onto hers."
13"The rag stopped moving."
14"Aurora didn’t move."
15"The silence stretched, thick and"
16"She had avoided this place"
17"She had told herself it"
18"She hadn’t wanted to face"
19"Silas set the glass down."
ratio0.919
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences148
matches
0"Because he might find you."
1"If he finds you here,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair hung longer, framing a beard that had lost its trim edges."
1"His expression remained unreadable, a mask of quiet authority that hadn’t faded with age."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0067%