| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1634 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1634 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "palpable" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "pumping" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 248 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 248 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 248 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1634 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "If this is the spot, the door should be here, she muttered into the darkness." | | 1 | "Hello, she called out again." | | 2 | "Heartstone, she gasped." | | 3 | "Heartstone, she said." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1634 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | December | 1 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Run | 2 | | You | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Wildflowers" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.949 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like London in December, biting an" | | 1 | "as if bowing to the center of the clearing" | | 2 | "as if echoing from a depth she couldn't see" | | 3 | "sounded like voices muffled beneath water" | | 4 | "sounded like her own mother" | | 5 | "felt like it belonged to her skin now" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.612 | | wordCount | 1634 | | matches | | 0 | "Not through the air, but inside her skull" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 248 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 78 | | mean | 20.95 | | std | 15.94 | | cv | 0.761 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 41 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 42 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 248 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 314 | | matches | | 0 | "was catching" | | 1 | "was vibrating" | | 2 | "was staring" | | 3 | "was slipping" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 248 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence wasn't empty; it felt heavy, pressing against her eardrums like water pressure." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1634 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.031211750305997554 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006119951040391677 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 248 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 248 | | mean | 6.59 | | std | 4.36 | | cv | 0.661 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 38.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 28 | | diversityRatio | 0.23673469387755103 | | totalSentences | 245 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 93.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 214 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the cold seeped into" | | 1 | "Just leaves rustling on a" | | 2 | "Just the weight of the" | | 3 | "Only the heat from the" | | 4 | "Just smooth skin reflecting the" | | 5 | "Then I come to you." |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 89.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 214 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her collar up" | | 1 | "It had begun to vibrate" | | 2 | "Her left hand went to" | | 3 | "She scanned the perimeter, the" | | 4 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 5 | "It glowed faintly within her" | | 6 | "Her eyes darted toward the" | | 7 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 8 | "It pulsed once, faster this" | | 9 | "She needed to find the" | | 10 | "She tapped the glass." | | 11 | "Her voice came back distorted," | | 12 | "It looked alive, a ripple" | | 13 | "She glanced at the analog" | | 14 | "She tapped the crystal." | | 15 | "She checked the pendant again." | | 16 | "It burned against her skin." | | 17 | "She walked toward the center" | | 18 | "She stepped over a patch" | | 19 | "She didn't pull it out." |
| | ratio | 0.327 | |
| 25.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 186 | | totalSentences | 214 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak stones stood" | | 1 | "Rory stepped over the boundary" | | 2 | "The blooms shouldn't have existed." | | 3 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 4 | "A pocket of earth out" | | 5 | "She pulled her collar up" | | 6 | "The silver chain of the" | | 7 | "It had begun to vibrate" | | 8 | "Her left hand went to" | | 9 | "The scar throbbed in time" | | 10 | "She scanned the perimeter, the" | | 11 | "The silence wasn't empty; it" | | 12 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 13 | "Rory took another step forward." | | 14 | "The Wildflowers seemed to lean" | | 15 | "Heartstone warm now, she thought." | | 16 | "It glowed faintly within her" | | 17 | "The warmth was wrong." | | 18 | "The gem told her a" | | 19 | "A twig snapped somewhere in" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 70.09% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 214 | | matches | | 0 | "If this was the Hel" | | 1 | "If this is the spot," | | 2 | "If this is the way" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak stones stood in a jagged ring around the clearing, casting shadows that stretched too long across the grass." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |