Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDMZ6FRVDA785KTCW5S8MZ

Run Details

Duration:
27.7s
Cost:
$0.001772
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak stones stood in a jagged ring around the clearing, casting shadows that stretched too long across the grass. Rory stepped over the boundary marker, her boots crunching on dry leaves scattered among the wildflowers. The blooms shouldn't have existed. The air in Richmond Park felt like London in December, biting and sharp, yet the flora here burst in summer greens and violets under the pale moon. A pocket of earth out of sync with the real world. She pulled her collar up against the chill. The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant pressed cold against her sternum, the deep crimson gemstone dim but steady. It had begun to vibrate minutes before she crossed the tree line. Her left hand went to her wrist, fingers brushing the small crescent scar hidden beneath the coat sleeve. The scar throbbed in time with the stone. If this was the Hel portal, the heat from the Hel would have been palpable. Instead, the cold seeped into her bones. She scanned the perimeter, the trees bending inward as if bowing to the center of the clearing. If this is the spot, the door should be here, she muttered into the darkness. Nothing answered. The silence wasn't empty; it felt heavy, pressing against her eardrums like water pressure. Her breath fogged in the air, a gray wisp that vanished instantly. Rory took another step forward. The Wildflowers seemed to lean away from her as she moved. Heartstone warm now, she thought. It glowed faintly within her shirt. The warmth was wrong. The gem told her a portal was near, but the temperature dropped ten degrees in a single second. She stopped. A twig snapped somewhere in the undergrowth to her left. The sound cracked like a gunshot. Rory froze. Her eyes darted toward the blackness beneath the oak leaves. Nothing moved. Just leaves rustling on a wind that did not blow. She adjusted her grip on her bag strap. Delivery work had taught her patience, but this required something sharper. Something alert. The light from the pendant shifted. It pulsed once, faster this time. She needed to find the exit coordinates printed on the back of her burner phone, but the screen was dark. No signal. She tapped the glass. Nothing. Hello, she called out again. Her voice came back distorted, as if echoing from a depth she couldn't see. The wildflowers swayed. A wave of motion passed through the bloom, rippling from the center of the stone ring outward. The motion didn't match the wind. It looked alive, a ripple running through grass and petals. Rory checked her watch. Twelve minutes had passed since she entered the grove. She glanced at the analog face. The second hand hadn't ticked for a full cycle. She tapped the crystal. Time didn't move. She checked the pendant again. The crimson stone pulsed again, hotter now. It burned against her skin. Keep moving. She walked toward the center of the circle where the stones dipped low enough to frame the ground. The grass there was taller, dark and sleek. Shadows pooled between the blades. She stepped over a patch of earth that felt spongy. Mud, but the smell was wrong. Copper and old iron. Something rustled behind her. No, in front. Rory turned, hand reaching for the knife tucked into her purse. She didn't pull it out. Just the weight of the handle against her palm. I know you're watching, she said. She knew she couldn't be heard by anything invisible, but the air needed a shape to cut through. A low hum filled the clearing. It wasn't the wind. It sounded like voices muffled beneath water. A chorus of whispers that shifted from left to right around her. She spun. The shadows in the periphery seemed to lengthen. They detached themselves from the trees, standing tall and thin against the moonlight. A figure stood ten feet ahead. Tall. Limbs too long for a human silhouette. It had no face, just a smooth expanse of pale skin where features should be. Rory stepped back. Her heel caught on a root. She stumbled, catching herself before she fell. The Heartstone flared bright crimson, blindingly hot. The heat singed her skin through the fabric. Come closer, the voice came from the entity. Not through the air, but inside her skull. She backed away from the thing. The wildflowers grew taller as she retreated, vines reaching out like grasping fingers. I want the stone, the voice said. It sounded like her own mother. Rory gripped the pendant chain with both hands. Go on then. She took a step forward, forcing herself to move. The cold didn't reach her anymore. Only the heat from the gem and the throbbing in her wrist. The entity moved. It closed the distance without walking. The ground didn't change beneath it. Flowers wilted in its wake, turning to gray dust. The air grew thick. Breathing required effort. She checked her watch again. The second hand moved. Ten minutes. The time was catching up. Or maybe time had always run this fast and she was slow. Heartstone, she gasped. The stone was vibrating violently in her pocket now. Leave it. The voice whispered directly against her neck. She spun again. Empty air. The entity stood behind where she had been standing seconds ago. She was staring at its back. No face stared back either. Just smooth skin reflecting the green glow of the flowers. You're not real, she said. She forced the words out. They were flat, deliberate. Real enough to touch. Rory raised her hand. The shadow figure reached out a clawed appendage. The skin on it was translucent enough to see veins of black fluid pumping through. I came here for a door. She held her ground. The pendant burned hotter. You brought the blood. The figure tilted its head, a fluid movement that didn't respect anatomy. Rory looked down. She had forgotten the cut on her hand from the kitchen knife this morning. Fresh blood. The cut on her wrist, the scar from childhood, had opened without her knowing. She watched a bead of red well up and fall onto the soil. The scent hit her. Sweet, rotting, and metallic. The vines snapped up. The roots of the ancient oaks groaned. The sound of wood grinding on stone echoed in her chest. This is yours, the voice said. Rory pulled out her burner phone. The screen lit up. Two bars of signal. A map loaded on the display. A red dot pulsing three feet above the ground. The location didn't match. The map said she was in a park in the daytime. The phone clock said 11:00 PM. The time inside the ring said midnight. Don't touch it. The entity stepped forward again. It didn't walk. It glided over the grass without disturbing the blades. Rory swiped the screen. The map zoomed in. The red dot was directly under the entity's chest. Heartstone, she said. She gripped the pendant and pulled it out of her coat. The gem pulsed so bright she couldn't look directly at it. The light pushed back the shadows. The entity hissed, a sound like steam escaping a pipe. The light revealed a circle drawn in the dirt, the lines glowing red with the same energy as the stone. The entity stood on the opposite side. It couldn't cross. You didn't bring enough, the figure hissed. I brought me. Rory stepped off the line. Her boot crossed the boundary of the glowing circle. The entity lunged. It moved fast, impossible speed. Rory ducked. The claw passed inches above her head, tearing through the air where she had stood. She rolled, bringing up the heavy weight of her bag. She swung it into the creature's legs. Hard material struck boneless form. The bag bounced off. The creature stumbled but didn't fall. The vines snapped. One lashed out, wrapping around Rory's ankle. She yelped, falling onto the cold soil. The plant tightened immediately. It wasn't wood and fiber. It was muscle and sinew mimicking nature. Rory kicked out with her free leg. She hit nothing. The vine had no resistance. It tightened until the pressure cut off her air. Let me go. She clawed at the vine. The plant burned her fingers, the leaves sharp as knives. The Heartstone was still in her hand. Hot. She gripped it. Release them. The command came from the figure. It stood still now, watching the struggle. Rory forced the pendant against the vine. The heat fused the plant fibers instantly. Smoke rose up. The vine hissed and recoiled, dropping her leg. She scrambled back, grabbing her phone. The vibration in it signaled a message. Unknown number. Text message read: Run. No. She looked at the entity. Run or starve. The clock on her phone changed. 12:30. 12:50. 1:00. The minutes jumped. Time was slipping. She had minutes left in an hour. She stood up. The vines didn't attack again. They retreated. Bending back into the ground. Rory gripped the pendant. The stone felt like it belonged to her skin now. If this is the way out, the door must break. She stepped toward the entity. The figure didn't move. Then I come to you. She moved. The ground shook. The light of the stone blinded everything. The entity opened its mouth, and the darkness poured out of it. She kept walking into the black. The light faded. The pendant stopped glowing. Darkness swallowed the grove. The wind picked up. Cold air hit her face. She heard footsteps behind her. Not hers. Stop walking. The voice was inside her head again. I'm listening. She turned. The path was gone. The trees were gone. Just black. She heard the breathing. Not yours. Rory stopped. She listened. Someone breathing. Close.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"palpable"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count3
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"pumping"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"throbbed"
2"palpable"
3"scanned"
4"silence"
5"warmth"
6"pulsed"
7"echoing"
8"crystal"
9"weight"
10"pumping"
11"echoed"
12"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences248
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences248
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences248
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1634
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions4
matches
0"If this is the spot, the door should be here, she muttered into the darkness."
1"Hello, she called out again."
2"Heartstone, she gasped."
3"Heartstone, she said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1634
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
December1
Heartstone6
Pendant1
Hel2
Wildflowers1
Rory18
Run2
You3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Wildflowers"
3"Rory"
4"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"December"
globalScore0.949
windowScore0.833
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"felt like London in December, biting an"
1"as if bowing to the center of the clearing"
2"as if echoing from a depth she couldn't see"
3"sounded like voices muffled beneath water"
4"sounded like her own mother"
5"felt like it belonged to her skin now"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.612
wordCount1634
matches
0"Not through the air, but inside her skull"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences248
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean20.95
std15.94
cv0.761
sampleLengths
080
165
239
315
444
533
663
712
827
919
1036
1132
1220
1353
147
1525
1624
1752
1829
1931
2016
2119
2213
238
2430
2524
2635
2712
289
2937
3014
314
3227
3314
3416
3546
368
3722
386
3929
4028
4120
4217
4341
4430
457
463
4714
4842
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences248
matches
0"was gone"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs314
matches
0"was catching"
1"was vibrating"
2"was staring"
3"was slipping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences248
ratio0.004
matches
0"The silence wasn't empty; it felt heavy, pressing against her eardrums like water pressure."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1634
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, pressing against her"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.031211750305997554
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.006119951040391677
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences248
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences248
mean6.59
std4.36
cv0.661
sampleLengths
021
116
25
327
411
58
619
712
818
98
1015
117
1217
1315
142
1514
1612
175
1811
195
206
214
2218
232
2410
256
262
2710
282
2910
308
3111
322
336
346
3520
362
374
381
395
4014
413
4217
436
4410
454
469
476
489
494
38.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.23673469387755103
totalSentences245
uniqueOpeners58
93.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences214
matches
0"Instead, the cold seeped into"
1"Just leaves rustling on a"
2"Just the weight of the"
3"Only the heat from the"
4"Just smooth skin reflecting the"
5"Then I come to you."
ratio0.028
89.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount70
totalSentences214
matches
0"She pulled her collar up"
1"It had begun to vibrate"
2"Her left hand went to"
3"She scanned the perimeter, the"
4"Her breath fogged in the"
5"It glowed faintly within her"
6"Her eyes darted toward the"
7"She adjusted her grip on"
8"It pulsed once, faster this"
9"She needed to find the"
10"She tapped the glass."
11"Her voice came back distorted,"
12"It looked alive, a ripple"
13"She glanced at the analog"
14"She tapped the crystal."
15"She checked the pendant again."
16"It burned against her skin."
17"She walked toward the center"
18"She stepped over a patch"
19"She didn't pull it out."
ratio0.327
25.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount186
totalSentences214
matches
0"The ancient oak stones stood"
1"Rory stepped over the boundary"
2"The blooms shouldn't have existed."
3"The air in Richmond Park"
4"A pocket of earth out"
5"She pulled her collar up"
6"The silver chain of the"
7"It had begun to vibrate"
8"Her left hand went to"
9"The scar throbbed in time"
10"She scanned the perimeter, the"
11"The silence wasn't empty; it"
12"Her breath fogged in the"
13"Rory took another step forward."
14"The Wildflowers seemed to lean"
15"Heartstone warm now, she thought."
16"It glowed faintly within her"
17"The warmth was wrong."
18"The gem told her a"
19"A twig snapped somewhere in"
ratio0.869
70.09% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences214
matches
0"If this was the Hel"
1"If this is the spot,"
2"If this is the way"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The ancient oak stones stood in a jagged ring around the clearing, casting shadows that stretched too long across the grass."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.8676%