Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDPEYDYMVK2KNN22F5SXB0

Run Details

Duration:
56.4s
Cost:
$0.003457
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The key turned in the brass lock. A heavy scrape of metal against stone followed by the click of the deadbolt giving way. The door didn’t open; the frame seemed to split under the weight of the man standing on the other side. The hallway light caught the wet rim of his coat collar. Rory stepped back before her brain caught up to her eyes. Her knuckles went white gripping the chipped coffee mug in her right hand. A cold draft swept through the hallway of Eva’s flat, carrying the smell of wet wool and the curry house below. The aroma usually comforted her, now it sharpened the edges of the panic tightening her chest. The scent of saffron and cumin felt like a memory of a life she couldn't touch anymore. "Why is the door open?" she asked. Her voice came out sharper than intended. She had thought she was alone. She had thought she had the one week she needed to breathe. "I thought you knew better than to track me." Lucien Moreau stood on the mat. He filled the doorway, blocking out the grey London sky. He wore a charcoal suit that looked untouched by the weather. His platinum hair was slicked back, dry despite the pouring rain. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face. The cane in his right hand rested lightly against his leg. The ivory handle gleamed under the hallway lamp. "You weren't alone," Lucien replied. "Not for long." He stepped inside anyway. The floorboards groaned under his weight. Rory turned to the kitchen. She needed the sink, the cold water to wash the image of him from her mind. The mug hit the stainless steel basin with a clash that made her jump. Water splashed over her knuckles. It ran down her skin, freezing her nerves. "I asked you a question, Lucien." The water dripped from her wrist onto a stack of unpaid bills. "You aren't hiding well." He moved around the small space with the fluid grace of a predator stalking prey who had nowhere to run. The apartment smelled of old paper. Every surface was covered with books, scrolls, and research notes. It was a mess to most, but a fortress to her. He stopped inches behind her at the sink. Rory kept her face in the reflection of the window above the tap. Her eyes showed the bright blue of her mother, but the shape of her jaw was all father. "The bracelet broke a week ago." Lucien reached out. His fingers hovered near her left wrist. The scar there—a small crescent moon shape she’d hidden under a long sleeve for years—stuck out against the cool air. It throbbed under his gaze. "You're wearing that same shirt. The one you wore the day you left Marseille." "It fits the wash." Rory gripped the counter. The porcelain felt smooth and unyielding. "You said there were no more consequences. You said you cleared the slate." "I lied to protect you. It was a white lie." "White lies don't involve breaking into a deadbolt security system." "Tracking is simple when a demon’s scent lingers in the ether." He didn't move forward. He leaned the cane against the jamb. They stood in the small kitchen. The room was cramped, the air tight. Ptolemy the cat, a tabby the size of a pillow, sat on the windowsill. The cat hissed. The sound was small, a warning from the shadows. "I don't care about them," she said. She turned to him, facing the man who had once made her feel safer than her own father ever had. "I'm not a weapon. I'm a person." "That isn't your choice anymore." He moved to the small table in the corner. He picked up a cup of tea. It was cold, the dregs of yesterday. "The debt is settled. The payment was overdue. We are the collectors." Rory gripped a towel and scrubbed her hands dry. She dried them aggressively. She needed friction. "You're a fixer, not a creditor. That's what you told me. Information broker." Lucien placed the cup down. The ceramic clinked against the table. "I am both. I facilitate." "You facilitated Evan's downfall." Rory stepped closer. The anger was a shield. It kept her from looking at the scar on his knuckle. "And now he's gone. I just wanted a normal life." "I didn't kill him." Lucien looked at the floor. "But I made the air you breathe clear." "Then let me breathe." She grabbed the towel and tossed it onto the table. "I'm leaving. I'm packing up. I'm gone." "You can't leave London." "I can fly anywhere." "Through London airspace is monitored." Rory laughed, a short, hollow sound. "You sound like the government." "I'm better informed than the government." He leaned forward. The heat from his body radiated through the wool of his jacket. He smelled of ozone and expensive cologne. "Evan had a partner. Someone with deeper reach. Someone who knows your mother's name is Jennifer." The air left the room. Rory gripped the edge of the table. "My mother. You've been watching my family." "Not them." He tapped the table. "Just her name. A loose thread. You're the only one who doesn't care about what the others know." "That's not true." "It is." He reached up. His fingers brushed the hair behind her ear. The touch was light, deliberate. It sent a shiver down her spine that had nothing to do with the cold draft from the door. "I have the leverage." Rory pulled away. She walked to the living room. The floorboards creaked. Her heels clicked on the linoleum. She walked to the bookshelf. She needed distance. The books were stacked high. Paperbacks mixed with leather-bound journals. Eva's research notes lay open on the sofa, covered in red ink. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, watched the intruder with yellow eyes. The cat hissed again, a low rumble in its throat. Lucien looked at the cat. The animal growled, a deep sound that vibrated in the chest. Lucien ignored it. He followed her into the living room. He closed the distance until his shadow covered her feet. He towered over her five-foot-six frame. He was built like a blade, sharp and contained. "You think I can protect you from the things I protect for a living?" He extended his hand. Palm up. An invitation without the words. "Or are you too stubborn?" "I don't need saving." She looked up at the amber and black eyes. The black part was void-like, the amber burned. "I've survived Evan. I've survived the police. I've survived the underworld." "You survived because you made mistakes. Big ones." Lucien stepped into her space. The scent of him—old leather, ozone, and something sweet like night-blooming jasmine—filled her nostrils. "I want the truth." "The truth is I'm leaving." Lucien reached out and took her hand. His grip was warm, firm. The scar on her wrist burned under his thumb. He held her wrist steady. She felt the pulse in his thumb, the blood flowing under the skin. "You ran," he said. His voice was soft, dangerous. "When the pressure hit." "I left." "There is a difference." "The difference is that I'm not a pawn." "I know," he said, looking at the scar on her wrist. "But you are the prize." Rory struggled to pull her hand away. He held steady. She didn't pull. "You think this is a game?" she asked. "It never was." He lifted her hand to his chest. "I want you to know. I want you to know I didn't leave you because I didn't care." "Because the rules didn't allow it?" "Because your safety was paramount." He pressed her palm against the wool of his suit. Underneath, her hand could feel the strong beat of his heart. Slow. Rhythmic. "I am not good with the rules." Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. It wasn't the adrenaline she felt from being hunted. This felt like gravity. She wanted to lean into him. She wanted to push him away. The room felt smaller. Airless. The rain hammered against the glass. The kettle began to whistle on the stove. It cut through the room. "I don't trust you," she said. It came out as a whisper. "I don't trust myself either." He let go of her hand. "The perimeter tightens in ten minutes." "Why give me ten minutes?" "So I could tell you I'm not here to hurt you." He turned to the door. "If you're tracking someone, leave." Lucien paused at the threshold. The rain glistened on the hem of his coat. The neon glow from the street below flickered across his face. "I'm not." "Go." "I'll be back." "Why?" Lucien looked at her. The heterochromatic eyes caught the light from the hallway. One eye dark, one eye bright. "Because the deal isn't closed. And neither are we." He stepped out into the hallway. He didn't knock the door shut behind him. He left it ajar. The draft from the street rushed in, colder. The smell of curry rose up. The kettle kept whistling. Rory stood in the middle of the messy room, her hand still tingling where his finger had touched hers. The key turned in the lock downstairs. Her feet moved toward the door before she could stop them. She knew better than to open it. She knew better than to hope. But she reached for the handle. The brass was cold against her palm. She heard the heavy footfall on the stairs. He didn't leave. He was still in the building. "Rory," she thought. He wasn't calling her name, but she heard it. She pulled the door shut. The deadbolt clicked. The lock engaged. She leaned against the wood. The flat was silent. The cat had run away. The rain poured against the window. She pressed her hand against the wood. It vibrated. He was still there.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:11:16.051Z" 2/25/2026, 10:11:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.377
leniency0.754
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"predator"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count2
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"pawn"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"footfall"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"predator"
2"throbbed"
3"porcelain"
4"down her spine"
5"vibrated"
6"pulse"
7"pawn"
8"could feel"
9"rhythmic"
10"whisper"
11"flickered"
12"footfall"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences165
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences208
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1652
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1218
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Moreau1
London1
Rory12
Ptolemy2
Palm1
Underneath1
Lucien11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a memory of a life she couldn"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1652
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences208
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean25.81
std20.83
cv0.807
sampleLengths
054
178
241
366
48
558
618
74
886
955
1027
1110
1210
1322
1439
1534
1640
1729
1816
1933
2017
2121
224
234
245
2511
2644
2719
2824
293
3041
3158
3210
3351
3430
3532
3631
375
3839
3913
402
414
428
4316
4413
458
4628
476
4835
4955
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences165
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was cramped"
2"were stacked"
3"was built"
4"being hunted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs221
matches
0"wasn't calling"
87.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences208
ratio0.019
matches
0"The door didn’t open; the frame seemed to split under the weight of the man standing on the other side."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face."
2"The scar there—a small crescent moon shape she’d hidden under a long sleeve for years—stuck out against the cool air."
3"The scent of him—old leather, ozone, and something sweet like night-blooming jasmine—filled her nostrils."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1229
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.01952807160292921
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0024410089503661514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences208
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences208
mean7.94
std4.41
cv0.556
sampleLengths
07
116
220
311
411
513
621
716
817
97
107
116
1212
139
146
1510
1611
1711
189
1911
208
215
223
234
246
255
2616
2714
285
298
3018
314
3220
336
3410
3511
368
3713
3818
399
407
4120
425
4314
448
456
4613
4710
4810
4915
37.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.21153846153846154
totalSentences208
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount74
totalSentences153
matches
0"Her knuckles went white gripping"
1"Her voice came out sharper"
2"She had thought she was"
3"She had thought she had"
4"He filled the doorway, blocking"
5"He wore a charcoal suit"
6"His platinum hair was slicked"
7"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
8"He stepped inside anyway."
9"She needed the sink, the"
10"It ran down her skin,"
11"He moved around the small"
12"It was a mess to"
13"He stopped inches behind her"
14"Her eyes showed the bright"
15"His fingers hovered near her"
16"It throbbed under his gaze."
17"He didn't move forward"
18"He leaned the cane against"
19"They stood in the small"
ratio0.484
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount150
totalSentences153
matches
0"The key turned in the"
1"A heavy scrape of metal"
2"The door didn’t open; the"
3"The hallway light caught the"
4"Rory stepped back before her"
5"Her knuckles went white gripping"
6"A cold draft swept through"
7"The aroma usually comforted her,"
8"The scent of saffron and"
9"Her voice came out sharper"
10"She had thought she was"
11"She had thought she had"
12"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
13"He filled the doorway, blocking"
14"He wore a charcoal suit"
15"His platinum hair was slicked"
16"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
17"The cane in his right"
18"The ivory handle gleamed under"
19"He stepped inside anyway."
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The mug hit the stainless steel basin with a clash that made her jump."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.116
leniency0.232
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.029
82.7220%