Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDSMMSP32PVGX36KRDX5VB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.017809
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance hummed with a low buzz, casting a sickly light over the wet pavement of Soho. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air smelled of stale tobacco and lemon polish. Old maps covered the walls, their edges curling in the damp. Black-and-white photographs showed streets that no longer existed. Aurora Carter leaned against the mahogany counter, her left wrist resting on the wood. The small crescent-shaped scar caught the light when she shifted her hand. She watched the door. Silas Blackwood polished a glass behind the bar. His silver signet ring glinted under the dim lamps. He moved with a slight limp in his left leg, the old knee injury reminding him of Prague. He did not look up from the glass. The bell above the door jingled. A woman stepped inside. She wore a coat that looked too heavy for the season. Her hair was cut short, jagged around the ears. She scanned the room, her eyes landing on Aurora. Aurora straightened. The movement felt stiff. The woman approached the counter. She stopped two feet away. Her face held the same bone structure, but the softness had vanished. Hard lines framed her mouth. "You look the same," the woman said. Her voice sounded rough, like gravel under a boot. Aurora pushed off the counter. "You look different." "I changed my name." "Rory." "Eva." Silas placed the glass on the shelf. He watched the exchange over the rim of his spectacles. He did not interrupt. Eva ran a hand through her short hair. "I didn't think you'd be here." "I live above." "Right. The flat." Eva's gaze dropped to the scar on Aurora's wrist. "Is it still there?" Aurora pulled her hand into her pocket. "It's a scar. It doesn't go away." Silas poured two fingers of amber liquid into a tumbler. He slid it across the wood to Eva. She did not touch it. "I heard you left Cardiff," Eva said. "I did." "To London." "To London." Eva wrapped her hands around the glass without lifting it. The warmth seeped into her palms. "Evan?" Aurora's jaw tightened. "He's not here." "Did you tell him?" "No." Eva nodded slowly. She took a sip. The liquid burned her throat. "I saw him once. Last year." "Where?" "Manchester. He was working in a warehouse." Aurora looked at the maps on the wall. A route to Berlin. A route to Prague. "He shouldn't be working." "He was." Eva set the glass down. "He looked tired." "Good." "Is it?" Aurora turned her head. Her bright blue eyes locked onto Eva's. "He hurt people. He shouldn't be tired. He should be gone." Eva flinched. The movement was small, but it cracked the silence in the room. "I didn't know you felt that way." "I told you to leave." "You told me to come to London." "I told you to leave Cardiff." Eva looked at Silas. He stood still, his hazel eyes fixed on the bottle in his hand. He waited for them to finish. "I couldn't," Eva said. "I had to see him." "Why?" "Because I was scared." Aurora let out a short breath. "You're scared now." "I am." Eva's fingers tapped against the glass. "I thought if I came back, I could fix it." "Fix what?" "Us." Aurora stepped back. The floorboards creaked under her boots. "There is no us." "There was." "That was years ago." Eva reached into her coat. She pulled out a small envelope. She placed it on the counter. "I found this." Aurora looked at the envelope. It was yellowed at the corners. A stamp from Cardiff. "Open it." "I don't want to." "It's from him." Aurora's hand hovered over the paper. She did not touch it. "Burn it." "I can't." "Then leave it." Silas cleared his throat. The sound cut through the tension. He picked up the bottle. "The bar closes in ten minutes." Eva looked at the old man. "You know him?" "I know her." Silas set the bottle down. "I know the address." Eva looked back at Aurora. "I thought you forgot." "I don't forget." "You should have." Aurora picked up the envelope. She held it between two fingers. The paper felt brittle. "Why did you come here?" "I needed to see you." "Why?" "Because I'm the one who stayed." Aurora dropped the envelope onto the counter. It slid toward Silas. He caught it with his right hand. The signet ring clicked against the wood. "You stayed in Cardiff," Aurora said. "I stayed in the past." Aurora walked to the other side of the bar. She picked up a rag. She began to wipe the counter where the envelope had landed. The motion was rhythmic. "You're angry," Eva said. "I'm tired." "Of what?" "Of this." Aurora gestured to the room. "Of the maps. Of the photos. Of the people who don't leave." Silas walked around the bar. His limp was more pronounced in the quiet. He stood beside Aurora. He did not look at the envelope. "She's right," Silas said. "Time doesn't stop." Eva looked at the two of them. "You two are a team." "We are." "I don't fit." "You never did." Eva laughed. It was a dry sound. "That's fair." She reached for her coat. She buttoned it up. "I'm going back to Cardiff." "Will you stay?" "No." "Good." Eva turned to the door. She stopped with her hand on the handle. "He asked for you." Aurora froze. The rag stopped moving. "Who?" "Evan." Aurora's grip tightened on the cloth. "What did he say?" "He said he wants to talk." "Tell him no." "I already did." Eva opened the door. The cold air rushed in. It smelled of rain. She stepped out onto the pavement. The green neon light washed over her face one last time before the door swung shut. Silas picked up the envelope. He looked at the stamp. He turned it over in his hand. "Should I throw it away?" he asked. Aurora dropped the rag into the bucket. "Keep it." "Until when?" "Until I decide." Silas placed the envelope in his pocket. He walked back behind the bar. He picked up the glass he had polished earlier. He began to rub the surface again. Aurora looked at the door. The bell stopped ringing. The silence returned to the room. The maps on the wall seemed to shift in the low light. She touched the scar on her wrist. The skin was rough. "He won't stop," she said. "No," Silas replied. "He won't." Aurora turned away from the door. She walked to the back room. The bookshelf slid open with a heavy grind. She stepped through into the dark. The light from the bar cut a thin line across the floor. She did not turn on the lamp. Silas watched the gap in the shelves. He set the glass down. He picked up the bottle. He poured another drink. He did not drink it. He watched the liquid settle in the glass. The door to the back room remained open. The hum of the neon sign grew louder. It vibrated in the floorboards. Silas traced the rim of the glass with his thumb. The silver ring caught the light again. He waited for Aurora to come back. He knew she would not come back for a while. The envelope in his pocket felt heavy. He shifted his weight. The knee in his left leg throbbed. He ignored the pain. He focused on the sound of the rain outside. It tapped against the window. A steady rhythm. Aurora stood in the dark. She listened to the rain. She thought of Cardiff. She thought of the warehouse in Manchester. She thought of the envelope. She did not open it. She walked to the window. She looked down at the street. The pavement was empty. She turned back to the room. She walked to the bookshelf. She pushed it closed. The click echoed in the small space. She sat on the chair. She folded her hands in her lap. She looked at the scar. Silas walked into the back room. He stood in the doorway. He did not turn on the light. "Are you okay?" he asked. "I'm fine." "Are you?" "Yes." Silas nodded. He turned around. He walked back into the bar. He locked the door. He turned off the green neon sign. The room went dark. Only the streetlights outside cast a pale glow through the windows. Aurora stood up. She walked into the bar. She stood next to Silas. She looked at the envelope in his pocket. "Give it to me," she said. "Not yet." "Silas." "Wait." Aurora exhaled. She looked at the door. She looked at the maps. She looked at the photos. "He's coming," she said. "Who?" "Evan." "How do you know?" "I can feel it." Silas picked up the envelope. He held it out. Aurora reached for it. Her fingers brushed his. "Open it," he said. "No." "Then burn it." "I can't." "Then throw it away." Aurora took the envelope. She held it tight. She walked to the trash bin. She held it over the edge. She did not drop it. "I can't do it," she said. "Why?" "Because it's the only thing I have." Silas watched her. He did not speak. He picked up the bottle. He poured a drink. He slid it across the counter. "Drink," he said. Aurora picked up the glass. She drank. The liquid burned. She set the glass down. "I'm done," she said. "Are you?" "Yes." "Then go home." Aurora turned to the stairs. She climbed them. The wood creaked. She stopped at the top. She looked back at the bar. Silas stood alone. He watched her go. He picked up the envelope. He put it in his pocket. He turned off the lights. He locked the door. He walked to the back room. He sat on the chair. He waited. The rain stopped. The silence grew heavy. The maps on the wall stayed still. The photos did not move. The scar on Aurora's wrist remained. The scar on Silas's knee throbbed. The envelope in his pocket felt light. Aurora opened her door. She stepped into the flat. She closed the door. She locked it. She sat on the bed. She looked at the envelope. She did not open it. Silas sat in the dark. He listened to the rain. He listened to the silence. He listened to the hum of the sign. He waited for the morning. Aurora lay down. She closed her eyes. She thought of Cardiff. She thought of Evan. She thought of Eva. She thought of the envelope. Silas closed his eyes. He thought of Prague. He thought of the knee. He thought of the ring. He thought of the envelope. The night passed. The sun rose. The green neon sign flickered. The maps stayed on the wall. The photos stayed on the wall. The scar stayed on the wrist. The limp stayed in the leg. Aurora woke up. She opened the envelope. She read the letter. She folded it. She put it in her pocket. She walked downstairs. Silas was there. He was cleaning the bar. He looked up. "Did you sleep?" he asked. "No." "Did you read it?" "Yes." "What did it say?" "Nothing." "Good." Aurora walked to the door. She opened it. The sun was bright. She stepped outside. Silas watched her go. He locked the door. He turned on the lights. He picked up the glass. He polished it. The envelope was gone.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:13:00.19Z" 2/25/2026, 10:13:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences126
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.349
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1923
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1923
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"structure"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"structure"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"tension"
5"rhythmic"
6"vibrated"
7"traced"
8"weight"
9"throbbed"
10"echoed"
11"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences278
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences278
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences382
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1923
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions98
wordCount1528
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.49
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Prague3
Aurora38
Eva21
Berlin1
Silas25
Cardiff3
Manchester1
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Prague"
3"Berlin"
4"Cardiff"
5"Manchester"
globalScore0.257
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1923
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences382
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs161
mean11.94
std13.13
cv1.099
sampleLengths
084
143
239
36
427
516
68
74
81
91
1021
1114
123
1316
1414
1523
167
172
182
192
2017
216
224
231
2418
251
267
2720
2810
291
302
3122
3221
335
347
356
3623
379
381
394
409
4118
422
431
4413
452
464
4720
4815
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences278
matches
0"was yellowed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs299
matches
0"was cleaning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences382
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1531
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.012410189418680601
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.001959503592423253
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences382
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences382
mean5.03
std2.72
cv0.54
sampleLengths
022
113
211
38
414
512
64
78
89
918
108
116
124
1311
149
159
162
174
185
195
2012
215
227
239
245
253
264
271
281
297
3010
314
328
336
343
3512
364
377
387
3910
408
415
427
432
442
452
4610
476
481
493
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats102
diversityRatio0.14136125654450263
totalSentences382
uniqueOpeners54
13.12% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences254
matches
0"Only the streetlights outside cast"
ratio0.004
5.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount136
totalSentences254
matches
0"She watched the door."
1"His silver signet ring glinted"
2"He moved with a slight"
3"He did not look up"
4"She wore a coat that"
5"Her hair was cut short,"
6"She scanned the room, her"
7"She stopped two feet away."
8"Her face held the same"
9"Her voice sounded rough, like"
10"He watched the exchange over"
11"He did not interrupt."
12"He slid it across the"
13"She did not touch it."
14"She took a sip."
15"Her bright blue eyes locked"
16"He stood still, his hazel"
17"He waited for them to"
18"She pulled out a small"
19"She placed it on the"
ratio0.535
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount249
totalSentences254
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora Carter leaned against the"
2"The small crescent-shaped scar caught"
3"She watched the door."
4"Silas Blackwood polished a glass"
5"His silver signet ring glinted"
6"He moved with a slight"
7"He did not look up"
8"The bell above the door"
9"A woman stepped inside."
10"She wore a coat that"
11"Her hair was cut short,"
12"She scanned the room, her"
13"The movement felt stiff."
14"The woman approached the counter."
15"She stopped two feet away."
16"Her face held the same"
17"the woman said"
18"Her voice sounded rough, like"
19"Aurora pushed off the counter."
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences254
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences126
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.27
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.7916%