Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDT1C01N078M447W1BP7H1

Run Details

Duration:
10m 7s
Cost:
$0.266446
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the standing stones tasted different, thick and sweet like rotting fruit. Aurora stepped past the boundary of ancient oak, her boots crunching on gravel that felt too soft underfoot. She checked her watch. The digital display read 11:42 PM. She had crossed the threshold ten minutes ago. The time on the phone in her pocket remained frozen at 11:32 PM. She pulled the Heartstone Pendant from beneath her jacket. The deep crimson gem pulsed against her palm, a faint rhythm that matched the sudden thumping in her chest. Warmth radiated from the silver chain, seeping into her skin. It didn't just glow; it hummed, a low vibration that traveled up her arm. Rory stopped. The silence here wasn't empty. It pressed against her eardrums, heavy and expectant. She scanned the treeline. The wildflowers bloomed in patches of violent purple and neon yellow, defying the November chill. They shouldn't be open. They shouldn't exist. A rustle broke the quiet from her left. She turned, hand hovering over the pocket knife at her belt. Nothing moved. The branches of the surrounding oaks hung still, devoid of wind. She took a step forward, her boots sinking into moss that felt spongy, almost warm. "Hello?" Her voice dropped low, swallowed by the dense air. No answer. Just the faint, wet sound of something shifting in the undergrowth. It wasn't an animal. The rhythm was wrong, too deliberate, too slow. She walked deeper into the clearing. The pendant grew hotter, burning against her collarbone. She gripped the stone, her fingers tightening until her knuckles turned white. The scar on her left wrist began to itch, a phantom pain from a childhood accident that had long since healed. The skin there prickled, raw and sensitive. A shadow detached itself from the darkness between two trees. It stood too tall, its outline blurred by the gloom. It didn't breathe. It didn't shift weight. It just watched. Rory froze. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat that drowned out her own thoughts. She forced herself to breathe. Cool-headed. Intelligent. Find the exit. She scanned the perimeter. The standing stones formed a perfect circle, but the path she had entered from seemed to have shifted. The gap in the rocks had closed, replaced by solid, gnarled wood. She spun around. The entrance was gone. The shadow took a step forward. It didn't walk; it slid, feet not quite touching the ground. The smell of ozone and wet earth filled her nose. "Who are you?" she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt. The figure tilted its head. A sound emerged from it, not a voice, but a distortion of the rustling leaves she had heard earlier. It sounded like her own name, stretched and warped. Rory backed up, her heel catching on a root. She stumbled, catching herself on a low branch. The pendant flared, a sudden burst of crimson light that illuminated the clearing for a split second. In that flash, she saw them. Dozens of figures, standing in the dark, watching her. Their faces were blank, smooth surfaces where features should be. The light faded. The darkness rushed back in, heavier than before. She fumbled for her phone. The screen remained black, unresponsive. She tapped the power button. Nothing. The battery was full an hour ago. The sliding sound came from behind her now. Closer. Rory spun, her back to the stone she had leaned on. The air grew cold, biting through her jacket. The warmth of the pendant faded, replaced by a chill that seeped into her bones. She looked up at the canopy. The leaves were gone. The sky above was a swirl of grey mist, devoid of stars or moon. Time moved differently here. An hour could be minutes. Or days. A branch snapped to her right. She turned her head slowly. A figure stood ten feet away. It wore clothes that looked like hers, but tattered, stained with mud that hadn't been there a moment ago. The face was hers, but wrong. The eyes were hollow, dark pits that reflected nothing. Rory's breath hitched. She reached for the knife again. The metal felt cold, heavy. The figure raised a hand. It held a phone. The screen glowed blue, displaying the time. 11:32 PM. "Rory," the figure said. The voice was hers, but flat, devoid of inflection. Rory stepped back, her boots sinking deeper into the moss. The ground felt like it was breathing, rising and falling beneath her. "Get back," she said. The figure didn't move. It just watched. The pendant pulsed again, harder this time. It burned her skin. She dropped it. It hit the ground with a dull thud, the crimson light flickering out. Silence returned. The figure stood still. The other shadows in the dark shifted, closer now. Rory gripped the hilt of her knife. Her knuckles ached. She looked for a way out, but the stones blocked every angle. The mist swirled thicker, obscuring the trees. The figure took another step. Rory held her ground. She wouldn't run. Running meant the unknown. Standing meant control. The air grew heavy, pressing down on her shoulders. The scent of rotting fruit intensified. "Come here," the figure whispered. Rory tightened her grip on the knife. The blade gleamed in the faint moonlight that filtered through the mist. She stepped forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount893
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount893
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count2
4
word"chill"
count2
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"scanned"
4"chill"
5"gloom"
6"weight"
7"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences121
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords893
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount884
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
November1
Rory9
persons
0"Pendant"
1"November"
2"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.991
windowScore0.833
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"not quite touching the ground"
1"sounded like her own name, stretched and w"
2"looked like hers, but tattered, stained w"
3"felt like it was breathing, rising and"
88.02% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.12
wordCount893
matches
0"not a voice, but a distortion of the rustling leaves she had heard earlier"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean24.14
std16.28
cv0.674
sampleLengths
063
152
241
38
439
510
625
754
830
927
1041
1127
1211
1333
1459
1511
1623
179
1834
1935
206
2145
2214
2318
2413
2522
264
277
2827
2915
3029
315
3214
3315
345
3519
363
99.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"was gone"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was breathing"
95.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences121
ratio0.017
matches
0"It didn't just glow; it hummed, a low vibration that traveled up her arm."
1"It didn't walk; it slid, feet not quite touching the ground."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount885
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.023728813559322035
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0022598870056497176
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean7.38
std4.54
cv0.615
sampleLengths
014
118
24
36
48
513
69
719
810
914
102
115
128
134
1415
154
163
178
1811
192
2011
2115
2210
232
2411
254
268
276
288
2912
3021
317
3210
3310
343
354
363
372
3815
395
401
411
423
434
4418
4512
463
474
486
4911
36.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.24793388429752067
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners30
30.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Just the faint, wet sound"
ratio0.009
65.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences109
matches
0"She checked her watch."
1"She had crossed the threshold"
2"She pulled the Heartstone Pendant"
3"It didn't just glow; it"
4"It pressed against her eardrums,"
5"She scanned the treeline."
6"They shouldn't be open."
7"They shouldn't exist."
8"She turned, hand hovering over"
9"She took a step forward,"
10"Her voice dropped low, swallowed"
11"It wasn't an animal."
12"She walked deeper into the"
13"She gripped the stone, her"
14"It stood too tall, its"
15"It didn't breathe."
16"It didn't shift weight."
17"It just watched."
18"Her heart hammered against her"
19"She forced herself to breathe."
ratio0.385
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences109
matches
0"The air inside the standing"
1"Aurora stepped past the boundary"
2"She checked her watch."
3"The digital display read 11:42"
4"She had crossed the threshold"
5"The time on the phone"
6"She pulled the Heartstone Pendant"
7"The deep crimson gem pulsed"
8"Warmth radiated from the silver"
9"It didn't just glow; it"
10"The silence here wasn't empty."
11"It pressed against her eardrums,"
12"She scanned the treeline."
13"The wildflowers bloomed in patches"
14"They shouldn't be open."
15"They shouldn't exist."
16"A rustle broke the quiet"
17"She turned, hand hovering over"
18"The branches of the surrounding"
19"She took a step forward,"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora stepped past the boundary of ancient oak, her boots crunching on gravel that felt too soft underfoot."
1"The deep crimson gem pulsed against her palm, a faint rhythm that matched the sudden thumping in her chest."
2"The scar on her left wrist began to itch, a phantom pain from a childhood accident that had long since healed."
3"Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat that drowned out her own thoughts."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"the figure whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
73.4267%