| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1237 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1237 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "searing" | | 5 | "churned" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "resonated" | | 10 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.40% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1237 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1203 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | November | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.877 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 96.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if flinching" | | 1 | "brambles that seemed to close behind her immediately" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.808 | | wordCount | 1237 | | matches | | 0 | "not the London sky but a bruised violet void" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 28.11 | | std | 17.74 | | cv | 0.631 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 68 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 57 | | 37 | 51 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 4 |
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| 99.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 223 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't carry on the wind; it originated within the shell of her own hearing, a wet sound that bubbled through her inner ear." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1206 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.026533996683250415 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005804311774461028 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 9.82 | | std | 5.06 | | cv | 0.516 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 38.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.23015873015873015 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 87.80% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, one foot hovering" | | 1 | "She had checked the watch" | | 2 | "She turned slowly, shoulders squared." | | 3 | "She crouched low, scanning the" | | 4 | "They were real enough, but" | | 5 | "Her voice cracked, thin and" | | 6 | "It moved her scarf across" | | 7 | "She whipped her head around." | | 8 | "She cupped the stone in" | | 9 | "Her boots made no sound." | | 10 | "She held her breath until" | | 11 | "It wasn't an animal." | | 12 | "It didn't carry on the" | | 13 | "Her hand collided with empty" | | 14 | "She wasn't alone anymore." | | 15 | "It wore nothing, yet it" | | 16 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 17 | "She gripped the Heartstone until" | | 18 | "It had no eyes, but" | | 19 | "It resonated inside her chest" |
| | ratio | 0.331 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 114 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of wet" | | 1 | "She paused, one foot hovering" | | 2 | "Rory reached into her coat" | | 3 | "Warmth radiated through the leather" | | 4 | "The crimson gem settled against" | | 5 | "She had checked the watch" | | 6 | "The hands spun counter-clockwise before" | | 7 | "Silence hung thick, pressing against" | | 8 | "A twig snapped." | | 9 | "The sound had come from" | | 10 | "She turned slowly, shoulders squared." | | 11 | "Branches swayed without a breeze." | | 12 | "Shadows detached themselves from the" | | 13 | "She crouched low, scanning the" | | 14 | "They were real enough, but" | | 15 | "Her voice cracked, thin and" | | 16 | "The wind picked up then," | | 17 | "It moved her scarf across" | | 18 | "Rory pulled it down with" | | 19 | "The stones stood silent sentries," |
| | ratio | 0.966 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.20% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Warmth radiated through the leather gloves, a dry heat that prickled her fingertips against the cold night air." | | 1 | "The stones stood silent sentries, rough-hewn granite that hummed with a low vibration she felt in her teeth." | | 2 | "It didn't carry on the wind; it originated within the shell of her own hearing, a wet sound that bubbled through her inner ear." | | 3 | "It wore nothing, yet it possessed a weight that warped the air around it." | | 4 | "The wildflowers turned toward her, the petals closing tight as if flinching." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "she gasped (gasp)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |