Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDT1S837ZQPE8ERC6E73EP

Run Details

Duration:
23.4s
Cost:
$0.001474
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of wet ash and ozone the moment Aurora crossed the boundary rope. She paused, one foot hovering over the moss that looked too green to grow in November. Above, the canopy of the oak trees thinned, revealing not the London sky but a bruised violet void that pulsed like a bruised iris. Rory reached into her coat pocket and touched the Heartstone Pendant. Warmth radiated through the leather gloves, a dry heat that prickled her fingertips against the cold night air. The crimson gem settled against her sternum, pulsing in time with a rhythm that wasn't her own. One hour inside could be days outside. She had checked the watch three times. The hands spun counter-clockwise before jerking forward, then stuttered entirely. Silence hung thick, pressing against her eardrums. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound had come from the tree line to her left, but the wind blew from the right. She turned slowly, shoulders squared. Branches swayed without a breeze. Shadows detached themselves from the bark and slid across the ground, lengthening and shrinking independently of the moonlight. She crouched low, scanning the wildflowers blooming in the grass. They were real enough, but they opened and closed in rapid succession, unfurling petals like blinking eyes. "Hello?" Her voice cracked, thin and brittle in the vacuum. "If someone’s here, I’m not the threat." The wind picked up then, carrying the scent of old parchment and rotting fruit. It moved her scarf across her face. Rory pulled it down with a grimace, her bright blue eyes sweeping the perimeter. The stones stood silent sentries, rough-hewn granite that hummed with a low vibration she felt in her teeth. A movement caught the corner of her left eye. She whipped her head around. Nothing but the standing stones. Yet the sensation lingered, the distinct physical pressure of a gaze boring into her cervical spine. The Heartstone flared, the deep crimson glowing bright enough to cast sharp shadows under her own nose. She cupped the stone in her palm, the heat intense now, searing through her gloves. The ground beneath her boots felt spongy. Roots churned just under the sod. Rory took a step back, then another. Her boots made no sound. Neither did her breath. From the darkness behind an oak trunk, something watched. Rory saw it as a distortion in the air, a heat haze rippling against the night. She held her breath until her lungs burned. The distortion shifted. It wasn't an animal. The outline lacked the quadrupedal symmetry of a fox or dog. "Show yourself." A whisper drifted past her ear. It didn't carry on the wind; it originated within the shell of her own hearing, a wet sound that bubbled through her inner ear. Rory spun in a tight circle, fist raised. Her hand collided with empty space. The cold from the void bit into her exposed knuckles. The flowers stopped moving. The entire grove fell still, a tableau captured in amber. Every bloom froze mid-bloom. The pulsing in the stone stopped. The vibration in her teeth vanished. Silence rushed in, heavy and absolute. She wasn't alone anymore. The certainty of it settled in her stomach like a swallowed stone. A shape stepped forward from the center of the clearing. It wore nothing, yet it possessed a weight that warped the air around it. The ground darkened where it stepped. Rory backed up until her legs hit the barrier ropes. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage. She gripped the Heartstone until the chain bit into her skin. The gem was cold now. The entity tilted its head. The face, if one existed, remained smooth, featureless skin stretched tight over bone. It had no eyes, but it saw her. The skin rippled like water disturbed by a stone. "You are late," the thing said. The voice wasn't a whisper. It resonated inside her chest cavity. Rory scrambled back, her heel catching on a root that wasn't there a second ago. She hit the ground hard, gravel digging into her palms. The entity did not move closer. It simply grew larger, the darkness coalescing around it until she could no longer distinguish where it ended and the forest began. "Where is the exit?" she demanded. Her voice sounded too loud in the sudden quiet. "There is no exit," the voice replied, vibrating the air in her throat. "Only the entrance. You walked in." The Heartstone burned suddenly, the cold flipping back to scorching heat. The gem tore the air with a sound like a bow string snapping. Shadows stretched out from the entity, wrapping around Rory’s ankles, thick and heavy as smoke. She clawed at the ground, dragging herself backward, but the shadows held fast, constricting her movement. Rory kicked, her boots slamming against the damp earth. The wildflowers turned toward her, the petals closing tight as if flinching. "Please," she gasped. The word felt foreign on her tongue. The entity’s featureless face tilted again. The skin rippled faster, revealing a faint outline of teeth where the mouth should be. "Payment comes due," it said. Rory squeezed her eyes shut. The pressure on her ankles tightened. The smell of rotting fruit grew stronger, overwhelming the scent of ozone. She tried to pull, to run, but the shadows had become a solid wall of weight. She opened her eyes to look at the Heartstone. It had turned black. The crimson gem was gone, consumed by the dark stone that now pulsed in her grip. The shadows crept up her arms. A low sound emanated from the ground, rising through the soles of her boots. It was a voice, layered over itself, speaking in tongues she barely recognized. The ground beneath her began to crack, fissures opening up to swallow the wildflowers and the standing stones. Rory tried to scream, but the air in the grove solidified, thick and resistant. The entity leaned forward. The darkness swallowed the light from the moon above. "We know her," the entity said, not to her. The shadows released her ankles. Rory scrambled, her legs finding purchase on the dirt. She ran. She didn't look back. The grass whipped at her legs, the petals bruising her skin as the plants turned into grasping hands. She heard the sound of stone grinding on stone behind her, the standing stones moving to block the path. She burst through a thicket of brambles that seemed to close behind her immediately. The violet void above flickered, revealing the grey London sky for a single second before snapping back to the bruised purple. She fell out of the clearing and onto the hard asphalt of Richmond Park’s perimeter road. Rory gasped, sucking in the cold, clean air of the real world. She rolled onto her stomach, vomiting up nothing but bile. Her hand was still in her coat pocket, clutching the chain. She pulled the pendant out. It was a dull grey rock. The crimson stone was gone. Her breath hitched. She heard the stones humming behind her, even though they were miles away. The vibration returned to her teeth. The sound of the city faded, replaced by the hum of the Grove. A twig snapped on the other side of the road. Rory sat up, staring at the black tree line across the street. The shadow detached itself from the oak trunk there. It walked toward her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"searing"
count1
5
word"churned"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"stomach"
count2
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"resonated"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"scanning"
4"searing"
5"churned"
6"whisper"
7"stomach"
8"weight"
9"resonated"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
96.40% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1237
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1203
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
November1
London2
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Rory15
Richmond1
Park1
Grove1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
3"Grove"
places
0"November"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.877
windowScore1
96.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if flinching"
1"brambles that seemed to close behind her immediately"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.808
wordCount1237
matches
0"not the London sky but a bruised violet void"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean28.11
std17.74
cv0.631
sampleLengths
055
146
231
33
448
527
617
753
89
958
1029
119
1242
132
1430
1524
1652
1730
1839
1935
2017
2125
2228
2315
2419
2555
2621
2710
2821
295
3068
316
3245
3314
3413
359
3657
3751
3833
3916
4035
4110
4221
434
99.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs223
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences126
ratio0.008
matches
0"It didn't carry on the wind; it originated within the shell of her own hearing, a wet sound that bubbled through her inner ear."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1206
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, pressing against her"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.026533996683250415
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005804311774461028
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean9.82
std5.06
cv0.516
sampleLengths
015
116
224
311
418
517
67
77
810
97
103
112
1218
135
145
1518
1610
1717
1810
197
2014
217
2214
2318
249
255
265
2716
2817
2915
307
316
327
335
344
359
3616
378
383
394
4011
412
426
4324
448
456
4610
474
4810
494
38.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.23015873015873015
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences118
matches
0"She paused, one foot hovering"
1"She had checked the watch"
2"She turned slowly, shoulders squared."
3"She crouched low, scanning the"
4"They were real enough, but"
5"Her voice cracked, thin and"
6"It moved her scarf across"
7"She whipped her head around."
8"She cupped the stone in"
9"Her boots made no sound."
10"She held her breath until"
11"It wasn't an animal."
12"It didn't carry on the"
13"Her hand collided with empty"
14"She wasn't alone anymore."
15"It wore nothing, yet it"
16"Her heart hammered against her"
17"She gripped the Heartstone until"
18"It had no eyes, but"
19"It resonated inside her chest"
ratio0.331
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences118
matches
0"The air tasted of wet"
1"She paused, one foot hovering"
2"Rory reached into her coat"
3"Warmth radiated through the leather"
4"The crimson gem settled against"
5"She had checked the watch"
6"The hands spun counter-clockwise before"
7"Silence hung thick, pressing against"
8"A twig snapped."
9"The sound had come from"
10"She turned slowly, shoulders squared."
11"Branches swayed without a breeze."
12"Shadows detached themselves from the"
13"She crouched low, scanning the"
14"They were real enough, but"
15"Her voice cracked, thin and"
16"The wind picked up then,"
17"It moved her scarf across"
18"Rory pulled it down with"
19"The stones stood silent sentries,"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.20% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Warmth radiated through the leather gloves, a dry heat that prickled her fingertips against the cold night air."
1"The stones stood silent sentries, rough-hewn granite that hummed with a low vibration she felt in her teeth."
2"It didn't carry on the wind; it originated within the shell of her own hearing, a wet sound that bubbled through her inner ear."
3"It wore nothing, yet it possessed a weight that warped the air around it."
4"The wildflowers turned toward her, the petals closing tight as if flinching."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"she gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
80.2395%