Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDTH95H4TC48RY09SRFN81

Run Details

Duration:
56.5s
Cost:
$0.010717
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the abandoned Camden Town station tasted of wet concrete and old copper. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a pile of shattered tile, her boots finding purchase on the slick floor without a slip. She clicked her flashlight on, the beam cutting through the gloom to reveal graffiti scrawled in languages that predated the Underground. The Veil Market had moved here again. She knew the pattern. Full moon. New location. DS Miller stood near the platform edge, arms crossed over his chest. He wore a high-visibility jacket that looked too bright for the gloom. A body lay sprawled on the tracks, wrapped in a tarp that had been hastily pulled back. "Junkie overdose," Miller said. He didn't look up from his notebook. "Found by a squatter. Standard procedure." Quinn walked past him. Her worn leather watch clicked against her wrist as she raised her arm to check the time. The light from her torch swept over the corpse. A young man, mid-twenties. Pale skin. No blood. That stopped her. She knelt, the damp seeping through her trousers. Her eyes scanned the wound sites. Three punctures on the neck. Clean. Precise. "Where's the blood?" Quinn asked. Miller shrugged. "Dried up. Or washed away by the rain leaking through the roof." "Rain doesn't wash away blood without leaving a stain," Quinn said. She shone the light on the concrete. The floor was dry around the body. Miller sighed and tapped his pen against the clipboard. "It's a dead end, Quinn. We got a body, we bag it, we close the file. Don't make it weird." Quinn ignored him. She moved closer to the victim's hand. A small object clutched in the stiffening fingers. She reached out, her movements sharp, military precision. She pried the fingers open. The object fell into her palm. A brass compass. The casing held a patina of verdigris, green corrosion eating into the metal. The face bore etched sigils, spirals and lines that hurt the eyes if she stared too long. Miller leaned in. "Looks like junk. Souvenir from a tourist shop." "Look at the needle," Quinn said. Miller squinted. "It's stuck." Quinn tilted the compass. The needle didn't wobble. It spun. Slowly. Deliberately. It ignored north. It ignored magnetic pull. It pointed directly at the tunnel wall, where shadows pooled thicker than the rest. "This isn't brass," Quinn said. She rubbed her thumb over the cold metal. It hummed against her skin. A low vibration that traveled up her arm. Miller stepped back. "Put it in the evidence bag. Let the lab sort it out." "Lab won't know what to do with this," Quinn said. She stood, keeping the compass in her hand. The needle held steady on the shadow. "Quinn," Miller said. His voice dropped an octave. "You're chasing ghosts again. Morris didn't come back. You know that." Quinn's jaw tightened. The mention of her lost partner sat heavy in her gut. She had spent eighteen years hunting the truth, and every lead led to the Veil. She looked at the compass, then at the wall. The shadows seemed to ripple. "This isn't a ghost," Quinn said. "It's a tool." "Tool for what?" Miller asked. He uncrossed his arms, shifting his weight. "To tell time?" "To find a rift." Miller laughed. A short, dry sound. "You're done for the night. Go home." Quinn walked toward the wall. The air grew colder with every step. Her breath plumed in the flashlight beam. She stopped three feet from the concrete. The needle on the compass vibrated harder. "See that?" Quinn pointed the device at the dark. Miller followed her gaze. "I see a wall." "I see a door," Quinn said. She reached out and touched the brickwork. It felt warm. Not the warmth of sun, but the heat of something living. She pulled her hand back. A faint smell of ozone filled her nose, mixing with the damp earth. "Who called this in?" Quinn asked. "Squatter," Miller said. "Guy named Evans. Said he saw the body." "Did Evans mention anything else?" Miller hesitated. "He said the dead guy was talking to the shadows." Quinn turned the compass over in her hand. The sigils on the face glowed faintly in the dark. She matched the pattern to the ones she had seen in the files from the British Museum archives. The same markings Eva Kowalski had sketched in her notes. "Evans is in custody?" Quinn asked. "Yeah. Processing." "Get him out," Quinn said. "He's not a squatter. He's a witness." Miller shook his head. "I can't release a witness without a statement." "Then write it down," Quinn said. "Witness claims the deceased was communicating with the environment." "That's not a statement," Miller said. "That's a fantasy." Quinn stepped back from the wall. The needle on the compass swung wildly, then settled on a new direction. It pointed at Miller. Miller froze. "What is that thing doing?" "It points to supernatural energy," Quinn said. She lowered the compass. "It points to the source." Miller looked at the compass, then at Quinn. "You think I'm the source?" "No," Quinn said. "I think you're standing on the threshold." Miller backed away. "I'm calling for backup." "Backup won't help," Quinn said. She looked at the body. The victim's eyes were open. They reflected the flashlight beam, but the pupils were gone. Just white. "Bag the body," Quinn said. "But don't touch the compass." Miller pulled out his radio. "Dispatch, I need a containment team at Camden." "Containment?" Quinn asked. "Standard protocol for hazardous materials." Quinn looked at the wall again. The shadows were moving now. They stretched toward the body. "Miller," Quinn said. "Look at the floor." Miller looked down. A thin line of black dust formed a circle around the victim. It pulsed. "I told you," Quinn said. "It's not an overdose." Miller raised his radio. "Dispatch, change that. I need the occult unit." "There is no occult unit," Quinn said. "Then I'm calling the mayor." Quinn stepped between Miller and the radio. "Don't." Miller's hand hovered over the button. "Why?" "Because if they know, they'll burn this place down," Quinn said. "And we won't find the rest of them." "Rest of who?" "The clique," Quinn said. "The ones who run the Market." Miller lowered the radio. "You're out of your depth, Quinn." "Morris was," Quinn said. "He died because he didn't look at the compass." Miller stared at her. "You're saying this thing killed him?" "I'm saying this thing showed him the door," Quinn said. She pocketed the compass. The vibration stopped. "Where are you going?" Miller asked. "Back to the surface," Quinn said. "I need to find Eva." "Eva?" "She knows the sigils," Quinn said. "She knows how to close the door." Miller looked at the wall. The shadows had receded. The station felt empty again. "You can't leave," Miller said. "Chain of command." "Command doesn't exist down here," Quinn said. She turned on her heel. Her boots clicked against the tile. "Quinn!" Miller shouted. She stopped. She didn't turn around. "Leave the radio," she said. "I'll file the report." "You can't file a report on a ghost story." "Then I'll write fiction," Quinn said. She walked toward the stairs leading up. The light from her torch flickered. The compass in her pocket grew warm. Miller stood alone in the station. He looked at the body. The black dust on the floor began to swirl. Quinn reached the top of the stairs. She paused. The air above smelled of rain and exhaust. Normal air. She looked down at the dark tunnel. The needle in her pocket spun once more. She pulled the compass out. The needle pointed at the exit. "Go," a voice whispered from the dark. Quinn pocketed the compass. She stepped out into the night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags38
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.905
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1299
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1299
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count2
2
word"standard"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"gloom"
2"standard"
3"scanned"
4"etched"
5"magnetic"
6"weight"
7"vibrated"
8"warmth"
9"pulsed"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences164
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences210
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1299
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions39
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions83
wordCount886
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity4.63
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity11
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Harlow1
Quinn41
Underground1
Veil2
Market1
Miller31
British1
Museum1
Eva1
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Miller"
4"Museum"
5"Eva"
6"Kowalski"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Veil"
3"British"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.77
wordCount1299
matches
0"Not the warmth of sun, but the heat of something living"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean15.46
std12.99
cv0.84
sampleLengths
072
141
217
362
45
514
625
729
837
93
1030
1111
126
134
1433
1526
1615
1725
1819
1943
209
2115
224
2313
2433
259
268
276
2839
296
3011
315
3212
3346
346
352
3612
3712
3815
399
4023
417
4216
4313
4410
457
4627
4710
4813
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs176
matches
0"were moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences210
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount888
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.024774774774774775
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006756756756756757
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences210
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences210
mean6.19
std3.7
cv0.597
sampleLengths
015
121
221
37
44
52
62
712
812
917
104
117
126
134
1417
159
164
172
182
193
208
216
225
231
241
255
262
2712
2811
297
307
319
3220
333
347
358
368
375
386
393
4013
4117
423
438
446
452
462
474
484
492
48.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.32857142857142857
totalSentences210
uniqueOpeners69
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences109
matches
0"She clicked her flashlight on,"
1"She knew the pattern."
2"He wore a high-visibility jacket"
3"He didn't look up from"
4"Her worn leather watch clicked"
5"She knelt, the damp seeping"
6"Her eyes scanned the wound"
7"She shone the light on"
8"She moved closer to the"
9"She reached out, her movements"
10"She pried the fingers open."
11"It ignored north."
12"It ignored magnetic pull."
13"It pointed directly at the"
14"She rubbed her thumb over"
15"It hummed against her skin."
16"She stood, keeping the compass"
17"His voice dropped an octave."
18"She had spent eighteen years"
19"She looked at the compass,"
ratio0.376
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences109
matches
0"The air inside the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"She clicked her flashlight on,"
3"The Veil Market had moved"
4"She knew the pattern."
5"DS Miller stood near the"
6"He wore a high-visibility jacket"
7"A body lay sprawled on"
8"He didn't look up from"
9"Quinn walked past him."
10"Her worn leather watch clicked"
11"The light from her torch"
12"A young man, mid-twenties."
13"That stopped her."
14"She knelt, the damp seeping"
15"Her eyes scanned the wound"
16"She shone the light on"
17"The floor was dry around"
18"Miller sighed and tapped his"
19"Quinn ignored him."
ratio0.982
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He wore a high-visibility jacket that looked too bright for the gloom."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags38
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags37
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Miller shouted (shout)"
1"a voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.881
rawRatio0.054
effectiveRatio0.048
81.3459%