| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 79.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1672 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1672 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "predator" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "magnetic" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "variable" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "charged" | | 13 | "echo" | | 14 | "tracing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 161 | | matches | | |
| 89.62% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 161 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 161 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1672 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "You should have knocked harder, Rory said." | | 1 | "I did, Lucien replied." | | 2 | "We agreed on a lot of things, he said, his gaze dropping to her wrist for a fraction of a second before snapping back to…" | | 3 | "I am not your liability, Rory said, her voice hardening." | | 4 | "You never were, Lucien said softly." | | 5 | "Eva is not here, she said." | | 6 | "I found this, he said." | | 7 | "A client who thinks you are loose end, Lucien said." | | 8 | "To keep you alive, Lucien said simply." | | 9 | "You cannot protect me, Rory said." | | 10 | "I am not trying to protect you, Lucien corrected." | | 11 | "I am not here to control you, Lucien said." | | 12 | "I have a safe house, he said." | | 13 | "You have a target on your back, Lucien said." | | 14 | "Give me the paper, Lucien said." | | 15 | "I will be watching, he said." | | 16 | "Get out, she said quietly." | | 17 | "If you need me, he said." |
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| 87.20% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1672 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Silas | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 15 | | Rory | 21 | | Luc | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | You | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Luc" | | 5 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.872 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 64.53% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "rumble that seemed to vibrate in the floorboards" | | 1 | "felt like a brand" | | 2 | "whisper that seemed to vibrate in the space between them" | | 3 | "looked like someone who had been waiting" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1672 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 28.83 | | std | 25.76 | | cv | 0.894 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 107 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 91 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 68 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 79 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 52 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 66 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 50 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 323 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was lying" | | 2 | "was constantly trying" | | 3 | "was trying" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 161 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1676 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.028042959427207637 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011933174224343675 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 161 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 161 | | mean | 10.39 | | std | 6.96 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 36.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.2484472049689441 | | totalSentences | 161 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 21.79% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "Then why are you here?" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "She had lived above Silas" | | 1 | "It was safer here, or" | | 2 | "She moved to the door," | | 3 | "She didn’t look through the" | | 4 | "She knew who it was." | | 5 | "She could feel the shift" | | 6 | "He stood in a tailored" | | 7 | "His eyes, one amber and" | | 8 | "You should have knocked harder," | | 9 | "Her voice was steady, betraying" | | 10 | "I did, Lucien replied." | | 11 | "His accent was smooth, a" | | 12 | "I was trying to be" | | 13 | "You are not known for" | | 14 | "He moved with a predator’s" | | 15 | "He ignored the stack of" | | 16 | "He stopped in the center" | | 17 | "You look tired, Aurora." | | 18 | "She corrected him automatically." | | 19 | "I came from a meeting." |
| | ratio | 0.582 | |
| 41.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 128 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "The first knock was soft," | | 1 | "Rory froze, her hand hovering" | | 2 | "The flat was quiet, save" | | 3 | "She had lived above Silas" | | 4 | "It was safer here, or" | | 5 | "She moved to the door," | | 6 | "Rory clicked them back one" | | 7 | "She didn’t look through the" | | 8 | "She knew who it was." | | 9 | "She could feel the shift" | | 10 | "He stood in a tailored" | | 11 | "His eyes, one amber and" | | 12 | "You should have knocked harder," | | 13 | "Her voice was steady, betraying" | | 14 | "I did, Lucien replied." | | 15 | "His accent was smooth, a" | | 16 | "I was trying to be" | | 17 | "Rory stepped back, leaving the" | | 18 | "The smell of rain and" | | 19 | "You are not known for" |
| | ratio | 0.837 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "To keep you alive, Lucien" | | 1 | "Now it felt like a" | | 2 | "If you are here to" | | 3 | "If you need me, he" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 45.01% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "When she opened the door, the hallway light spilled onto Lucien’s face, illuminating the sharp angles of his cheekbones and the slicked-back platinum blond hair…" | | 1 | "He stood in a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent, the ivory handle of his cane resting casually against his shoulder." | | 2 | "His eyes, one amber and one black, locked onto hers with an intensity that made her breath hitch in her throat." | | 3 | "The smell of rain and expensive cologne drifted in, mixing with the scent of old paper and curry that clung to the flat." | | 4 | "The corner of his mouth twitched, a ghost of a smile that didn’t reach his eyes." | | 5 | "We agreed on a lot of things, he said, his gaze dropping to her wrist for a fraction of a second before snapping back to her eyes." | | 6 | "There was attraction, yes, a magnetic pull that had drawn them together in the dark corners of the city, but there was also the hurt of secrets kept and the dan…" | | 7 | "The conflict tore at her, the cool-headed logic she prided herself on warring with the raw instinct that had always drawn her to him." | | 8 | "She was afraid of the man standing in front of her, and the way he made her feel like the only thing that mattered in a world that was constantly trying to eras…" | | 9 | "But as she sat down, she found her hand drifting to her left wrist, tracing the crescent scar." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |