Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDWQ1VK5V4J98D61N7QA3Y

Run Details

Duration:
1m 53s
Cost:
$0.026168
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory navigated the dense undergrowth of Richmond Park. The city lights faded behind her. The streetlamps gave way to darkness. She reached the standing stones. Ancient oak trunks fused into the earth. They marked the boundary. The air grew heavy. The smell of damp soil mixed with something sweet, like rotting lilies. She stepped into the clearing. The wildflowers bloomed in full color. Blue, yellow, red. They shouldn't grow in December. The sky above held no stars. A grey mist hung low. Her hand went to the silver chain. The Heartstone pressed against her collarbone. It burned. The heat spread down her chest. She pulled the pendant out. The crimson gem pulsed. A rhythmic throb. Like a heartbeat. She looked around. The trees stood too still. No wind moved the leaves. The silence pressed against her ears. A cricket chirped. Then stopped. She walked toward the center. The grass felt soft, almost like moss. Her boots sank slightly. She lifted her foot. The ground didn't spring back. It stayed depressed. A twig snapped. She froze. Her left hand tightened. The scar on her wrist pulled. A tight band of white skin. She ignored the sting. "Hello?" Her voice sounded flat. It didn't echo. The sound died in the air. Nothing answered. She turned in a circle. The stones formed a perfect ring. The flowers watched her. She knew the flowers didn't move. She knew the wind didn't blow. Yet the petals shifted. A ripple moved through the bluebells. She gripped the pendant. The heat spiked. Pain shot through her fingers. She dropped the gem back against her skin. The mist thickened. It curled around her ankles. Cold dampness soaked her trousers. She pulled her legs up. The mist didn't recede. It climbed. A shadow detached itself from the oak on her left. It stood too tall. It had no face. Just a void where features should be. Rory backed away. Her heel caught a root. She stumbled. She caught herself on a stone. The bark felt warm. Alive. The shadow didn't move. It waited. She scanned the perimeter. Another shadow. Then another. They stood between the stones. They blocked the path back to the park. She looked at the pendant. It glowed brighter. The crimson light cut through the mist. The shadows flinched. She took a step forward. The ground shook. A low rumble vibrated through the soles of her boots. The shadows stepped closer. They didn't walk. They flowed. She raised the pendant. The light intensified. The heat singed her fingers. The shadows stopped. She held her breath. Her lungs burned. The air tasted like copper. One shadow tilted. It mimicked her posture. She lowered her hand. The light dimmed. The shadows surged. She ran. She didn't look back. The flowers brushed her legs. They felt like fingers. Cold, grasping. She reached the stones. She pushed through the brambles. The thorns tore her skin. Blood welled. She didn't stop. She burst into the park. The night air hit her face. Cold. Clean. Real. She leaned against a tree. Her chest heaved. She checked the pendant. It lay cold against her chest. She looked back at the Grove. The mist had vanished. The stones stood silent. She turned away.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:14:40.963Z" 2/25/2026, 10:14:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount539
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount539
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"pulsed"
2"rhythmic"
3"throb"
4"silence"
5"echo"
6"perfect"
7"scanned"
8"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen12
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords539
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount538
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Cold"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Cold"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
December1
Heartstone1
Grove1
Cold3
persons
0"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"December"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount539
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean16.84
std11.49
cv0.682
sampleLengths
052
130
236
324
428
53
622
71
813
92
1037
1120
1224
1325
1421
156
1621
1718
1818
199
2012
213
2212
237
2410
252
2615
2719
2814
2918
3014
313
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences124
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount538
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.024163568773234202
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0018587360594795538
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean4.35
std1.87
cv0.429
sampleLengths
08
16
26
35
47
54
64
712
85
96
103
115
126
135
147
156
162
176
185
194
203
213
223
235
245
256
263
272
285
297
304
314
325
333
343
352
364
376
386
394
401
414
423
436
442
455
466
474
486
496
37.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.1935483870967742
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners24
31.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Just a void where features"
ratio0.009
31.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences106
matches
0"She reached the standing stones."
1"They marked the boundary."
2"She stepped into the clearing."
3"They shouldn't grow in December."
4"Her hand went to the"
5"She pulled the pendant out."
6"She looked around."
7"She walked toward the center."
8"Her boots sank slightly."
9"She lifted her foot."
10"It stayed depressed."
11"Her left hand tightened."
12"She ignored the sting."
13"Her voice sounded flat."
14"It didn't echo."
15"She turned in a circle."
16"She knew the flowers didn't"
17"She knew the wind didn't"
18"She gripped the pendant."
19"She dropped the gem back"
ratio0.472
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences106
matches
0"Rory navigated the dense undergrowth"
1"The city lights faded behind"
2"The streetlamps gave way to"
3"She reached the standing stones."
4"They marked the boundary."
5"The air grew heavy."
6"The smell of damp soil"
7"She stepped into the clearing."
8"The wildflowers bloomed in full"
9"They shouldn't grow in December."
10"The sky above held no"
11"A grey mist hung low."
12"Her hand went to the"
13"The Heartstone pressed against her"
14"The heat spread down her"
15"She pulled the pendant out."
16"The crimson gem pulsed."
17"A rhythmic throb."
18"She looked around."
19"The trees stood too still."
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences3
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.5700%