Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDY54JMKJX4K9X90Y5BHWG

Run Details

Duration:
52.3s
Cost:
$0.002226
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain beat against the pavement outside The Raven's Nest. The green neon sign buzzed like an angry insect in the soot-stained window. Rory pushed the door open. The bell jangled, cutting through the low hum of the lounge. Silas stood behind the polished mahogany bar, wiping a glass with a rough cloth. His hazel eyes lifted, catching the movement. He nodded once, a sharp dip of his chin. His knee clicked as he shifted weight from his left leg. "Late shift?" Silas asked. His voice dropped an octave, a gravelly rumble that filled the room without raising the noise floor. "Order went south." She peeled off her yellow slicker. Water ran down the sleeves, pooling on the floor between her boots. "Yu-Fei wants the next batch in two hours." "Drink on the house." "Water for now." She scanned the room. Dim light caught the edges of old maps on the walls. The photographs were black and white ghosts. Tables were sparse. A couple of men argued quietly about betting odds near the dartboard. Then she saw him. Ben sat in the corner by the bookshelf. He wore a charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent. The fabric pulled tight across his shoulders. His hair was shorter than before, cropped military neat. No traces of the shaggy beard he'd worn during Law Society nights. She froze. The water bottle in her hand felt slippery. Ben didn't look up. He held a tumbler of amber liquid. He swirled the ice. The clink echoed in the quiet bar. She walked toward him. Silas stopped polishing. His hand hovered over the glass. He watched, unblinking. Rory stopped at his table. "Ben." He stopped moving. Ice cubes rattled against the crystal. He looked up slowly. His eyes didn't widen. No shock registered on his face. Just a calculation. "Rory." "Didn't think Cardiff people knew Soho." "Business trip." He set the tumbler down. The liquid settled without ripples. "Heard you ran off to London. Heard you went straight." "To the bar." She slid into the chair opposite. The wood groaned under her weight. Her knees bumped his table leg. "Work. Silas' place. Above the bar." "The Spymaster." Ben smiled. It didn't reach his eyes. "Silas Blackwood. Quiet man." "You knew?" "Know the people. Knew Silas was retired after Prague. Know the intel network." He leaned back. His posture was rigid. A statue carved from cold stone. "Knew you were in the area." "How?" "Google. Public records. Then the intel." She looked at his left hand. A platinum wedding band sat on the ring finger. She hadn't asked about his marriage. She hadn't asked about his job either. The silence stretched between them, thick with two years of unspoken life. Ben's phone buzzed on the table. A sharp vibration. He ignored it. "Where are you staying?" Ben asked. "In Soho. Same as the job." "Pre-law. You never finished." "Got distracted." She traced the crescent scar on her wrist. Her thumbnail caught on the thin ridge of scar tissue. "Things happened." "You always jumped first." Ben picked up his glass. He drank deeply. The throat of his neck moved. "Now you deliver food." "I deliver food. Keeps me off the streets." "Evan?" She flinched. The name hit the table like a dropped weight. "It changed." "Did it end?" "I left." "He let you?" Ben laughed. A short, dry sound. "You never left. You ran." "Difference." She leaned forward. Her elbows found the cool wood. "Survival." "Survival costs." Ben gestured to the glass. "That's the drink. That's the bar." "I have a job now." "A delivery driver." He looked at her hands. Calloused. No rings. "You had potential. Cardiff was waiting." "You stayed?" "Promotion. Partnership track." He tapped the wedding band. "Stable. Predictable." "Boring." "Safe." He corrected. "You wanted out. You wanted danger." "I wanted breath." Ben leaned forward. The shadow of his suit darkened his tie. "He told us." "Who?" "Evan. We heard rumors." "You heard rumors?" She pulled her hand back. The scar hurt slightly. "You were my friends. You left me." "I tried to call. No answer." Ben's tone flattened. "You cut the lines." "He cut them. He cut everything." "So you ran." Ben looked around the bar. Maps. Photos. Silas in the background, watching the exchange. The Spymaster didn't intervene. He just waited. "Where's the wedding ring?" Rory asked. Ben paused. He touched the gold band. "Two years." "You moved fast." "You moved sideways." "Sideways is movement." "It's not progress." "It's not regression either." Silas moved a bottle of whiskey across the counter. The glass slid on wood. He didn't speak. Ben looked past her at the bar. "Do you know him?" "Lives above him." "Does he know about him?" Ben nodded at the door where Evan had vanished from her life. "I don't tell." "You should." Ben finished his drink. He wiped the rim of the glass with his thumb. "You shouldn't carry that alone. Silas handles secrets for a living. Maybe he knows." "Maybe." "Maybe isn't an answer." Ben stood. His chair scraped against the wood. He towered over her now. Six foot tall. Built up. "Sit down." He sat. "I'm back in Cardiff next week." "I'm in London." "I need a witness." "Why me?" "Because you know the game." "The game is over." "It starts again." Ben pressed his fingers to the table. Knuckles white. "Evan's still out there. You left him. He's still looking." "I'm not." Her eyes dropped to her wrist. The scar throbbed against the skin. "I'm not him." "You run." Ben said. "You always run." "I survive." "Same thing." Silas set a fresh whiskey in front of Ben. "My treat." Silas walked from the bar. His limp marked the floorboards. Ben poured the amber liquid. He didn't ask Rory if she wanted a drink. He knew she wouldn't take it. He knew she was waiting for him. He raised the glass. "To the past." "To the present." Rory countered. Her voice didn't shake. Ben smiled. He drank. "You look tired." "Do you?" "Yes." "So do you." Ben put the glass down. He reached for his jacket. He pulled out a card. He slid it across the wood. "Call tomorrow." "I will." "Don't." Ben stood again. "Not unless you're done running." He walked to the door. The bell jangled. Rory stared at the card. The paper felt rough. Silas walked to her side. He leaned against the counter. "He's dangerous now." "He's a lawyer." "He's a weapon." Silas looked at the door. "The bar protects people." "Does it protect me?" "Depends on who's walking through the door." Silas poured his finger a drink. He held it out. Rory took the glass. The warmth seeped into her palm. Her wrist stung where the scar touched the skin. The rain hammered the glass outside. Silas didn't speak. He watched the door frame where Ben stood. He waited. Rory didn't drink. She watched the card. The neon sign buzzed. Silas lifted his glass. Rory set hers down. She looked at the door. Ben was gone. The card sat on the wood. Silas waited. She breathed out. "He's right." "About what?" "About the running."
created_at"2026-02-25T22:15:28.151Z" 2/25/2026, 10:15:28 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
1"Ben looked around [around]"
2"Ben stood again [again]"
dialogueSentences106
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.566
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.057
91.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"potential"
count1
8
word"predictable"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"scanned"
2"echoed"
3"crystal"
4"silence"
5"unspoken"
6"traced"
7"potential"
8"predictable"
9"throbbed"
10"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences227
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen17
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1193
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount812
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity3.08
worstName"Ben"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Ben"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Water1
Law1
Society1
Calloused1
Ben25
Maps1
Spymaster1
Evan1
Knuckles1
Silas13
Rory9
persons
0"Water"
1"Ben"
2"Spymaster"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
places
0"Raven"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1193
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences227
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs114
mean10.46
std10.15
cv0.97
sampleLengths
038
141
221
329
44
53
637
74
848
910
1022
1116
126
1327
146
1522
1627
1713
182
1932
201
216
2240
2312
246
256
264
2722
2822
298
301
3113
323
332
3414
3511
3613
375
3817
392
4010
411
429
433
4414
451
464
4719
4813
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences227
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount813
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.017220172201722016
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007380073800738007
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences227
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences227
mean5.26
std3.12
cv0.593
sampleLengths
09
113
25
311
414
57
69
711
84
917
109
1112
128
134
143
154
1611
177
183
1912
204
218
2212
237
249
2512
262
278
284
297
304
317
324
333
346
353
365
371
383
396
404
414
426
433
441
456
467
475
4810
499
44.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.32158590308370044
totalSentences227
uniqueOpeners73
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences128
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Just a calculation."
ratio0.016
38.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences128
matches
0"His hazel eyes lifted, catching"
1"He nodded once, a sharp"
2"His knee clicked as he"
3"His voice dropped an octave,"
4"She peeled off her yellow"
5"She scanned the room."
6"He wore a charcoal suit"
7"His hair was shorter than"
8"He held a tumbler of"
9"He swirled the ice."
10"She walked toward him."
11"His hand hovered over the"
12"He watched, unblinking."
13"He stopped moving."
14"He looked up slowly."
15"His eyes didn't widen."
16"He set the tumbler down"
17"She slid into the chair"
18"Her knees bumped his table"
19"It didn't reach his eyes."
ratio0.453
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences128
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory pushed the door open."
2"The bell jangled, cutting through"
3"Silas stood behind the polished"
4"His hazel eyes lifted, catching"
5"He nodded once, a sharp"
6"His knee clicked as he"
7"His voice dropped an octave,"
8"She peeled off her yellow"
9"Water ran down the sleeves,"
10"She scanned the room."
11"The photographs were black and"
12"Tables were sparse."
13"A couple of men argued"
14"Ben sat in the corner"
15"He wore a charcoal suit"
16"The fabric pulled tight across"
17"His hair was shorter than"
18"The water bottle in her"
19"Ben didn't look up."
ratio0.945
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Ben laughed (laugh)"
1"He corrected (correct)"
2"Ben pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences106
tagDensity0.066
leniency0.132
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.057
82.4104%