Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDYQ3CVEYT1V7R5EJTFPWN

Run Details

Duration:
40.2s
Cost:
$0.015416
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The damp air of the abandoned Camden station clung to Harlow Quinn’s coat. She stepped over a rusted turnstile, her boots crunching on broken glass and coal dust. The fluorescent lights overhead buzzed with a dying rhythm, casting long, jagged shadows against the tiled walls. Three uniformed officers stood near the platform edge, their postures rigid, eyes fixed on the body lying between the tracks. Quinn pushed past them, her movement sharp and deliberate. She checked her watch, the worn leather strap creaking against her wrist. The time matched the call. She stopped three feet from the corpse. A man in a dark suit lay on his back, hands folded over his chest. No blood stained the collar of his jacket. No blood stained the tiles beneath him. Eva Kowalski crouched beside the body, her round glasses reflecting the flickering light. She held a small notebook, her fingers trembling slightly. She tucked a curl of red hair behind her left ear, then tucked it again. The victim looks peaceful, Eva said. Peaceful doesn't mean safe, Quinn replied. She knelt, keeping her weight on the balls of her feet. She scanned the victim’s face. The skin held a grey pallor, like old parchment. No bruising. No defensive wounds on the forearms. There are no exit wounds, Eva said. She pointed to the chest. The fabric is intact. No entry wounds either. Quinn leaned closer. She smelled ozone and something metallic, like copper pennies left in the rain. She reached out and touched the victim’s shoulder. The fabric felt dry, stiff. This isn't a shooting, Quinn said. It wasn't, Eva agreed. She opened her satchel and pulled out a small brass compass. The casing bore a green patina of verdigris. The needle spun lazily, refusing to settle on north. It pointed instead toward the tunnel mouth, then swung back to the body. The Veil Compass, Quinn said. She knew the object from the files on her desk. Files marked confidential, files marked impossible. It reacts to rifts, Eva said. The needle is agitated. Something opened here recently. Quinn stood up. She walked the perimeter of the body, her eyes tracking the dust on the platform. The soot lay thick and undisturbed, a grey blanket over the concrete. She stopped at the edge of the tracks. She crouched again and brushed her gloved hand over the dust near the victim’s boots. Look at the dust, Quinn said. Eva adjusted her glasses. What about it? No footprints lead to him, Quinn said. She ran her finger through the layer of grime. The line is clean. He didn't walk here. He didn't crawl here. Eva frowned. She looked from the compass to the body. The market moves every full moon. The entry requires a token. Maybe he was brought in. By whom? Quinn asked. She stood and walked toward the tunnel archway. The darkness beyond swallowed the light from the platform. She saw a glint of metal near the wall, half-buried in the soot. She retrieved a pair of tweezers from her pocket and lifted the object. A bone token, Quinn said. She held it up to the light. It was carved from something white and smooth, etched with a simple line. Eva took the token. She turned it over in her fingers. This grants passage. But the compass needle spun when I touched the body. It points to the rift. Quinn looked at the compass in Eva’s hand. The needle was still. It pointed directly at the tunnel entrance. The rift is closed, Quinn said. It closed after he arrived, Eva said. She tucked the token into her pocket. Quinn walked back to the body. She inspected the victim’s hands again. The fingernails were clean. No dirt under the cuticles. No grit from the station floor. He didn't struggle, Quinn said. He knew the person who brought him here. Eva stood up. She brushed the dust from her knees. The sigils on the floor, Quinn. I saw them when I arrived. They were faint, drawn in chalk. Quinn looked down. She had missed them. The chalk lines formed a circle around the body, now smudged by the uniform officers’ boots. Ritual binding, Eva said. He was meant to stay here. Then why move him? Quinn asked. She stepped into the circle. The air grew colder. Her breath misted in front of her face. The temperature dropped ten degrees in seconds. The market rules, Eva said. The market takes a toll. If he paid, he should be gone. If he didn't pay, he stays. Quinn looked at the victim’s suit. The fabric was expensive. Italian wool. A man who could afford the toll. He paid, Quinn said. She pointed to the chest. The fabric is dry. No sweat. No tension. He accepted the terms. Then why is he dead? Eva asked. Quinn walked to the edge of the platform. She looked down the tracks into the dark tunnel. The compass in Eva’s hand began to vibrate. The needle spun faster, a blur of brass. The rift didn't close, Quinn said. It shifted. She turned back to Eva. The needle points to the tunnel. It points to the exit. Eva held the compass steady. It points to the rift. It means the path is open. Quinn walked back to the body. She knelt and checked the victim’s left wrist. The skin was pale, but a faint mark remained. A burn. A circle with a line through it. He was marked, Quinn said. By the market? Eva asked. By the seller, Quinn said. She stood up and looked at the tunnel again. The darkness seemed to pulse. The air pressure dropped, popping her ears. The victim didn't die here, Quinn said. He died in the market. He was brought back to the station to hide the body. Eva looked at the compass. The needle slowed. It pointed at the victim’s chest. The compass reacts to the energy, Eva said. The energy is still in the body. Quinn pulled her service weapon. She checked the chamber. The click echoed in the empty station. You said the market moves, Quinn said. Every full moon, Eva said. We aren't at the full moon, Quinn said. She looked at the calendar on her phone. The date glowed in the dim light. The market is here, Eva said. It shouldn't be. Quinn holstered the weapon. She looked at the bone token in Eva’s pocket. The token opens the door, Quinn said. Someone used it twice. Eva pulled the token out. She looked at the carving. The line was deeper on one side. It was used recently, Eva said. Quinn walked to the tunnel entrance. She shone her flashlight into the dark. The beam cut through the dust. She saw a set of footprints in the soot. They started at the tunnel mouth and stopped at the body. Only one set, Quinn said. The killer walked back, Eva said. No, Quinn said. The killer didn't walk back. The killer walked through. She pointed at the footprints. The dust was undisturbed behind the body. No return path. The rift took him, Quinn said. Eva looked at the compass. The needle spun wildly again. It pointed at Quinn. It points to you, Eva said. Quinn looked at the needle. It settled on her chest. The energy is here, Quinn said. She touched her coat pocket. The compass in her own bag hummed against her hip. She hadn't noticed it until now. The market isn't just selling goods, Quinn said. It's selling people. Eva stepped back. She clutched her satchel. We need to call for backup, Eva said. No, Quinn said. She looked at the tunnel. The darkness shifted, forming a shape. A shadow detached itself from the wall. The backup won't get through the door, Quinn said. The shadow moved closer. It had no face. It had no hands. It was a void in the light. Eva backed away. She raised the compass. The needle stopped spinning. It pointed at the shadow. It's hungry, Eva said. Quinn drew her weapon again. She aimed at the shadow. The bullet would pass through. She knew it. Put the compass down, Quinn said. Eva hesitated. She lowered the brass device. The shadow paused. It hovered inches from the platform edge. The token, Quinn said. Give it to me. Eva handed over the bone token. Quinn took it. The wood felt warm. She held it out toward the shadow. The shadow recoiled. It shrank back into the wall. The market demands a trade, Quinn said. Eva watched the shadow. It settled into the darkness. The air warmed. The buzzing lights stopped flickering. It accepted the trade, Eva said. It accepted the price, Quinn said. She looked at the victim’s body. The grey pallor faded. The skin turned red. Blood pooled beneath the suit. The body was preserved, Quinn said. By the magic, Eva said. By the lie, Quinn said. She looked at the tunnel. The footprints were gone. The dust lay smooth. The killer used the market to hide the body, Quinn said. They used the rift to move him without leaving tracks. And the token, Eva said. The token opened the door, Quinn said. But the killer kept the key. She looked at her watch. The second hand ticked. The time moved forward. We need to find the seller, Quinn said. Eva nodded. She tucked her hair behind her ear. She looked at the tunnel. The seller is in the market, Eva said. The market is here, Quinn said. She holstered the weapon. She walked to the body and covered it with a sheet. We stay, Quinn said. We wait for the door to open again. Eva sat on the bench near the platform. She opened her notebook. She wrote down the time. How long? Eva asked. Until the moon rises, Quinn said. She leaned against the tiled wall. She watched the tunnel. The darkness waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"scanned"
2"glint"
3"etched"
4"tension"
5"pulse"
6"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences272
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences272
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences272
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1658
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions53
unquotedAttributions44
matches
0"The victim looks peaceful, Eva said."
1"There are no exit wounds, Eva said."
2"The Veil Compass, Quinn said."
3"It reacts to rifts, Eva said."
4"Look at the dust, Quinn said."
5"No footprints lead to him, Quinn said."
6"A bone token, Quinn said."
7"The rift is closed, Quinn said."
8"It closed after he arrived, Eva said."
9"Ritual binding, Eva said."
10"The market rules, Eva said."
11"He paid, Quinn said."
12"He was marked, Quinn said."
13"By the seller, Quinn said."
14"The compass reacts to the energy, Eva said."
15"You said the market moves, Quinn said."
16"Every full moon, Eva said."
17"The market is here, Eva said."
18"The token opens the door, Quinn said."
19"It was used recently, Eva said."
20"Only one set, Quinn said."
21"The killer walked back, Eva said."
22"No, Quinn said."
23"The rift took him, Quinn said."
24"It points to you, Eva said."
25"The energy is here, Quinn said."
26"We need to call for backup, Eva said."
27"No, Quinn said."
28"Put the compass down, Quinn said."
29"The token, Quinn said."
30"The market demands a trade, Quinn said."
31"It accepted the trade, Eva said."
32"It accepted the price, Quinn said."
33"The body was preserved, Quinn said."
34"By the magic, Eva said."
35"By the lie, Quinn said."
36"The killer used the market to hide the body, Quinn said."
37"And the token, Eva said."
38"The token opened the door, Quinn said."
39"We need to find the seller, Quinn said."
40"The seller is in the market, Eva said."
41"The market is here, Quinn said."
42"We stay, Quinn said."
43"Until the moon rises, Quinn said."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions103
wordCount1656
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn55
Kowalski1
Eva42
Veil1
Compass1
Ritual1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Ritual"
places
0"Compass"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences136
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1658
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences272
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean17.45
std12.42
cv0.712
sampleLengths
065
163
237
36
439
520
629
76
845
921
1014
1153
126
137
1428
1526
1647
1725
1829
1919
206
2114
2227
2313
2428
2523
2610
2730
2823
2919
3021
317
3233
338
3416
3516
3632
375
385
3926
4023
4114
4215
4316
447
455
4623
479
4813
4911
96.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences272
matches
0"was brought"
1"was carved"
2"was meant"
3"was brought"
4"was used"
5"was preserved"
6"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs350
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences272
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount695
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02158273381294964
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0057553956834532375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences272
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences272
mean6.1
std2.94
cv0.483
sampleLengths
013
115
217
320
49
512
65
77
815
98
107
1113
129
1315
146
156
1611
175
189
192
206
217
225
234
244
253
2613
278
285
296
304
3111
328
339
3413
355
3610
376
386
394
404
413
4215
4312
448
4515
466
474
483
497
33.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats44
diversityRatio0.13602941176470587
totalSentences272
uniqueOpeners37
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences256
matches
0"Maybe he was brought in."
1"Then why move him?"
2"Then why is he dead?"
3"Only one set, Quinn said."
ratio0.016
52.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount107
totalSentences256
matches
0"She stepped over a rusted"
1"She checked her watch, the"
2"She stopped three feet from"
3"She held a small notebook,"
4"She tucked a curl of"
5"She knelt, keeping her weight"
6"She scanned the victim’s face."
7"She pointed to the chest."
8"She smelled ozone and something"
9"She reached out and touched"
10"It wasn't, Eva agreed."
11"She opened her satchel and"
12"It pointed instead toward the"
13"She knew the object from"
14"It reacts to rifts, Eva"
15"She walked the perimeter of"
16"She stopped at the edge"
17"She crouched again and brushed"
18"She ran her finger through"
19"He didn't walk here."
ratio0.418
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount224
totalSentences256
matches
0"The damp air of the"
1"She stepped over a rusted"
2"The fluorescent lights overhead buzzed"
3"Quinn pushed past them, her"
4"She checked her watch, the"
5"The time matched the call."
6"She stopped three feet from"
7"A man in a dark"
8"Eva Kowalski crouched beside the"
9"She held a small notebook,"
10"She tucked a curl of"
11"The victim looks peaceful, Eva"
12"She knelt, keeping her weight"
13"She scanned the victim’s face."
14"The skin held a grey"
15"She pointed to the chest."
16"The fabric is intact."
17"Quinn leaned closer."
18"She smelled ozone and something"
19"She reached out and touched"
ratio0.875
39.06% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences256
matches
0"If he paid, he should"
1"If he didn't pay, he"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.3125%