Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBDZVWBM7WJYK7SH7T3CFGF

Run Details

Duration:
47.0s
Cost:
$0.015399
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of roasted meat and rotting pears. Aurora stepped forward, her boots crunching on gravel that shifted under her weight like crushed garnets. The ground hummed against her soles, a vibration rising up through the steel toes of her trainers. Above, the sky did not hold the familiar blue of London. It burned with a warm, amber hue, thick as honey poured over the world, obscuring any sense of direction. Nyx hovered at her left shoulder, a silhouette cut from the deep night before they reached this place. Even here, in the artificial twilight of the otherworldly, the Shade remained solid. Violet light pulsed within their eye sockets, scanning the canopy overhead where branches wove together in impossible geometry. The shadows here were heavy, clinging to Nyx's form like oil. "Too loud," Nyx whispered. The sound drifted around Aurora like smoke. Aurora didn't turn. Her blue eyes narrowed against the glare. The Heartstone Pendant swung against her sternum, resting over her ribs. The deep crimson gem had been cold until this step, but now it throbbed with warmth, matching the heat radiating from the soil. She pressed a hand to her chest, feeling the pulse sync with her own heart. "The pendant is reacting. We're close to the rift," Aurora murmured. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag on her hip, fingers brushing the Fae-Forged Blade tucked beneath. The metal felt cold against her thigh, a stark contrast to the amber air. "We are inside," Isolde said. The Half-Fae glided beside them, her silver hair cascading down her back like spun moonlight. She wore no shoes, her bare feet leaving no impression in the dark earth. "Isolde, this feels wrong," Aurora muttered. She flexed her wrist, the small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood aching in the damp heat. "It smells like a kitchen that hasn't been cleaned in years." "Gluttony does not care for cleanliness." Isolde lifted a hand, palm open toward a vine arching over the path. "The fruit sings." Aurora leaned forward. The grapevines were enormous, their leaves the size of dinner plates, translucent and glowing from within. Clusters of berries hung heavy, dripping a thick, golden nectar that sizzled when it hit the ground. The sound of sizzling mixed with a low hum, a chorus of voices buried beneath the rind of the leaves. "Is that... sugar?" Aurora reached out. "Honey." Nyx shifted, their form flickering as they solidified fully to walk. "Heat is the breath of this place." Isolde turned, walking deeper into the orchard. "Prince Belphegor does not let his guests leave with empty plates." "That's a lot of food for one ruler." "It is for everyone invited." Isolde's lavender eyes glowed in the dimming light. "And everyone invited is food." Aurora stepped over a root that twisted like a snake. The root groaned as she climbed it, the sound like bone snapping. The path narrowed as the vines grew closer, creating a living tunnel of green and gold. "Why did we come here? The Veil weakens in summer, but this portal is bleeding." "Because the Heartstone called. Not the others. Just this stone." Isolde pointed toward a distant structure rising above the vines. It looked like a palace made of sugar and bone, towers twisting upward into the amber sky. "I thought it was just a trinket." Aurora tapped the chain. The silver links were cool against her skin despite the heat. "A trinket for a demon." Nyx drifted closer to Aurora, their face inches from her shoulder. "I smell them." "The air tastes of smoke." Nyx's voice dropped an octave, vibrating in Aurora's chest. "Old smoke." "This way." Isolde did not look back as she walked. "We seek the rift anchor." Aurora followed. The sound of distant laughter echoed off the leaves, but it lacked any joy. It sounded like a scream held in the throat. She tightened her grip on the handle of her Fae blade. The cold metal soothed her hand. "Do not touch the fruit," Isolde warned. She did not look back. "The skin peels. The fruit peels. Then you." "That's not funny." "I do not make jokes." They reached a clearing. In the center lay a long stone table set with plates that shifted and shifted, sliding across the surface. "It is the table," Isolde said. She stepped forward, her silver boots making no sound. "It is the feast." "That's a lot of food for one ruler." "It is for everyone invited." Isolde turned, her lavender eyes glowing. "And everyone invited is food." Aurora placed her hand on the stone surface. It was warm. Not the heat of the sun, but the heat of digestion. Warmth pulsed through her palm. She felt the Heartstone burning against her ribs. "The Veil is thin here. I can feel the heat coming from below." Feel it in your bones. The voice came from everywhere, not Isolde's mouth. "Stop." Nyx grabbed her arm. Aurora jerked back. Nyx's fingers were like ice. "I said stop." "The pendant is screaming." Aurora looked down. The Heartstone glowed bright crimson now. "It wasn't like that before." "Before was Earth. This is Dymas." "The ground is moving." Aurora pointed. The stone table was shifting. The plates were sliding closer together. "We need to go." "You cannot leave without the debt." Isolde stepped forward. Her fingers were long, pale as moonlight. "To consume is to belong. To leave without the cost is to starve." "I don't have time to starve." "No one has time." Nyx stepped between them. "The walls are breathing." Aurora looked at the vineyard. The vines were undulating. Leaves brushed together in a soft rustle, sounding like hushed voices. She stepped closer to the table. Her shadow stretched out long across the ground, merging with the shadows Nyx cast. "Then do not cut," Isolde said. "Ask." "Ask what?" "The gate." "The gate is a table." "The gate is a mouth." Aurora looked at Isolde. "It's a trap." "Everything is a trap." Isolde smiled. Her teeth were too sharp. "But some traps open." The laughter grew louder. A figure emerged from the vines. A man in a chef's coat, but his face was a mask of features shifting and changing. He held a platter with a single piece of roasted meat. "Welcome," the figure said. His voice sounded like grinding stones. "We don't want the food." Aurora gripped the blade. "It smells like home," Nyx whispered. "You know what this is," Aurora said to Isolde. "Gluttony." The chef stepped closer. The plate grew heavy with steam. "A bite for the road." "We take what we came for." "Then leave the plate." "There is no plate." "There is always a plate." The ground began to shake. The stone table rattled under Aurora's boots. "It's collapsing." "The Veil closes. You must choose." Isolde's voice echoed from the trees. "Choose what?" "Stay or go." "There is no go." "There is always a way." Aurora looked at the fissure. She looked at Nyx. She looked at Isolde. "I'm going." "Then jump." Aurora gripped the ledge of the stone. Her wrist scar stung. She pulled herself over the edge. Nyx caught her hand, their grip solid. They swung her out. Isolde walked through the air to catch them on the other side. They landed on solid ground. The stone table fell away into the dark below. "Now," Isolde said. "What now?" "The Veil opens." Aurora looked up. The amber sky was shifting. The blue of London was breaking through. "We did it," Nyx said. "Did we?" Isolde looked at the pendant. "It's cold again." "That means the debt remains." "I don't care." "You should." Isolde walked forward. "The sun rises." Aurora looked at the horizon. The sun was coming up. But the shadow of the chef remained on the ground. "We need to go." "Where?" "London." "London is safe." "Is it?" Isolde stopped. She pointed to the ground. "Look." Aurora looked down. A piece of the stone was on her shoe. "A seed." "Eat it," Isolde said. "No." "You must." Aurora kicked the seed away. It landed in the grass. "It's growing." The grass turned red. "I'm not going back." "You already are." The ground shook. "We move." "Yes." They walked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences97
tagDensity0.33
leniency0.66
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1372
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1372
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"sense of"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"cascading"
count1
11
word"structure"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"sense of"
3"otherworldly"
4"pulsed"
5"scanning"
6"throbbed"
7"warmth"
8"pulse"
9"stark"
10"cascading"
11"structure"
12"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences127
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences192
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1372
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount966
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.8
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London2
Shade1
Nyx14
Aurora27
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Half-Fae1
Isolde23
Fae3
persons
0"Shade"
1"Nyx"
2"Aurora"
3"Heartstone"
4"Blade"
5"Half-Fae"
6"Isolde"
7"Fae"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.102
windowScore0
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a palace made of sugar and bo"
1"sounded like a scream held in the throat"
2"sounded like grinding stones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.729
wordCount1372
matches
0"Not the heat of the sun, but the heat of digestion"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences192
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean13.72
std15.73
cv1.146
sampleLengths
09
163
260
311
459
543
634
733
822
956
106
1112
1225
138
1418
1553
1637
1722
1819
1916
2015
2162
223
235
2442
258
2616
2748
2813
295
3011
314
3214
336
3421
3529
366
374
388
3940
407
412
422
435
445
457
4615
4738
4810
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was shifting"
1"were sliding"
2"were undulating"
3"was shifting"
4"was breaking"
5"was coming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences192
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount969
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.01238390092879257
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0020639834881320948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences192
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences192
mean7.15
std4.87
cv0.681
sampleLengths
09
116
217
311
419
518
613
718
811
94
107
113
127
1311
1423
1515
1611
1718
1814
195
2015
2114
226
2316
2411
2519
263
273
2816
2917
3020
316
3212
3314
3411
358
3613
375
3810
3912
4016
4115
4220
4317
4411
4511
4616
473
4814
492
41.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2916666666666667
totalSentences192
uniqueOpeners56
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences111
matches
0"It burned with a warm,"
1"Her blue eyes narrowed against"
2"She pressed a hand to"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"She wore no shoes, her"
5"She flexed her wrist, the"
6"It looked like a palace"
7"It sounded like a scream"
8"She tightened her grip on"
9"She did not look back."
10"They reached a clearing."
11"She stepped forward, her silver"
12"It was warm."
13"She felt the Heartstone burning"
14"Her fingers were long, pale"
15"She stepped closer to the"
16"Her shadow stretched out long"
17"Her teeth were too sharp."
18"He held a platter with"
19"His voice sounded like grinding"
ratio0.252
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences111
matches
0"The air tasted of roasted"
1"Aurora stepped forward, her boots"
2"The ground hummed against her"
3"It burned with a warm,"
4"Nyx hovered at her left"
5"Violet light pulsed within their"
6"The shadows here were heavy,"
7"The sound drifted around Aurora"
8"Aurora didn't turn."
9"Her blue eyes narrowed against"
10"The Heartstone Pendant swung against"
11"The deep crimson gem had"
12"She pressed a hand to"
13"She adjusted the strap of"
14"The metal felt cold against"
15"The Half-Fae glided beside them,"
16"She wore no shoes, her"
17"She flexed her wrist, the"
18"Isolde lifted a hand, palm"
19"Aurora leaned forward."
ratio0.946
45.05% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"Even here, in the artificial"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Aurora stepped forward, her boots crunching on gravel that shifted under her weight like crushed garnets."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx shifted, their form flickering as they solidified fully to walk"
1"Isolde turned, her lavender eyes glowing"
98.45% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
2"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
3"Isolde warned (warn)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences97
tagDensity0.134
leniency0.268
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.103
78.4048%