Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBE27TDT4CT2P21HCT3PGB4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 60s
Cost:
$0.028708
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed aside a curtain of weeping willow branches. The air inside the circle tasted different, metallic and sweet like overripe pears. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the weight familiar against her hip. The Heartstone Pendant pressed against her collarbone, warm enough to leave a phantom mark on her skin. Nyx trailed behind her, a smear of darkness against the twilight. Their form shifted constantly, edges blurring into the surrounding shadows. Violet eyes tracked the ground, scanning for movement that shouldn't exist. Keep moving. The boundary won't hold forever. Nyx's voice drifted on the wind, lacking a physical source. It sounded like dry leaves skittering over pavement. Aurora stepped over a root thick as a man's thigh. The bark pulsed with a faint rhythm, matching her own heartbeat. She pulled the Fae-Forged Blade from her belt. The moonsilver edge hummed, cold against her palm. Isolde walked ahead without sound. Silver hair cascaded down her back, catching light that didn't seem to come from the sun. The Half-Fae paused at the edge of a clearing, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the horizon. The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks petrified into gray monoliths. They marked the edge of the pocket. Beyond them, the sky shifted from the gray of Richmond Park to a bruised purple. The pendant flared crimson. Heat radiated through the fabric of her shirt. Aurora touched the gemstone. It pulsed faster, a warning drum. Too close. Nyx solidified, stepping into the light. The shadow-man stood tall, six-foot-two of living ink. We are walking into a throat. Aurora ignored the chill crawling up her spine. She needed answers. The Veil thinned here. She could feel the pressure change, the air growing heavy and thick. Isolde turned. Her expression remained serene, ageless. The path bends where the truth is sharp. Aurora tightened her grip on the dagger. The cold metal bit into her fingers. You know where we are going. I know where the hunger waits. Isolde gestured toward the stones. The wildflowers at her feet bloomed and withered in the span of a breath. Time twisted in this place. Aurora moved forward. The ground felt spongy, like moss over a grave. She stepped carefully, avoiding the patches where the grass glowed with bioluminescent veins. Nyx lingered by her side, a silent guardian. Shadows here taste like ash. Aurora glanced at the Shade. Their violet eyes dimmed. Stay close. They passed the first stone. The air shimmered, a heat haze without the heat. The Veil rippled. Aurora squinted, seeing the distortion clearly. It looked like oil on water, swirling in patterns that hurt to follow. The Heartstone grew hot. She pulled it out from her shirt. The deep crimson gem glowed with an inner light, casting red shadows on her hands. A portal. Nyx flickered, their form dissolving into smoke before reforming. Not a door. A wound. Aurora sheathed the pendant. The heat lingered. She looked at Isolde. How deep does it go? As deep as you are willing to fall. Isolde's voice carried no malice, only the weight of inevitability. She walked toward the shimmer. Her bare feet left no prints on the moss. Aurora followed. The blade felt heavy now, a counterweight to the pull of the rift. The air grew colder, smelling of sulfur and old wine. Dymas. The word formed in Aurora's mind without sound. The realm of Gluttony. The pendant knew. Nyx moved to the front, blocking the path. Their shadowy hand extended, fingers elongating like smoke. Wait. Aurora stopped. The ground beneath her feet vibrated. Low rumbles traveled up through her boots. What is it? Something answers the call. Nyx's voice dropped an octave, resonating in Aurora's chest. The violet eyes flared brighter. Aurora looked past the Shade. Through the distortion, shapes moved. They looked like people, but wrong. Limbs too long, faces blurred. They feasted on something unseen. She tightened her grip on the hilt of the Fae blade. The moonsilver hummed louder, a song of violence. We don't have a choice. Isolde stepped through the shimmer. The light swallowed her silver hair. She vanished into the distortion. Aurora hesitated. The heat from the pendant burned her skin. Nyx watched her. Go. I will hold the edge. Aurora nodded. She stepped forward. The sensation of crossing was like walking through a curtain of ice water. The cold bit her skin, numbing her fingers. The world shifted. The purple sky darkened to amber. The air tasted of spices and rot. She stumbled onto solid ground. The grass here was golden, dry and brittle. The trees bore fruit that looked like human eyes. Nyx materialized beside her, solid and dark against the amber light. Isolde stood ahead, looking at a structure in the distance. A tower made of bone and gold. Aurora drew the blade. The light caught the edge, scattering sparks. Where do we go? Follow the hunger. Isolde pointed toward the tower. The Heartstone pulsed in time with the wind. Aurora walked forward. The ground crunched under her boots. The sound echoed too loudly, carrying far across the flat plain. Nyx scanned the horizon. They see us. Aurora looked up. Figures stood atop the ridge. Tall, draped in silks that moved without wind. They watched with empty sockets. She raised the blade. The cold seeped into her arm. Let them look. Nyx laughed, a sound like cracking glass. They will want to taste. Aurora ignored the warning. She moved toward the tower. The distance seemed to stretch and shrink. The Veil behind them thinned to nothing. Isolde stopped at the base of a vine. It writhed, seeking purchase on her skin. Do not touch. Aurora reached out. The vine recoiled. What is this place? A banquet. Isolde turned. Her eyes held a depth of sorrow that spanned centuries. Aurora looked at the pendant. It burned white hot. We need to find the source. Isolde nodded once. She turned back to the tower. Aurora followed. The ground trembled. A low groan rose from the earth. Nyx shifted, becoming a wall of shadow between them and the ridge. I will buy time. Aurora didn't look back. She ran toward the tower. The heat of the pendant guided her steps. The air grew thick with the scent of roasting meat. She reached the steps. They spiraled upward, carved from a single piece of obsidian. Aurora placed a foot on the first step. The stone hummed. Nyx vanished. Isolde stood at the top of the stairs, waiting. Aurora climbed. The cold of the blade balanced the heat of the gem. She reached the top. A door stood open. Light poured out, blinding and golden. Isolde stepped aside. Enter. Aurora stepped into the light.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:17:41.97Z" 2/25/2026, 10:17:41 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count3
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"grave"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"structure"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"scanned"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"scanning"
3"pulsed"
4"loomed"
5"chill"
6"could feel"
7"grave"
8"shimmered"
9"flickered"
10"vibrated"
11"structure"
12"echoed"
13"scanned"
14"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences178
matches(empty)
94.70% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences178
filterMatches
0"know"
1"see"
2"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences178
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1120
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
29.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1120
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Half-Fae1
Richmond1
Park1
Veil3
Shade2
Isolde13
Aurora27
Gluttony1
Fae3
Nyx13
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Blade"
3"Half-Fae"
4"Veil"
5"Isolde"
6"Aurora"
7"Fae"
8"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Shade"
globalScore0.295
windowScore0.5
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like dry leaves skittering over pa"
1"looked like oil on water, swirling in pat"
2"looked like people, but wrong"
3"looked like human eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1120
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean12.58
std10.08
cv0.801
sampleLengths
053
132
27
318
437
538
633
712
810
92
1014
116
1227
137
148
1514
166
176
1824
1925
208
215
229
232
2436
2526
262
279
285
2911
305
318
3224
3325
341
3515
3616
371
3815
393
404
4114
4226
4319
445
4516
4610
473
486
4926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs215
matches
0"was like walking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences178
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1125
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.020444444444444446
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0044444444444444444
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences178
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences178
mean6.29
std3.43
cv0.545
sampleLengths
09
113
214
317
411
510
611
72
85
910
108
1110
1211
138
148
155
1616
1717
1811
197
2015
214
228
234
246
252
266
278
286
298
303
314
3212
332
345
358
367
377
386
396
405
4114
425
433
449
4513
468
475
485
494
42.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2303370786516854
totalSentences178
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences159
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Their form shifted constantly, edges"
2"It sounded like dry leaves"
3"She pulled the Fae-Forged Blade"
4"They marked the edge of"
5"It pulsed faster, a warning"
6"We are walking into a"
7"She needed answers."
8"She could feel the pressure"
9"Her expression remained serene, ageless."
10"You know where we are"
11"I know where the hunger"
12"She stepped carefully, avoiding the"
13"Their violet eyes dimmed."
14"They passed the first stone."
15"It looked like oil on"
16"She pulled it out from"
17"She looked at Isolde."
18"She walked toward the shimmer."
19"Her bare feet left no"
ratio0.277
7.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount144
totalSentences159
matches
0"Aurora pushed aside a curtain"
1"The air inside the circle"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"The Heartstone Pendant pressed against"
4"Nyx trailed behind her, a"
5"Their form shifted constantly, edges"
6"Violet eyes tracked the ground,"
7"The boundary won't hold forever."
8"Nyx's voice drifted on the"
9"It sounded like dry leaves"
10"Aurora stepped over a root"
11"The bark pulsed with a"
12"She pulled the Fae-Forged Blade"
13"The moonsilver edge hummed, cold"
14"Isolde walked ahead without sound."
15"The Half-Fae paused at the"
16"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
17"They marked the edge of"
18"The pendant flared crimson."
19"Heat radiated through the fabric"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her eyes held a depth of sorrow that spanned centuries."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.8525%