Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBE5AQSGK8FGJYXQ61HE4VX

Run Details

Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.010311
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates of Richmond Park groaned under the pressure of a wind that smelled of ozone and wet soil. Rory stood at the threshold, the cold biting through her jacket. She pulled the Heartstone Pendant up to her throat, her fingers tracing the silver chain. The gem rested against her sternum, a dull weight that turned warm at the first step into the tree line. The glow of the crimson stone flickered beneath her clothes, pulsing in rhythm with her own heartbeat. Aurora pulled her coat tighter. The boundary markers stood ten meters to her left and right. Ancient oak stones jutted from the turf like broken teeth. They hummed. Not a sound, but a vibration that rattled her teeth. She checked her watch. The second hand spun backward for three ticks, then froze. She tapped the crystal face. Nothing changed. She shoved the device into her pocket and walked past the left standing stone. Wildflowers carpeted the ground. Snowdrops and crocuses pushed through the frost, their petals wide open despite the freezing air. Rory stopped. She knew the season. The earth smelled wrong, too rich and sweet, cloying like spilled syrup. She inhaled through her mouth, keeping her eyes on the path ahead. The air grew heavy. Every step required more effort than the last, as if gravity increased with every meter she crossed into the pocket. Her breath plumed before her, white and thick. She heard the crunch of a twig behind her, sharp and dry. She spun around. Nothing moved in the tree line. Just the swaying shadow of a single oak branch against the moon. Rory took a breath and kept walking. She needed to find the portal. The pendant heated up now, hot enough to sting the skin of her chest. It pointed her forward, a magnetic pull in the dark. The path twisted. She turned a corner and the woods stretched out further than they should have. The distance between the stones doubled. The Grove did not respect linear measurement. An hour inside could be minutes outside. She looked at her watch again. The hands had not moved. Time pooled here like water in a drain. A sound drifted on the wind. Not an animal. A whisper. Rory froze. She strained her ears against the ambient hum of the trees. The voice was low, rasping, like stone grinding on stone. It came from her right, hidden by the mass of a large boulder. You are late. Her muscles tightened. She did not answer immediately. She scanned the shadows, her blue eyes searching for movement. The darkness felt solid here, pressing against her skin. She adjusted her grip on her phone in her pocket, though the screen remained dark. I am not late, Rory replied. Her voice sounded thin in the open space. The whisper shifted. It moved through the air, changing direction as if the wind carried it differently. Late is a concept for the surface. Here, you are overdue. Rory took a step back. Her heel slipped on the damp earth. She regained her balance. The pendant burned against her skin, the heat intensifying. She needed to move closer to the source. The Hel portal sat near the center, where the stones formed a perfect circle. You are alone, the voice said. It was close now, right beside her ear. She jerked her head away, shaking her hair out of her face. I know, Rory said. She kept her eyes forward. Her hand found the pocket knife on her belt. She did not pull it. She just let her fingers rest on the handle. The air cooled instantly. Frost spiderwebbed across the wildflowers at her feet, turning them brittle. She watched the flowers shatter under her boot. The sound was loud, a crack that echoed too much. You should not have come, the voice murmured. The tone shifted from threat to curiosity. It sounded like a human voice distorted, stretched over a long duration. Why? To open the door. Rory stopped. The ground beneath her feet felt soft, yielding like flesh. She lifted her foot. The grass left no impression, but the soil felt spongy. She moved forward slowly. The pendant pulsed a violent crimson against her chest. She felt the pull of the portal dragging at her navel. There is no one else, Rory stated. She scanned the perimeter. The standing stones lined up. The Grove was empty. The silence was absolute now, the wind having died. Silence stretched. Then, a footstep. Rory turned. Five meters away, the shadow of a tree detached itself from the bark. The shape stood upright. It had no face, just smooth skin where features should have been. It took a step toward her. The pendant flared hot enough to blister. Rory backed away, her eyes locked on the smooth face. The entity stopped. It tilted its head, mimicking a human gesture but with the jerky motion of a marionette. You brought the stone, it said. I brought nothing but my curiosity, Rory lied. She gripped her phone tighter. The stone knows you are here. The stone knows the blood. Rory stepped to the left, trying to flank the entity. The ground remained soft. She sank an inch into the turf with every step. Panic rose in her throat, but she forced it down. Cool-headed. She needed to calculate the exit. The door is open, the entity whispered. The mouth did not move. The sound came from inside the stone itself. Rory spun back to the circle of stones. The entrance behind her had vanished. The tree line had grown closer. The distance between her and the entity shrunk. The figure raised a hand. A long finger, pale and jointless, pointed at her chest. Give it. No. The figure lunged. The movement was too fast for the eye to track. Rory dove. She hit the ground hard, rolling over a patch of wildflowers. The entity skidded past her, its hand tearing through the air where her neck had been. Rory scrambled up. Her heart hammered against her ribs. The entity stood over her. It raised a second hand. The air around the hands began to warp. The colors bled into each other, purple and red. Rory grabbed a handful of dirt and threw it. The dust hit the smooth face and vanished instantly. The entity didn't blink. The pendant slipped from her neck. It hit the grass and began to glow so brightly it cast a long shadow. The light illuminated the Grove. The trees stretched tall, their branches clawing at the sky. The flowers bloomed instantly, exploding into bloom and then rotting in the same second. Rory stood up. She did not run. She faced the thing. Take it. The word echoed. The entity stepped forward. Rory looked at the ground. The Heartstone pulsed in time with her pulse. The connection was breaking. She reached for the gem. Her fingers brushed the silver chain. The heat was unbearable now. She grabbed the stone and held it in her palm. The entity paused. It is hungry, the voice said. The sound vibrated in her bones. It is dead, Rory said. She clenched her hand around the gem. The crimson stone dimmed. The light retreated into the core. The entity tilted its head again. The smooth skin rippled. It is never dead. The ground shuddered. The standing stones vibrated. Rory felt the hair on her arms stand up. The smell of ozone grew stronger, burning her nose. She looked at the sky. The clouds were gone. The night sky was gone. Only a swirling vortex of grey and black remained. The entity took a step closer. Its shadow stretched over her, covering her feet. Rory backed up until her back hit a standing stone. Cold metal pressed against her spine. She held the pendant up. The light flared again, forcing the entity to recoil. Do not come closer. The entity stopped. It stood ten feet away. We will see. The ground beneath Rory shifted. She looked down. The grass had turned to ash. Her foot fell through the surface, kicking up grey dust. She pulled her leg back. The ground was dissolving. The pendant cooled in her hand. The glow faded. The entity watched her. Time is running out, the voice whispered. It was no longer a whisper. It spoke directly in her mind. Rory looked at the edge of the Grove. The iron gates stood twenty meters away. But between them, a barrier of fog blocked the path. She turned back to the entity. How do I leave? The entity did not answer. It simply raised a hand and pointed at the ground. Look down. Rory knelt. The ash beneath her hand began to swirl. Shapes formed in the dust. A map. A path. It pointed back toward the city. Go. The entity stepped aside. Rory stood. She took the pendant from her palm and clipped it back to her chain. The cold metal felt dead now. You are leaving, the entity said. I am. The fog around the gate swirled. The path cleared. The entity stepped into the shadow of the stone. It blended in, becoming part of the darkness. Next time, you will not be so lucky. Rory walked toward the gate. She kept her eyes on the ground. The ash crunched under her boots. She reached the iron bars. They were cold. She pushed through. The fog did not resist. She stepped out into the park. The wind hit her face. It was real. It smelled of rain and city exhaust. Rory turned. The iron gates stood empty. The stones were gone. The Grove did not exist. She walked back toward the road. The pendant grew cold against her chest. She kept walking. She kept listening. The trees behind her rustled. No wind moved them. The leaves moved without wind. She did not look back. She kept her pace even. She needed to get to the flat. She needed to get to the phone. She needed to get out. The shadow of a man walked beside her on the pavement. Rory stopped. The shadow detached from the lamp post and stretched across the road. Rory turned slowly. The figure wore the clothes of a delivery driver. She wore the clothes of a delivery driver. The face was blank. Smooth skin. No mouth. I do not know you, Rory said. You know me, the figure said. Rory reached for her pocket. Her hand touched the phone. Get out of my way. The figure smiled. The mouth formed on the smooth skin. I am already inside. Rory looked at her phone. The screen lit up. A text message appeared. It was from herself. *Do not go home.* She dropped the phone. It hit the wet pavement and shattered. The sound was loud. The figure moved closer. The streetlights flickered and died. Rory backed up. The wall of a building pressed against her back. She had nowhere to go. The shadow of the man grew. It covered her whole body. The wind stopped. The silence was absolute. The figure leaned in close. The cold breath hit her cheek. Run, the figure whispered. Rory ran. The street stretched out before her. The pavement ended. The world ended. She fell into darkness. The pendant pulsed. One last time. Then silence.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1892
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1892
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count3
6
word"scanned"
count2
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count3
10
word"silence"
count4
11
word"calculate"
count1
12
word"long shadow"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count2
15
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"weight"
2"flickered"
3"crystal"
4"magnetic"
5"whisper"
6"scanned"
7"perfect"
8"echoed"
9"pulsed"
10"silence"
11"calculate"
12"long shadow"
13"pulse"
14"vibrated"
15"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences297
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences297
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences297
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1892
ratio0.002
matches
0"Do not go home."
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions6
matches
0"I am not late, Rory replied."
1"I know, Rory said."
2"You brought the stone, it said."
3"I brought nothing but my curiosity, Rory lied."
4"It is dead, Rory said."
5"I do not know you, Rory said."
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1892
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Grove5
Rory35
Hel1
You6
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Grove"
2"Rory"
3"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.575
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences148
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a human voice distorted, stre"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.529
wordCount1892
matches
0"Not a sound, but a vibration"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences297
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean19.92
std17.71
cv0.889
sampleLengths
083
173
249
365
437
556
611
736
83
942
1014
1117
1211
1347
1426
1532
1633
1727
181
194
2050
2129
225
2337
2436
256
2613
2711
2841
2920
3043
312
321
333
3448
3527
3622
3750
3811
392
407
4143
423
4312
4422
4510
464
4748
4814
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences297
matches
0"were gone"
1"was gone"
2"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs366
matches
0"was breaking"
1"was dissolving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences297
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1893
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.02746962493396725
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.005810882197569995
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences297
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences297
mean6.37
std3.56
cv0.558
sampleLengths
020
111
215
320
417
55
611
710
82
910
104
1110
125
132
1414
154
1615
172
184
1912
2012
214
2220
238
2412
253
266
2712
287
296
3014
3110
323
3314
346
357
367
376
385
398
406
413
422
432
4411
4510
4613
473
483
495
32.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats51
diversityRatio0.16161616161616163
totalSentences297
uniqueOpeners48
37.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences270
matches
0"Just the swaying shadow of"
1"Then, a footstep."
2"Only a swirling vortex of"
ratio0.011
65.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount104
totalSentences270
matches
0"She pulled the Heartstone Pendant"
1"She checked her watch."
2"She tapped the crystal face."
3"She shoved the device into"
4"She knew the season."
5"She inhaled through her mouth,"
6"Her breath plumed before her,"
7"She heard the crunch of"
8"She spun around."
9"She needed to find the"
10"It pointed her forward, a"
11"She turned a corner and"
12"She looked at her watch"
13"She strained her ears against"
14"It came from her right,"
15"You are late."
16"Her muscles tightened."
17"She did not answer immediately."
18"She scanned the shadows, her"
19"She adjusted her grip on"
ratio0.385
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount249
totalSentences270
matches
0"The iron gates of Richmond"
1"Rory stood at the threshold,"
2"She pulled the Heartstone Pendant"
3"The gem rested against her"
4"The glow of the crimson"
5"Aurora pulled her coat tighter."
6"The boundary markers stood ten"
7"She checked her watch."
8"The second hand spun backward"
9"She tapped the crystal face."
10"She shoved the device into"
11"Wildflowers carpeted the ground."
12"Snowdrops and crocuses pushed through"
13"She knew the season."
14"The earth smelled wrong, too"
15"She inhaled through her mouth,"
16"The air grew heavy."
17"Every step required more effort"
18"Her breath plumed before her,"
19"She heard the crunch of"
ratio0.922
18.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences270
matches
0"To open the door."
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.9224%