Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBEBWEYCQMXJ30MQT7JMJDY

Run Details

Duration:
28.8s
Cost:
$0.011001
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid home with a heavy, metallic clunk that echoed in the narrow hallway. Aurora Carter hesitated, her hand still resting on the cold brass handle, before turning it. She hadn't expected visitors, not here, not on a Tuesday night when the air outside was thick with the damp chill of East London and the scent of cumin and turmeric rising from the curry house below. She pulled the door open, ready to tell whoever it was to go away, but the words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, blocking the dim light of the hallway. He looked exactly as she remembered, which was the problem. The tailored charcoal suit fit his frame like a second skin, the fabric absorbing the shadows of the stairwell. His hair, slicked back and platinum blond, gleamed under the flickering bulb above. But it was his eyes that stopped her breath. One amber, burning like a dying ember, the other a void of absolute black. They held a predator's stillness, fixed on her with an intensity that made the small crescent scar on her left wrist prickle. Aurora didn't step back. She held her ground, her shoulders square, though her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. "Lucien," she said. The name felt heavy, weighted with everything they hadn't said six months ago. "Rory," he replied. His voice was smooth, accented with the faintest trace of Marseille, a sound that used to make her feel safe and now made her feel hunted. "I was told you were here. I see the rumors were correct." He didn't move to enter. He didn't offer a greeting beyond the name. He simply leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the tip resting on the worn wooden floor of the hallway. Aurora knew the cane concealed a blade, a fact that usually comforted her when he was an ally, but now it felt like a threat. "You're not supposed to be here," she said, keeping her voice low. She glanced over her shoulder into the flat. The room was a disaster of organized chaos, just as Eva left it. Stacks of books and scrolls teetered on every surface, a testament to Eva's obsession with the supernatural underworld. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, sat on the arm of the sofa, staring at Lucien with unblinking green eyes. "I am rarely where I am supposed to be," Lucien said. He shifted his weight, the movement fluid, almost unnatural. "May I come in? The hallway is drafty, and I would prefer not to discuss this where the neighbors can hear." Aurora's mind raced. If she let him in, she invited the danger he represented into Eva's sanctuary. If she didn't, he might force his way past the three deadbolts, and she knew he was capable of it. She stepped back, gripping the door frame. "Five minutes," she said. Lucien stepped past her, bringing with him the scent of expensive cologne and something darker, like ozone and old dust. He didn't walk so much as glide, his cane tapping a soft rhythm against the floorboards. He stopped in the center of the room, looking around at the clutter with mild disdain before his gaze settled back on her. "You look tired," he observed. "I work deliveries," Aurora snapped, closing the door and re-engaging the deadbolts. The click sounded final. "I don't get to sleep in on Tuesdays. What do you want, Lucien?" He turned, the amber eye catching the lamplight while the black one remained hidden in shadow. "I want to know why you're hiding in a flat above a curry house in Brick Lane when you should be in Cardiff." "I'm not hiding." "You are," he corrected gently. "You left the city. You left the job. You left me." The air between them grew tight, charged with the static of unfinished business. Aurora crossed her arms, covering the scar on her wrist instinctively. "We agreed there was nothing left to say. You're a fixer, Lucien. I'm... I'm just trying to survive without Evan finding me." "Evan is not the only thing that hunts in the dark," Lucien said. He took a step closer. The proximity was intoxicating and terrifying. She could see the fine lines around his eyes, the tension in his jaw. "There are things in Avaros that are waking up, things that smell blood. Or fear." "I'm not afraid of you," she lied. Lucien smiled, a small, sad expression that didn't reach his eyes. "No. You're afraid of what you feel when I'm near. That is the only thing that makes sense." He reached out, his hand hovering near her face. Aurora didn't pull away. She wanted to, every instinct screamed at her to run, but she stood rooted. His fingers were cool, calloused. He didn't touch her skin, just traced the air near her cheekbone. "I told you to stay away," she whispered. "You told me to leave because you thought I was dangerous," Lucien said. "You were right. But you forgot that danger is a currency, and I am the only one who knows how to spend it." Aurora's gaze dropped to the cane in his hand. "Why are you really here?" "To offer protection," he said. "Or to warn you. Depending on how you answer me." "Warn me about what?" "About the fact that you are not alone in this city," he said. "There are eyes watching this flat. Not human eyes." Aurora felt a chill crawl up her spine. She looked at Ptolemy, who had stood up and was now arching his back, hissing softly at the corner of the room. She hadn't heard anything. "You're scaring me," she said, her voice trembling slightly. "I am trying to save you," Lucien replied. He finally lowered his hand, the moment of intimacy breaking like glass. "I did not come here to argue, Rory. I came here because I could not leave you to the wolves." "I don't need a savior." "No," he agreed, stepping back toward the door. "You need a partner. But you have always been too proud to ask for help." He stopped at the threshold, his hand on the doorknob. The light from the hallway framed him in silhouette, making him look like a cutout of darkness against the world. "Stay behind the locks tonight," Lucien said. "Do not answer the door unless you see me. I will be watching." "Lucien," she called out before he could open it. He paused, looking back over his shoulder. The heterochromatic eyes glowed in the dim light. "Why?" she asked. "After everything. Why do you care?" Lucien's expression softened, the hard edges of his face blurring for a second. "Because you are the only one who ever looked at me and saw a man, not a monster. And because I am not ready to let you go." He opened the door and stepped out into the hallway. Before she could respond, he was gone, the sound of his cane fading down the stairs. Aurora stood alone in the cluttered room, the smell of curry from below mixing with the lingering scent of his cologne. Ptolemy jumped down from the sofa and wound himself around her ankles, purring loudly. She locked the door again, her hand shaking as she touched the cold brass. She looked down at her wrist, the small scar standing out against her pale skin. She knew he was right. She was hiding. But as she walked to the window to look down at the street, she saw the shadow of a man in a charcoal suit standing in the alleyway below, watching the flat, waiting. She pulled the curtains shut, her heart still racing, the space in the room feeling both too small and infinitely vast without him there.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he corrected gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.05
84.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1299
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1299
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"predator"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"testament"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"chill"
2"predator"
3"intensity"
4"testament"
5"weight"
6"raced"
7"sanctuary"
8"charged"
9"tension"
10"traced"
11"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"felt a chill"
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"feel feel"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1299
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount932
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Tuesday1
East1
London1
Moreau1
Marseille1
Eva4
Lucien10
Aurora10
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Aurora"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.964
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a threat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1299
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean30.93
std22.24
cv0.719
sampleLengths
068
121
2100
321
416
541
656
768
841
944
104
1159
125
1329
1439
153
1616
1746
1853
197
2029
2144
228
2336
2414
2515
264
2722
2834
299
3040
315
3223
3330
3420
359
3615
379
3841
3961
4070
4124
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was hiding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences104
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount933
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.028938906752411574
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011789924973204717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.49
std6.93
cv0.554
sampleLengths
016
115
237
321
413
510
619
713
89
914
1022
114
1217
133
1413
153
1626
1712
185
198
2018
2125
2212
238
2413
2518
2617
2711
289
2921
303
3114
3220
337
344
3520
3616
3723
385
3912
404
4113
4216
4323
443
455
4611
4713
4811
4922
37.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2980769230769231
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
2.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences70
matches
0"She hadn't expected visitors, not"
1"She pulled the door open,"
2"He looked exactly as she"
3"His hair, slicked back and"
4"They held a predator's stillness,"
5"She held her ground, her"
6"His voice was smooth, accented"
7"He didn't move to enter."
8"He didn't offer a greeting"
9"He simply leaned on his"
10"she said, keeping her voice"
11"She glanced over her shoulder"
12"He shifted his weight, the"
13"She stepped back, gripping the"
14"He didn't walk so much"
15"He stopped in the center"
16"He turned, the amber eye"
17"he corrected gently"
18"He took a step closer."
19"She could see the fine"
ratio0.543
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences70
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid home"
1"Aurora Carter hesitated, her hand"
2"She hadn't expected visitors, not"
3"She pulled the door open,"
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"He looked exactly as she"
6"The tailored charcoal suit fit"
7"His hair, slicked back and"
8"They held a predator's stillness,"
9"Aurora didn't step back."
10"She held her ground, her"
11"The name felt heavy, weighted"
12"His voice was smooth, accented"
13"He didn't move to enter."
14"He didn't offer a greeting"
15"He simply leaned on his"
16"Aurora knew the cane concealed"
17"she said, keeping her voice"
18"She glanced over her shoulder"
19"The room was a disaster"
ratio0.914
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"If she let him in,"
1"If she didn't, he might"
2"Before she could respond, he"
ratio0.043
93.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"They held a predator's stillness, fixed on her with an intensity that made the small crescent scar on her left wrist prickle."
1"His voice was smooth, accented with the faintest trace of Marseille, a sound that used to make her feel safe and now made her feel hunted."
2"She looked at Ptolemy, who had stood up and was now arching his back, hissing softly at the corner of the room."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice trembling slightly"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"Aurora snapped (snap)"
2"he corrected gently (correct)"
3"she lied (lie)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.475
leniency0.95
rawRatio0.316
effectiveRatio0.3
81.5324%