Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBEBYZ5F79HS1D2B70T3KER

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.010700
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy metal tumbler clicked. Rory pulled the first deadbolt back, the bolt sliding into the receiver with a hollow clack. She shifted her weight, the second lock resisting before she gave it a sharp shove. The chain rattled, then fell silent. She gripped the handle, knuckles white, and turned the key. Light spilled into the hallway from the street, cutting a sharp rectangle across the floorboards. She didn't open the door fully. She held it just wide enough to see the person standing there. Lucien Moreau didn't blink. He stood on the landing, wearing a charcoal suit that swallowed the evening light. Rain droplets clung to the lapels of his coat. He leaned heavily on an ivory-handled cane, the metal tip tapping against the brick of the step. His platinum hair stayed dry under the hood of the building's awning. Rory kept the door half-closed. She had three deadbolts for a reason. You aren't on the list, she said. The cat on the sofa behind her shifted. Ptolemy meowed, a long, mournful sound, before settling back down. Books stacked on every surface of the cramped one-bedroom blocked the path to the window. You know I am not on the list, Lucien said. His voice held a French lilt that had worn off, rougher now. He stepped forward. Rory held the door in place, the wood digging into her palm. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face. He looked through her, looking past the exhaustion in her blue eyes to the fatigue in her bones. Why are you here? To ask if you ate. I work. He stepped around her hand, pushing the door open. He didn't wait for an invitation. He crossed the threshold, closing the gap between them. The smell of his cologne, wood smoke and expensive rain, clashed with the curry spices drifting up from the kitchen below. Ptolemy hissed at the intruder. Lucien didn't look down. He looked at Rory. He took off his coat and draped it over the armchair. The motion was slow, calculated. You locked it, Rory said. She stepped back, letting her shoulders brush the door frame. The wood was cold. Because Evan knows where I live now. I heard he is in Cardiff. He got out. The room fell silent. The hum of the curry house vent below vibrated through the floor. Lucien walked into the living space, his cane clicking against the floorboards. He stopped in front of the stacks of research notes piled on the table. He picked up a paper with a gloved hand and set it back down. I told you to be careful. You told me to be smart. Smart does not mean invisible. He turned. He towered over her at five-eleven, but his posture made him look taller. He crossed his arms. The sleeves of his suit jacket pulled tight across his shoulders. I am not here to lecture you, Lucien said. Then why did you come? He pulled a folded piece of paper from his pocket. He held it out. His fingers were long, manicured, clean. This came to the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei said it is for you. Rory didn't move. She stared at the paper, then at his hand. Her left hand, the one with the small crescent-shaped scar across the wrist, hovered near the doorframe. She took the paper. The envelope was thick. The paper inside rustled. What is it? Names. Dates. Locations. Rory scanned the page. Her heart rate didn't spike. She didn't. She just felt the weight of the paper in her grip. She folded it and put it in her pocket. Evan isn't the only one looking, Lucien said. He walked toward her. The air between them grew heavy. Rory could smell the rain on his coat. She wanted to step back. She wanted to step forward. She did neither. They know you are the one who took the evidence? They know you are the witness. The cat jumped off the sofa and walked under the table. Lucien looked down at the cat, then back at her. I can get you out. Rory laughed. The sound was dry. Out where? There are safe houses. I am not hiding in a house with a bed. I am working. I am delivering food. I am in the middle of the street. Lucien set his hand on the table, next to her elbow. The leather of his glove creaked. You are in danger. I am in London. I know. He stepped closer. The distance closed. He could see the fine hairs on her arm. She could see the flecks of black in his amber eye. The contrast in his gaze unnerved her. He wasn't human. The air around him felt static. You think I don't know? Rory said. She looked down at his hand on the table. I think you don't care. I care about the safety of the people I feed. Not the people I don't. The cane tapped the floor once. You are dangerous, Lucien said. His voice dropped an octave. I am a delivery person. You are the only person who walked out of Avaros alive. The room went cold. Rory swallowed. She stepped back, putting her back against the door again. The handle was cold against her spine. I am not talking about that. You are always talking about that. Lucien moved his hand. He reached out and touched her wrist. He touched the scar. His thumb brushed the pale skin over the bone. She flinched, but she didn't pull away. His touch was warm. He held her wrist for a second, then released her. I am not leaving you here alone. Who says you are leaving? He pulled his hand back and shoved it into his pocket. The police have been here. Who? Local constabulary. They asked about the packages. They didn't find anything. They found the name. Rory opened her mouth, but no words came out. She looked at the pile of books. They were ancient texts, scrolls wrapped in cloth. Eva is gone. Rory said. Eva is busy. She is in her study. The cat meowed again. Ptolemy sat on the back of the sofa, watching the two of them. I am not going to a safe house, Rory said. Then you go home. My home is the flat above the bar. Your home is a building that is not a fortress. Lucien leaned against the table. The books shifted. I am telling you because I can. I am not asking you to tell me. You asked when you opened the door. She didn't open the door. I opened it. Lucien smiled. It didn't reach his eyes. I did not ask you to let me in. Rory grabbed the paper from her pocket. She held it up. If you leave now, I will burn this. Lucien watched the paper. He didn't argue. You will not. I have matches in the kitchen. He stood up straight. He stepped away from the table. The tension in the room snapped like a rubber band. I am not your enemy, Lucien said. You are a fixer. You are my ally. I am your liability. She walked toward the kitchen door. Her hand hovered over the knob. I am the reason you are alive. I am the reason you are breathing. They stood apart in the middle of the room. The rain started to hit the window. The sound was loud, rhythmic. Go, Rory said. No. Go. She locked the deadbolt. The sound echoed through the room. Lucien didn't move. He looked at the door. He looked at her. He turned and walked to the door. He put his hand on the frame. I will wait outside. In the rain? I do not mind the rain. He opened the door. The sound of the street washed in. Sirens. Car tires on wet asphalt. Rory didn't lock it. She just held the door. She watched him step out. He didn't look back. He stood on the landing, looking down the stairs. She let the door swing shut. The deadbolt slid. She leaned against it. Her breathing was steady. Ptolemy walked over and rubbed against her leg. She scratched the cat behind the ears. She walked to the window and pulled back the curtain. The street below was empty. Lucien stood in the shadow of the doorframe on the first landing. He watched the window. He didn't move. He just waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"lilt"
2"calculated"
3"vibrated"
4"scanned"
5"tension"
6"rhythmic"
7"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"room fell silent"
count1
highlights
0"The room fell silent"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences220
matches(empty)
90.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount7
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences220
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences220
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1411
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions7
matches
0"You know I am not on the list, Lucien said."
1"You locked it, Rory said."
2"I am not here to lecture you, Lucien said."
3"You are dangerous, Lucien said."
4"I am not going to a safe house, Rory said."
5"I am not your enemy, Lucien said."
6"Go, Rory said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1411
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Lucien16
French1
Rory17
Evan2
Cardiff1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Avaros1
You13
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"You"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Golden"
2"London"
globalScore0.898
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1411
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences220
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs108
mean13.06
std12.67
cv0.97
sampleLengths
052
133
256
312
47
533
622
742
84
95
102
1145
125
1324
1419
157
166
173
1856
196
206
215
2230
239
245
2520
2612
2741
283
293
3031
318
3231
3310
346
3521
365
376
382
394
4025
4117
424
434
442
4542
4616
475
4815
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences220
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs303
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences220
ratio0.005
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1419
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.021141649048625793
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0035236081747709656
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences220
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences220
mean6.41
std3.58
cv0.558
sampleLengths
05
116
215
36
410
515
66
712
84
914
109
1117
1212
135
147
157
168
1710
1815
1910
2012
213
2212
239
2418
254
265
272
289
296
309
3121
325
334
344
3511
365
375
3810
394
407
416
423
434
4412
4512
4614
4714
486
496
33.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats36
diversityRatio0.18636363636363637
totalSentences220
uniqueOpeners41
33.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences202
matches
0"Then why did you come?"
1"Then you go home."
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount126
totalSentences202
matches
0"She shifted her weight, the"
1"She gripped the handle, knuckles"
2"She didn't open the door"
3"She held it just wide"
4"He stood on the landing,"
5"He leaned heavily on an"
6"His platinum hair stayed dry"
7"She had three deadbolts for"
8"You aren't on the list,"
9"You know I am not"
10"His voice held a French"
11"He stepped forward."
12"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
13"He looked through her, looking"
14"He stepped around her hand,"
15"He didn't wait for an"
16"He crossed the threshold, closing"
17"He looked at Rory."
18"He took off his coat"
19"You locked it, Rory said."
ratio0.624
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount188
totalSentences202
matches
0"The heavy metal tumbler clicked."
1"Rory pulled the first deadbolt"
2"She shifted her weight, the"
3"The chain rattled, then fell"
4"She gripped the handle, knuckles"
5"Light spilled into the hallway"
6"She didn't open the door"
7"She held it just wide"
8"Lucien Moreau didn't blink."
9"He stood on the landing,"
10"He leaned heavily on an"
11"His platinum hair stayed dry"
12"Rory kept the door half-closed."
13"She had three deadbolts for"
14"You aren't on the list,"
15"The cat on the sofa"
16"Ptolemy meowed, a long, mournful"
17"Books stacked on every surface"
18"You know I am not"
19"His voice held a French"
ratio0.931
74.26% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences202
matches
0"To ask if you ate."
1"Because Evan knows where I"
2"If you leave now, I"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He stood on the landing, wearing a charcoal suit that swallowed the evening light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.5764%