Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBEEK9VH5SQZV5CKMA8J8SC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 21s
Cost:
$0.015959
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed above the entrance, casting a sickly pallor over the wet pavement of Soho. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung heavy with the scent of stale tobacco and polished oak. Old maps lined the walls, their edges curling like dried leaves under the dim light of the sconces. Black-and-white photographs captured moments long dead, faces staring out from the shadows. Rory wiped a glass with a rag that had seen better days. Her bright blue eyes tracked the reflection in the polished surface. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light as she twisted the fabric. She lived above this place, yet the floorboards felt foreign beneath her boots tonight. The delivery shift ended an hour ago, but the quiet of the flat felt suffocating. The bell above the door chimed. Rory looked up. A woman stepped out of the rain, shaking water from a dark coat. She wore a scarf wrapped tight around her neck, hiding the lower half of her face. Her hair fell in a straight curtain, black and shoulder-length, just like Rory's. The woman froze. She pulled the scarf down. Rory set the glass on the bar. The sound rang out, sharp and sudden. Eva stood in the doorway. Water dripped from her shoulders onto the worn floorboards. Her eyes widened, searching the dim room until they locked onto Rory. You look the same. Rory leaned against the counter, crossing her arms. The scar on her wrist pressed against her skin. You look different. Eva moved further into the room. The neon light from outside reflected in her pupils. She stopped a few feet from the bar, keeping her hands in her pockets. Cardiff was cold last winter. Rory picked up another glass. She didn't wipe it. She just turned it over in her hands. I heard. Eva laughed. The sound lacked warmth. It cracked in the middle. You heard. The bar remained silent. A clock on the wall ticked, marking seconds that neither woman wanted to waste. Rory set the glass down hard. Why are you here? Eva looked around the room. She traced the edge of a map with her eyes. She saw the photographs. She saw the green sign buzzing through the window. I needed a drink. I needed to find you. Rory walked around the bar. Her boots made no sound on the wood. She stopped in front of Eva. You found me. Eva reached out. Her hand hovered near Rory's arm. She pulled back before skin touched skin. I thought about calling. I thought about writing. Rory turned away. She walked to the back of the room where the shadows pooled deeper. Evan told me you left. He told me you ran. Rory's hand tightened on the edge of a table. The wood groaned under her grip. Evan talks too much. Eva stepped closer. The rain on her coat smelled like ozone and city grime. He said you were scared. He said you couldn't handle it. Rory spun around. Her blue eyes flashed. He said a lot of things. He broke my wrist once. Eva flinched. She looked at the scar on Rory's wrist. I didn't know. Rory looked at her friend. The years sat between them like a physical wall. You stayed. Eva pulled her hands out of her pockets. They trembled slightly. I had to. Rory walked back to the bar. She opened a drawer and took out a bottle. She poured two fingers into a tumbler. She slid it across the wood toward Eva. Drink. Eva picked up the glass. She didn't drink. She held it like a shield. Do you hate me? Rory leaned her elbows on the counter. She watched the condensation form on the glass. I don't have time for hate. Eva took a sip. She winced. The burn showed on her face. I saw your father's name in the paper. He's still arguing cases. Rory nodded. He's proud. Eva set the glass down. I'm not. Rory looked at her. The neon light flickered overhead. What do you want, Eva? Eva looked down at the bar top. The wood grain looked like a map of a place neither of them knew. I want to know if you're happy. Rory laughed. It was a dry sound. Happy. Eva looked up. Her eyes were red-rimmed. I left everything for you. I left the flat. I left the job. Rory stood up straight. You left because I asked you to. Eva shook her head. I left because I was scared of what you would do if I stayed. Rory walked to the window. The rain streaked the glass, blurring the street below. I did what I had to do. Eva stood up. She walked to the window beside her. You ran. Rory turned to face her. I survived. Eva reached out and touched Rory's arm. Her fingers were cold. Survival isn't living. Rory pulled her arm away. She walked back to the bar. Silas told me you came in. Eva blinked. Silas? Rory poured herself a drink. He owns this place. Eva looked around again. I didn't know. Rory took a sip. The alcohol burned a path down her throat. He knows a lot of things. Eva leaned against the bar. She looked tired. I need to stay for a bit. Rory nodded. She picked up the rag again. Sit down. Eva pulled out a stool. She sat. She watched Rory wipe the counter. Do you ever think about going back? Rory stopped wiping. She looked at the spot where she had been cleaning. No. Eva looked at the maps on the wall. I think about it every day. Rory put the rag down. She walked to the back room. She opened the door to the hidden space behind the bookshelf. It's not safe there. Eva stood up. She walked toward the door. I know. Rory stepped aside. She let Eva pass. Eva walked into the shadows. She looked around the small room. The air smelled like old paper and dust. This is where you hide. Rory closed the door behind her. This is where I work. Eva turned around. She looked at Rory. You changed. Rory leaned against the doorframe. We all change. Eva walked closer. She stopped inches away. I'm scared. Rory looked at her. Why? Eva looked down. Because you're not the girl I knew. Rory looked at the scar on her wrist. That girl died in Cardiff. Eva reached out. She touched the scar. I remember the day it happened. Rory pulled her hand away. Don't. Eva stepped back. Her hands went to her pockets. I just wanted to see you. Rory crossed her arms. You saw me. Eva looked at the door. Can I stay? Rory looked at the clock on the wall. For now. Eva sat down on a crate in the corner. She pulled her knees to her chest. Tell me about London. Rory walked to the corner of the room. She picked up a file from a shelf. It's loud. Eva nodded. Like Cardiff. Rory opened the file. Louder. Eva looked at the file. What's that? Rory closed the file. Work. Eva looked away. I don't have work. Rory put the file back on the shelf. You need a job. Eva laughed. It was a bitter sound. I know. Rory walked to the door. She opened it. Come on. Eva stood up. She followed Rory out of the room. The bar was empty. The neon sign buzzed outside. Eva stopped at the door. Where are we going? Rory opened the door. Home. Eva looked at the rain. I can't go back. Rory stepped into the rain. Then stay here. Eva stepped out. She looked at Rory. I don't know where here is. Rory looked at the street. It's London. Eva walked beside her. It feels like Cardiff. Rory pulled her collar up. It's not. Eva looked at the scar on Rory's wrist. I'm sorry. Rory didn't answer. She kept walking. The rain fell harder. The green light from the sign washed over them. Eva stopped. Wait. Rory turned. What? Eva looked at the building. Is that where you live? Rory nodded. Above the bar. Eva looked up. I saw the light. Rory looked at the window. It's always on. Eva looked at Rory. Why? Rory started walking again. Because I'm awake. Eva followed. For how long? Rory didn't answer. She reached for the door handle. Inside. Eva stepped into the hallway. The air smelled like cleaning products and old wood. Rory opened the door to the flat. It's small. Eva walked in. She looked at the single bed. It's enough. Rory closed the door. Sit. Eva sat on the edge of the bed. I can't sleep. Rory sat in the chair. You don't have to. Eva looked at the window. The rain stopped. Rory looked out. It never stops. Eva looked at Rory. Do you miss him? Rory looked at her. Who? Eva looked down. Evan. Rory stood up. No. Eva stood up. Then why did you keep the scar? Rory walked to the window. It's not a keepsake. Eva walked to the window. It's a reminder. Rory turned. It's a fact. Eva looked at her. I'm leaving. Rory looked at the door. When? Eva looked at the bed. Tomorrow. Rory nodded. Okay. Eva walked to the door. Will you be here? Rory looked at the scar. I'm always here. Eva opened the door. Goodnight. Rory didn't answer. Eva stepped out. The door closed. Rory walked to the bed. She sat down. The room was quiet. She looked at the scar. She touched it. The wall was cold. She stood up. She walked to the window. The street was empty. She closed the curtain. The room went dark. She sat on the bed. She waited. The clock ticked. She closed her eyes. The silence grew. She opened her eyes. The room was dark. She stood up. She walked to the door. She opened it. The hallway was empty. She closed the door. She walked to the window. The street was dark. She sat down. She waited. The clock ticked. She closed her eyes. The silence grew. She opened her eyes. The room was dark.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:24:26.947Z" 2/25/2026, 10:24:26 PM
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1712
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1712
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"warmth"
1"traced"
2"trembled"
3"flickered"
4"reminder"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences354
matches
0"was scared"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences354
filterMatches
0"look"
1"think"
2"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences354
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1712
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions161
wordCount1712
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity4.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity8
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Rory73
Eva62
Cardiff4
London2
You11
Evan3
Do3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"You"
3"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Do"
globalScore0
windowScore0
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"smelled like ozone and city grime"
1"looked like a map of a place neither of t"
2"smelled like old paper and dust"
3"smelled like cleaning products and old woo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1712
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences354
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs264
mean6.48
std7.65
cv1.18
sampleLengths
065
168
26
345
48
514
626
74
817
93
1029
115
1217
132
1411
152
1624
174
1828
199
2019
213
2216
238
2416
2510
2615
274
2814
2911
307
3111
3210
333
3414
352
3611
373
3830
391
4014
414
4215
436
4412
4512
462
472
485
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences354
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs399
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences354
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1717
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.023878858474082703
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0011648223645894002
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences354
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences354
mean4.84
std3
cv0.621
sampleLengths
018
117
218
312
412
511
616
714
815
96
103
1113
1216
1313
143
155
167
177
185
199
2012
214
228
239
243
256
269
2714
285
295
304
318
322
332
344
355
362
374
3814
396
404
415
4210
434
449
454
465
475
488
496
43.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.14124293785310735
totalSentences354
uniqueOpeners50
22.83% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences292
matches
0"Then stay here."
1"Then why did you keep"
ratio0.007
56.99% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount119
totalSentences292
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes tracked"
1"She lived above this place,"
2"She wore a scarf wrapped"
3"Her hair fell in a"
4"She pulled the scarf down."
5"Her eyes widened, searching the"
6"You look the same."
7"You look different."
8"She stopped a few feet"
9"She didn't wipe it."
10"She just turned it over"
11"It cracked in the middle."
12"She traced the edge of"
13"She saw the photographs."
14"She saw the green sign"
15"I needed a drink."
16"I needed to find you."
17"Her boots made no sound"
18"She stopped in front of"
19"You found me."
ratio0.408
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount273
totalSentences292
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory wiped a glass with"
2"Her bright blue eyes tracked"
3"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
4"She lived above this place,"
5"The delivery shift ended an"
6"The bell above the door"
7"Rory looked up."
8"A woman stepped out of"
9"She wore a scarf wrapped"
10"Her hair fell in a"
11"The woman froze."
12"She pulled the scarf down."
13"Rory set the glass on"
14"The sound rang out, sharp"
15"Eva stood in the doorway."
16"Water dripped from her shoulders"
17"Her eyes widened, searching the"
18"You look the same."
19"Rory leaned against the counter,"
ratio0.935
34.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences292
matches
0"Because you're not the girl"
1"Because I'm awake."
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.4584%