Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBEF4V5G3YSQX5EZR4AZP5N

Run Details

Duration:
52.6s
Cost:
$0.009627
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora clawed at the wet soil. Her fingernails tore through the loam until the sharp pain bit into her skin. The Heartstone pendant rested against her chest. Warmth pulsed through the silver chain. It burned against her ribs like a fever. The ancient oak standing stones loomed above her. They formed a circle in the centre of the Richmond clearing. Wildflowers bloomed year-round in the pocket between Earth and Fae realm. Snowdrops and summer lilies grew side by side. Their perfume choked the air. Sweet rot hung heavy. She wiped dirt from her wrist. The small crescent-shaped scar stood out against the grime. She checked the silver chain again. No tears. No knots. The gemstone glowed faint. Deep crimson. A twig snapped behind her. Sharp. Dry. She spun around. Her shoulder-length black hair whipped past her bright blue eyes. The path she had taken to enter the Grove disappeared. Only thick ferns stood in the way. They curled upward. Their fronds twitched without wind. Time moves differently. An hour inside can be minutes or days outside. She checked her watch. The hands spun wildly. They refused to settle on a single hour. The second hand ticked forward, then back. Then forward again. Tick-tock. Tick-tock. It sounded like a clock counting down to something wrong. Aurora stood up. Her boots squelched in the mud. She needed the Hel portal. She needed the exit. She needed to leave before something else woke up in this place. The strange air tasted like copper. It stung her nostrils. Blood. Recent. She moved toward the nearest stone. Her fingers brushed the rough bark. It felt cold. Too cold for stone. Like holding a corpse. You are not alone. The whisper came from the left. It wasn't a sound. It was a thought that didn't belong to her. Rory froze. Her breath hitched in her throat. She scanned the edge of vision. Dark shapes moved between the flowers. They stood tall. They wore coats that didn't match the season. They stood still when she looked directly at them. They moved when she looked away. She reached for the pendant. Her heart hammered against her ribs. The gem pulsed stronger. It warmed up. It warned her of the portal. The portal was close. The portal was right there. The ground shifted beneath her boots. Roots pushed up through the grass. They looked like fingers. Long and pale. They curled around her ankles. They tightened. I said, I told you not to return. The voice came from everywhere. It vibrated in her chest cavity. Rory kicked at the grass. Her heels cut through the soil. The roots didn't break. They just let go. She stepped back. Her heel hit something hard. A stone marker. It lay on the ground. She picked it up. Engraved letters. They weren't English. They weren't Latin. They were shapes that hurt her eyes. She dropped it. It clattered on the earth. Click-clack. The wildflowers turned their heads. Their faces weren't faces. They were petals. But the centres looked like eyes. All of them looked at her. All of them blinked in unison. Rory backed away. She moved toward the centre of the circle. The stones shifted. The gap in the ring closed up. They rolled on invisible tracks. The sound was like grinding bones. She needed to find the Hel portal. She needed to get out. Her watch stopped. The hands pointed to midnight. The silence grew. It pressed against her ears. It was a physical weight. She could feel the pressure building inside her skull. The air grew thick. It refused to circulate. It smelled of ozone and decay. She heard footsteps. Slow. Deliberate. They came from the darkness behind her. They matched the rhythm of her own heart. They were learning her. They were following the beat. Who are you? she asked. Her voice sounded flat. It didn't carry in the damp air. We are waiting. The figure stepped into the patch of moonlight that pierced the canopy. It wore a long coat. The fabric shimmered. It wasn't cloth. It was woven from shadows. Its face was smooth. No eyes. No nose. No mouth. Just a flat surface of skin. Aurora drew her breath in. She gripped the pendant tighter. The stone burned now. It seared her skin. Why am I here? You know why you are here. You sought the Hel. You sought the door. The door is gone. The figure raised a hand. The shadow behind it stretched across the clearing. It reached for the standing stones. It swallowed the light. The flowers turned brown. They withered in seconds. Rory turned to run. Her legs moved before her mind commanded them. She sprinted toward the edge of the circle. She needed to find the entrance. She needed to find the human world. Her foot caught on a root. She fell hard. Her palm hit the earth. She tasted dirt and blood. She pushed herself up. The entrance was gone. A wall of thorns stood in its place. They grew tall. They grew fast. They reached the tops of the trees. The air outside was silent. The air inside was screaming. Rory spun around. The shadow creature stood directly in front of her. It was closer than before. It touched her chest. It didn't touch her body. It touched the pendant. The gemstone cracked. A hairline fracture ran through the deep crimson. The pain hit her. It wasn't in her chest. It was everywhere. It was in her bones. It was in her blood. She fell to her knees. The creature tilted its head. It spoke without sound. The words filled her mind. We have your heart now. The ground opened up beneath her. The roots grabbed her legs. They pulled her down. She screamed. The sound died in the throat of the grove. The thorns closed in. The flowers turned black. Aurora dragged herself forward. Her fingers clawed at the bark. The wood burned like acid. She tried to stand. She couldn't. She looked up. The creature loomed over her. Its smooth face reflected her own terror. The pendant pulsed once. It cracked again. Something broke inside her. The sound was like a dry twig snapping. Then the world went black. Then it went light. The light was wrong. It came from the pendant. It came from the ground. The creature smiled. It had teeth. They were sharp. They were too many. Rory tried to speak. She couldn't. Her jaw locked. Her throat closed. She looked at the stone in her hand. It had fallen. It lay on the ground. It was broken. The creature knelt. It placed a hand on her forehead. It whispered. Sleep now. We will keep you safe. The ground swallowed her. The roots pulled her into the dirt. The flowers covered her. They grew over her mouth. They grew over her eyes. They grew over her heart. Rory stopped fighting. She stopped moving. The roots wrapped around her. They tightened. They dug deep. A voice called from the outside world. It called her name. Aurora. The roots squeezed. They cracked her ribcage. The creature watched. It enjoyed the struggle. She tried to scream. She could only breathe. She could only feel the crushing weight of the earth above her. The Heartstone had fallen. It lay in the mud. It lay in the dark. The petals closed around her head. They covered her face. They covered her eyes. Aurora heard the click of a camera shutter. She heard the flash of a phone. Someone was watching her. Someone was recording it. The creature stood up. It brushed dirt from its coat. Good girl. It walked away. It left her alone in the dirt. It left her alone in the dark. Rory lay still. She lay quiet. She lay dead. The thorns grew higher. They hid her. They hid her crime. The wind picked up. It whistled through the trees. It sounded like a whistle. It sounded like a whistle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"loomed"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"loomed"
3"whisper"
4"scanned"
5"vibrated"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"could feel"
9"footsteps"
10"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences278
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences278
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences278
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen14
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1334
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"I said, I told you not to return."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1334
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Richmond1
Earth1
Fae1
Grove1
Hel3
English1
Latin1
Aurora6
You4
Rory8
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Grove"
2"Aurora"
3"You"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
58.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a clock counting down to some"
1"tasted like copper"
2"looked like eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1334
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences278
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean19.91
std13.02
cv0.654
sampleLengths
041
147
231
37
438
512
638
742
823
94
1019
1146
1233
1326
148
1530
1616
1728
1830
1944
208
2136
2229
2316
243
2544
2618
274
2814
294
3031
3133
3223
3335
3421
359
3611
3727
385
399
405
4134
4221
4315
447
4535
466
477
4828
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences278
matches
0"was woven"
1"was gone"
57.65% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs281
matches
0"was like grinding"
1"were learning"
2"were following"
3"was screaming"
4"was watching"
5"was recording"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences278
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1340
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.030597014925373135
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0052238805970149255
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences278
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences278
mean4.8
std2.16
cv0.45
sampleLengths
06
114
27
36
48
58
611
711
88
95
104
116
129
136
142
152
164
172
185
191
201
213
2210
2310
247
253
265
273
289
294
304
318
327
333
341
351
3610
373
386
395
404
4112
426
434
441
451
466
476
483
494
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats71
diversityRatio0.16546762589928057
totalSentences278
uniqueOpeners46
79.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences251
matches
0"Only thick ferns stood in"
1"Then forward again."
2"Too cold for stone."
3"Just a flat surface of"
4"Then the world went black."
5"Then it went light."
ratio0.024
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount150
totalSentences251
matches
0"Her fingernails tore through the"
1"It burned against her ribs"
2"They formed a circle in"
3"Their perfume choked the air."
4"She wiped dirt from her"
5"She checked the silver chain"
6"She spun around."
7"Her shoulder-length black hair whipped"
8"They curled upward."
9"Their fronds twitched without wind."
10"She checked her watch."
11"They refused to settle on"
12"It sounded like a clock"
13"Her boots squelched in the"
14"She needed the Hel portal."
15"She needed the exit."
16"She needed to leave before"
17"It stung her nostrils."
18"She moved toward the nearest"
19"Her fingers brushed the rough"
ratio0.598
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount235
totalSentences251
matches
0"Aurora clawed at the wet"
1"Her fingernails tore through the"
2"The Heartstone pendant rested against"
3"Warmth pulsed through the silver"
4"It burned against her ribs"
5"The ancient oak standing stones"
6"They formed a circle in"
7"Wildflowers bloomed year-round in the"
8"Snowdrops and summer lilies grew"
9"Their perfume choked the air."
10"She wiped dirt from her"
11"The small crescent-shaped scar stood"
12"She checked the silver chain"
13"The gemstone glowed faint."
14"A twig snapped behind her."
15"She spun around."
16"Her shoulder-length black hair whipped"
17"The path she had taken"
18"They curled upward."
19"Their fronds twitched without wind."
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences251
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.9549%