Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBEM4G1P3Q43Q8NHH182VAN

Run Details

Duration:
55.5s
Cost:
$0.020577
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain lock rattled. Three deadbolts slid back with a heavy metallic thud that echoed in the narrow hallway. Rory gripped the handle, her knuckles white against the dark wood. She didn't want to open it. She knew who stood on the other side. The smell of rain and expensive cologne seeped through the gap before the door swung wide. Lucien Moreau filled the frame. His charcoal suit absorbed the dim hallway light. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the streetlamp outside. He didn't smile. His eyes, one amber and one black, pinned her against the doorframe. You didn't answer your phone. Rory stepped back, letting him in. I was busy. Busy hiding. He stepped over the threshold. The floorboards groaned under his weight. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched his back from the armchair and hissed. Lucien ignored the animal. He closed the door behind him. The lock clicked. What do you want, Lucien? He turned. The room smelled of old paper and the curry house below. Scrolls covered the table. Books stacked high on the shelves. He walked past her, his cane tapping a rhythm on the wood. The job in Shoreditch went sideways. I heard. You heard wrong. He stopped by the window. The glass was fogged. He wiped a streak with his thumb. Outside, Brick Lane buzzed with neon and traffic. You left without a word, Rory. You know why. I know what you told yourself. He turned back to her. The scar on her left wrist burned. She tucked her hand into her pocket. The memory of the blade flashed in her mind. Not his blade. The one he drew to save her. The one he put away when she ran. I didn't run from you. You ran from the truth. He closed the distance between them. She held her ground. He smelled of rain and iron. His height forced her to tilt her chin up. The heterochromatic gaze didn't waver. I'm not your asset anymore. You never were. His voice dropped. The air in the room grew heavy. He reached out. His fingers hovered near her face. She didn't pull away. His hand dropped to his side. Eva is gone. What? She moved. Three days ago. Rory frowned. She told me she was staying here. She lied. Lucien turned back to the table. He picked up a scroll. His fingers traced the edge. She knew you were coming. She knew I would follow. Why? Because you are the only one who can read the cipher. He set the scroll down. The paper crinkled. I don't care about your ciphers. You care about the man who burned your flat. Rory stiffened. The fire in her memory flared. Evan. The smoke. The ash. That was six months ago. He is back. Lucien moved to the sofa. He sat. The leather creaked. He crossed his legs. The cane rested against his knee. Why tell me? Because he has your name. He looked at her. The amber eye caught the light. The black one remained dark. He wants to finish what he started. I can handle myself. You handled yourself by running to a curry house and hiding in a flat that doesn't belong to you. The words stung. She crossed her arms. The fabric of her jacket rubbed against her wrist. I'm not hiding. Then open the door. It's locked. For whom? For me. Lucien stood. He moved to her. He stopped inches away. She could feel the heat radiating from him. He wasn't human. She knew that. The demon blood ran cold in his veins. He found you. How? The tracker in your phone. She reached for her pocket. The phone was gone. She left it on the table. You tracked me? I protected you. By watching me sleep? By making sure you didn't die. She looked at the scar on her wrist. The crescent shape. A mark of the past. I don't need protection. You need a partner. He held out his hand. Palm up. The calluses on his fingers were rough. Take it. No. Take it. She looked at his hand. Then at his face. The tension pulled tight in her chest. She wanted to refuse. She wanted to slam the door. If I take it, I'm back in the game. You never left. He didn't blink. The silence stretched. Ptolemy jumped down from the chair. The cat walked between them. Lucien didn't look down. Eva left this for you. He reached into his jacket. He pulled out a key. Metal. Heavy. Where is she? Safe. And the key? To the safe house. Why give it to me now? Because he is at the door. Rory froze. She looked at the door. The chain lock rattled. Someone knocked. Heavy. Insistent. He is here. How do you know? I know. He stepped back. He drew the blade from his cane. The steel glinted. Stay behind me. I'm not staying. Rory. I said I'm not staying. She moved to the door. She looked through the peephole. A shadow blocked the light. A man in a grey coat. Evan. Open it. No. Open it. She turned the lock. The chain slid. The deadbolts clicked. She pulled the door open. The man stood there. His face was scarred. His eyes were cold. Hello, Rory. Lucien stepped up beside her. The blade was ready. You shouldn't have come. I never listen. He looked at Lucien. He smiled. And who is this? A problem. Evan laughed. The sound was dry. Two against one. Three. Rory looked at the cat. Ptolemy hissed from the hallway. Three. Evan said. He raised his hand. A gun glinted in his palm. Lucien moved. He thrust the cane forward. The blade flashed.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:27:28.39Z" 2/25/2026, 10:27:28 PM
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"could feel"
4"tension"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences209
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences209
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences209
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords958
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount958
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Lucien10
Shoreditch1
Brick1
Lane1
Rory9
Three4
You12
Ptolemy3
Evan4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"You"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.874
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount958
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences209
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs108
mean8.87
std10.43
cv1.175
sampleLengths
060
139
25
39
42
536
65
735
86
92
103
1124
126
133
146
1546
165
175
1830
195
203
2129
223
231
245
259
262
2726
281
2911
308
316
329
3313
345
353
3620
373
385
3915
407
414
4219
4316
443
454
462
472
482
4932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences209
matches
0"was fogged"
1"was gone"
2"was scarred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was staying"
1"were coming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences209
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount958
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.011482254697286013
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010438413361169101
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences209
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences209
mean4.58
std2.73
cv0.595
sampleLengths
04
115
211
36
48
516
65
78
811
93
1012
115
126
133
142
155
166
1712
184
196
203
215
222
2311
244
256
2612
276
282
293
305
314
327
338
346
353
366
375
387
397
409
413
427
438
445
455
466
474
486
499
41.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.20574162679425836
totalSentences209
uniqueOpeners43
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences166
matches
0"Then open the door."
1"Then at his face."
ratio0.012
15.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount85
totalSentences166
matches
0"She didn't want to open"
1"She knew who stood on"
2"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
3"He didn't smile."
4"His eyes, one amber and"
5"You didn't answer your phone."
6"I was busy."
7"He stepped over the threshold."
8"He closed the door behind"
9"He walked past her, his"
10"You heard wrong."
11"He stopped by the window."
12"He wiped a streak with"
13"You left without a word,"
14"You know why."
15"I know what you told"
16"He turned back to her."
17"She tucked her hand into"
18"I didn't run from you."
19"You ran from the truth."
ratio0.512
26.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount144
totalSentences166
matches
0"The chain lock rattled."
1"Rory gripped the handle, her"
2"She didn't want to open"
3"She knew who stood on"
4"The smell of rain and"
5"Lucien Moreau filled the frame."
6"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
7"The ivory handle of his"
8"He didn't smile."
9"His eyes, one amber and"
10"You didn't answer your phone."
11"Rory stepped back, letting him"
12"I was busy."
13"He stepped over the threshold."
14"The floorboards groaned under his"
15"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched"
16"Lucien ignored the animal."
17"He closed the door behind"
18"The lock clicked."
19"The room smelled of old"
ratio0.867
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences166
matches
0"Because you are the only"
1"Because he has your name."
2"If I take it, I'm"
3"To the safe house."
4"Because he is at the"
ratio0.03
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Three deadbolts slid back with a heavy metallic thud that echoed in the narrow hallway."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.2147%