Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBEMHR15C0PR8AQEBSKYGJ3

Run Details

Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.001662
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain latch clicked open. Aurora shoved the door, expecting a delivery drop-off or a maintenance issue, then froze. Silence filled the hallway, cut only by the muffled thump of bass from the curry house below. Lucienne Moreau stood in the frame, a vision of tailored charcoal against the peeling paint of Brick Lane. The ivory handle of his cane caught the dim light from the stairwell. His eyes scanned the interior, amber one burning like a warning, the black one deep as a void. His presence filled the threshold. He hadn’t knocked. Aurora kept her hand on the handle. The scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom pulse. I thought you were dead. She knew the question hung in the stale air before she spoke. The hallway smelled of curry spices and old paper. Books stacked along the walls of her temporary refuge leaned precariously high. Ptolemy, the tabby, lurked behind a stack of encyclopaedias, his tail twitching with predatory suspicion. Lucienne pushed past her without invitation, his shoulder brushing her arm. The fabric of his suit smelled like expensive cologne and something metallic, like ozone. He didn’t stop when he crossed the threshold into the living room. The space cramped under the weight of new research materials spread across every surface. You live here. In a flat above a curry house. It’s safer this way. He stopped two feet away. The cane tapped once against the floorboards. His gaze dropped to her wrist, then snapped back to her face. You told Eva you’d stay with her for a week. That was yesterday. Aurora crossed her arms, ignoring the way his eyes tracked the movement. This is temporary. It’s a safe house while you fix that stupid mess you kicked up in Soho. Lucienne smiled. It didn’t reach the amber eye. He leaned the cane against his hip and pulled a hand from his sleeve. The leather fingerless glove slipped into a crease in the room’s dust motes. The mess is resolved. I needed to see you. You could have written. He moved closer. The air pressure shifted, heavy and charged. Rory stepped back until the back of her legs hit the edge of the sofa. Ptolemy hissed, a low vibrating sound from the bookshelf. Your ex-husband is in Paris. Rory blinked. That wasn’t true. He’d died six months ago in Cardiff. But she didn’t argue the fact. He knew Evan better than anyone. He knew the history of where she’d come from. How did you find me? The network of information is fluid. Lucien tapped the cane against the floor again, a slow, rhythmic beat. He leaned in. The scent of ozone grew stronger, clashing with the spice. His heterochromatic eyes fixed on her. You told me you wouldn’t call. You wanted space. You wanted distance. I wanted safety. You’re a danger. I was always dangerous. That never stopped you before. Aurora pushed off the sofa. She moved to pour a glass of water from the tap, her hands shaking just once. She set the glass down harder than necessary. Why do you care? Lucien watched the water settle in the glass. Steam rose from the kettle on the counter. The pressure of the moment built against the ribs. Because the deal I made with the Syndicate included a clause on your safety. The deal ended three months ago. He turned. The movement was fluid, predatory. He closed the distance between them instantly, his shadow swallowing the space. Rory didn’t breathe. His face was inches from hers. You’re here. I am. She grabbed a towel to wipe water from the counter. It was a distraction. He saw it. His eyes narrowed. There was another woman. Aurora froze. She didn’t turn around. There’s always someone. Not someone. *Her.* The woman in the car. Lucienne’s voice dropped an octave. He was close enough that the heat of his breath hit her bare neck. You didn’t tell her to leave. She’s waiting outside the door. Rory spun around. She grabbed the vase of dried lavender on the table near the door, her knuckles whitening. She isn’t. Lucienne’s hand moved. He caught her wrist before she could throw it. His grip was firm, but he didn’t squeeze hard. The scar felt cold against his thumb. He looked at the wrist, then back up. It had been her own childhood injury, the crescent-shaped mark. She never let him see the bruising that came later. She’s not waiting outside the door. She’s waiting at the bar. Aurora pulled her wrist back. He didn’t let go. The leather of his suit rustled. Why are you really here, Lucien? He released her. He walked to the window, looking out at the street below. The neon sign of the curry house buzzed overhead. To bring you something. He pulled an envelope from his inner pocket. Thin, black, sealed with white wax. He tossed it onto the coffee table. It skipped over stacks of scrolls and landed near a mug of tea. What is it? Proof. Rory walked around the table. She picked up the envelope. The weight suggested documents, not photos. Proof of what? That Evan wasn’t the only one. That you didn’t kill him. The air left her lungs. She gripped the edge of the table. He was dead. I saw the body. Lucien turned from the window. He looked tired, the lines around his eyes deeper than before. I buried him in Marseille. He’s alive. Rory set the envelope down. Her heart beat hard against her ribs. Why now? Because he called tonight. He wants you back. She laughed, a harsh, sharp sound. That’s impossible. The envelope was heavy in her hand. She wanted to open it, the need to know pulling at her skin like a physical thread. If you don’t open it, he will come. To Brick Lane. To find you. I’m not going back. Lucien stepped back. He pulled his cane away from the table. The tip hovered inches from the carpet. You have a choice. Aurora stared at the envelope. Her eyes darted to the window, then back to the black paper. The silence stretched. Ptolemy jumped down, stepping through the gap between the book pile and the sofa. I said I have a choice. You have three minutes before the Syndicate tracker locates your signal. Rory looked at him. The anger flared, hot and sharp. You tracked me? I told you, the network is fluid. She grabbed the envelope again. The white wax seal looked clean. I don't trust you. Trusting me is a luxury you can’t afford right now. He moved to the door. His hand rested on the frame, his back to her. The burner phone on the table lit up. The screen flashed blue in the dim light. She looked at the display. Unknown number. He said. Your phone rang. Rory picked it up. She stared at the screen. She answered it. Her voice stayed low. Evan? The line crackled. Static filled the air. Lucienne watched her, his expression unreadable. No. Who is this? The voice was a woman’s. Young. Breathless. You said you were dead. The man on the other side of the phone whispered something inaudible. The static thickened. I have it. She hung up. The screen went dark. He knows I’m here. Lucienne pushed off the doorframe. He walked back towards the table. His cane clicked on the tile. We need to move. Where? Rory grabbed the envelope and shoved it into her pocket. She grabbed her bag from the chair. London is getting hot. She walked past him. He followed without a word. She paused at the door, hand on the deadbolt. He said he’s coming for you. The man on the line. Evan. Lucienne stood in the hallway behind her. He has no access to East London. I cleared the zone. You don’t know him. I know how they think. She unlocked the door. The light from the stairwell spilled in. I’m not going with you. You have until sunrise. The tracker is active. Lucienne stepped forward, putting himself between her and the corridor. He lowered his voice. If you stay, they’ll burn the building down to get you. The noise of the curry house below grew louder as a bus engine idled on the street. Rory looked at the envelope in her pocket. Her fingers curled. Why? The man on the line. The one who called. It wasn't Evan. It was a third party. Someone working for the Syndicate. Lucienne waited. He’s playing a game. I’m ending it. She stepped out of the flat. The door clicked shut behind her. Lucienne didn’t follow immediately. He waited until she reached the bottom of the stairs. The envelope in her pocket felt warm. Rory looked at him. You said you have proof. Yes. He showed her the envelope again on the table. It was blank on the outside. Open it. She ripped the paper. She didn’t read the content yet. She looked at him. Why? Lucienne leaned his cane against the wall. He took the envelope from her hand. Because I need you to choose. The cat Ptolemy appeared, rubbing against his leg. Lucienne looked down at the cat, then back at the door. I’m taking you. He turned his head toward the door. Now.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:27:41.96Z" 2/25/2026, 10:27:41 PM
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provider_responses
0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"resolved"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"scanned"
2"throbbed"
3"pulse"
4"weight"
5"resolved"
6"charged"
7"rhythmic"
8"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences252
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences252
filterMatches
0"see"
1"know think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences252
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1553
ratio0.001
matches
0"Her."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount1553
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Eva1
Soho1
Paris1
Cardiff1
Evan5
Syndicate3
Lucien5
Marseille1
East1
London2
Ptolemy4
Aurora7
Lucienne13
You16
Rory11
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Syndicate"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Aurora"
7"Lucienne"
8"You"
9"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Soho"
3"Paris"
4"Cardiff"
5"Marseille"
6"East"
7"London"
globalScore0.985
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences115
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like expensive cologne and somethi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1553
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences252
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs130
mean11.95
std11.47
cv0.96
sampleLengths
019
166
28
322
448
551
63
711
824
913
1030
1135
129
134
1434
155
1633
175
186
1931
2012
216
229
2329
244
2525
2614
276
2828
292
302
3120
324
336
343
358
3619
3711
3819
392
4056
4111
4215
436
4423
454
4634
473
481
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences252
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs305
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences252
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1555
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.021864951768488745
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0038585209003215433
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences252
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences252
mean6.16
std3.73
cv0.606
sampleLengths
05
114
217
318
413
518
65
73
87
910
105
1112
129
1312
1415
1511
1614
1712
1814
193
207
214
225
237
2412
2510
263
2712
283
2915
302
316
3214
3313
344
355
364
373
387
3915
409
415
422
433
447
456
466
479
485
496
42.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.18253968253968253
totalSentences252
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences226
matches(empty)
ratio0
9.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount119
totalSentences226
matches
0"His eyes scanned the interior,"
1"His presence filled the threshold."
2"He hadn’t knocked."
3"I thought you were dead."
4"She knew the question hung"
5"He didn’t stop when he"
6"You live here."
7"It’s safer this way."
8"He stopped two feet away."
9"His gaze dropped to her"
10"You told Eva you’d stay"
11"It’s a safe house while"
12"It didn’t reach the amber"
13"He leaned the cane against"
14"I needed to see you."
15"You could have written."
16"He moved closer."
17"Your ex-husband is in Paris."
18"He’d died six months ago"
19"He knew Evan better than"
ratio0.527
2.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount207
totalSentences226
matches
0"The chain latch clicked open."
1"Aurora shoved the door, expecting"
2"Silence filled the hallway, cut"
3"Lucienne Moreau stood in the"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"His eyes scanned the interior,"
6"His presence filled the threshold."
7"He hadn’t knocked."
8"Aurora kept her hand on"
9"The scar on her left"
10"I thought you were dead."
11"She knew the question hung"
12"The hallway smelled of curry"
13"Books stacked along the walls"
14"Ptolemy, the tabby, lurked behind"
15"Lucienne pushed past her without"
16"The fabric of his suit"
17"He didn’t stop when he"
18"The space cramped under the"
19"You live here."
ratio0.916
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount8
totalSentences226
matches
0"Because the deal I made"
1"To bring you something."
2"Because he called tonight."
3"If you don’t open it,"
4"To Brick Lane."
5"To find you."
6"If you stay, they’ll burn"
7"Because I need you to"
ratio0.035
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.0636%