Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBER3CCJTYAHAJVVTJBGDYX

Run Details

Duration:
58.1s
Cost:
$0.009718
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked into place with a heavy finality that echoed through the cramped hallway. Aurora turned the handle and pulled the door inward. Rain slicked the landing, smelling of ozone and exhaust, but the figure standing on the threshold blocked the view of the street below. Lucien Moreau wore a charcoal suit that repelled the moisture clinging to the air. Platinum hair lay slicked back against his skull, not a strand out of place despite the London downpour. His heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers, the amber one sharp, the black one void-like. He held an ivory-handled cane in his right hand, the tip resting on the wet concrete. Rory gripped the doorframe. Her knuckles turned white against the dark wood. You locked the bolts. He stepped past her before she could close the gap. The smell of expensive cologne and damp wool filled the small entryway. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched his back from the sofa and hissed from the shadows of the bookshelves. The deadbolts keep the wrong things out. Lucien didn't look at the cat. He looked at the scar on her left wrist, a small crescent moon of pale skin against the dark fabric of her delivery uniform. He reached out, his fingers hovering near the mark without touching. You left the mark behind. I left a lot of things behind. Rory stepped back, forcing him to follow if he wanted to enter the room. She didn't want him to enter. The flat smelled of old paper and curry grease, a chaotic blend that usually grounded her. Now it felt suffocating. Scrolls lay stacked on the coffee table, threatening to topple if the air grew too turbulent. You shouldn't be here. He leaned the cane against the wall, the metal blade hidden within the shaft clicking softly as it shifted weight. The Council moved against Silas. Rory froze. She kept her face neutral, but her breath hitched in her throat. Silas is dead. No. Lucien pushed off the wall and walked toward the centre of the room. He moved with a predator's grace, silent despite the clutter. He stopped in front of the sofa, his gaze sweeping over the books, the notes, the life she had built in the cracks of the city. He is missing. They have him in the holding cells beneath the Old Bailey. Why come to me? Because you know the layout of the tunnels. Because you know where the keys hide. Rory crossed her arms over her chest. The movement pulled her sweater tight. I don't know anything about tunnels. I deliver food. Lucien turned. The amber eye caught the light from the single hanging bulb. You delivered a package to the cellar door three weeks ago. You saw the sigil on the doorframe. She remembered the sigil. She remembered the way the air had grown cold when she stepped inside. She remembered Lucien standing in the shadows, watching her, waiting to see if she would run. She hadn't run then. She hadn't run now. That was a job. It was a test. The word hung between them, heavy and sharp. Rory walked to the kitchenette and picked up a mug. She didn't pour tea. She just held the ceramic warmth against her palms. You broke my trust, Luc. I saved your life. You left me in the rain while the shadows took the rest of the team. He flinched. Just a fraction. A muscle in his jaw tightened. The perfect mask cracked. They were dead before I could pull you out. I had to make a choice. You chose the mission. I chose you. Rory slammed the mug onto the counter. The ceramic rang out, loud and violent. Don't lie to me. You chose the information. You chose the leverage. Lucien moved faster than a human should. He crossed the distance between them in a heartbeat. His hand shot out, catching her wrist. He didn't squeeze. He held her still, forcing her to look at him. The leverage keeps you breathing. She stared into his eyes. The black one seemed to swallow the light from the room. I am breathing. For now. He released her wrist. The skin where he touched her burned. Rory rubbed the spot, her thumb tracing the old scar. Ptolemy jumped down from the sofa and rubbed against Lucien's leg. The cat purred, a deep rumble that vibrated through the floorboards. Lucien looked down at the animal, then back up at Rory. He knows I'm not here to hurt you. He knows you're here to use me. Lucien reached into his jacket pocket. He pulled out a folded piece of paper and tossed it onto the table. It landed on top of a stack of research notes. The schedule. The shifts. The guards. Rory picked up the paper. Her eyes scanned the handwriting. It was precise, clinical. This won't get him out. It gets him out of the cells. The rest is up to you. Why me? Because I cannot enter the building without the alarm tripping. Your delivery uniform passes the checkpoints. She looked at the paper, then at him. The rain drummed against the windowpane, a steady rhythm that matched the pounding in her chest. If I do this, I walk into the lion's den. You are not walking alone. Rory dropped the paper. It fluttered to the floor. I don't trust you. You don't have to. He stepped closer. The space between them vanished. She could feel the heat radiating from his body. He smelled of rain and danger. You trust me enough to stand in the doorway. I stood in the doorway because I wanted to know why you were alive. Lucien's hand moved to the back of her neck. His fingers brushed the hair at her nape. The touch was electric, sending a shock through her spine. I am alive because you asked me to be. She leaned into the touch, just for a second. Her eyes closed. The memory of the night they parted flooded back. The sirens. The blood. The silence after the explosion. You owe me. I owe you everything. Rory pulled away. She turned her back to him and walked to the window. The glass was cold against her forehead. Get out. Rory. I said get out. Lucien picked up his cane. The metal tip clicked against the floorboards as he moved toward the door. He paused at the threshold. The schedule is for tomorrow night. She didn't turn around. If I see you again, I call the police. He laughed. A low, dark sound that didn't reach his eyes. The police cannot touch me. Neither can you. Lucien opened the door. The wind rushed in, carrying the scent of the street. He stepped out into the hallway but didn't close the door. You have twelve hours. The door swung shut. The deadbolts remained unlocked. Rory stood at the window and watched the rain wash the street clean. Ptolemy sat on the table and watched her. She picked up the schedule from the floor and smoothed the creases. Her hand shook. She set the paper down and walked to the door. She checked the locks. One. Two. Three. She locked the third one. The silence in the flat felt different now. It felt heavy. She walked back to the kitchen and picked up the mug. The tea had gone cold. She poured it down the sink. The water swirled in the drain. Rory leaned against the counter and closed her eyes. She could still feel his hand on her neck. She could still feel the heat of his gaze. She opened her eyes and looked at the mirror above the sink. Her reflection stared back, blue eyes wide, black hair messy. She touched her wrist. The scar itched. The phone on the counter buzzed. A single message lit up the screen. Twelve hours. She turned the phone face down. Ptolemy meowed. Rory walked to the door and checked the lock again.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:29:38.322Z" 2/25/2026, 10:29:38 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1335
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1335
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"fluttered"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"electric"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"echoed"
1"chaotic"
2"weight"
3"predator"
4"warmth"
5"perfect"
6"tracing"
7"vibrated"
8"scanned"
9"pounding"
10"fluttered"
11"could feel"
12"electric"
13"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences184
filterMatches
0"know"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences184
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1335
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"If I see you again, I call the police."
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1335
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
London1
Council1
Silas2
Old1
Bailey1
Lucien12
Luc1
Rory15
You15
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Council"
2"Silas"
3"Old"
4"Bailey"
5"Lucien"
6"Luc"
7"Rory"
8"You"
9"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.938
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1335
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs92
mean14.51
std13.37
cv0.922
sampleLengths
048
162
212
34
440
57
641
75
87
956
104
1120
125
1314
143
1550
1614
174
1815
1913
209
2113
2218
2341
244
254
2631
275
284
2915
3015
3115
324
333
3414
3512
3636
375
3816
393
402
4121
4233
438
447
4530
466
4714
485
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs252
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences184
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1336
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.019461077844311378
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0014970059880239522
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences184
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences184
mean7.26
std4.57
cv0.629
sampleLengths
016
19
223
314
418
514
616
74
88
94
1010
1112
1218
137
146
1524
1611
175
187
1914
206
2116
224
2316
244
2520
265
272
2812
293
301
3113
3210
3326
343
3511
364
378
387
397
406
416
423
432
4411
4511
467
474
4813
4916
36.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.19021739130434784
totalSentences184
uniqueOpeners35
20.20% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences165
matches
0"Just a fraction."
ratio0.006
4.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount89
totalSentences165
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
1"He held an ivory-handled cane"
2"Her knuckles turned white against"
3"You locked the bolts."
4"He stepped past her before"
5"He looked at the scar"
6"He reached out, his fingers"
7"You left the mark behind."
8"I left a lot of"
9"She didn't want him to"
10"You shouldn't be here."
11"He leaned the cane against"
12"She kept her face neutral,"
13"He moved with a predator's"
14"He stopped in front of"
15"He is missing."
16"They have him in the"
17"I don't know anything about"
18"I deliver food."
19"You delivered a package to"
ratio0.539
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount156
totalSentences165
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked into"
1"Aurora turned the handle and"
2"Rain slicked the landing, smelling"
3"Lucien Moreau wore a charcoal"
4"Platinum hair lay slicked back"
5"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
6"He held an ivory-handled cane"
7"Rory gripped the doorframe."
8"Her knuckles turned white against"
9"You locked the bolts."
10"He stepped past her before"
11"The smell of expensive cologne"
12"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched"
13"The deadbolts keep the wrong"
14"Lucien didn't look at the"
15"He looked at the scar"
16"He reached out, his fingers"
17"You left the mark behind."
18"I left a lot of"
19"Rory stepped back, forcing him"
ratio0.945
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences165
matches
0"Now it felt suffocating."
1"Because you know the layout"
2"Because you know where the"
3"Because I cannot enter the"
4"If I do this, I"
5"If I see you again,"
ratio0.036
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien Moreau wore a charcoal suit that repelled the moisture clinging to the air."
1"He reached out, his fingers hovering near the mark without touching."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0492%