Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBEXE476KT46PBZDHDXY3FY

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Duration:
31.4s
Cost:
$0.002083
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before I finished breathing. Locks clicked behind the wood like gunshots. A hand pushed past the frame, not to hold it, but to stop me from closing it. I froze. My fingers hovered over the brass handle, knuckles white. Lucien leaned against the jamb, ignoring the rain that slicked his platinum hair. He looked like a storm trapped in a charcoal suit. One eye amber, the other black, both fixed on my throat. He smiled. It didn't reach his left eye. The cane tapped the floorboard. Ivory handle gleamed under the hallway bulb. You shouldn't be here, I told him. The flat smelled of old books and damp wool. Books piled on every surface. Scrolls tucked into the spaces between stacks like firewood. I stood my ground, but my heart kicked a rhythm against my ribs that he could hear if he listened hard enough. Rules of the trade, Lucien said. His voice was smooth. London velvet wrapped around a razor blade. Rules changed. They never change, Laila. You know that. He didn't call me Rory. Not since Tuesday. I stepped back to let him in, hoping the angle gave me a chance at the kitchen knife. He didn't move into the room. He waited on the threshold like a statue. The rain beat against the double glazing. Below, Silas' bar hummed with the low buzz of a jukebox. Music drifted up through the floorboards. A slow, bluesy hum that usually calmed me. Tonight it just vibrated under my feet. Lock the door, he said. I looked at him. Lock it. I obeyed. The deadbolt slid home. Three tumblers. Three seconds. He listened. I watched his reflection in the dark hallway mirror. He adjusted his cufflink. Silver snake biting tail. Why did you flee Marseille? I asked. A question I shouldn't ask. He was a fixer. Answers were currency. It's a long story. I have the time. He didn't blink. He didn't move. He just shifted his weight to his left foot. The cane dug into the wood. I left, he said. You didn't leave. You vanished. I arranged a distraction. I didn't think I needed to tell you. You told me everything, I said. You told me we were even. We are almost even. He stepped into the room. He brought the scent of ozone and expensive leather with him. The air pressure dropped. The hair on my arms stood up. Demon blood. Half-demon. The heat radiated off him like a fire. My hand slipped behind my back. I needed that knife. I needed the leverage. What are you doing, Lucien? Cleaning up a mess. A mess I didn't make. I know. He walked to the sofa. He didn't sit. He leaned over the coffee table. Papers were scattered there. Maps of London. Locations circled in red ink. My name. *Rory*. I crossed the room in two strides. I grabbed a mug. Full of cold tea. I didn't throw it. I just held it up like a shield. You look tired, he said. The black eye on the calendar. I checked. Don't touch me. His fingers hovered near my face. Hot. Close. I smelled the copper of the blood on his lip. You think I care about that bruise? He asked. I care about the one you gave me. We argued at the dock. You chose pride. I chose safety. I chose survival. You chose profit. He laughed. A short, sharp sound. You're the one who fled Evan without a second look. You ran here. To me. I had nowhere else to go. You always had me, Laila. I was your choice. You just forgot. I remembered you, I said. I just couldn't forgive you. He leaned in. He was close enough to touch. His hand came down on the table. The papers fluttered. He tapped the red circle. They know you're here. Who knows? The Council of the Veil. They found your signature on the contract. I never signed anything. Someone forged it. Someone who knows your handwriting. Someone who knows your scar. I froze. I touched my left wrist. The crescent-shaped scar from the childhood accident. It throbbed, a phantom echo of pain. This isn't over, I said. No. It's just beginning. The handle turned below. Not upstairs. Downstairs. Lucius? No. Lucien. We both heard it. The key turning in the lock of the main door. But this flat was on the third floor. No key could open the front door. Unless the person inside had the key. Or... They're up here, he said. Where? He didn't look at the door. He looked at me. Look, he commanded. I didn't move. My breath hitched. The door behind us. The one I locked. It shook. I pulled my hand from the handle. They are inside the flat, he said. Who? The people who want you dead. Lucien moved faster than a human could. He shoved me behind the sofa. I hit the cushions hard. The mug shattered on the floor. Tea stained the rug. He raised the cane. The ivory handle split with a metallic hiss. A thin blade slid out. It hummed with a low frequency sound. Go to the stairs. Now. No. We fight together. No time. He drew his arm back. He aimed the blade at the door. Don't go, he said. You go, I said. We stood in the silence. The shaking stopped. Then the sound of breaking glass came from the kitchen window. Lucien turned his head. He looked at the window. He looked at me. I grabbed the knife from the shelf behind the sofa. The handle felt slick. Cold. I'm not running. He sighed. He tapped the floor. The sound bounced. Fine. The door splintered from the impact of a body. Someone kicked it with a force that shook the frame. Lucien stepped forward. Stay behind my back, he said. I stayed back. The door buckled again. The wood cracked like bones. I moved. I moved to the right. He moved to the left. A shadow slipped through the gap. Two figures in black gear. One held a baton that crackled with electricity. Lucien slashed. The blade caught the baton. Sparks flew. He kicked the figure in the chest. They stumbled into the bookshelf. Books fell. Scrolls rolled. The other figure lunged. I swung my knife. My hand shook but the blade found a mark. They howled and backed away. Lucien didn't look back. He didn't have to. We are done here, he said. It wasn't over. I felt a hand grab my scarf. Not from behind. From the ceiling. We both looked up. The ceiling panel had come loose. Someone hung from the top. Lucien looked at me. His amber eye widened. Behind you. I turned. A black hand gripped my wrist. It burned my skin. The scar throbbed with fire. Don't scream. I didn't. I stared into the face of the person above the door. Evan.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count2
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"vibrated"
2"weight"
3"fluttered"
4"throbbed"
5"echo"
6"shattered"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences240
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences240
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
2"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences240
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1161
ratio0.001
matches
0"Rory"
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions10
matches
0"Rules of the trade, Lucien said."
1"Lock the door, he said."
2"I left, he said."
3"You told me everything, I said."
4"You look tired, he said."
5"I remembered you, I said."
6"They are inside the flat, he said."
7"You go, I said."
8"Stay behind my back, he said."
9"We are done here, he said."
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1151
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Lucien10
Laila2
Rory2
Tuesday1
Music1
Marseille1
London2
Evan2
Council1
Veil1
You15
Don3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Laila"
2"Rory"
3"Music"
4"Evan"
5"You"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
globalScore0.848
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a storm trapped in a charcoal"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.861
wordCount1161
matches
0"not to hold it, but to stop me from closing it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences240
matches
0"needed that knife"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs108
mean10.75
std9.66
cv0.898
sampleLengths
032
111
242
312
47
545
617
72
87
98
1032
1139
125
134
142
1529
167
1712
184
194
2021
214
225
2312
2412
254
2638
2714
285
294
305
312
3229
3327
3413
353
3618
379
388
3911
406
416
4215
436
4412
4510
4624
474
482
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences240
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs251
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences240
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount223
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.02242152466367713
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences240
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences240
mean4.84
std2.91
cv0.602
sampleLengths
08
17
217
32
49
513
610
711
82
96
105
117
127
139
145
159
1622
176
184
197
202
214
223
235
243
2518
266
278
287
2911
306
318
327
335
344
352
362
374
382
392
402
419
424
434
445
452
465
474
483
494
37.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.2625
totalSentences240
uniqueOpeners63
17.54% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences190
matches
0"Then the sound of breaking"
ratio0.005
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount106
totalSentences190
matches
0"My fingers hovered over the"
1"He looked like a storm"
2"It didn't reach his left"
3"You shouldn't be here, I"
4"I stood my ground, but"
5"His voice was smooth."
6"They never change, Laila."
7"You know that."
8"He didn't call me Rory."
9"I stepped back to let"
10"He didn't move into the"
11"He waited on the threshold"
12"I looked at him."
13"I watched his reflection in"
14"He adjusted his cufflink."
15"He was a fixer."
16"It's a long story."
17"I have the time."
18"He didn't blink."
19"He didn't move."
ratio0.558
15.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount169
totalSentences190
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"Locks clicked behind the wood"
2"A hand pushed past the"
3"My fingers hovered over the"
4"Lucien leaned against the jamb,"
5"He looked like a storm"
6"It didn't reach his left"
7"The cane tapped the floorboard."
8"Ivory handle gleamed under the"
9"You shouldn't be here, I"
10"The flat smelled of old"
11"Books piled on every surface."
12"Scrolls tucked into the spaces"
13"I stood my ground, but"
14"Rules of the trade, Lucien"
15"His voice was smooth."
16"London velvet wrapped around a"
17"They never change, Laila."
18"You know that."
19"He didn't call me Rory."
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences190
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien leaned against the jamb, ignoring the rain that slicked his platinum hair."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.5711%