Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBF0GATEXADSMZB1QCAAWVF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.015635
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed overhead, casting a sickly pallor over the wet pavement outside. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung thick with the scent of old wood polish and stale whiskey. Maps lined the walls, their ink faded by decades of London damp, while black-and-white photographs captured strangers who had long since turned to dust. Aurora Carter leaned against the mahogany counter, her fingers tracing the rim of a glass she hadn't touched. The scar on her left wrist caught the dim light, a pale crescent against her skin. Silas Blackwood wiped a tumbler with a rag that had seen better days. His hazel eyes tracked the door, his expression unreadable behind the neatly trimmed beard. He moved with a slight limp, the old knee injury betraying him with every step across the floorboards. The bell above the entrance jingled. A gust of cold wind swept through the room, carrying the smell of rain and exhaust. A woman stepped inside. She wore a trench coat that hung loosely on her frame, the collar turned up against the chill. Her hair, once a vibrant shade of chestnut, now sported streaks of premature silver. She scanned the room, her gaze locking onto Aurora. Eva pulled the door shut behind her. The silence in the bar deepened. Aurora pushed off the counter. She didn't smile. The distance between them stretched taut, a wire ready to snap. You look different. Eva walked forward, her boots clicking on the floor. She stopped two paces away. The change in her posture struck Aurora immediately. Eva carried herself like a soldier, shoulders squared, eyes darting to the exits. Time does that. Aurora took a sip of her drink. The ice clinked against the glass. You left without a word. Eva reached into her coat pocket. She pulled out a pack of cigarettes, then paused, remembering the no-smoking sign on the wall. She shoved the pack back inside. I had to go. Things got messy in Cardiff. Messy. Aurora let the word hang in the air. She watched Eva's hands. They trembled slightly, a fine vibration that betrayed the steel in her voice. You brought me here. You said London was safe. I said it was a fresh start. Aurora turned her back to the bar. She faced the maps on the wall. The inked lines of Europe looked like veins under skin. Safe from what? Evan? Eva flinched. The movement was small, a twitch of the jaw, but Aurora saw it. From him. From the life we knew. You disappeared six months ago. I called the number you gave me. It disconnected. Silas set the glass down on the counter. The sound cut through the tension. He didn't speak, but his presence anchored the room. He watched the exchange with the quiet authority of a man who had seen too many endings. Eva turned to look at him, then back to Aurora. I needed to vanish. Why? Eva looked down at her shoes. They were scuffed, worn at the heel. I got involved with something. Something I couldn't walk away from. Aurora laughed. The sound was dry, devoid of humour. You? The girl who cried when she scraped her knee? That girl died in Cardiff. Aurora stepped closer. She smelled the rain on Eva's coat, mixed with something sharp. Antiseptic? Or fear? So who is this? Someone who survives. Silas moved to the back of the bar. He reached for a bottle of amber liquid. He didn't offer a pour, but the gesture filled the silence. Eva reached out. Her hand hovered near Aurora's shoulder, then dropped. I'm sorry, Rory. Don't use that name. Eva nodded. She looked at the maps again. Did you find what you were looking for? Aurora touched her wrist. The scar felt warm under her fingertips. I found a job. A flat. A life. Is it enough? Aurora looked at the green neon sign reflecting in the dark glass of the window. It pulsed in time with the hum of the refrigerator in the corner. It's enough to keep me alive. Eva turned toward the door. The rain had picked up outside, drumming against the glass. I can't stay. Aurora didn't stop her. She watched Eva's hand grip the brass handle. Wait. Eva paused. She didn't turn around. What? If you're in trouble. I'm not. If you are. Eva turned. Her face looked older than twenty-five. The lines around her mouth had deepened, etched by stress or sleeplessness. I'm handling it. How? Eva looked at Silas. The old man met her gaze, his hazel eyes hard as flint. I have resources. Aurora crossed her arms. The fabric of her shirt pulled tight across her shoulders. You don't have resources. You have ghosts. Eva's jaw tightened. She let go of the handle. You don't know what I've done. I know you left me. I left you to protect you. From what? From them. Who? Eva shook her head. She pulled her coat tighter around herself. People who don't forget. Aurora stepped into her path. She blocked the exit. Tell me. Eva looked at the floor. The wood creaked under her weight. If I tell you, they come for you. Silas set a glass on the counter. The sound echoed. Aurora didn't move. She stood firm, her blue eyes locked on Eva's. I'm not a child anymore, Eva. I know. Then speak. Eva looked at the scar on Aurora's wrist. She reached out, her fingers brushing the skin. Her touch was cold. It's not safe to know. Aurora pulled her hand away. She wiped her wrist on her jeans. Safe is a lie. You know that. Eva nodded slowly. She turned back to the door. I'm going. Aurora didn't stop her. She watched the woman walk out into the rain. The bell jingled again, a cheerful sound that clashed with the mood. Silas poured two fingers of whiskey into a fresh glass. He slid it across the counter. She's in deep. Aurora picked up the glass. She didn't drink. How deep? Deep enough to drown. Aurora looked at the door. The rain streaked the glass, blurring the streetlights outside. She came back. Silas wiped the counter. His movements were precise, economical. People come back when the walls close in. Aurora took a sip. The burn of the alcohol travelled down her throat. Why now? Because the walls are closing. Aurora set the glass down. She walked to the window. She pressed her hand against the cold pane. She thinks she can save me. She thinks she can save herself. Aurora turned back to the room. The maps on the wall seemed to shift in the low light. Where is she going? Silas looked at the door. To a place she can't leave. Aurora walked back to the counter. She picked up her jacket. I'm going after her. Silas didn't stop her. He just watched her. You'll need a plan. I have one. Silas nodded. He reached for his silver signet ring. He rubbed the metal with his thumb. Don't trust her. Aurora pulled her collar up. She looked at the reflection in the dark mirror behind the bar. Her eyes looked tired. I never trusted anyone. She walked toward the door. The green neon light followed her out, casting long shadows on the pavement. The rain soaked her hair, plastering the black strands to her forehead. She didn't look back. The bell jingled. The sound faded into the noise of the city.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
88.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"unreadable"
2"chill"
3"scanned"
4"silence"
5"trembled"
6"tension"
7"pulsed"
8"etched"
9"weight"
10"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences203
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences203
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences203
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1250
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions82
wordCount1250
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.24
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Carter1
Blackwood1
Aurora28
Cardiff2
Eva23
Europe1
Rory1
Silas10
You11
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"You"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Europe"
globalScore0.38
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like veins under skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1250
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences203
matches
0"use that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs116
mean10.78
std11.77
cv1.092
sampleLengths
091
145
222
345
413
519
63
735
83
913
105
1128
129
131
1425
159
167
1724
184
1915
207
2114
2240
2310
244
251
2613
2711
289
2910
305
3117
324
333
3427
3511
363
374
388
398
4011
418
423
4328
446
4515
463
4712
481
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences203
matches
0"were scuffed"
1"got involved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs246
matches
0"were looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences203
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1254
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.019936204146730464
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004784688995215311
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences203
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences203
mean6.16
std4.06
cv0.659
sampleLengths
015
118
224
318
416
513
614
718
86
916
104
1118
1214
139
147
156
165
173
1811
193
209
215
228
2313
243
257
266
275
286
2916
306
314
325
331
348
354
3613
374
385
397
407
417
4210
433
441
452
4613
472
485
495
41.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.21182266009852216
totalSentences203
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences174
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount78
totalSentences174
matches
0"His hazel eyes tracked the"
1"He moved with a slight"
2"She wore a trench coat"
3"Her hair, once a vibrant"
4"She scanned the room, her"
5"She didn't smile."
6"You look different."
7"She stopped two paces away."
8"You left without a word."
9"She pulled out a pack"
10"She shoved the pack back"
11"I had to go."
12"She watched Eva's hands."
13"They trembled slightly, a fine"
14"You brought me here."
15"You said London was safe."
16"I said it was a"
17"She faced the maps on"
18"You disappeared six months ago."
19"I called the number you"
ratio0.448
5.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount158
totalSentences174
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Maps lined the walls, their"
2"Aurora Carter leaned against the"
3"The scar on her left"
4"Silas Blackwood wiped a tumbler"
5"His hazel eyes tracked the"
6"He moved with a slight"
7"The bell above the entrance"
8"A gust of cold wind"
9"A woman stepped inside."
10"She wore a trench coat"
11"Her hair, once a vibrant"
12"She scanned the room, her"
13"Eva pulled the door shut"
14"The silence in the bar"
15"Aurora pushed off the counter."
16"She didn't smile."
17"The distance between them stretched"
18"You look different."
19"Eva walked forward, her boots"
ratio0.908
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences174
matches
0"If you're in trouble."
1"If you are."
2"If I tell you, they"
3"Because the walls are closing."
4"To a place she can't"
ratio0.029
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Maps lined the walls, their ink faded by decades of London damp, while black-and-white photographs captured strangers who had long since turned to dust."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.2600%