Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBF2GQZ75R84F06TVR41QTF

Run Details

Duration:
58.0s
Cost:
$0.021484
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The fluorescent lights above the platform flickered with a dying buzz, casting long, stuttering shadows against the damp concrete. Harlow Quinn stepped over the yellow tape, her boots crunching on loose gravel and shattered glass. The air tasted of ozone and wet rust. She adjusted the collar of her trench coat, the worn leather of her watch digging into her wrist. PC Davies stood by the edge of the tracks, looking pale under the harsh glare of the portable floodlights. He held a clipboard like a shield. "You shouldn't be down here without a hazmat suit, Detective," Davies said. He didn't look up. Quinn ignored him. She walked toward the body lying near the third rail. The victim wore a heavy coat, the fabric singed at the hem. Black markings covered the skin of the exposed neck, intricate geometric lines that seemed to shift when Quinn viewed them from the corner of her eye. "Report," Quinn said. "Found by a squatter an hour ago. No ID. No wallet." Davies finally looked at her, eyes wide. "The markings, Detective. They look like... I don't know. Candles. Ritual stuff." Quinn crouched beside the corpse. She didn't touch the body. She leaned in, her sharp jaw set tight. The smell hit her first—not the copper tang of blood, but something sharper, like burnt hair and sulfur. She scanned the floor around the victim. No drag marks. No struggle. "Ritual," Quinn repeated. She stood up and turned to the shadows where a figure waited. Eva Kowalski stepped into the light, her round glasses reflecting the floodlights. She clutched her worn leather satchel against her chest, fingers drumming on the strap. She tucked a curl of red hair behind her left ear, a nervous tic she hadn't shaken in years. "It's not just ritual, Harlow," Eva said. Her voice trembled slightly. "Look at the pattern. It's a binding sigil. Someone tried to seal something out." "Seal what?" Quinn asked. "A rift. Maybe something else." Eva moved closer, kneeling opposite Quinn. She pulled a small notebook from her bag. "The Veil Market moves every full moon. This location hasn't been active for weeks. But the energy residue..." She trailed off, tapping the page. "It's fresh. Too fresh." Quinn pulled a flashlight from her belt. She clicked it on and swept the beam across the floor. The light caught something glinting near the victim's right hand. She didn't reach for it yet. She watched the dust motes dancing in the beam. "You think someone opened a door here," Quinn said. "I know it," Eva said. She pointed to the black markings on the neck. "These aren't painted. They're etched into the dermis. Magic doesn't leave bruises, Harlow. It leaves scars." Quinn shifted her weight. Her gaze dropped to the victim's left hand. The fingers were curled inward, stiff. She looked at the floor beneath the hand. "Davies," Quinn called out. The uniformed officer jumped. "Yes, Detective?" "Check the perimeter. Specifically the tunnel entrance. I want to know if anyone entered from the south track in the last six hours." Davies hesitated. "But the energy readings..." "Go." Davies scurried off, his boots clattering on the metal grating. Quinn turned back to Eva. "You said the markings are etched." "They are." Eva leaned forward. "I can feel the hum. It's a heavy one. This person was killed to feed the market. Or to close it." Quinn shone the light on the victim's right hand again. The fingers were curled, but the nail beds were clean. No dirt. No grit. She looked at the floor. A thin layer of dust covered the concrete, undisturbed except for the circle around the body. "Look at the dust," Quinn said. Eva frowned, peering at the ground. "It's undisturbed." "Exactly." Quinn stood up and walked three steps to the left. She pointed her flashlight at a patch of wall. A faint scuff mark marred the paint. "If someone dragged a body here, or fought, the dust moves. If they performed a ritual, they'd need space to move, to draw circles on the floor." "There were no circles on the floor," Eva admitted. "I thought that was part of the sigil." "The sigil is on the skin." Quinn walked back to the body. She pulled a pair of latex gloves from her pocket and snapped them on. She didn't touch the skin. She hovered her hand over the neck. "You said magic doesn't leave bruises." "No." "Then why is there a bruise?" Quinn pointed to a faint, yellowing discoloration just below the jawline, hidden by the black ink. "Pressure. Someone strangled him first." Eva leaned in, her eyes widening behind the lenses. "I missed that." "Because you were looking for the magic." Quinn pulled a small brass object from her pocket. The Veil Compass. The verdigris patina gleamed in the light. The needle spun wildly, then locked onto the victim's chest. "The compass points to rifts. It points to energy." "It's pointing at him." "It's pointing at the object in his pocket," Quinn corrected. She reached into the victim's coat. Her fingers brushed against cold metal. She pulled out a small, brass compass. Eva gasped. "That's a Shade artisan. That's illegal." "It's a decoy." Quinn held the compass up. The needle on this one was stuck. It didn't move. "This one is broken. The one in my hand is working." Quinn walked to the edge of the platform and looked down the dark tunnel. The darkness seemed to press against the light. She felt the weight of the memory from three years ago, the moment DS Morris vanished into a similar void. She pushed it down. "The killer brought the compass to the scene," Quinn said. "They wanted us to think this was a Veil Market transaction. They wanted us to look for magic." "But the sigils," Eva said. "The smell." "Chemicals. Sulfur and ink." Quinn looked at the black lines on the neck again. She noticed the ink had pooled slightly in the pores. "The ink was applied after death. The skin didn't absorb it." Eva stood up, brushing dust from her knees. "So it wasn't a sacrifice." "It was a message." Quinn holstered the broken compass. She looked at the scuff mark on the wall again. "Someone stood there. They watched the body. They staged the scene to draw attention away from the real crime." "Which was?" "Stealing the working compass." Quinn turned to the tunnel entrance. "The killer didn't come from the tracks. They came from the maintenance hatch." Eva looked at the ceiling. A rusted grate hung loose, swaying slightly in the draft. "How did you know?" "The dust." Quinn walked toward the hatch. "It's thicker here. Undisturbed. But the air pressure is different." She reached up and touched the grate. It didn't rattle. It was oiled. "Someone used this route to enter and exit without leaving footprints," Eva said. "Someone who knew the layout." Quinn looked back at the body. "Someone who knew about the Market." Davies returned from the south track, breathless. "Nothing, Detective. No footprints. No one." "Check the north hatch," Quinn said. "I haven't gone north yet." "Go." Davies ran toward the tunnel. Quinn turned back to Eva. The detective's face remained impassive, but her eyes narrowed. "You said the Market moves." "It does." "Then this location is empty. Why kill someone here?" "Because the Market is moving *now*," Eva said. She tapped her notebook. "The full moon is tonight. The energy is peaking. They needed a body to anchor the shift." "Or they needed a distraction." Quinn holstered her flashlight. She checked her watch. The leather strap felt cold against her pulse. "If the Market is moving, the rifts are opening. If someone stole a compass, they can track the rifts." "Who would want that?" "Someone who wants to find the next location before the police do." Quinn looked at the black markings on the dead man's neck. "This wasn't a murder to feed the market. It was a murder to hide a theft." Eva zipped her satchel closed. "The thief is still here. They're watching us." Quinn scanned the shadows. The flickering lights cast long, distorted shapes against the tunnel walls. A sound echoed from the darkness—a metallic scrape, like a boot on metal. "Stay behind me," Quinn said. Eva nodded, gripping her satchel strap until her knuckles turned white. Quinn drew her service weapon. The metal felt heavy, familiar. She took a step toward the maintenance hatch. The air grew colder. The smell of ozone intensified, stinging the back of her throat. "Detective," Davies shouted from the tunnel. "I found something." Quinn lowered her gun slightly. "What did you find?" "Footprints," Davies called back. "Fresh ones. Leading to the grate." Quinn holstered the weapon and holstered the compass. She didn't lower her guard. "Secure the perimeter. Don't let anyone leave." She looked at Eva. "Get the forensics team down here. I want a full scan of the ink. I want to know what chemicals were used." "And the body?" "Bag it. Don't touch the neck." Quinn walked toward the tunnel, her boots echoing on the concrete. "We're not looking for a ghost. We're looking for a thief." The darkness ahead seemed to swallow the light from the floodlamps. Quinn stepped into the tunnel, the cold air biting at her exposed skin. The sound of the scrape came again, closer this time. She didn't flinch. She kept moving forward, her hand resting on the grip of her gun. Eva followed, her footsteps quick and light. "Harlow, wait." Quinn stopped. She held up a hand. "Do you hear that?" Eva froze. "Breathing." "No." Quinn tilted her head. "Metal. It's a lock." She looked up at the ceiling. The maintenance hatch was open. A rope dangled from the darkness above, swaying in the draft. "Someone's climbing down," Eva whispered. "Or up." Quinn pulled a flashlight from her belt and aimed it at the hatch. The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating a pair of boots hanging in the air. The figure dropped silently, landing in a crouch. They wore a dark coat, the hood pulled low. They held a device in their hand—a compass. Quinn raised her gun. "Freeze." The figure didn't move. They looked at Quinn, then at Eva. The hood shifted, revealing a face obscured by shadow. "You're too late, Detective," the figure said. The voice was distorted, layered with static. Quinn didn't lower the weapon. "Drop it." The figure raised the compass. The needle spun wildly. "The Market is already moving." "Drop it!" Quinn shouted. The figure turned and ran toward the tunnel. Quinn fired a warning shot. The bullet sparked off the concrete wall. The figure didn't stop. They vanished into the darkness of the tunnel. Quinn holstered her gun and ran after them. "Davies! Block the exit!" She sprinted down the tunnel, her breath coming in short bursts. The air grew colder with every step. The smell of ozone was overwhelming now. She saw the figure ahead, a shadow against the dim light. "Stop!" Quinn yelled. The figure reached a junction. They turned left. Quinn followed. The tunnel opened into a larger chamber, the walls covered in graffiti and sigils. The figure stopped in the center of the room. They held the compass up. The needle pointed directly at Quinn. "It's not a compass," the figure said. Quinn raised her gun again. "What is it?" "It's a key." The figure pressed a button on the device. The ground beneath them shook. The walls groaned. A low hum filled the air, vibrating in Quinn's chest. Eva caught up, panting. "Harlow, don't shoot. That's a rift anchor." Quinn kept the gun steady. "What does it do?" "It opens the door." The figure smiled. The shadow fell away from their face. It was a man Quinn recognized from the files. A member of the clique. "Welcome to the Market," he said. The floor beneath them began to crack. Light poured through the fissures. Not the yellow of the floodlights, but a deep, violet glow. Quinn didn't blink. She kept the gun trained on the man's chest. "You're under arrest." The man laughed. "You can't arrest a location, Detective." The violet light flared, blinding them. Quinn squinted, shielding her eyes. The hum grew louder, drowning out the sound of the tunnel. She fired. The bullet passed through the man like smoke. He didn't fall. He stepped back into the light. "Run," Quinn said to Eva. Eva grabbed her arm. "Harlow, the rift." "I said run." Quinn stepped forward, into the violet light. The air felt thick, like water. She reached for her radio. Static. The man was gone. The compass lay on the floor, the needle spinning. Quinn picked it up. It was warm. She looked at Eva. "Call for backup. All units." Eva nodded, pulling out her phone. "No signal." "Then we wait." Quinn looked at the fissure in the floor. The light pulsed. She checked her watch. The hands were spinning backward. "Time is wrong," Quinn said. Eva looked at the phone. "The battery is draining." Quinn holstered the compass. She walked to the edge of the fissure. The light reflected in her brown eyes. "Stay close," she said. The hum stopped. The light faded. The tunnel returned to darkness, lit only by the floodlights. The man was gone. The compass was in her hand. Quinn looked at the floor. The fissure was gone. The concrete was smooth. "Where did he go?" Eva asked. "Into the Market." Quinn turned back toward the body. "And he took the anchor." She walked back to the body. She looked at the neck. The black markings were gone. The skin was smooth. "He erased the evidence," Quinn said. "Can you track him?" Eva asked. Quinn looked at the compass. The needle pointed to the tunnel. "I don't need a compass," Quinn said. "I know where he's going." She looked at the tunnel entrance. The darkness seemed deeper now. "Let's go." Eva followed. They walked into the tunnel. The air was cold. The smell of ozone lingered. Quinn checked her watch. The hands were still. "Time is stopped," she said. Eva shivered. "Harlow." "I know." Quinn kept walking. "We're not in London anymore." The tunnel stretched out before them, endless and dark. The only sound was their footsteps. Quinn stopped. She listened. "Did you hear that?" Eva listened. "A train." "No." Quinn looked at the tracks. "It's a voice." She stepped closer to the wall. The graffiti shifted. The letters rearranged themselves. *Welcome Home.* Quinn touched the wall. The paint was wet. "Who wrote this?" Eva asked. "Someone who knows us." Quinn pulled a pen from her pocket. She wrote on the wall. *Show yourself.* The letters glowed. Then they faded. The tunnel shook. The lights flickered. Quinn drew her gun again. "Get back." Eva stepped behind her. A figure emerged from the shadows. It wasn't the man. It was DS Morris. Quinn froze. Her hand shook. "Harlow," Morris said. She didn't lower the gun. "You're dead." "Not anymore." Morris stepped into the light. He looked real. Solid. "Who are you?" Quinn asked. "Me." Morris smiled. "Or what's left of me." Quinn didn't blink. "What do you want?" "To help." Morris held out a hand. Quinn looked at the hand. It was transparent. "I don't trust ghosts," she said. "Then trust the compass." Morris pointed to the device in her pocket. Quinn pulled it out. The needle pointed at Morris. "What is this?" she asked. "A map." Morris stepped closer. "The Market is changing. And you're the key." Quinn holstered the gun. She looked at Morris. "I'm not a key." "You are." Morris touched her shoulder. His hand passed through. "You have to choose." "Choose what?" "To stay or to go." Morris faded. "The choice is yours." He vanished. The tunnel was empty. Quinn stood alone. The compass spun. Eva stepped forward. "Harlow?" "I'm here." Quinn put the compass away. "We keep moving." "Where?" "Wherever the needle points." Quinn walked forward. The tunnel stretched out. The darkness waited. She didn't look back. The lights flickered. The hum returned. Quinn kept walking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags71
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn walked back [back]"
1"Quinn turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences160
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.888
rawRatio0.028
effectiveRatio0.025
92.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2695
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count4
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2695
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"flickered"
count3
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"intricate"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count2
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"etched"
count2
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count2
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"shattered"
2"intricate"
3"scanned"
4"trembled"
5"glinting"
6"dancing"
7"etched"
8"weight"
9"pulse"
10"echoed"
11"familiar"
12"echoing"
13"footsteps"
14"gloom"
15"pulsed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences316
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences316
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences405
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords2692
ratio0.002
matches
0"now"
1"Welcome Home."
2"Show yourself."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions35
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions146
wordCount1847
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity4.6
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn85
Davies9
Kowalski1
Eva37
Veil1
Compass1
Morris12
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Davies"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Compass"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences127
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"lines that seemed to shift when Quinn viewed them from the corner of her eye"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.743
wordCount2692
matches
0"not the copper tang of blood, but something sharper, like burnt hair"
1"Not the yellow of the floodlights, but a deep, violet glow"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences405
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs184
mean14.63
std12.66
cv0.865
sampleLengths
061
126
216
351
43
530
648
715
845
925
104
1147
1243
139
1430
1526
164
176
1823
196
201
2110
2211
2326
2445
256
268
2754
2817
2944
301
3127
3212
3345
344
3529
368
3729
3846
3928
407
4135
4213
4338
442
4523
4619
4730
4813
4917
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences316
matches
0"were curled"
1"were curled"
2"was stuck"
3"was oiled"
4"was gone"
5"was gone"
6"was gone"
7"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs376
matches
0"were spinning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences405
ratio0.007
matches
0"The smell hit her first—not the copper tang of blood, but something sharper, like burnt hair and sulfur."
1"A sound echoed from the darkness—a metallic scrape, like a boot on metal."
2"They held a device in their hand—a compass."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1850
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.01783783783783784
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.005945945945945946
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences405
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences405
mean6.65
std4.53
cv0.682
sampleLengths
019
116
28
318
419
57
612
74
83
910
1012
1126
123
1318
1412
155
165
178
1818
197
203
212
223
2312
2412
2514
2619
277
284
2914
304
3111
328
3324
344
357
3611
3710
386
399
409
415
429
4316
444
458
466
478
484
494
38.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats45
diversityRatio0.1925925925925926
totalSentences405
uniqueOpeners78
12.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences262
matches
0"Then they faded."
ratio0.004
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount76
totalSentences262
matches
0"She adjusted the collar of"
1"He held a clipboard like"
2"He didn't look up."
3"She walked toward the body"
4"She didn't touch the body."
5"She leaned in, her sharp"
6"She scanned the floor around"
7"She stood up and turned"
8"She clutched her worn leather"
9"She tucked a curl of"
10"Her voice trembled slightly."
11"She pulled a small notebook"
12"She trailed off, tapping the"
13"She clicked it on and"
14"She didn't reach for it"
15"She watched the dust motes"
16"She pointed to the black"
17"Her gaze dropped to the"
18"She looked at the floor"
19"She looked at the floor."
ratio0.29
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount258
totalSentences262
matches
0"The fluorescent lights above the"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped over the"
2"The air tasted of ozone"
3"She adjusted the collar of"
4"PC Davies stood by the"
5"He held a clipboard like"
6"He didn't look up."
7"Quinn ignored him."
8"She walked toward the body"
9"The victim wore a heavy"
10"Davies finally looked at her,"
11"Quinn crouched beside the corpse."
12"She didn't touch the body."
13"She leaned in, her sharp"
14"The smell hit her first—not"
15"She scanned the floor around"
16"She stood up and turned"
17"Eva Kowalski stepped into the"
18"She clutched her worn leather"
19"She tucked a curl of"
ratio0.985
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences262
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Black markings covered the skin of the exposed neck, intricate geometric lines that seemed to shift when Quinn viewed them from the corner of her eye."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags71
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn walked, her boots echoing on the concrete"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags36
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
1"Eva admitted (admit)"
2"Quinn corrected (correct)"
3"Davies shouted (shout)"
4"Eva whispered (whisper)"
5"Quinn shouted (shout)"
6"Quinn yelled (yell)"
dialogueSentences160
tagDensity0.225
leniency0.45
rawRatio0.194
effectiveRatio0.088
82.2140%