Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBF2XQTF9NJM1V34SAP1D0V

Run Details

Duration:
32.5s
Cost:
$0.001635
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered against the asphalt in rhythmic, brutal bursts, turning the Soho sidewalks into shallow rivers of grime. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed the collar of her trench coat up against her neck, though the wet fabric offered little protection against the bite that had seeped through the wool. Her boots splashed through puddles reflecting the dying neon of a takeaway shop sign. She checked the time on the leather watch strapped to her left wrist. Four seconds ahead of the schedule, her watch had always been right, just like her instincts during the Morris case. Three years of silence still sat heavy in her lungs. Ahead, a silhouette darted through the alley mouth. The figure moved with the fluid confidence of someone who knew the shadows better than the streetlights. Quinn picked up the pace. Her breath fogged in the sudden drop of temperature. She did not shout. Shouting gave away the chase. Silence was the advantage of the hunted. She turned the corner, breath hitching as the suspect vanished into a maintenance door set deep into a brick wall. Quinn threw her shoulder into the metal frame. It groaned, locked tight against rotting wood. She checked the handle. It rattled, loose. She twisted it hard. The mechanism screamed inside the lock cylinder before giving way. Quinn slipped inside. The smell of ozone and wet stone replaced the exhaust fumes of the street outside. A narrow concrete staircase spiraled down into the dark. A voice echoed from the depths. Cold and amplified by the hollow tunnel. I know you followed him. Quinn froze at the top of the stairs. Her hand went to the holster, fingers tightening on the grip of her service revolver. The darkness below pulsed with a faint, sickly green luminescence. Who are you? Quinn called down. Her voice didn't waver. Police training kept the tremor out. A shadow detached itself closer to the landing above her, silhouetted against the flickering light of the tube station below. You want the truth? You step down that way, you lose it. Harlow didn't move. She scanned the stairs, her eyes adjusting to the gloom. Her jaw tightened. She thought of Morris, how he had walked into a room without a light switch, a room with no exit, and never came out. He had chased the dark down a hole and found something that chewed his bones. I'm not looking for truth tonight, Quinn said. I'm looking for a warrant. I'm looking for answers. The shadow laughed. A dry, rattling sound that died before it hit the ground. Warrants expire when the sun goes down. Down here? Rules are made by the ones breathing the air at the bottom. Quinn descended one step. Then another. The air grew heavier, pressing against her chest. The sound of dripping water became a rhythmic drumming. She could hear the hum of something electrical, though nothing had been used in this station for decades. The floor was cracked tiles covered in a slick film of slime. Show me the token then. The shadow stepped fully into a patch of illumination. A man in a long coat. His face was obscured by a hood, but Quinn saw the glint of iron on his belt. She did not recognize the standard. Met Police had no uniform like that. No token? No entry. Harlow reached into her deep pocket. She felt the cold steel of her own tools. She had nothing here. No bone. No key. Just a badge she had lost jurisdiction in this sector of the city. I have authorization. He gestured to the darkness below. An open archway where the platform usually ran. The air rushing from it carried a scent of ozone, copper, and something sweet that made Quinn's stomach turn. Authorization from who? The guy who lost a partner chasing ghosts? Quinn stopped. He knew her name. He knew the Morris incident. She drew a breath, keeping the rage contained. I lost a partner to the unknown. That is motivation. The man raised an open hand. Unknown kills faster than the dark. Walk away, Detective. You aren't built for the Under. She looked at the watch on her wrist. The leather strap was stiff with rain. Her partner was gone. She was still here. She adjusted her stance, weight forward on the balls of her feet, military precision. I am built for the job. The man stepped back into the green glow. You can't buy what you carry in your head. Only what you steal. The Market is open. The gate is closed to cops. He began to fade as he spoke. His figure became transparent against the green light. Quinn lunged forward, her gun drawn, but the doorway was empty. She stood alone on the concrete platform. The green light pulsed from the darkness below, illuminating strange silhouettes moving on the tracks that no longer ran trains. She saw items stacked on pallets that defied logic. Glass vials glowing with internal fire. Stacks of books bound in skin. The air hummed with a frequency that rattled her teeth. Quinn holstered the weapon. She checked the entrance behind her. Locked tight. The only way into this world was through the hole in the wall of reality beneath Camden. She pulled a penlight from her coat. She clicked it on, the beam cutting through the damp air. She shone it toward the floor near the gate. There, sitting on the grime, lay a small object. A bone. A human phalanx, carved and polished. Harlow knelt. The cold stone seeped through her jeans. She picked it up. It felt warm against her palm. She turned it over in the light beam. Etched along the side were symbols she didn't recognize, yet they felt familiar in a way that made her hair stand up. The man's voice returned from the darkness. It did not come through the air this time, it vibrated in her chest. One token. One life. One question. Quinn stood. She walked to the threshold where the pavement ended and the neon began. The green light washed over her face, casting sharp shadows along her jawline. The temperature dropped ten degrees instantly. Her breath came out in long, white plumes. She looked back at the stairs. The exit. The rain. The safety of the street where the law held sway and people disappeared into alleys because they got mugged, not because they were eaten. Then she looked down at the bone token. It pulsed in her hand, syncing with her heartbeat. She needed to know what happened to Morris. She needed to know if he had found a way out or if he was the bait. She held the bone up to the light. It caught the beam, glowing faintly from the inside. Quinn dropped the token into the pocket of her coat. I'm asking a price. I'm paying it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1148
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1148
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"depths"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count3
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"standard"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"silence"
2"echoed"
3"depths"
4"pulsed"
5"scanned"
6"gloom"
7"glint"
8"standard"
9"stomach"
10"weight"
11"etched"
12"familiar"
13"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences144
matches(empty)
93.25% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences144
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1148
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1148
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow4
Quinn15
Morris4
Police2
Detective2
Market1
Camden1
You4
One3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Police"
4"You"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.847
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1148
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.96
std18.95
cv0.759
sampleLengths
095
110
255
356
427
513
65
733
816
920
1012
1155
1217
1314
1421
1553
165
1745
184
1936
203
2133
2211
2319
2410
256
2615
2737
286
298
3023
3126
3248
3310
3429
3544
3649
3721
386
3942
4034
4117
4225
4317
4410
457
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences144
matches
0"are made"
1"been used"
2"was obscured"
3"was gone"
4"is closed"
5"got mugged"
6"were eaten"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs194
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences144
ratio0
matches(empty)
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1148
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"locked tight against rotting"
1"faint, sickly green luminescence."
2"heavier, pressing against her"
3"below, illuminating strange silhouettes"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.0156794425087108
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006097560975609756
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean7.97
std5.36
cv0.672
sampleLengths
018
130
214
313
420
510
68
717
85
99
104
115
127
1320
148
157
164
173
184
1910
203
2115
229
236
247
255
268
2715
2810
293
303
314
326
3320
344
358
363
3710
383
3924
4015
418
425
434
443
4511
467
472
4812
494
34.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.2847222222222222
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners41
78.13% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences128
matches
0"Just a badge she had"
1"Only what you steal."
2"Then she looked down at"
ratio0.023
29.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount61
totalSentences128
matches
0"Her boots splashed through puddles"
1"She checked the time on"
2"Her breath fogged in the"
3"She did not shout."
4"She turned the corner, breath"
5"It groaned, locked tight against"
6"She checked the handle."
7"It rattled, loose."
8"She twisted it hard."
9"I know you followed him."
10"Her hand went to the"
11"Her voice didn't waver."
12"You want the truth?"
13"You step down that way,"
14"She scanned the stairs, her"
15"Her jaw tightened."
16"She thought of Morris, how"
17"He had chased the dark"
18"I'm not looking for truth"
19"I'm looking for a warrant."
ratio0.477
14.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences128
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed the"
1"Her boots splashed through puddles"
2"She checked the time on"
3"The figure moved with the"
4"Quinn picked up the pace."
5"Her breath fogged in the"
6"She did not shout."
7"Shouting gave away the chase."
8"Silence was the advantage of"
9"She turned the corner, breath"
10"Quinn threw her shoulder into"
11"It groaned, locked tight against"
12"She checked the handle."
13"It rattled, loose."
14"She twisted it hard."
15"The mechanism screamed inside the"
16"Quinn slipped inside."
17"The smell of ozone and"
18"A narrow concrete staircase spiraled"
19"A voice echoed from the"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed the collar of her trench coat up against her neck, though the wet fabric offered little protection against the bite that had seep…"
1"The figure moved with the fluid confidence of someone who knew the shadows better than the streetlights."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.0581%