| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 89.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "looming" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "stark" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 93.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1372 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1137 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.23 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 14 | | London | 2 | | Auroras | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Isolde | 5 | | Fae-Bane | 1 | | Nyx | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Auroras" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Pendant" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Isolde" | | 8 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.884 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 42.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like crushed garnets under her sol" | | 1 | "looked like men and women but lacked face" | | 2 | "smelled like iron and blood" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.729 | | wordCount | 1372 | | matches | | 0 | "Not for the hunger, but for the weight of it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 45.73 | | std | 24.78 | | cv | 0.542 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 93 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 74 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 98 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "were appearing" | | 1 | "was thinning" | | 2 | "was bleeding" | | 3 | "weren’t casting" | | 4 | "were standing" | | 5 | "was turning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, the veil of London—the grey mist that usually clung to the edges of her vision in the dead hours between midnight and dawn—had dissolved." | | 1 | "The air was thick with the scent of roasting meats—spices so intense her eyes watered, mixed with the rot of fruit left to lie in the heat too long." | | 2 | "“The realm of excess. Here, the sin is not just hunger; it is the inability to stop.”" | | 3 | "Servants moved there—figures that looked like men and women but lacked faces, moving with the jerky rhythm of puppets on strings." | | 4 | "It was a side effect of the seasonal shift; the Veil was thinning, and Dymas was bleeding through." | | 5 | "It wasn’t an earthquake; it was a rhythm." | | 6 | "They weren't shadows; they were the diners." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1147 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.02964254577157803 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00959023539668701 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 13.86 | | std | 7.64 | | cv | 0.551 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 41.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.29292929292929293 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 61.98% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 1 | "Her silver hair flowed like" | | 2 | "Her fingers brushed over the" | | 3 | "She could feel the Heartstone" | | 4 | "It was the only thing" | | 5 | "It was the smell of" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded too flat," | | 7 | "She didn’t eat them." | | 8 | "She held them up, letting" | | 9 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 10 | "They carried platters piled high" | | 11 | "They grabbed her arm, their" | | 12 | "It was a side effect" | | 13 | "It wasn’t an earthquake; it" | | 14 | "She spoke without turning, her" | | 15 | "They continued moving, deeper into" | | 16 | "It felt predatory." | | 17 | "She could feel the vibration" | | 18 | "It wasn’t human." | | 19 | "It was a sound of" |
| | ratio | 0.395 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of honey" | | 1 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 2 | "The sound emanated from the" | | 3 | "Nyx stood as a solid" | | 4 | "The violet glow of their" | | 5 | "Isolde preceded them, walking barefoot" | | 6 | "Her silver hair flowed like" | | 7 | "the Half-Fae said, her lips" | | 8 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 9 | "The moonsilver was cold, a" | | 10 | "Her fingers brushed over the" | | 11 | "She could feel the Heartstone" | | 12 | "It was the only thing" | | 13 | "The landscape rose around them" | | 14 | "Vines as thick as tree" | | 15 | "The air was thick with" | | 16 | "It was the smell of" | | 17 | "Her voice sounded too flat," | | 18 | "Isolde replied, stopping to pluck" | | 19 | "She didn’t eat them." |
| | ratio | 0.926 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 21.56% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of honey and ash, a thick, cloying sweetness that coated the back of Aurora’s throat." | | 1 | "She stepped forward, her boots landing on soil that wasn’t soil but rather dark, granular matter that felt like crushed garnets under her soles." | | 2 | "Her silver hair flowed like liquid mercury in a current of heat that wasn’t there, and her pale lavender eyes scanned the horizon with an ancient, bored clarity…" | | 3 | "They carried platters piled high with gold-plated dishes, spilling over with food that steamed in the amber light." | | 4 | "Near a cluster of ancient oak trees that stood stark and black against the amber sky, the ground fell away into a depression." | | 5 | "Platters of bread, steams of meat, jugs of wine that smelled like iron and blood." | | 6 | "Nyx had solidified fully, standing between Aurora and the long table, their form expanding, casting a deep shadow that ate the light of the fruit nearby." | | 7 | "The Seer took one step forward, her bare foot sinking slightly into the granular garnet soil before vanishing as if it were water." | | 8 | "They stepped into the air, their form shifting, becoming more like smoke, drifting over the table to scout the perimeter." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, the whisper rising to a sharp crack" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |