Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBF6FMW5MSVZTGGK1MF4245

Run Details

Duration:
51.0s
Cost:
$0.009784
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked into place, the heavy metal scraping against the frame with a sound that usually meant a delivery or a drunk neighbor. Rory waited another ten seconds, listening for the footsteps fading down the corridor, before she reached for the chain. Through the peephole, the hallway light cast a long, distorted shadow of the man standing there. She shouldn't open it. She knew the rule: no unannounced guests, especially not in this neighborhood. But the silence from the kitchen where Ptolemy was probably plotting against the cat food bowl felt louder than the warning bells in her head. She undid the chain. She didn't think she recognized him at first, not with the rain plastering the platinum blond hair to his skull, or the charcoal suit that had somehow managed to survive the London drizzle without a single wrinkle. Then the light from the hall hit his face, and the heterochromia snapped into focus. Amber and black. Lucien Moreau. She shouldn't let him in. She had spent the last three weeks convincing herself that the silence was better than the noise he brought. But she opened the door anyway, her hand lingering on the knob as if she might change her mind. You look tired, he said. The words were soft, in English, precise and cutting. I look like I live in East London, Rory replied. She didn't step back to invite him in, but she didn't close the door either. The flat smelled of cardamom and damp paper from below, a permanent fixture of the curry house tenement. I know. You're hiding out at the Brick Lane place. I asked about the number. He shifted his weight, the ivory handle of his cane resting against his thigh like a weapon waiting to be drawn. He didn't look tired. He looked like the kind of man who slept in silk and ate food he hadn't cooked himself. It's not my flat, Rory said. It's Eva's. And you are? Crashing. The corner of his mouth lifted, a ghost of a smile that didn't reach his eyes. He stepped forward, just enough that she could smell the rain on his wool and the faint, metallic scent of something ancient underneath the expensive cologne. The smell of Avaros. You were hiding from the wrong person, he said. Or the right one. Rory leaned against the doorframe, the wood cool against her arm. Her straight shoulder-length hair was damp at the ends. She caught the movement of his wrist. His hand was empty, which was a good sign. Usually, when Lucien came calling, something had burned down, someone had disappeared, or the ley lines of London were shifting in the wrong direction. What do you want, Lucien? He didn't answer immediately. He looked past her, into the cluttered room where books were stacked against the walls like siege towers. The flat was small, cramped, and overflowing with her research on the supernatural undercurrents she'd stumbled into since coming to London. I need a location. I don't know where things are. You know where the things are. The things that matter. Rory felt the tightness in her chest, the same one that had been there for months. He had left after the night in Shoreditch, when Evan had gotten too close to the truth and Lucien had pulled the plug, burning the trail behind him. It was a mercy kill on a life they'd been trying to build. He hadn't stayed for the explanation. He had stayed for the silence, and then he had gone. You left, she said. I had to. The contract was done. It wasn't done. There was no contract. There was just us, and you vanished. Lucien tilted his head, the rain dripping from his collar onto the floorboards. He looked younger when he stood still, less like the monster the underworld whispered about and more like the man who had taught her how to read the old scripts. You were going to get killed, he said quietly. I didn't come back to save you because I liked your company. I came back to fix the mistake I made leaving. Ptolemy meowed from the corner of the room, a low, demanding sound. The cat ignored Lucien and walked up to Rory's ankles, weaving between her legs. She reached down to scratch him behind the ears, using it as an excuse not to look at him. The scar on her left wrist throbbed in rhythm with the rain against the window. A childhood accident, she'd told him once. He knew it was the only part of her body that belonged to her. Are you staying? he asked. Not here. He stepped through the doorway. The door clicked shut behind him, the deadbolts locking him in. Rory didn't stop him. The air pressure in the room seemed to drop, heavy and charged. He moved to the center of the space, where the floor creaked under his boots. He didn't take off the suit jacket. He looked like a shark in a shallow pool. You're working for Yu-Fei now? He gestured to the stack of takeout containers on the table. I needed a job, she said. And I needed a place that didn't have a name on the lease. Eva's name is on the lease. She's in Wales. She said I could stay. Lucien walked closer. He stopped two feet away. Close enough that she could see the flecks of black in the amber eye. The distance felt like a canyon. She knew how it worked. She knew where the lines were drawn. You're a risk, he said. We both know that. He reached out, his hand hovering near her arm but not touching. The restraint was maddening. He was a fixer. He fixed things. She was the broken one, the one who had run away from her past and landed in London's chaos. I can fix the mistake, he said. Rory looked at the scar on her wrist, then back at him. She wasn't looking for a fix. She was looking for an ending that didn't feel like a betrayal. It's not a mistake, Lucien. It's a choice. He let out a breath, slow and controlled. His cane tapped once on the floor. I know. That's why I'm here. To offer a different choice. She wanted to walk away. She wanted to open the door and let him stand on the landing where he belonged. But the memory of the last time she had seen him, the way he had looked at her as if she were already dead, made her feet feel rooted. You're not supposed to be here. The deadbolts clicked again, loud and final in the quiet room. I'm not supposed to leave, he said. He reached out and touched her wrist. His fingers were warm, calloused, the skin rough against the smooth flesh of her scar. The touch wasn't gentle. It was an anchor. Rory pulled her hand back, but only an inch, the movement small and insignificant in the face of everything else. Don't, she said. Don't what? Don't make me choose. Lucien leaned in, his voice dropping to a murmur. The rain was louder outside, the curry house below the only noise in the world. You chose to open the door. She closed her eyes. The smell of him filled her lungs. The amber eye held hers. For a moment, the flat, the deadbolts, the cat, the history of the abuse she had left behind in Cardiff—it all faded. There was just the space between them, and the choice to bridge it. When she opened her eyes, Lucien was still there. And the door was closed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1283
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1283
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"silk"
4"throbbed"
5"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
57.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences134
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1282
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions7
matches
0"You look tired, he said."
1"I look like I live in East London, Rory replied."
2"You were hiding from the wrong person, he said."
3"You left, she said."
4"You were going to get killed, he said quietly."
5"I needed a job, she said."
6"I can fix the mistake, he said."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1282
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
London5
Moreau1
English1
East1
Rory9
Brick1
Lane1
Eva2
Avaros1
Lucien10
Shoreditch1
Evan1
Yu-Fei1
Wales1
Cardiff1
You10
Don3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
6"You"
places
0"London"
1"English"
2"East"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"Shoreditch"
6"Wales"
7"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like the kind of man who slept in"
1"looked like a shark in a shallow pool"
2"felt like a canyon"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1282
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean22.49
std21.04
cv0.936
sampleLengths
060
145
255
32
443
514
643
715
843
98
103
111
1246
1313
1460
155
1643
174
186
1910
2074
214
227
2314
2443
2531
2612
2769
285
292
3063
315
3211
3319
346
358
3640
375
384
3942
407
4130
428
4315
4411
4550
466
4711
487
4950
97.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences134
matches
0"were stacked"
1"get killed"
2"were drawn"
59.94% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs238
matches
0"was probably plotting"
1"were hiding"
2"were shifting"
3"wasn't looking"
4"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences134
ratio0.007
matches
0"For a moment, the flat, the deadbolts, the cat, the history of the abuse she had left behind in Cardiff—it all faded."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1285
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.026459143968871595
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007003891050583658
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean9.57
std7
cv0.732
sampleLengths
025
119
216
34
412
525
64
737
815
93
102
115
1219
1319
145
159
1610
1715
1818
192
208
215
2221
234
2418
256
262
273
281
2916
3026
314
329
334
3411
359
367
379
3824
395
404
4118
4221
434
446
456
464
4716
4828
4913
33.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.23880597014925373
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners32
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences126
matches
0"Then the light from the"
1"Usually, when Lucien came calling,"
ratio0.016
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount72
totalSentences126
matches
0"She shouldn't open it."
1"She knew the rule: no"
2"She undid the chain."
3"She didn't think she recognized"
4"She shouldn't let him in."
5"She had spent the last"
6"You look tired, he said."
7"I look like I live"
8"She didn't step back to"
9"You're hiding out at the"
10"I asked about the number."
11"He shifted his weight, the"
12"He didn't look tired."
13"He looked like the kind"
14"It's not my flat, Rory"
15"He stepped forward, just enough"
16"You were hiding from the"
17"Her straight shoulder-length hair was"
18"She caught the movement of"
19"His hand was empty, which"
ratio0.571
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences126
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked into"
1"Rory waited another ten seconds,"
2"She shouldn't open it."
3"She knew the rule: no"
4"She undid the chain."
5"She didn't think she recognized"
6"Amber and black."
7"She shouldn't let him in."
8"She had spent the last"
9"You look tired, he said."
10"The words were soft, in"
11"I look like I live"
12"She didn't step back to"
13"The flat smelled of cardamom"
14"You're hiding out at the"
15"I asked about the number."
16"He shifted his weight, the"
17"He didn't look tired."
18"He looked like the kind"
19"It's not my flat, Rory"
ratio0.833
39.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"To offer a different choice."
ratio0.008
74.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She didn't think she recognized him at first, not with the rain plastering the platinum blond hair to his skull, or the charcoal suit that had somehow managed t…"
1"But she opened the door anyway, her hand lingering on the knob as if she might change her mind."
2"The corner of his mouth lifted, a ghost of a smile that didn't reach his eyes."
3"He looked younger when he stood still, less like the monster the underworld whispered about and more like the man who had taught her how to read the old scripts…"
4"He knew it was the only part of her body that belonged to her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.4945%