Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBF78Y8EFJ6F3BK67KEPX1A

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.002194
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary of Richmond Park, their bark etched silver under the moonlight. Aurora Carter paused at the threshold, breath fogging in air that tasted of wet earth and stale honey. The wildflowers bloomed year-round here, a riot of red and gold that had no business opening in November. They swayed without wind, petals trembling against the night breeze that didn't exist. She adjusted the silver chain around her neck, her fingers brushing the deep crimson heartstone. The gem pulsed with a faint inner warmth against her sternum. Inside a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. It hummed, a low vibration she felt in her teeth. Log three. Aurora whispered into the recorder on her belt. Arrived at coordinates. The Grove is… quiet. She tucked the phone back into her jacket pocket. The silence pressed against her eardrums, heavy and absolute. No crickets. No owls. Just the soft crunch of gravel under her boots as she moved past the stones. The gravel stopped making that sound after the first few steps. Her boots walked on air, then stopped again on solid ground. The transition happened without the sound of soil shifting. She stopped and looked back at the stone arch. It stood still, unmoved by the dark. Inside the perimeter, the shadows stretched longer than the trees should have allowed. They pooled on the grass like spilled ink. Rory pulled the gemstone through her jacket. The silver chain felt cold, cold enough to burn her fingers. The crimson stone flared brighter. A Hel portal. The definition came from the notes in her pocket, crumpled now between her thumb and forefinger. It signaled proximity to a tear in the world. Time moved differently here. She pulled her watch from her wrist. Six minutes ago. An hour passed. The scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom heat from the childhood accident. It reminded her of the burn when she touched the stone the first time. The unknown benefactor had given it to her in a dark alley behind Silas's bar. Three nights ago. Or three years. The math didn't add up. She shook her head to clear the dizziness. Don't think about the time. Think about the mission. She walked forward into the grove. The wildflowers closed their petals as she approached, snapping shut with a sound like dry wood breaking. They retreated from her presence. Why did I come here? Rory muttered. Just to find the exit. She moved deeper into the clearing. The air grew heavier, thicker, making it hard to draw a full breath. The temperature dropped ten degrees in a single step. Frost rimed the edges of the grass blades, glowing faintly blue in the darkness. A sound moved at the edge of her vision. A footstep. Distinct. Heavy. Coming from the tree line where the shadows pooled. She stopped walking. Her hand went to the small knife she carried in her waistband, not because she intended to use it, but because her muscles needed something to do. Her fingers tightened on the handle. You're not supposed to be here, Aurora said to the empty clearing. Her voice didn't echo. The sound absorbed immediately into the dark wood. Another sound followed. Not a footstep. A drag. Something wet sliding over dry leaves. It came from the left. Behind the oak trees. She spun around, scanning the perimeter. The trees looked wrong. The bark swirled like water. The standing eyes of the wood seemed to follow her rotation. Heartstone, she said aloud. Keep the light steady. The pendant swung wildly in her grip. It didn't respond to her words. The glow intensified, shifting from a pulse to a steady, hard burn that threatened to blister her skin. It pointed not toward the center of the grove, but toward a gap in the trees on her right. A gap that hadn't been there a minute before. Rory took a step toward the gap. Her boot didn't crush a leaf. It passed through the air inches above the ground. She looked down. The grass was ten feet below her. She wasn't walking on the ground anymore. She walked on the air, suspended above the dark vegetation. Gravity had loosened its hold. Panic flared in her chest, hot and sharp. She focused on her breathing. Steady inhale. Steady exhale. Don't run. She forced her feet down. Her boots touched the soil with a soft thud. Grounded. She looked at her watch. The second hand spun backward. Time wasn't just wrong. It was unraveling. The air shifted. The smell of stale honey vanished, replaced by the metallic tang of ozone. Something breathed. It wasn't the wind. The exhalation was warm and smelled of iron. Rory drew the knife. Her grip didn't tremble, but her wrist throbbed harder. Who's there? She waited for an answer. The silence stretched out, pulling tight like a rubber band. The flowers bloomed again. Instantly. They burst open in perfect unison, revealing black centers that looked like mouths. I am alone in a strange, isolated place, she said. She needed to hear the statement. To anchor herself. Something moved at the edge of vision. It wasn't a shadow this time. It was a shape made of light, but it dimmed when she looked at it directly. It stepped into the clearing, tall and thin. It didn't have a face. Just a smooth, pale surface where features should have been. Aurora held her breath. The thing tilted its head. It made no sound, but she heard a click behind her eyes, a noise that came from inside her skull. The Heartstone grew hot enough to sear her skin. She dropped the pendant. It fell through the fingers that tried to catch it, landing silently on the moss. She looked at the stone. It pulsed violently now, red light flooding the immediate area. The light revealed the creature standing there. It was made of the same moss as the ground, the same bark as the trees, fused with something organic. It raised a hand. A long limb ending in fingers that were too many, too long. Rory backed up. One step. Two. She didn't look at the thing. She looked at the ground. The grass moved. The blades bent under her weight, but they pushed back as if the weight came from below. The earth grabbed her ankles. She kicked free and leaped sideways. The moss retracted, pulling the grip back into the soil. Get back up! A voice answered. Not from the creature. From the air above the stone stand. It cut through the silence, crisp and British. Brendan's voice. Her father's voice. Rory froze. Breath locked in her throat. The voice hadn't come through a speaker. It came from the air itself. She looked at the ground. The moss was still. This is the exit, Rory said. Her voice shook. The creature stepped forward. The ground didn't creak. It absorbed the footsteps. Rory drew the knife again. She held it out, point at the thing. I saw you, she said. The creature stopped. It tilted its head to the side again. The Heartstone pulsed in rhythm. A countdown. Rory looked down at the gem. The crimson light faded slightly, then flared up again. A warning. The portal closed in minutes. It would open the exit to another place entirely. She looked at the creature. Its pale face turned toward her. The wind blew through the trees, real this time. Leaves scattered across the clearing. Rory grabbed the pendant. It burned her palm, but she wrapped her fingers tight around the silver chain. She didn't throw it. She didn't move. I'm coming for you, the voice said again. Brendan. It sounded closer. Rory turned toward the source of the voice. No one stood there. Only the tree trunk, swaying in a wind that didn't touch her skin. She stepped forward, knife in one hand, pendant in the other. The ground shifted beneath her. The boundary of the Grove felt like a membrane, thin and stretching. The thing raised its hands. The fingers elongated, lengthening until they brushed the branches above her head. Rory breathed in. The air tasted of copper. I know why I'm here. She walked toward the light of the pendant. The creature stepped back. It wasn't afraid. It was patient. It waited. The moss under her boots turned to water. She splashed through the puddle and kept moving. The ground sucked at her soles, pulling her down. She ripped her leg free, leaving her boot behind. She ran on the water. It solidified beneath her weight, a layer of ice or stone. She kept running. Behind her, the click sound came again. The creature followed. It moved faster now, gliding over the air where the ground had dissolved. Aurora reached the tree line. Standing stone. One stone. Two stones. The air grew cold. The pendant burned against her chest. Get out, she said. She reached the boundary. The cold stone brushed her back. She pushed forward. The creature stopped. It didn't cross the line. It waited on the other side. It didn't move. It just watched. Rory stood on the park path. The gravel crunched under her bare foot. Real gravel. Real sound. She checked the watch. The second hand spun forward to the current position. One minute passed. Ten hours passed. The Grove stood behind her, dark and silent. The wildflowers had closed again. The mist hung low. She looked back through the mist at the standing stones. The Heartstone went dark. The warmth vanished. Aurora turned away. She ran. She ran until the sound of her own heart drowned out the trees. She ran until the park path disappeared and the city lights began to bleed into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1631
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1631
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"throbbed"
count2
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"unraveling"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"weight"
count3
11
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"throbbed"
5"echo"
6"scanning"
7"pulse"
8"unraveling"
9"perfect"
10"weight"
11"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences246
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences246
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences246
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1631
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions5
matches
0"Heartstone, she said aloud."
1"I am alone in a strange, isolated place, she said."
2"This is the exit, Rory said."
3"I saw you, she said."
4"Get out, she said."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1631
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
November1
Earth1
Fae1
Grove3
Hel1
Silas1
Aurora6
Heartstone4
British1
Rory13
One3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Earth"
2"Grove"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
5"Heartstone"
6"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences116
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like mouths"
1"felt like a membrane, thin and stretchi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.613
wordCount1631
matches
0"not toward the center of the grove, but toward a gap in the trees on her right"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences246
matches
0"making that sound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean21.75
std15.69
cv0.722
sampleLengths
067
145
217
368
437
551
617
771
828
912
1042
1122
1236
1324
1423
1526
168
1759
1822
1949
202
2115
2210
237
2430
2513
262
2715
2818
2919
3052
314
3225
3328
3442
3516
3617
3725
3816
393
4014
4113
4220
439
449
4512
4613
475
4811
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences246
matches
0"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs294
matches
0"wasn't walking"
1"was unraveling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences246
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1632
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.026348039215686275
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.006740196078431373
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences246
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences246
mean6.63
std4.39
cv0.662
sampleLengths
018
118
218
313
415
511
69
710
82
98
103
113
121
139
149
152
162
1715
1811
1911
209
219
227
2313
248
257
2611
275
283
2916
309
314
327
333
343
3514
3614
3715
383
393
405
418
425
434
446
4517
465
475
482
495
35.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats36
diversityRatio0.21951219512195122
totalSentences246
uniqueOpeners54
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences216
matches
0"Just the soft crunch of"
1"Just to find the exit."
2"Just a smooth, pale surface"
3"Only the tree trunk, swaying"
ratio0.019
49.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount92
totalSentences216
matches
0"They swayed without wind, petals"
1"She adjusted the silver chain"
2"It hummed, a low vibration"
3"She tucked the phone back"
4"Her boots walked on air,"
5"She stopped and looked back"
6"It stood still, unmoved by"
7"They pooled on the grass"
8"It signaled proximity to a"
9"She pulled her watch from"
10"It reminded her of the"
11"She shook her head to"
12"She walked forward into the"
13"They retreated from her presence."
14"She moved deeper into the"
15"She stopped walking."
16"Her hand went to the"
17"Her fingers tightened on the"
18"You're not supposed to be"
19"Her voice didn't echo."
ratio0.426
20.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount190
totalSentences216
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter paused at the"
2"The wildflowers bloomed year-round here,"
3"They swayed without wind, petals"
4"She adjusted the silver chain"
5"The gem pulsed with a"
6"It hummed, a low vibration"
7"Aurora whispered into the recorder"
8"The Grove is…"
9"She tucked the phone back"
10"The silence pressed against her"
11"The gravel stopped making that"
12"Her boots walked on air,"
13"The transition happened without the"
14"She stopped and looked back"
15"It stood still, unmoved by"
16"They pooled on the grass"
17"Rory pulled the gemstone through"
18"The silver chain felt cold,"
19"The crimson stone flared brighter."
ratio0.88
23.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences216
matches
0"To anchor herself."
ratio0.005
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora Carter paused at the threshold, breath fogging in air that tasted of wet earth and stale honey."
1"The glow intensified, shifting from a pulse to a steady, hard burn that threatened to blister her skin."
2"They burst open in perfect unison, revealing black centers that looked like mouths."
3"It made no sound, but she heard a click behind her eyes, a noise that came from inside her skull."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.5227%