Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBF9TRJ9VQW9653D4CZK2R0

Run Details

Duration:
49.0s
Cost:
$0.010028
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Soho, turning the cobblestones into a slick mirror reflecting the fractured neon of the city. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted with military precision, her boots splashing through puddles that swallowed the light from streetlamps. She kept her eyes locked on the figure ahead. Salt-and-pepper hair matted against her scalp, Quinn pulled her collar up against the stinging wind. Her worn leather watch on her left wrist ticked past midnight. The suspect moved with a fluid grace that betrayed no training in police pursuit. He wove through the crowds of late-night revelers without breaking stride. Quinn pushed through a group of tourists, her shoulder checking a man holding a pint. He stumbled, cursing, but Quinn didn't look back. She needed the target. "Herrera, stop!" Quinn shouted. Her voice cut through the drumming rain, raw and authoritative. The man didn't slow. Tomás Herrera turned a corner into a narrower alleyway, his dark coat billowing behind him. Quinn followed, her breath hitching in her chest. The scent of wet wool and stale beer clung to the air. She checked her service weapon in the holster. The grip felt cold against her palm. Tomás paused at the end of the alley. He stood before a brick wall covered in graffiti. Quinn closed the distance, her boots skidding on the wet asphalt. She leveled her weapon at his back. "Hands where I can see them." Tomás turned slowly. His olive skin glistened under the flickering streetlight. A scar ran along his left forearm, pale against the dark skin. He raised his hands, palms open. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck swung against his chest. "You shouldn't be here, Quinn." "Put your hands on your head. Now." Quinn stepped closer, rain dripping from the brim of her cap. She scanned the alley for exits. No windows. A single fire escape rusted above. "I can't do that." Tomás's voice remained calm. He lowered his hands slightly. "Not with this behind me." Quinn tightened her grip on the pistol. "Step away from the wall." "This isn't your jurisdiction." Tomás tapped the brickwork. "The ground beneath this city belongs to other things." Quinn ignored the warning. She moved to flank him, keeping the gun trained on his chest. "I know about the clinic. I know about the unauthorized treatments." Tomás shook his head. "You know nothing about what I treat." "Then explain why you're running from a warrant." Quinn took another step. The pavement crunched under her weight. "It's not a warrant." Tomás reached into his coat. Quinn fired a warning shot into the air. The crack of the gunshot echoed off the brickwork, startling a stray cat from a dumpster. Tomás froze, his hand halfway into his pocket. "Don't." Quinn's finger rested on the trigger. "Empty your pockets." Tomás pulled his hand out. He held a small, jagged object. A bone token. It looked ancient, etched with symbols that hurt the eyes. He held it up between two fingers. "Camden," Tomás said. "The Veil Market moves tonight." Quinn lowered the gun slightly. "The Tube station is boarded up." "Only for the living." Tomás stepped toward a grate in the ground. Steam hissed from the metal bars. The air smelled of ozone and rot. "I need to sell this before the moon rises." "Step away from the grate." Quinn advanced, her military bearing rigid. She didn't trust the supernatural rumors, but she trusted the evidence. "You're under arrest." Tomás turned back to her. His warm brown eyes held a warning she couldn't ignore. "If you come down there, you won't come back up. The rules change in the dark." "I don't care about rules." Quinn holstered the weapon and drew her handcuffs. "I care about the law." "This isn't the law." Tomás kicked the grate. It groaned, metal on metal. "This is survival." Quinn moved to grab his arm. Tomás sidestepped, the movement too fast for a normal man. He slipped past her, the bone token glowing faintly in the gloom. He crouched by the grate. He pushed a hidden lever on the side of the metal frame. "Quinn," Tomás said without looking up. "The Veil Market doesn't take kindly to police." The grate swung open. A staircase spiraled down into absolute darkness. A draft rose from the hole, cold and damp, carrying the scent of old earth and something metallic. Quinn stepped to the edge. She peered into the abyss. The darkness seemed to swallow the light from her flashlight. "Come on," Tomás called from the bottom step. "Or stay here and rot in the rain." Quinn looked at the open manhole. She looked at the street behind her. Her partner, DS Morris, had vanished three years ago. The file said accidental death. The reality felt different. The unexplained circumstances gnawed at her every night. She checked her watch. 12:14 AM. The moon was full. "Last chance," Tomás said. He started down the stairs. The sound of his footsteps faded quickly. Quinn holstered her gun. She holstered the cuffs. She gripped the flashlight in her right hand. The beam cut through the steam rising from the hole. She could see the brickwork of the tunnel. It looked like an abandoned station. She thought of the green neon sign of The Raven's Nest back in Soho. Silas' bar. The secret room behind the bookshelf. The clique operated in the shadows. This hole was the heart of it. Quinn took a breath. The air tasted of copper. She stepped onto the first rung of the ladder. The metal felt cold against her boot. She descended slowly. The darkness pressed against her eyes. She clicked her flashlight on. The beam illuminated dust motes dancing in the stagnant air. Tomás waited at the bottom. He stood in the shadows of the tunnel mouth. He held the bone token in his hand. "You followed," Tomás said. "I'm a detective." Quinn landed on the concrete floor. She swept the light around the tunnel. Graffiti covered the walls. Symbols that matched the token. "You're trespassing." Tomás stepped aside. He revealed a narrow corridor leading deeper underground. "Move." Quinn pushed past him. She kept her hand near her weapon. The tunnel narrowed. The sound of distant voices echoed from the depths. They spoke in languages she didn't recognize. Tomás caught her arm. His grip was firm. "Stop." Quinn shook him off. "Let go." "You don't have a token." Tomás pointed to the gate ahead. It was made of iron bars, rusted but heavy. A small slot sat in the center. "I have a warrant." Quinn pulled the paper from her pocket. The rain had soaked the edges. Tomás laughed softly. "Paper doesn't work here." Quinn looked at the gate. The voices grew louder. Something moved behind the bars. A shape shifted in the darkness. She couldn't identify it. "Give me the token." Quinn reached for Tomás's hand. "No." Tomás pulled back. "You can't buy your way in. You have to earn it." Quinn stepped closer to the gate. The smell of rot intensified. She pressed her ear to the cold iron. She heard breathing. Heavy, wet breathing. "Open it." Quinn demanded. "I can't." Tomás shook his head. "You need to decide. Turn back now, or face what waits on the other side." Quinn looked at the slot. She looked at Tomás. She looked at the darkness beyond the bars. The decision hung in the air, heavy and suffocating. She tightened her grip on the flashlight. Her knuckles turned white. "I'm not turning back." Tomás nodded slowly. He stepped away from the gate. He placed the bone token in the slot. The mechanism clicked. The iron bars groaned. They began to slide open. Quinn stepped forward into the light of the market.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Tomás stepped aside [aside]"
1"Tomás pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.521
leniency1
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.08
72.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"scanned"
2"weight"
3"echoed"
4"etched"
5"gloom"
6"footsteps"
7"dancing"
8"depths"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences156
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences180
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1290
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1057
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.93
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow1
Quinn31
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás28
Steam1
Morris1
Raven1
Nest1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
6"Steam"
7"Morris"
8"Raven"
9"Nest"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.034
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like an abandoned station"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1290
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences180
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean22.63
std14.77
cv0.653
sampleLengths
073
152
214
354
435
56
640
75
832
918
1012
1117
1227
1311
1418
159
1632
1710
1831
198
2011
2134
2225
2331
2418
2516
2645
2714
2849
2916
3039
3110
3216
3340
3435
359
3640
3722
384
3925
4013
4131
429
436
4427
4517
467
4724
489
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences156
matches
0"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences180
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount751
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.013315579227696404
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006657789613848202
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences180
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences180
mean7.17
std3.55
cv0.495
sampleLengths
020
118
29
315
411
514
611
715
88
94
104
1110
124
1315
148
1512
168
177
188
199
2011
217
226
233
248
2512
266
2711
285
2918
306
312
326
338
345
355
367
375
388
399
404
4112
4211
434
447
4512
466
479
488
4916
41.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.24444444444444444
totalSentences180
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.03% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences149
matches
0"She kept her eyes locked"
1"Her worn leather watch on"
2"He wove through the crowds"
3"He stumbled, cursing, but Quinn"
4"She needed the target."
5"Her voice cut through the"
6"She checked her service weapon"
7"He stood before a brick"
8"She leveled her weapon at"
9"His olive skin glistened under"
10"He raised his hands, palms"
11"She scanned the alley for"
12"He lowered his hands slightly."
13"She moved to flank him,"
14"He held a small, jagged"
15"It looked ancient, etched with"
16"He held it up between"
17"She didn't trust the supernatural"
18"His warm brown eyes held"
19"It groaned, metal on metal."
ratio0.362
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount147
totalSentences149
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted with"
1"She kept her eyes locked"
2"Salt-and-pepper hair matted against her"
3"Her worn leather watch on"
4"The suspect moved with a"
5"He wove through the crowds"
6"Quinn pushed through a group"
7"He stumbled, cursing, but Quinn"
8"She needed the target."
9"Her voice cut through the"
10"The man didn't slow."
11"Tomás Herrera turned a corner"
12"Quinn followed, her breath hitching"
13"The scent of wet wool"
14"She checked her service weapon"
15"The grip felt cold against"
16"Tomás paused at the end"
17"He stood before a brick"
18"Quinn closed the distance, her"
19"She leveled her weapon at"
ratio0.987
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted with military precision, her boots splashing through puddles that swallowed the light from streetlamps."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn advanced, her military bearing rigid"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn shouted (shout)"
1"Quinn demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.292
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.083
80.5825%