Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBFDGR3V48JAANH01JQB7NP

Run Details

Duration:
50.6s
Cost:
$0.024546
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The boundary stones rose from the earth like broken teeth, jagged and uneven, marking the line between the park and the pocket. Aurora stepped past the last of the ancient oaks, the bark rough against her fingertips as she brushed it. The air in the Grove held a weight that didn't belong in London. It pressed against her eardrums, thick and silent, smelling of damp earth and something sweetly rotting, like lilies left too long in a vase. She pulled her jacket tighter. The delivery bag hung heavy on her shoulder, smelling of grease and soy sauce, a stark reminder of the life she left in the city. Here, the wildflowers bloomed in a riot of color that defied the November chill. Bluebells tangled with poppies, their petals glowing faintly in the moonlight. They shouldn't be here. Nothing should be here. Aurora ignored them. Her hand went to her chest, fingers finding the silver chain beneath her shirt. The Heartstone Pendant sat against her sternum. It hummed. Not a sound, but a vibration that traveled up her arm, settling in her bones. She stopped. The vibration spiked, sharp and sudden. "Okay," she whispered. The word died instantly, swallowed by the trees. She checked her watch. The second hand ticked backward. She blinked, rubbed her eyes, and looked again. The hand spun counter-clockwise, a blur of white against black. She shoved the watch into her pocket. Time moved differently here. She knew that. The benefactor who gave her the stone had warned her about the drift. The old man in the alleyway hadn't given her much, just the stone and a warning. A branch snapped to her left. Aurora froze. She didn't turn her head. She kept her eyes on the path ahead, the one that wound deeper into the clearing. The sound hadn't come from a falling branch. It sounded like a footstep. Heavy. Deliberate. She reached for her phone. No signal. The screen stayed black. The battery icon was full, yet the device refused to wake. "Hello?" she called out. Her voice lacked the confidence she usually carried into courtrooms or arguments. It sounded small. The Grove offered nothing in return. No bird call. No rustle of leaves. Just the wind, which didn't move the branches. The air remained still, yet the grass beneath her boots swayed. She moved forward. Her boots sank into soil that felt too soft, like peat. The pendant grew hotter. It burned through the fabric of her shirt, a brand against her skin. She gritted her teeth. The crimson gem pulsed. A rhythm. Slow. Steady. Like a heartbeat that wasn't hers. She reached the center of the clearing. The standing stones formed a perfect circle here. In the middle, nothing grew. Just bare, dark earth. The stones hummed with a low frequency. "I know you're here," she said. She turned in a slow circle. The shadows between the trees lengthened. They stretched toward her, thin and spindly. One shadow detached itself from the trunk of an oak. It didn't walk. It slid, fluid as oil. Aurora backed up. Her heel caught on a root. She stumbled, catching herself on the rough bark of a nearby tree. The scar on her left wrist throbbed. The old cut from the childhood accident. It burned in time with the pendant. "Show yourself." The silence stretched. It pulled tight, like a wire about to snap. A low hum filled the air. It vibrated in her teeth. The flowers around her feet wilted instantly, turning to grey ash. The ash swirled, rising up to meet her face. She coughed, waving the dust away. The pendant flared. Bright red light washed over the clearing. For a second, the shadows vanished. Nothing stood there. The light faded. The ash settled back onto the ground. Aurora exhaled. Her breath came out in white plumes. She looked at her watch again. The hands were gone. Just a blank face. "Great," she muttered. She turned to leave. The path she had entered from was gone. The standing stones blocked the way. The trees had shifted. The Grove rearranged itself. She spun around. The shadows were closer now. They pressed against the edge of her vision. When she looked directly at them, they receded. When she looked away, they advanced. The pendant pulsed faster. Hotter. She could feel the heat spreading down her chest. "Eva," she said. "If this is a joke, it isn't funny." No answer. She heard breathing. It wasn't hers. It came from behind her right ear. Wet. Rattling. She didn't turn. She knew better. If she turned, she would see it. If she saw it, she might not be able to look away. The breathing stopped. The silence returned. Heavier than before. The pendant stopped pulsing. It went cold. Ice cold. It burned her skin with frost. She clutched the stone. Her fingers numb. A voice whispered. Not from behind. From inside the stone. "Run." Aurora stood frozen. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat in the stillness. The command hung in the air, vibrating with the same frequency as the stones. She looked down at the crimson gem. The inner glow flickered, dimming to a dull ember. The cold radiating from it seeped into her palm, numbing the nerves in her hand. She wanted to move. Her muscles tensed, ready to spring. But the shadows loomed closer, their edges blurring into the darkness. The air grew thin, hard to draw into her lungs. She took a step back. Her boot crunched on the ash. The sound was too loud. "Run," the voice whispered again. It sounded like her own, distorted and stretched. Aurora gripped the stone until her knuckles turned white. The frost burned deeper. She looked at the path that wasn't there. The trees formed a wall of bark and leaf, impenetrable. The silence pressed in, waiting for her to break. She swallowed, her throat dry. The cold spread up her arm, past the scar, toward her shoulder. She pulled her jacket tighter, but the fabric offered no warmth. The Grove watched her. The stones watched her. The thing in the shadow watched her. She shifted her weight. Her breath hitched. "Run." She closed her eyes. The darkness behind her lids was no safer than the one outside. She opened them again. The pendant glowed one last time, a brief flare of red that illuminated the circle of stones. In that flash, she saw the ash moving. It wasn't settling. It was rising, forming shapes. Tall, thin shapes. She looked at the stone. It went dark. The shadows stepped forward. Aurora held her breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the voice whispered again [again]"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
95.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sweetly"
count1
highlights
0"sweetly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"loomed"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"stark"
2"reminder"
3"chill"
4"pulsed"
5"perfect"
6"throbbed"
7"silence"
8"vibrated"
9"could feel"
10"flickered"
11"loomed"
12"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences171
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences175
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1086
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Grove4
London1
November1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Aurora8
persons
0"Grove"
1"November"
2"Pendant"
3"Aurora"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like her own, distorted and stretc"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.903
wordCount1107
matches
0"Not a sound, but a vibration"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences175
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.07
std25.51
cv1.06
sampleLengths
0108
174
28
311
470
56
638
722
819
932
1049
1131
126
1337
1442
152
1612
1737
1816
193
2010
2123
223
2326
2430
2514
2611
272
2815
2925
303
316
3215
337
3410
351
3691
3716
3813
3983
407
411
4256
438
444
454
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences171
matches
0"were gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs201
matches
0"wasn't settling"
1"was rising"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences175
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02483900643974241
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007359705611775529
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences175
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences175
mean6.33
std4.32
cv0.683
sampleLengths
022
119
213
324
45
525
614
711
84
94
103
1114
127
132
1415
152
166
173
188
194
205
218
2210
237
244
253
2613
2716
286
292
305
3116
328
335
341
351
365
372
384
3911
404
4112
423
436
443
454
468
4711
483
4911
38.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.22857142857142856
totalSentences175
uniqueOpeners40
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences152
matches
0"Just the wind, which didn't"
1"Just bare, dark earth."
2"Bright red light washed over"
3"Just a blank face."
ratio0.026
54.21% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount63
totalSentences152
matches
0"It pressed against her eardrums,"
1"She pulled her jacket tighter."
2"They shouldn't be here."
3"Her hand went to her"
4"She checked her watch."
5"She blinked, rubbed her eyes,"
6"She shoved the watch into"
7"She knew that."
8"She didn't turn her head."
9"She kept her eyes on"
10"It sounded like a footstep."
11"She reached for her phone."
12"she called out"
13"Her voice lacked the confidence"
14"It sounded small."
15"She moved forward."
16"Her boots sank into soil"
17"It burned through the fabric"
18"She gritted her teeth."
19"She reached the center of"
ratio0.414
29.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences152
matches
0"The boundary stones rose from"
1"Aurora stepped past the last"
2"The air in the Grove"
3"It pressed against her eardrums,"
4"She pulled her jacket tighter."
5"The delivery bag hung heavy"
6"Here, the wildflowers bloomed in"
7"Bluebells tangled with poppies, their"
8"They shouldn't be here."
9"Nothing should be here."
10"Aurora ignored them."
11"Her hand went to her"
12"The Heartstone Pendant sat against"
13"The vibration spiked, sharp and"
14"The word died instantly, swallowed"
15"She checked her watch."
16"The second hand ticked backward."
17"She blinked, rubbed her eyes,"
18"The hand spun counter-clockwise, a"
19"She shoved the watch into"
ratio0.862
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences152
matches
0"If she turned, she would"
1"If she saw it, she"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"the voice whispered again (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.6
83.1166%