Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBFG5A8DS02QDRSEFFZ8CD5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.003093
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones rose like broken teeth against the night sky, blocking out the starlight that usually filtered over Richmond Park. Aurora stopped at the threshold. The air tasted of copper and old rain, thick enough to chew on. She tucked the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant deeper beneath her coat, feeling the cold metal bite against her sternum. The gemstone pulsed against her skin, a slow, rhythmic thrum that set her teeth on edge. The wildflowers at her feet defied the London winter. Pale petals opened wide, glowing with a faint, bioluminescent hum that made her squint. Blue irises caught the light, reflecting a spectrum that didn’t exist outside the park gates. She stepped forward. Her boots crunched on dead leaves despite the spring bloom surrounding her. The texture of the leaves was brittle, like they had dried out decades ago, yet they lay next to vibrant petals that shivered without wind. “Show yourself,” she whispered. Her voice didn’t carry. The sound swallowed itself before it reached the nearest stone, absorbed by the stone surface as if the rock were a sponge. She checked her watch. The second hand jittered, fighting backward against the numbers. Four minutes had passed. She counted them one by one. A minute ticked away like a single drop of water falling from a faucet in an empty room. Ten minutes later, the watch hands spun wildly, then stalled. Midnight. Midnight felt like yesterday. The sun was never supposed to set in here, yet the light drained away like water down a plughole. The Heartstone pulsed again. Warmth radiated through her skin, seeping into the fabric of her coat, burning away the chill. The crimson gemstone vibrated against her chest like a trapped moth. She adjusted the flow, pulling it closer to protect the scar on her left wrist. The crescent-shaped mark throbbed in sympathy, the skin hot to the touch. She rubbed the back of the skin over the scar. It felt raw. “I didn’t come here to play.” A rustle came from the dense thicket behind her. No wind moved the oaks. The leaves shifted independently of the breeze, peeling away from the branches to expose dark, hollow knots. She turned. Nothing. Just the stone face of a monolith, weathered grey and smooth. She pressed her hand against the bark. It felt warm. Unnaturally warm for stone. She took three steps into the center of the clearing. The ground felt soft, spongy. Roots lifted to grip her ankles like cold fingers. She froze. The roots didn’t pull hard. They held her. Anchors. She looked down at a root coiling around her ankle. It was thick as her forearm, pulsing with a dark vein. The pendant flared brighter. The light painted the clearing in shades of wine red and bruised purple. She scanned the dark corners. Shadows pooled in the corners of her vision, stretching toward her as she turned her head. They detached themselves from the trees, sliding across the forest floor toward the stones. “Eva said the boundary was clean.” She spoke to the empty air. Her throat felt dry. She licked her lips and tasted ash. Branches snapped overhead. High up. She hadn’t heard the branch. She only saw it splinter. Debris rained down on the wildflowers. The petals turned to dust on contact. A fine red powder drifted down, settling on her shoulders like snow. A sound drifted through the clearing. Dragging. Something heavy being pulled across the stone surface. It stopped ten feet to her right. Then the breathing started. Rhythmic. Wet. It sounded like lungs filled with water, gulping for air that wasn’t there. She crouched, fingers brushing the dirt. The soil was warm. It gave under her fingertips, but it smelled of metal and rot. She dug her nails into the earth. It didn’t resist. It accepted the intrusion, letting her hand sink inches deep before the dirt flowed around her fingers. “Who’s there?” The question lacked the bite of command. It sounded like a plea. She hated the sound of her own voice in the silence. No answer. Just the wet inhalation. She looked at the standing stone directly opposite her. It looked different than she remembered. A face carved into the surface, eyes gouged out, mouth open in a silent scream. She blinked. The face was gone. Just stone. She blinked again. The face returned. Her hand went to the pendant. It burned now. Hot enough to blister. She pulled her coat tighter. The heat wasn’t coming from the gem itself. It was coming from the stone behind her, radiating through her spine. She spun around. The stone wall loomed inches from her face. She hadn’t moved. Another rustle. Closer. This time she saw it. A shape detached from the darkness of the oaks. Tall. Limbs too long, joints breaking in opposite directions. It stood still for a moment, watching the blue eyes locked on it. It didn’t blink. It didn’t breathe. It just watched. The pendant stopped pulsing. Silence flooded the grove, heavy and suffocating. The temperature dropped. Frost crystallized on the collar of her jacket. The warm, year-round flowers turned grey and brittle instantly. They shattered into dust as the frost touched them. The figure stepped forward. One foot moved silently. The other dragged, skidding against the frozen stone floor. The sound was dry. Like a dead leaf dragging across a concrete slab. Aurora stepped back, boots slipping on the frost. She reached for the knife in her pocket. Metal handle. Cold grip. She drew it. The blade caught the faint crimson light from the stone embedded in her chest. “Don’t come any closer.” Her voice sounded thin. She swallowed the fear. It sat in her stomach like a stone. She couldn’t afford panic. Panicking wasted oxygen. She had none to waste. The figure tilted its head. The angle was wrong. Too far to the left. The neck stretched, elongating like taffy. Eyes formed in the shadow where a face should be. Two points of white light. They didn’t reflect anything. “I know where you are.” Aurora pressed her hand against the pendant. She needed a portal. She needed an exit. The figure took another step. The distance closed. She couldn’t run. The roots held her boots now. Harder than before. Kerosene-like roots wrapped around her shins, pulling her downward. It had to be an illusion. The Grove manipulated time. It manipulated space. But the roots felt solid. Real. Pain spiked up her leg. She yanked her foot. The skin tore. A thin line of crimson bled onto the frost. The figure paused. It leaned forward. The white lights on its face brightened. “You brought the stone.” A voice croaked from the wood itself, vibrating through the floorboards of the earth. The sound resonated in her chest. Aurora gripped her knife. “The stone belongs to me.” “It belongs to the Grove.” The voice had no mouth shape. It pushed out from the leaves. She stepped back. Stone on the left. Darkness on the right. The figure advanced. Not walking. Gliding. The leaves parted around it. “I’m not staying here.” “You never will.” “Open the door.” The stone to her left pulsed. The same rhythm as the pendant. Aurora stared at the rock. Her eyes stung from the brightness. A dark spot formed in the center of the stone. Dust sifted out from the edges. “I said stop.” The figure smiled. Teeth sharpened into thorns. A sound like a blade grinding on stone filled the clearing. “You said it.” The figure replied. “You came to find the portal. It led you here.” Aurora lunged for the stone. She slammed her hand against the surface. It didn’t crack. It absorbed the impact. The wall rippled like water. She saw her own face in the ripples. Pale. Terrified. The figure didn’t move. It watched her desperation. “Open it!” She screamed. The stone rippled. A dark hole formed. Light poured out from the opening. It wasn’t white. It was the colour of the void between stars. The light didn’t illuminate the Grove. It swallowed it. “Step through.” The voice didn’t come from the mouth anymore. It came from the hole. “No.” Aurora turned. The roots returned. Faster. They crawled up her calves, gripping the fabric of her coat. She pulled her hand from the pendant. The heat faded. The stone went cold. The figure stepped out of the tree line. It held out a hand. A branch extended with a key attached to its end. Iron keys and silver. It clicked against the wood. “The path needs a guardian. You are the vessel.” Aurora backed up. Stone on the left. Darkness on the right. The figure advanced. Not walking. Gliding. “I’m not staying here.” “You never will.” “Open the door.” The stone to her left pulsed. The same rhythm as the pendant. Aurora stared at the rock. Her eyes stung from the brightness. A dark spot formed in the center of the stone. Dust sifted out from the edges. “I said stop.” The figure smiled. Teeth sharpened into thorns. A sound like a blade grinding on stone filled the clearing. “You said it.” The figure replied. “You came to find the portal. It led you here.” Aurora lunged for the stone. She slammed her hand against the surface. It didn’t crack. It absorbed the impact. The wall rippled like water. She saw her own face in the ripples. Pale. Terrified. The figure didn’t move. It watched her desperation. “Open it!” She screamed. The stone rippled. A dark hole formed. Light poured out from the opening. It wasn’t white. It was the colour of the void between stars. The light didn’t illuminate the Grove. It swallowed it. “Step through.” The voice didn’t come from the mouth anymore. It came from the hole. “No.” Aurora turned. The roots returned. Faster. They crawled up her calves, gripping the fabric of her coat. She pulled her hand from the pendant. The heat faded. The stone went cold. The figure stepped out of the tree line. It held out a hand. A branch extended with a key attached to its end. Iron keys and silver. It clicked against the wood. “The path needs a guardian. You are the vessel.” Aurora backed up. Stone on the left. Darkness on the right. The figure advanced. Not walking. Gliding. “I’m not staying here.” “You never will.” “Open the door.” The stone to her left pulsed. The same rhythm as the pendant. Aurora stared at the rock. Her eyes stung from the brightness. A dark spot formed in the center of the stone. Dust sifted out from the edges. She looked at the keys. The key on the end of the branch was old. Heavy. It hummed with the same frequency as the Heartstone. She couldn’t look away. The hole in the stone grew. The light reached for her. “I’m not your mother.” The figure said. “Take the key.” “I said no.” “Take it.” The figure slammed its hand onto the stone wall beside her. The stone cracked. A vein of crimson light ran through the rock. It matched the stone in her chest. Aurora felt the connection. Pulling her apart. Stitching her together. “Do it.” The figure didn’t move. It just waited. The white eyes flared again. The trees groaned. One by one, the ancient oaks turned their faces toward the center of the clearing. The wind picked up, tearing at the coat of the girl, dragging her hair across her face. The flowers lay silent in the dark. The frost held. The light from the Hole didn’t reach her. “Take the key.”
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cancelledfalse
latency530
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generation_time50334
tokens_prompt1038
tokens_completion8394
native_tokens_prompt988
native_tokens_completion7486
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native_tokens_reasoning4882
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
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is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1940
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1940
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pulsed"
count5
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"loomed"
count1
9
word"crystallized"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"warmth"
3"chill"
4"vibrated"
5"throbbed"
6"scanned"
7"silence"
8"loomed"
9"crystallized"
10"shattered"
11"stomach"
12"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences298
matches
0"d in sympathy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences298
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences322
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1940
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1794
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
London1
Grove3
Aurora14
Hole1
Pale3
Stone3
Darkness3
Gliding3
Dust3
persons
0"Grove"
1"Aurora"
2"Stone"
3"Dust"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pendant"
3"London"
4"Darkness"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like lungs filled with water, gulp"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1940
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences322
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean23.95
std19.92
cv0.832
sampleLengths
077
178
230
375
471
56
659
756
852
923
1040
1141
1249
1325
146
1544
1638
1714
188
1940
2040
2130
2237
2332
2439
2520
2629
2740
2813
2924
309
3117
3222
334
343
353
3639
373
3818
3916
4034
418
424
4334
4415
451
4631
4732
489
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences298
matches
0"being pulled"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs332
matches
0"wasn’t coming"
1"was coming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences322
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1796
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.026169265033407572
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.004454342984409799
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences322
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences322
mean6.02
std4.13
cv0.686
sampleLengths
022
15
213
321
416
59
614
715
83
912
1025
114
124
1322
144
159
164
176
1818
1910
201
214
2219
234
2416
2511
2615
2712
2810
293
306
319
325
3317
342
351
3611
377
383
394
4010
415
429
432
445
453
461
4710
4811
494
39.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.2236024844720497
totalSentences322
uniqueOpeners72
63.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences262
matches
0"Just the stone face of"
1"Unnaturally warm for stone."
2"Then the breathing started."
3"Just the wet inhalation."
4"Too far to the left."
ratio0.019
73.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount96
totalSentences262
matches
0"She tucked the silver chain"
1"She stepped forward."
2"Her boots crunched on dead"
3"Her voice didn’t carry."
4"She checked her watch."
5"She counted them one by"
6"She adjusted the flow, pulling"
7"She rubbed the back of"
8"It felt raw."
9"She pressed her hand against"
10"It felt warm."
11"She took three steps into"
12"They held her."
13"She looked down at a"
14"It was thick as her"
15"She scanned the dark corners."
16"They detached themselves from the"
17"She spoke to the empty"
18"Her throat felt dry."
19"She licked her lips and"
ratio0.366
1.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount240
totalSentences262
matches
0"The oak standing stones rose"
1"Aurora stopped at the threshold."
2"The air tasted of copper"
3"She tucked the silver chain"
4"The gemstone pulsed against her"
5"The wildflowers at her feet"
6"She stepped forward."
7"Her boots crunched on dead"
8"The texture of the leaves"
9"Her voice didn’t carry."
10"The sound swallowed itself before"
11"She checked her watch."
12"The second hand jittered, fighting"
13"She counted them one by"
14"A minute ticked away like"
15"Midnight felt like yesterday."
16"The sun was never supposed"
17"The Heartstone pulsed again."
18"Warmth radiated through her skin,"
19"The crimson gemstone vibrated against"
ratio0.916
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences262
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The gemstone pulsed against her skin, a slow, rhythmic thrum that set her teeth on edge."
1"Pale petals opened wide, glowing with a faint, bioluminescent hum that made her squint."
2"Blue irises caught the light, reflecting a spectrum that didn’t exist outside the park gates."
3"Warmth radiated through her skin, seeping into the fabric of her coat, burning away the chill."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"She spoke (speak)"
2"Aurora pressed (press)"
3"A voice croaked (croak)"
4"She screamed (scream)"
5"She screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.237
leniency0.474
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.316
83.8018%