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Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBFN0MFMC7TS6M81MHRDV7T
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 122B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
24.5s
Cost:
$0.011722
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
78.01%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
19.35%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
78.89%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
0.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
61.89%
Name drop frequency
(details)
21.13%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
42.79%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
26.88%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
84.52%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
56.77%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
40.32%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
75.7076%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The air tasted of ozone
and wet earth, a sharp contrast to the exhaust fumes of London clinging to the edges of Richmond Park.
Aurora Carter stood before the
line of ancient oak standing stones, her breath pluming in the
chill
evening.
Her fingers brushed the silver
chain at her throat, the Heartstone Pendant cool against her skin.
It had been silent for
weeks, but now, a faint thrum
vibrated
through the metal, a heartbeat syncing with her own. Behind her, Nyx shifted.
The Shade did not stand
so much as coalesce, their form a humanoid silhouette of living
shadow that seemed to drink the fading twilight
.
Violet eyes glowed softly in
the
gloom
, fixed on the stones. The boundary is thin tonight, Nyx whispered.
The voice sounded like dry
leaves skittering over pavement.
Isolde Varga stood a few
paces to the left, her silver hair
cascading
down her back like a waterfall of moonlight. She did not breathe heavily.
She did not shift her
weight
. When Aurora glanced down, she saw Isolde’s feet were bare, yet the damp grass bore no impression. No footprints. The Half-Fae Seer looked ageless, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the space between the stones. The Veil, Isolde said. It is
not a wall, but a curtain
. And tonight, the wind blows it open.
Aurora tightened her grip on
the strap of her messenger bag. She was a delivery driver, a woman who
navigated
the concrete labyrinth of London with a map in her head and a scooter in her hands.
This was not part of
the route. But the pendant
pulsed
again, a warning of heat, and she knew they had to cross. Together, they stepped forward. There was no sound of breaking glass or tearing fabric, only a sudden shift in pressure, like diving deep into a swimming pool. The smell of exhaust vanished, replaced by something cloyingly sweet, like rotting fruit and honeysuckle. The light changed instantly.
The grey London twilight was
gone, replaced by a warm, amber
glow that seemed to emanate from the moss itself
. Aurora blinked, her bright blue eyes adjusting.
They were standing in a
clearing, but the trees were wrong. The oaks twisted upward in impossible spirals, their bark shimmering with a faint, pearlescent sheen. Wildflowers bloomed in clusters along the path, vibrant reds and violets that should have been dead in the winter air.
They glowed with their own
inner light. Time, Aurora thought, looking at her
watch
. The second hand
was spinning
lazily
, counter-clockwise. Do not look at the clock, Isolde said. Time here is a river, not a road. It flows where it wishes. Aurora swallowed, forcing herself to look away.
She walked forward, her boots
crunching on the moss.
It felt too soft, like
walking on
velvet
. Nyx drifted beside her, their shadowy form stretching and contracting as they moved through the patches of light. Where the amber glow touched them, their edges blurred, threatening to dissolve back into the ambient darkness. This place, Nyx murmured, they are not merely plants. They are watching. Aurora stopped. She
scanned
the undergrowth. The flowers did turn their heads, just
slightly
, tracking her movement.
A shiver ran down her spine
,
tracing
the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She touched the mark unconsciously. Isolde moved past them, gliding without sound.
She stopped at the edge
of a small stream where the water ran silver, reflecting the amber sky above. There were no clouds, just a uniform, warm haze.
You seek the truth of
the Veil, Isolde said, her voice melodic but distant. But the Veil seeks you as well. A riddle, Aurora. What is open when it is closed, and closed when it is open? Aurora frowned, her mind
racing
through legal definitions and logic puzzles. A door? A book? No. She looked at the pendant.
It was warm now, almost
hot. A portal, Aurora said. Isolde smiled, a expression that did
not quite reach her eyes
. Close enough. But be warned, little lawyer. The path
is paved
with what you
desire
, not what you need. Aurora reached into her bag and pulled out the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver dagger hummed in her hand, cold enough to burn her palm.
She had taken it from
Isolde days ago, a gift wrapped in
silence
.
Now, the cold seeped into
her bones, a grounding counterweight to the
warmth
of the Grove.
She saw Nyx flinch as
she drew it. The Shade’s violet
eyes widened
. That blade, Nyx said, it cuts the threads of the world. Use it only when the shadows bite back. I
know
how to hold a knife, Aurora said, though her voice lacked its usual confidence. She sheathed the blade again. They moved deeper into the grove. The further they went, the heavier the air became, thick with the scent of spice and sugar. It reminded Aurora of the kitchen at Golden Empress, where Yu-Fei Cheung worked magic with fire and wok, but here the smell was overwhelming, cloying. It
felt like Gluttony without the food
. Aurora paused near a cluster of mushrooms that
pulsed
with a
rhythmic
blue light. She knelt, the pendant swinging against her chest. It
was beating
faster now.
Not a warning of Hel, but a warning of presence
. Someone is here, Aurora said. Or something, Nyx corrected. Isolde turned, her silver hair catching the amber light. She pointed a long, pale finger toward a grove of trees further ahead. The shadows there were too deep, too solid. They did not move with the wind. The boundary is thin, Isolde said. But not where you
think
. The Veil is not just between worlds. It is between moments. Aurora stood up, her boots sinking
slightly
deeper into the moss. She felt the
weight
of the city miles away, the noise of the traffic, the safety of her flat above Silas’ bar. This place was beautiful, terrifying, and alive. The flowers
seemed to
lean toward her, drawn by the
pulse
of the pendant. We need to find the source, Aurora said. The heat is coming from the center. The center is where the story ends, Isolde said. Or begins. It depends on who is holding the pen. Nyx drifted ahead, their form solidifying
slightly
as they entered a patch of dense shadow beneath the twisted oaks. They stopped, their violet eyes narrowing. There, Nyx whispered. A tear. Aurora looked where they pointed. Between the roots of a massive tree, the air
shimmered
. It was a distortion, a ripple in reality like heat haze on asphalt. Through it, she saw
not the forest, but a glimpse of a warm amber sky
that matched the Grove, yet felt wrong. Heavier. Dymas, Aurora whispered, recognizing the description from the lore she had pieced together. Hel. The pendant burned against her skin. She gritted her teeth, ignoring the pain. We go through, Aurora said. Isolde shook her head
slowly
. The flowers will remember you. The time will take you. Then we better be quick, Aurora said. She adjusted the strap of her bag, feeling the
weight
of the Fae blade against her hip. She looked at Nyx, then Isolde. She was the only human here, the only one bound by the linear march of seconds, yet she felt more alive than she ever had in the concrete sprawl of London. Lead the way, Isolde, Aurora said. The Seer turned, her bare feet making no sound on the moss. She walked toward the shimmering tear in the air. Aurora followed, the Heartstone pulsing in time with her
footsteps
, a crimson rhythm in the amber dark. Nyx flowed alongside them, a shadow among shadows, their violet eyes the only constant in a world that refused to stay still. As they crossed the threshold, the air pressure dropped, and the scent of honeysuckle vanished, replaced by the smell of roasting meat and wine. The Grove faded behind them, the time-distortion snapping back into place as they stepped into the unknown. Aurora did not look back. She kept her hand on the hilt of the blade, her eyes fixed on the horizon of the new world, ready for whatever waited in the excess.
created_at
"2026-02-25T22:45:25.794Z"
2/25/2026, 10:45:25 PM
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"qwen/qwen3.5-122b-a10b-20260224"
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182717
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(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
505
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
24345
tokens_prompt
1590
tokens_completion
3654
native_tokens_prompt
1633
native_tokens_completion
3459
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
1641
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.011722
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(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"33d466d1-d2f7-45ed-8ff3-fda7d2e32351"
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"chatcmpl-0c509381-7692-9337-af05-ca5939412403"
is_byok
false
latency
505
model_permaslug
"qwen/qwen3.5-122b-a10b-20260224"
provider_name
"Alibaba"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1772059525-rBSffmwG091eDl5p6UNQ"
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"chatcmpl-0c509381-7692-9337-af05-ca5939412403"
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0
provider_name
"Alibaba"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
0
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
78.01%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1364
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
1
adverb
"lazily"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
3
3
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"lazily"
2
"slightly"
3
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
19.35%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1364
totalAiIsms
22
found
0
word
"chill"
count
1
1
word
"vibrated"
count
1
2
word
"gloom"
count
1
3
word
"cascading"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
3
5
word
"navigated"
count
1
6
word
"pulsed"
count
2
7
word
"velvet"
count
1
8
word
"scanned"
count
1
9
word
"down her spine"
count
1
10
word
"tracing"
count
1
11
word
"racing"
count
1
12
word
"desire"
count
1
13
word
"silence"
count
1
14
word
"warmth"
count
1
15
word
"rhythmic"
count
1
16
word
"pulse"
count
1
17
word
"shimmered"
count
1
18
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"chill"
1
"vibrated"
2
"gloom"
3
"cascading"
4
"weight"
5
"navigated"
6
"pulsed"
7
"velvet"
8
"scanned"
9
"down her spine"
10
"tracing"
11
"racing"
12
"desire"
13
"silence"
14
"warmth"
15
"rhythmic"
16
"pulse"
17
"shimmered"
18
"footsteps"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"shiver down spine"
count
1
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"A shiver ran down her spine"
1
"eyes widened"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
134
matches
(empty)
78.89%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
3
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
134
filterMatches
0
"watch"
1
"know"
2
"think"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
134
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
31
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1364
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
18
unquotedAttributions
18
matches
0
"The boundary is thin tonight, Nyx whispered."
1
"The Veil, Isolde said."
2
"Do not look at the clock, Isolde said."
3
"This place, Nyx murmured, they are not merely plants."
4
"You seek the truth of the Veil, Isolde said, her voice melodic but distant."
5
"A portal, Aurora said."
6
"That blade, Nyx said, it cuts the threads of the world."
7
"I know how to hold a knife, Aurora said, though her voice lacked its usual confidence."
8
"Someone is here, Aurora said."
9
"Or something, Nyx corrected."
10
"The boundary is thin, Isolde said."
11
"We need to find the source, Aurora said."
12
"The center is where the story ends, Isolde said."
13
"There, Nyx whispered."
14
"Dymas, Aurora whispered, recognizing the description from the lore she had pieced together."
15
"We go through, Aurora said."
16
"Then we better be quick, Aurora said."
17
"Lead the way, Isolde, Aurora said."
61.89%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
84
wordCount
1362
uniqueNames
24
maxNameDensity
1.76
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London
4
Richmond
1
Park
1
Carter
1
Heartstone
2
Pendant
1
Nyx
11
Shade
2
Varga
1
Aurora
24
Isolde
14
Half-Fae
1
Seer
2
Veil
4
Fae-Forged
1
Blade
1
Grove
3
Golden
1
Empress
1
Yu-Fei
1
Cheung
1
Gluttony
1
Hel
2
Fae
3
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Heartstone"
2
"Pendant"
3
"Nyx"
4
"Shade"
5
"Varga"
6
"Aurora"
7
"Isolde"
8
"Seer"
9
"Veil"
10
"Yu-Fei"
11
"Cheung"
places
0
"London"
1
"Richmond"
2
"Park"
3
"Grove"
4
"Golden"
globalScore
0.619
windowScore
0.667
21.13%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
97
glossingSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"shadow that seemed to drink the fading twilight"
1
"sounded like dry leaves skittering over pa"
2
"glow that seemed to emanate from the moss itself"
3
"not quite reach her eyes"
4
"felt like Gluttony without the food"
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
3
per1kWords
2.199
wordCount
1364
matches
0
"not a wall, but a curtain"
1
"Not a warning of Hel, but a warning of presence"
2
"not the forest, but a glimpse of a warm amber sky"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
134
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
43
mean
31.72
std
21.92
cv
0.691
sampleLengths
0
79
1
39
2
16
3
67
4
19
5
60
6
4
7
62
8
60
9
14
10
21
11
59
12
12
13
37
14
35
15
37
16
27
17
4
18
30
19
53
20
13
21
19
22
21
23
55
24
37
25
5
26
4
27
37
28
22
29
54
30
15
31
19
32
25
33
5
34
51
35
14
36
13
37
5
38
15
39
61
40
6
41
60
42
73
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
134
matches
0
"was gone"
1
"is paved"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
240
matches
0
"were standing"
1
"was spinning"
2
"was beating"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
134
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
984
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.03556910569105691
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.011178861788617886
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
134
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
134
mean
10.18
std
6.49
cv
0.638
sampleLengths
0
24
1
18
2
16
3
21
4
4
5
24
6
11
7
7
8
9
9
21
10
5
11
6
12
17
13
2
14
16
15
4
16
8
17
7
18
11
19
26
20
7
21
16
22
4
23
23
24
15
25
4
26
20
27
7
28
11
29
15
30
20
31
7
32
7
33
7
34
8
35
8
36
5
37
7
38
9
39
8
40
18
41
17
42
9
43
3
44
2
45
4
46
11
47
15
48
5
49
7
42.79%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.30597014925373134
totalSentences
134
uniqueOpeners
41
26.88%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
124
matches
0
"Then we better be quick,"
ratio
0.008
84.52%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
42
totalSentences
124
matches
0
"Her fingers brushed the silver"
1
"It had been silent for"
2
"She did not breathe heavily."
3
"She did not shift her"
4
"It is not a wall,"
5
"She was a delivery driver,"
6
"They were standing in a"
7
"They glowed with their own"
8
"It flows where it wishes."
9
"She walked forward, her boots"
10
"It felt too soft, like"
11
"They are watching."
12
"She scanned the undergrowth."
13
"She touched the mark unconsciously."
14
"She stopped at the edge"
15
"You seek the truth of"
16
"She looked at the pendant."
17
"It was warm now, almost"
18
"She had taken it from"
19
"She saw Nyx flinch as"
ratio
0.339
56.77%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
100
totalSentences
124
matches
0
"The air tasted of ozone"
1
"Aurora Carter stood before the"
2
"Her fingers brushed the silver"
3
"It had been silent for"
4
"The Shade did not stand"
5
"Violet eyes glowed softly in"
6
"The boundary is thin tonight,"
7
"The voice sounded like dry"
8
"Isolde Varga stood a few"
9
"She did not breathe heavily."
10
"She did not shift her"
11
"The Half-Fae Seer looked ageless,"
12
"The Veil, Isolde said."
13
"It is not a wall,"
14
"Aurora tightened her grip on"
15
"She was a delivery driver,"
16
"This was not part of"
17
"The smell of exhaust vanished,"
18
"The light changed instantly."
19
"The grey London twilight was"
ratio
0.806
40.32%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
124
matches
0
"Now, the cold seeped into"
ratio
0.008
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
54
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"Aurora Carter stood before the line of ancient oak standing stones, her breath pluming in the chill evening."
1
"She was a delivery driver, a woman who navigated the concrete labyrinth of London with a map in her head and a scooter in her hands."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
1
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
75.7076%