Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBFRMRKBJAJ6VCND4JZHPKY

Run Details

Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.010733
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora knelt in the mud. Her breath hitched in her throat. The crimson gemstone pulsed against her skin like a second heartbeat. She stared at the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove. They loomed in the darkness like jagged teeth against the night sky. The wildflowers around her bloomed in unnatural bursts of colour. Blue and gold petals shivered without wind. She touched the silver chain. The metal felt warm under her fingertips. Too warm for a London night in October. The silence had a weight to it. It pressed against her ears. A low hum vibrated through the ground. She checked her watch. The hands spun wildly. Tick-tock, tick-tock. The rhythm sounded wrong. It sped up. Then it slowed down. Time moved differently here. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. *Focus, Aurora.* She reached for her pocket. Her left wrist ached where the scar rested. The small crescent mark itched. The memory of the childhood accident surfaced. A broken bottle. A hospital window. She swallowed the thought. She pushed the metal coin of her watch into her pocket. The watch had stopped working hours ago. The pendant grew heavier. The deep crimson gemstone flared. A faint inner glow illuminated the circle of stones. The light cast long, distorted shadows. The shadows moved independently. They stretched toward her. She held her ground. *Not alone.* A sound scraped against the dirt. Not the wind. Something dragged its claws through the soil. She turned her head slowly. The movement triggered the hairs on the back of her neck. Her bright blue eyes scanned the darkness. Nothing moved. The trees stood still. The roots twisted like bones in the earth. *Who is watching me?* She remembered Eva's voice on the phone. The panic in her best friend's voice. *It is happening. The Grove is waking up. You have the stone, don't you?* Eva had not explained everything. Eva never did. She relied on Aurora to work it out. That was the dynamic. Eva provided the chaos. Aurora provided the solution. The wind shifted. The smell changed. Copper stung her nostrils. Blood. Recent. She scanned the area again. The ground around the standing stones showed no footprints. No drag marks. Yet the scent of iron hung thick in the air. The air tasted like pennies and rust. Aurora stood up. Her knees cracked. The mud sucked at her boots. She kept her hand on the pendant. The gemstone burned. The warmth traveled up the silver chain to her neck. It acted like a compass. It pointed toward the centre of the clearing. *Move.* She took a step. The grass crunched under her sole. The sound echoed loudly. A twig snapped in the distance. To her left. She froze. Her eyes locked on the darkness. *Don't run.* Running gave away position. Running triggered the predator. She stood like a statue. She held her breath. The hum in the ground grew louder. It vibrated in her chest. The wildflowers around her began to close. The petals folded inwards. They retreated into the stems. The Grove was reacting to her presence. The temperature dropped. The warmth from the pendant vanished. The gemstone cooled rapidly. It lost its glow. The light died out. The shadows rushed in to fill the void. *Cold.* Aurora rubbed her arms. Her skin prickled. Gooseflesh rose along her bare arms. She pulled the collar of her jacket up. The fabric felt rough against her skin. She needed the heat. She needed the protection of the jacket. Something breathed behind her. She spun around. Her hand moved to her pocket. Her other hand held the pendant up like a shield. The gemstone remained dark. The metal felt cold. *Come on then.* She waited. The silence returned. The hum stopped. The only sound was her own breathing. She listened closely. The sound of the river in Richmond Park had ceased. The traffic from Kingston was gone. The city had fallen away. A figure stepped from the darkness of the stones. It had no face. It wore a cloak of woven roots and dried leaves. The fabric rustled with every movement. The sound was like dry bones clacking together. Aurora did not scream. She drew in a sharp breath. Her body prepared to fight or flee. Her muscles coiled. The figure raised a hand. It pointed at the pendant. "You hold it," a voice whispered. The voice came from everywhere. It echoed off the stones. It sounded like dry leaves skittering on pavement. "I found it," Aurora said. Her voice did not shake. The figure tilted its head. The neck bent at an unnatural angle. The fabric shifted. Two dark eyes appeared where the face should be. They burned with a faint light. "You found it," the figure repeated. The tone sounded disappointed. "The benefactor was wrong." Aurora took a step back. Her heel slipped in the mud. She steadied herself. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She knew the rules. *Show, don't tell.* "Who are you?" she asked. The figure stepped forward. The ground did not bear its weight. It hovered an inch above the dirt. The roots of its cloak brushed the mud without touching. "We are the Keepers," the figure said. "And you are not supposed to be here." "I am here to find the portal," Aurora said. "To stop the bleeding." The figure laughed. It was a wet, gurgling sound. The sound made her stomach turn. "The bleeding is everywhere," the figure said. "You cannot stop the tide." The figure raised its other hand. A claw extended. It was long and black. It gleamed in the faint light of the moon. The moon was hidden behind the trees, yet the claw shone. "Give it back," the figure said. The tone was not a request. "I can't," Aurora said. The figure lunged. Aurora turned and ran. Her boots splashed through the mud. The pendant swung against her chest. It felt like a lead weight. The ground sloped downward. She fell. Her hands scraped against the roots. The stones loomed above her. The shadows stretched out to grab her ankles. She scrambled up. The figure stood at the top of the slope. It watched her. It did not chase. It smiled. A mouth full of thorns opened in the darkness. "Run," the figure whispered. "Run to the end." Aurora sprinted. The grass whipped against her legs. She did not look back. The sound of the thorns growing behind her filled the air. The flowers closed tight. The trees leaned in. The path behind her vanished. She reached the edge of the clearing. The stone wall appeared. She reached for the handle. It was ice cold. She pulled. It did not move. The figure stood in the doorway of the darkness. It stepped onto the path. The roots of its cloak brushed the dirt. The door slammed shut. Aurora pounded on the stone. It felt solid. The heartstone pendant grew cold. She pulled it from her neck. The gemstone was cracked. A small hairline fracture ran across the crimson surface. The glow died. The knocking stopped. She stood still. The door vibrated. It sounded like something large was moving on the other side. The vibration grew stronger. The stone began to shake. Dust fell from the ceiling. Her boots skidded in the mud. The ground gave way beneath her. She fell into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"vibrated"
count3
5
word"scanned"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"predator"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"loomed"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"vibrated"
5"scanned"
6"warmth"
7"echoed"
8"predator"
9"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung thick in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences225
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences225
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences230
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen16
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords32
totalWords1238
ratio0.026
matches
0"Focus, Aurora."
1"Not alone."
2"Who is watching me?"
3"It is happening. The Grove is waking up. You have the stone, don't you?"
4"Move."
5"Don't run."
6"Cold."
7"Come on then."
8"Show, don't tell."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1180
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove3
London1
October1
Eva4
Aurora14
Running2
Richmond1
Park1
Kingston1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Running"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
3"October"
4"Richmond"
5"Park"
6"Kingston"
globalScore0.907
windowScore0.833
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"tasted like pennies and rust"
1"sounded like dry leaves skittering on pave"
2"felt like a lead weight"
3"sounded like something large was moving on"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1238
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences230
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean21.34
std16.89
cv0.791
sampleLengths
067
120
253
32
453
536
62
753
84
956
1012
1134
1245
131
1423
158
162
1752
1829
191
2039
214
2227
233
2439
2537
2620
2710
2824
2910
3030
3114
3227
335
3428
3515
3613
3715
3812
3934
4012
414
423
4347
4419
4511
468
4737
4820
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences225
matches
0"was gone"
1"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs232
matches
0"was reacting"
1"was moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences230
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1182
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.021150592216582064
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00676818950930626
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences230
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences230
mean5.38
std2.4
cv0.446
sampleLengths
05
16
211
316
412
510
67
75
87
98
107
115
127
134
144
152
164
173
184
194
209
212
225
238
245
257
263
273
284
2911
307
314
325
339
346
354
364
374
382
396
403
417
425
4311
447
452
464
478
484
497
30.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats45
diversityRatio0.1782608695652174
totalSentences230
uniqueOpeners41
32.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences206
matches
0"Too warm for a London"
1"Then it slowed down."
ratio0.01
74.37% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount75
totalSentences206
matches
0"Her breath hitched in her"
1"She stared at the ancient"
2"They loomed in the darkness"
3"She touched the silver chain."
4"It pressed against her ears."
5"She checked her watch."
6"It sped up."
7"She reached for her pocket."
8"Her left wrist ached where"
9"She swallowed the thought."
10"She pushed the metal coin"
11"They stretched toward her."
12"She held her ground."
13"She turned her head slowly."
14"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
15"She remembered Eva's voice on"
16"*It is happening."
17"You have the stone, don't"
18"She relied on Aurora to"
19"She scanned the area again."
ratio0.364
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount195
totalSentences206
matches
0"Aurora knelt in the mud."
1"Her breath hitched in her"
2"The crimson gemstone pulsed against"
3"She stared at the ancient"
4"They loomed in the darkness"
5"The wildflowers around her bloomed"
6"She touched the silver chain."
7"The metal felt warm under"
8"The silence had a weight"
9"It pressed against her ears."
10"A low hum vibrated through"
11"She checked her watch."
12"The hands spun wildly."
13"The rhythm sounded wrong."
14"It sped up."
15"Time moved differently here."
16"An hour inside could be"
17"She reached for her pocket."
18"Her left wrist ached where"
19"The small crescent mark itched."
ratio0.947
24.27% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences206
matches
0"To her left."
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"a voice whispered (whisper)"
1"the figure repeated (repeat)"
2"the figure whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.3
80.0120%