Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBFT325K554Q15AWBQFG115

Run Details

Duration:
33.4s
Cost:
$0.007012
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain did not wash the city clean; it only slicked the grime into a permanent sheen. Harlow Quinn kicked through a puddle near Soho, the water splashing against the cuffs of her trousers, cold enough to bite through the wool. She checked the time on the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The hands were precise, ticking with the same military rigidity she applied to every inch of her life. Fourteen seconds ago, the suspect had slipped down the alley behind the butcher shop. Now, she was ten seconds away from losing him for good. Quinn adjusted her grip on the sidearm at her hip. Her breath came in short, sharp bursts, fogging in the night air before vanishing into the gloom. She was forty-one years old, and her body remembered the exhaustion of eighteen years of precinct shifts, but her mind was still sharpened by the loss of DS Morris. The ghost of her partner haunted the silence between footsteps. Morris had gone missing three years ago, lost to unexplained circumstances Quinn had never been able to pin down with evidence. This time, she told herself, she would catch the end before it disappeared. She sprinted across the cobblestones, the sound of her boots slapping against wet stone competing with the distant hum of the city. Ahead, the street narrowed, opening into the shadowed throat of an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The entrance was boarded up, but a gap in the heavy plywood had been cut with surgical precision. The suspect, a tall figure in a rain-slicked coat, paused at the threshold. He looked back, eyes flashing in the dim light, then vanished into the darkness. Quinn skidded to a halt, rainwater dripping from the closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull. She wiped her eyes with the back of a gloved hand, her brown irises narrowing against the gloom. This wasn't just a suspect. This was the entry point. She had the files. She knew the rumors. The Veil Market. She approached the entrance. The smell hit her first—damp rot, ozone, and something metallic that tasted like copper on the back of her tongue. It was the scent of old magic bleeding into modern London. Quinn stood before the gap in the boards. The suspect had gone inside. Protocol dictated she call for backup, secure the perimeter, and wait for the tactical team. But the tactical team didn't understand what lived in the dark spaces of this city. And Quinn was running out of time. The moon was waxing; if she missed the window, the Market would shift locations again, leaving her chasing a ghost. She reached for her pocket, fingers brushing against the hard edge of an evidence bag she had kept on her for three days. Inside was a small, bleached bone fragment she had retrieved from the scene where Morris had vanished. It had sat in her drawer since then. A piece of evidence that made no sense. A piece that the forensic reports had flagged as non-human. She pulled it out now, the rain slicking her fingertips. The entry requirement. A bone token. The wind gusted through the tunnel, carrying a low hum, a vibration that resonated in the bones of her jaw. Quinn looked down at the fragment. It was the only key she had. To enter, she had to leave the world of law behind. If she stepped through, she became an intruder. If she stayed, she lost the lead. The memory of Morris surfaced. The way the crime scene had looked, the way the darkness had swallowed the body whole. She needed answers more than she needed the badge. She pressed the bone against the rough wood of the boarded-up entrance. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, a sound like grinding stone echoed from within. The wood panels shuddered. A faint green light, distinct and sickly, spilled from the gap beneath the slats. The Raven's Nest sign was for the street, but this was the Veil. The light pulsed, waiting. Quinn checked her watch again. The leather strap creaked as her wrist turned. She had two minutes before the patrol car she had left parked a block away noticed the delay. She had three minutes before the Market shifted, leaving her at the gate of a tomb. She looked down at her badge, hidden under the coat. The sharp angle of her jaw tightened. She thought of the clique she had been chasing, the web of supernatural activity that had claimed her partner. She was a detective who dealt in facts. This place dealt in things that didn't fit the ledger. The light pulsed again, a beckon. She stepped forward. The gap in the wood was barely wide enough for her shoulders. She had to squeeze through, the rough splinters scraping against the wool of her trench coat. She pushed past the threshold, the air changing instantly. The smell of ozone intensified, mixed now with the scent of incense and spiced oil. The sound of the rain above was muffled, replaced by a low, rhythmic thrumming from the underground. Quinn drew her gun, the metal cold against her palm. She moved into the tunnel, her boots finding purchase on the stone floor that felt older than the city above. Ahead, the suspect was no longer visible. The tunnel widened into a cavernous space lit by bioluminescent fungi growing along the curved ceiling. Stalls of glass and iron lined the walls, selling things Quinn couldn't name. Curses in bottles. Enchanted metals. She scanned the crowd. The people here didn't look like Londoners. They wore the shadows as skin. She had followed the lead. She had crossed the line. The decision was made, but the weight of it settled on her shoulders like a wet coat. She wasn't just entering a crime scene anymore. She was walking into a mouth that had swallowed partners before. She tightened her grip on the weapon. She knew the risks. She knew the rules she was breaking. But as she moved deeper into the light of the Veil, Quinn decided she wouldn't be stopping. Not until the truth about Morris was dragged into the open. Not until she brought the darkness to heel. The rain above felt a world away. Down here, she was on her own, and the only law that mattered was the one she carried in her pocket, and the one she had just signed her name to by walking through the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"gloom"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"resonated"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"silence"
2"footsteps"
3"resonated"
4"echoed"
5"pulsed"
6"rhythmic"
7"scanned"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1083
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"This time, she told herself, she would catch the end before it disappeared."
99.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1083
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn11
Soho1
Morris5
Tube1
Camden1
Veil3
Market3
London1
Raven1
Nest1
Londoners1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Market"
3"Raven"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.992
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like copper on the back of her ton"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1083
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
96.70% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean51.57
std25.19
cv0.488
sampleLengths
097
1100
283
356
463
542
676
76
859
930
1061
1147
1254
136
1472
1530
1641
1717
1846
1954
2043
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences96
matches
0"was boarded"
1"was muffled"
2"was made"
3"was dragged"
13.78% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was running"
1"was waxing"
2"wasn't just entering"
3"was walking"
4"was breaking"
53.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences96
ratio0.031
matches
0"The rain did not wash the city clean; it only slicked the grime into a permanent sheen."
1"The smell hit her first—damp rot, ozone, and something metallic that tasted like copper on the back of her tongue."
2"The moon was waxing; if she missed the window, the Market would shift locations again, leaving her chasing a ghost."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1090
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.027522935779816515
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006422018348623854
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.28
std6.35
cv0.563
sampleLengths
017
124
213
318
414
511
610
717
829
910
1021
1113
1222
1316
1418
1513
1614
1717
1818
195
205
214
224
233
244
2520
2611
278
285
2915
3015
317
3220
3323
3417
358
368
3710
3810
393
403
4120
426
437
4411
458
467
475
4816
499
30.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.28125
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners27
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Then, a sound like grinding"
ratio0.011
76.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences95
matches
0"She checked the time on"
1"Her breath came in short,"
2"She was forty-one years old,"
3"She sprinted across the cobblestones,"
4"He looked back, eyes flashing"
5"She wiped her eyes with"
6"She had the files."
7"She knew the rumors."
8"She approached the entrance."
9"It was the scent of"
10"She reached for her pocket,"
11"It had sat in her"
12"She pulled it out now,"
13"It was the only key"
14"She needed answers more than"
15"She pressed the bone against"
16"She had two minutes before"
17"She had three minutes before"
18"She looked down at her"
19"She thought of the clique"
ratio0.358
44.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences95
matches
0"The rain did not wash"
1"Harlow Quinn kicked through a"
2"She checked the time on"
3"The hands were precise, ticking"
4"Quinn adjusted her grip on"
5"Her breath came in short,"
6"She was forty-one years old,"
7"The ghost of her partner"
8"Morris had gone missing three"
9"This time, she told herself,"
10"She sprinted across the cobblestones,"
11"The entrance was boarded up,"
12"The suspect, a tall figure"
13"He looked back, eyes flashing"
14"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
15"She wiped her eyes with"
16"This wasn't just a suspect."
17"This was the entry point."
18"She had the files."
19"She knew the rumors."
ratio0.832
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences95
matches
0"Now, she was ten seconds"
1"To enter, she had to"
2"If she stepped through, she"
3"If she stayed, she lost"
ratio0.042
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She sprinted across the cobblestones, the sound of her boots slapping against wet stone competing with the distant hum of the city."
1"The wind gusted through the tunnel, carrying a low hum, a vibration that resonated in the bones of her jaw."
2"She moved into the tunnel, her boots finding purchase on the stone floor that felt older than the city above."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3173%